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~~* tujhe dekhnaa...*~~ -
29th November 2015, 08:31 PM
Sabhi hazraat ki khidmat me chand alfaaz pesh kar rahaa hoon gaur farmaaiyegaa... tujhe dekhnaa meri hasraten, tujhe chahnaa merii chaahaten. karooN koshishen jo hazaar bhii to na kar sakungaa baGaawaten. jo pyaar tuune kiyaa nahi, tujhe hai usii ka hi waastaa, mujhe chhoD denaa o bewafaa, jo na de sake mujhe raahateN. wo zamaana kab ka guzar gayaa, tu bhi dil se mere nikal gayaa, to kahaan se aati hain yaad ab, mujhe itni si hain shiqaayaten. mujhe jaam kii na to aas hai na sharaab kii hi talaash hai, tujhe sochne me hi hai nashaa , yahi hain buree merii aadaten. unheN khat me likhnaa haale dil kabhi khoon se kabhi ashq se, yahaan ab nazar aatii naheeN wo gaye dino ki muhabbaten. tu bhulaa chukaa hai wo shokhiyaan jo diwaana mujhko banaa gayeen, mujhe ab bhi dikhtii hain khwaab me merii jaan terii sharaaraten. Shaad..... |
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29th November 2015, 10:45 PM
adaab shaad sahab..
Kaise hain aap..aapko bazm me dekha to yun hee dil khush ho gaya aur us par itni dilkash ghazal..subhan Allah...bahut hee khoob ehsaas o andaaz.. wo zamaana kab ka guzar gayaa, tu bhi dil se mere nikal gayaa, to kahaan se aati hain yaad ab, mujhe itni si hain shiqaayaten. Waah!!!...yun to matle se makte tak har sher pasand aaya par na jane kyun ye masoom sa sher dil ke behad kareeb raha.... Dua hai...yun hee aapki kalam se purasar qalaam hame padhne ko milte rahein... Duaon ke sath.. Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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29th November 2015, 11:14 PM
bohut dino baad aapko padaa bohut acha laga..................
yun to ghazal puri ki puri achi hai magar makta to kamaal hai. Daad kabool farmaiye. Sarika |
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30th November 2015, 03:43 PM
bahut lajwaab rahi aapki yeh koshish bhi Shaad bhai...............
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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2nd December 2015, 06:37 AM
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aapki inaayaton se mamnoon hoon Madhu saahiba.... duaa kartaa hoon ke ye saath yunhi bana rahe.... apna kahyaal rakhiye aur aatii rahiye.... Shaad............ |
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2nd December 2015, 07:11 AM
aadaab Shaad miyaaN,
waqt ki kami ke bawajood aaj do ek she'r raqm hue to idhar post karne aaya tha, aapki is Ghazal par nazar padhi to yaqeen jaaniye maiN apne she'r bhool gaya hooN! matla padha to lagaa aage ke ash'aar halke hoNge, duuja she'r padha to lagaa ke haasil-e-Ghzal she'r hua, phir aage ke she'r padhe to ab yeh museebat aan paDi hai hai ke kin do misroN par aapko badhaai dooN? to saahib-e-ilm, har she'r par "alag se" daad ke haqdaar haiN aap, qabool farmaiiye puraane "aur" acche dinoN mein, kayi saal pehle ki baat hai, internet par jitni bhi adab ki mehfileN hua karti thiiN wahaaN ek rivaaz yeh tha ke agar aap kisi kaavish par tabsira/daad ataa farmaa rahe haiN to yeh samjha jaata tha ke ek-ek she'r, baNdh, qite'y par alehdaa se tabsiraa karna, taNqeedi yah ta'reef, aapka farz ban'ta hai, aapki is yeh Ghazal majboor kar rahi hai ke us rasm ko yahaaN nibaaya jaaye tujhe dekhnaa meri hasraten, tujhe chahnaa merii chaahaten. karooN koshishen jo hazaar bhii to na kar sakungaa baGaawaten Wallah, kya matla arz kiya hai, jiyo jo pyaar tuune kiyaa nahi, tujhe hai usii ka hi waastaa, mujhe chhoD denaa o bewafaa, jo na de sake mujhe raahateN. koi 20 saal pehle ke waaqye yaad dila gaye yeh do misrey wo zamaana kab ka guzar gayaa, tu bhi dil se mere nikal gayaa, to kahaan se aati hain yaad ab, mujhe itni si hain shiqaayaten. haye,haye,haye!!!! aage aap khud samajhdaar ho  mujhe jaam kii na to aas hai na sharaab kii hi talaash hai, tujhe sochne me hi hai nashaa , yahi hain buree merii aadaten. is she'r se badi umeedeN thiiN, socha misraa-e-saani meiN mere kaam ki koi baat kareNgey lekin ab aap thehre Allah se darne waale aur maiN kaafir  ba-har-haal umda she'r hua, mubarakbaad tasleem farmaaiyeunheN khat me likhnaa haale dil kabhi khoon