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Thumbs down ***What about tonight?*** - 5th December 2005, 10:41 PM

Why do I want to cry every time You look into my eyes?
Why does it hurt every time I delay the tempting kiss of suicide?

Why does my life loves to kill me?
Why my movements want to still me?

And when I write suicide notes with killing sadness,
my sobbing eyes swell with redness?

Why shouldn't I die before my next breath?
Why do I prolong this death?

So what is wrong what is right?
What about tonight?


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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5th December 2005, 10:54 PM

Life is nonexistent?
The darkness is concealing
Everything seems so distant
Having loss of all feeling

life appears an illusion
Full of unknown pain
If I can’t even feel myself
nothing really means, all vain?


Nothing I touch feels real
I’ve become broken and alone
Nostalgia of my life
All fading away, all gone

Sitting in a theatre
I watch lives pass me by
Staring in this mirror
Life’s reflection seems to die


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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6th December 2005, 08:40 AM

sush ji...
very nice...
full of pain...
keep smilin is all i can say
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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6th December 2005, 10:29 AM

very nice susheel...
i hope u feel better.
mail me fi u can soon.im kinda worried bout u.


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Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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6th December 2005, 10:34 PM

Kartik Bhai, Farhana Jee!

I have no words to explain anything..... No thanks, No gratitude, No thing.... today, All i feel is pain.... All I recall is pain ..... This world is hypocrate.... Think something, Speak something, feel something, do something, and act totally firrerent...... So be it ...... I m no more in it......

mere gham ki dawa nahi koi
jo lagey ab dua nahi koi
darbadar mujhko kar dia aaisey
karwaan he mila nahi koi
ab kisi se gila nahi koi

sochta hoon ke kia kami ki thi
khoone dil de ke jisko seecha tha
us gulistaan main sirf khaar khiley
phool mujhse khila nahi koi
ab kisi se gila nahi koi

rooz peeta hoon zindagi ka zaher
maut ko rooz yaad karta hoon
dil dharak ta hai saans jaari hai
jeene ka huasla nahi koi
ab kisi se gila nahi koi

laash meri padi rahi be-kafan, lawaris
kafan mila nahin koi
ab kisi se gila nahi koi...
....ab kisi se gila nahi koi


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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6th December 2005, 11:28 PM

plz talk to me susheelll........plz...
wat is the matter......plz


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.... - 7th December 2005, 09:41 PM

Dearest Farhana!

I didnt know U r so caring. I am perfectly all right. Have no complaints anyone at all.

I rather feel honored and batter whnvr I log on to shayri.com. Its a better place thn real world.......... Great place offline (behind curtains of net) .... After all Faces in front would have appeared real.... Just Joking .... lol

"Aaina na dikhao yaaro
aur na samjhao yaaro
Kafan dalo laash pe ab to
ab to rehem khao yaaro"

such lines are reflaction of my state of mind.... Not complaints.... After all alone Lord can hear complaints not human.

Its perfectly all right and I am Deeply touched by your concern.

I will be online today eve..

Warm Regards and thanks
Regards


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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7th December 2005, 09:42 PM

Kartik Bro.

Heartly thanks for understanding....

Warm Regards


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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11th December 2005, 10:19 PM

every time i read u...i get to knw abt u...n make n impression...
every time...u wash tht impression awayy...with ur replies...
may b one day i'l succeed in understandin u
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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11th December 2005, 10:29 PM

"""""""""every time i read u...i get to knw abt u...n make n impression...every time...u wash tht impression awayy...with ur replies...may b one day i'l succeed in understandin u"""""""""""

Hi Kartik

What makes me feel better about the replies on my posts is a response from some one else then me myself....

As for understanding a human..... Understanding them is no less then searching for god Himself.... U never know what u do when....

My dearest Lord makes thing happen differently then expected....

Warm Regards


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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