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***What about tonight?*** - 5th December 2005, 10:45 PM

Why do I want to cry every time You look into my eyes?
Why does it hurt every time I delay the tempting kiss of suicide?

Why does my life loves to kill me?
Why my movements want to still me?

And when I write suicide notes with killing sadness,
my sobbing eyes swell with redness?

Why shouldn't I die before my next breath?
Why do I prolong this death?

So what is wrong what is right?
What about tonight?


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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5th December 2005, 10:55 PM

hmmm very nice poem full of sadness but im really depresse with you...y r u so sad these days. wats the matter susheel.................????????
u know u can share with me......!
i just wanna say that talk to me soon....coz im really worried bout u.....the moment i came online u left....badluck thi......
but anywaz nice poem..very well written......take care plz plz.....miss u.bye


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Re: ***What about tonight?*** - 6th December 2005, 01:20 AM

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Why do I want to cry every time You look into my eyes?
Why does it hurt every time I delay the tempting kiss of suicide?

Why does my life loves to kill me?
Why my movements want to still me?

And when I write suicide notes with killing sadness,
my sobbing eyes swell with redness?

Why shouldn't I die before my next breath?
Why do I prolong this death?

So what is wrong what is right?
What about tonight?
dear sush
nice to reasd but as usual its full of pain!

can understand ur feelings.

Priya


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6th December 2005, 08:06 AM

hmm...very nice...but its the case many a time...
unanswered questions...why do we put them
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
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7th December 2005, 07:46 PM

tonight this 1 may b the night of all ur wishes.may b u r going to meet death 2night.may that night has years to come.cant say.but cud say 1 thing that u have xpressed ur feelings very well and tremendously.just fantastic.loved each n every word of it.juz keep writing the same way susheel bhaiya.

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7th December 2005, 10:01 PM

Hi Lucky!

Why people commit suicide?, Ppl u know 2 b cheerful leave all of a sudden leaving u surprised..... He did something he was not appearing to do.

This forum helps soooo many here to expell their negative energy in the form of their poetry..... Replies makes thm feel comfortable..... May be a going person stop and look back for a while to rethink....

Life teaches a lot of things..... It not only lands u in situations generating suicidal thaughts but also forces so many do it....

Very few understand the psychy of pain.... Its like a ghost, all discuss it.... Very few feel it to limits.....

I pray no one feels it.... Its better not to feel it to extremes....

Hats off To shayri.com.... where i found so many great friends

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लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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7th December 2005, 10:15 PM

Bro. KArtik,

Thanks for appreciating my words...

Regards


Shimul Jee,

Who can understand pain better then u!! Thanks for being so nicel!

Regards


Priya!

What Life teaches is known to u very well! This is my turn

Regards


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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7th December 2005, 10:17 PM

Farhana!

I will not thak u! U dont like it either... Lol

Hold high Regards for ur selfless warm wishes....

Warm Regards


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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8th December 2005, 12:03 PM

Why do I want to cry every time You look into my eyes?
Why does it hurt every time I delay the tempting kiss of suicide?

Why does my life loves to kill me?
Why my movements want to still me?

I wish i cud answer that...!


And when I write suicide notes with killing sadness,
my sobbing eyes swell with redness?

Why shouldn't I die before my next breath?
Why do I prolong this death?

Aaaaaaahhh...too much of pain...!


So what is wrong what is right?
What about tonight?

hmmm....!

Sushil bhai,

Sad but exapressed beautifully... U r a master whn it comes to expressing ur thots... loved it ... accept my praises...do keep writing...TC


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8th December 2005, 01:41 PM

dard e sush mere bhai

aap ki tehreeron ka apna ek makhsoos andaaz hai.
aap ki nazer apne ird-gird ke mahaul per is qader gehri hai aur aap her cheez ko jitna aur jaise mehsoos kerte ho bayaan ker dete ho.
Hassaas laogon ka yehi kamal hai, ke voh shoar kem kerte hain, mehsoos ziaayaada kerte hain.
aap ki tehreer mein jo dard pinhaa hai, mein usey mehsoos ker sakta hoon, us ki qader karta hoon aur aap ke andaaz e bayaan ko behad pasand kerta hoon.
meri dua hai ke aap zindagi se bad-gumaaan na ho aur naakaamiyon aur dard ki jo shiddat aap mehsoos ker rahe ho us se jald nijaat haasil karo aur khush raho.
Meri duaayein hamesha apne bhai dard-e-sush ke liye.

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... - 13th December 2005, 03:40 PM

Dearest Pulkit!

When it comes to happenings.... The Onmipresent Lord controls them all.... Alone he is the Master of Everything.... V r too small to be considered anything in his divine & endless creations.

Nothing can happen against his wishes..... even this creation.....

Warm Regards & Thanks for everything


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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..... - 13th December 2005, 03:49 PM

Mushi Bhai!

Not exagrating.... U r among one of the people I respect... Genuinely from my heart..... U always know what to say whn a man is depressed.... U make things look so light ....

Ur comments on my feelings always give me a new hope and inspiration...

My fav work from ur work.....

"""HO KOEE BAAT NAYA ZAKHM LAGA DETA HAI
AB TO EHSAAS BHI JEENE KI SAZA DETA HAI

JAOON GULSHAN MEIN TO SOOKHA HUA PATTA KOEE
DAASTAAN SHAAKH SE GIRNE KI SUNAA DETA HA"""

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लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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Re: ***What about tonight?*** - 13th December 2005, 09:36 PM

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Why do I want to cry every time You look into my eyes?
Why does it hurt every time I delay the tempting kiss of suicide?

Why does my life loves to kill me?
Why my movements want to still me?

And when I write suicide notes with killing sadness,
my sobbing eyes swell with redness?

Why shouldn't I die before my next breath?
Why do I prolong this death?

So what is wrong what is right?
What about tonight?
Dear Susheel,

So many questions...

I hope you feel better... take good care of yourself and keep writting!

Have a nice day.

keep smiling.

   
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16th December 2005, 04:04 PM

Parul!

Feelings make one live or dead......

Your concern and reply r invaluable.....

Warm Regards
Susheel


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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