se kabhi ashq se, yahaan ab nazar aatii naheeN wo gaye dino ki muhabbaten. misra-e-awwal dil le gaya miyaaN! kya baat hai, saani meiN aapne pehle ke saath poora insaaf kiya hai, kya she'r kaha hai, waaah! tu bhulaa chukaa hai wo shokhiyaan jo diwaana mujhko banaa gayeen, mujhe ab bhi dikhtii hain khwaab me merii jaan terii sharaaraten. youN hi to koi shayar nai ho jaata Shaad bhai, khuda ki qasam, agar sirf yeh kahooN ke Ghazal paDh kar luft-aNdoz hua to yeh aapke fann, aapki qalam aur is Ghazal ki khoobsuurti ke saath na-insaafi hogi do misre, khusoosan, sirf aapki is Ghazal ki naz'r, abhi zehan meiN aaye haiN : kyaa kyaa hameiN naseeb huaa ikk jhalak ke baad "maikash" zameeN bhi mil gayi ho jyoN falak ke baad is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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2nd December 2015, 07:51 PM
wah bhut umda gajal h bhut khub...
daad kubul kijiye.... aa pati. Fnah ho jate tujhme hum parvana ban kar agar tu mere liye shma ho jaati. احمد. |
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3rd December 2015, 09:30 AM
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wahhhh....bahutttttttttt hi khoobsurat gazal...aik aik lafz dil ke kareeb rha. jo pyaar tuune kiyaa nahi, tujhe hai usii ka hi waastaa, mujhe chhoD denaa o bewafaa, jo na de sake mujhe raahateN. wo zamaana kab ka guzar gayaa, tu bhi dil se mere nikal gayaa, to kahaan se aati hain yaad ab, mujhe itni si hain shiqaayaten. yeh 2 sher to maiN aapko bata nahi sakti ki muje kitne pasand aaye...no words. khush rho yu hi bazm ki shaan bane rho .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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3rd December 2015, 05:35 PM
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8th December 2015, 03:53 PM
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mohtaram janaab maikash saahab ki shaan me awwal to khaaksaar ka aadaab pahuche... baad iske ye kahna chahta hoon ke jis tafseel se aapne apne alfaazon ko in khaak lafzon pe lutaaya hai uske liye mera khushi se jo haal huaa hai wo bayaan nahi kiyaa ja saktaa.. mera sher sher aapko shukrana pesh kar raha hai qubool kijiyegaa.. aakhri me aapne jo mujhe apne sher se izzat bakshi hai uske liye aapka ehsaanmand ho gaya hoon bhai.. aate rahiyega aur ham jaise adna se shayron ko hauslaa dete rahiyegaa... shukriyaa tahe dil se aapka.. apna khayaal rakkhen... shaad.... |
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9th December 2015, 03:07 AM
lajavab ghazal hui he Shaadsaheb. Padhker maza aa gaya. Bohot dino baad aesa achcha kalam padhne mila. Hats are off to you.
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9th December 2015, 02:26 PM
Shaad bhaii
Namaste Kaise hain aap? Bahot hi umdaah koshish padhne ko mili hay aapki aur se...Dheron saari daad aur duaaen Yuunhi bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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11th December 2015, 09:28 AM
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Bahut umdaa peshkash huyi hai mere bhai har sher bahut dilchasp aur rangeen laga, banayangi mein bhi bahut nayapan laga umeed hai aapki kalam hamesha yunhi dil azeez nagme likhti jaaye aur hum yunhi kayal rahein aapke mureed bankar.... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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22nd December 2015, 09:54 PM
Shoiab bhai...bahut hee sundar kalaam padne ko mila aaj....
'lazawaab'..... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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23rd December 2015, 06:58 PM
Bohat khoobsoorat Ghazal kahi hai aapne shaad sahab. Maikash sahab ne tafsili tabsara kar hi diya hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye mehfil kolutf-andoz karte rahiye.
Khaksaar Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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26th December 2015, 02:07 PM
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thank you so much dee.................................. aapka sneh aur aashirwaad yunhi milta rahe.......... aabhaar Shaad... |
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