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Post rehne do bhai rehne do! Meri yadein hein wahan! - 10th August 2003, 10:36 PM

Kaun hei bhai? kaun hei wahan?
kyun jalata hei mera ashiyan?
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein yahan!

Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?
Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!

Jante ho mera sab kuch hei wahan?
wahi jagha mene pyar kiya tha jahan!
Wo bartan chua tha usne jisko
wo roomal bhool gai thin wo jisko

wo chair bhi hei wahan bethe the wo jahan
yahi wo ghar hei wo aate the jahan
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein wahan!


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10th August 2003, 11:17 PM

zabardast Dard-e-such sahab...
zabardast hai ye...

wakai dard ka lajawaab aaina hai...

hum sab ki yahi daastaaN hai...
aapka ye andaaz qaabil-e-gaur hai sahab...

Kaun hei bhai? kaun hei wahan?
kyun jalata hei mera ashiyan?
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein yahan!

Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?
Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!


maloom hota hai k behad badhawaasi k haalaat meiN aapne ise likha hai...

iski tareef karuN itni himmat nahi mujhme...

phir bhi shukriya ise pesh-e-nazar karne ke liye...

likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye...


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12th August 2003, 11:57 PM

Bedil? Janab ye naam kuch jamta nahin aappe. Itna sochte hein aap janab or bedil hein. shayad de chuke hein kisi ko ye dil jisne isko tod diya.
Wakai ye di hei hi aisi cheez jane kya kya karta hei or dekhiye sunta bhi nahin samajhta bhi nahin. aapne ye song zaroor suna hoga

Ae kaash kahin aisa hota ke do dil hote seene me
ek toot bhi jata agar kahin takleef na hoti jeene me

dost aapko padhke acha laga. shukriya. Magar mei sirf wahi post karta hun jise kisi se keh nahin sakta. Ghutan hoti hei bina share kiye. Aapne padha samjha sakoon mila.

Shukriya mere dost.


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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umda aandaaz - 13th August 2003, 02:01 AM

dard-e-sush sahab..sach mein aapne aapne dard ko bayaan karte karte humhe dard ka ehsaas hi karva diya..bahut khoobsurti se yeh likha gaya aur jis tarah bedil ji ne kaha mein bhi iski tareef karne mein asamarth hoon.....

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13th August 2003, 06:07 PM

Ik nayi soch..ik naya andaaz e bayaan padne ko mila hai aaj..

Kaun hei bhai? kaun hei wahan?
kyun jalata hei mera ashiyan?
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein yahan!

dard bayaan karne ka ye 'zariya' achha laga..

Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?
Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!

Bhai aaj kal insaan kahan milte hain!!Bas insaan ke libaas mein bedil duniya hi basti hai..

Aur aapki baaki yaadein bayaan karne ka tareeka bhi bahut pasand aaya..

bahut achhe..
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17th August 2003, 10:05 PM

dost mast,
apane naam nahi bataya apna. dard ka hona ehsaas dilata hei ke ham zinda hein. bhot gehra ehsaas karata hei dard.

Take Care


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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17th August 2003, 10:29 PM

Varinder bhai kii baat se maiN bilkul sehmat huuN.

Aapne is andaaz meiN likhaa, yah maine isse 'kahaani' kii hesiiyat se paDaa.. jo bhi hai dost, gazab kii rachnaa hai yeh!

Sab ne sab kuch keh hii diyaa, to ab kehne ke liye bachaa kyaa hai..

daad qabuul farmaaiiye,
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18th August 2003, 09:19 PM

virender jee,

jab koi dil ko likh deta hei to shayad usme ek alag sa noor aa jata hei. jese koi divine attraction utar aata hei agar koi dil ko likhe to.

shukriya nahin kaunga, bhai ko shukriya nahin kehte
TAKE CARE Bhai


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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19th August 2003, 09:53 PM

Aman bhai zara mulaiza farmayein is behtareen number (Pankaj udhas) ka bhi,

khuda ka shukr hei warna guzarti keise sham,
sharab jisne banai use hamara salam
sharab itni sharifana cheez hei adam
ke pee ke aadmi sach bolta hei subho sham
sharab jisne banai use hamara salam


shukriya mere dard ko samajhne ka. waise ye dard sirf mera nahi hei. ye un sab ka dard hei jinke ashiyane lut gaye mazhab ki khooni andhi me. jinke sapne dab gaye lashon ke dher me.

take care aman
take care


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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20th August 2003, 03:38 AM

namastee.. Dard-e-sush ...ji..


kaise hoo yar.... ?? .. .bahut khoob likha hai yar.. apne.. pata ni isse kya kahenge.. per .. joo bhi .. hai ...aisa lagta hai ke.. dil se likha gaya hai ...bahut khoob sirji ..bahut khoob... these lines..are gr8-->


Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?
Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!

Jante ho mera sab kuch hei wahan?
wahi jagha mene pyar kiya tha jahan!
Wo bartan chua tha usne jisko
wo roomal bhool gai thin wo jisko


bahut khoob yar.. aise hi likhte rahiye .. aur mehfil...sajate rahiye...

bye and take care.


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20th August 2003, 05:31 PM

Dard-e-sush sahab ...

bahut hi nayaab tareeke se aap ne apane dil ko khol kar rakha hai ... wah kis tarah apane aap se hi fariiyaad kar rahe hai jisa ki aap ne kaha hai ki ....

Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?

ek sawaal kiya jis ka jawaab khud ko maloom hai .. waise mein aap ne is Qalaam ki tareef mein itna hi kahuga ki jis tarah seese mein dekh rahi har rut itraati hai waise hi is Qalaam mein baat hai
jo kisi tareef ka maoutaaz nahin hai ...

phir bhi tareef kabool kare

aap ka dost


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... - 20th August 2003, 08:42 PM

mein_aur_tanhai,

bhai naam bhi bata dete to zara sakoon aata. mujhe na salika aata hei na kayda gazal likhne ka. ham to bas likh padh rahe hein or zara sa mehsoos kar rahe hein. kaash unko koi samajh pata jo ye sab bardasht kar rahe hein ya kar chuke hein. Har taraf maut ka nanga nach. lashein hi lashein apno ki begano ki. badhawas ................


shukriya, aapne un sabka dard mehsoos kiya


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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21st August 2003, 05:17 PM

amrit mere bhai,

aapko bhi mehsoos hua lakhon logon ka dard.

shukriya


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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dard-e-khushjee,

kuch to hei isme jo itna touch karta hei.

tareef kubool kijiye fir se.


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Lot of confusion

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Dard-e-sush sahab bahut umda khas kas aapke andaaze bayaan ki saadgi dil ko cho jaati hai. bahut hi khoob soorat.


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... - 24th August 2003, 08:19 PM

destiny,
ab aap zara naam bhi bata dete to ham dost ban jate. waise aapka tahe dil se mashkoor hun aapne feelings ko tazreeh di bajaye rasme gazal ke.

shukriya


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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.. - 25th August 2003, 08:59 PM

Aviral bhai mere dost,

Bhot bhot shukriya padhne ka or hosla afzahi ke ka.

shukriya bhai


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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hello - 26th August 2003, 01:24 PM

hello Dard-e-sush ji,

aapki rachana mujhe bahut achchhi lagi. wakai bahut achchha likha hai aapne. main der se reply de raha hoon , eska mujhe khed rahega.
esi tarah likhate rahiye.shubhkamnao sahit,





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26th August 2003, 01:38 PM

Dard ji..

Sabse pehle to maafi chahte hain ki yahan itni der se aaye.. Sach kahein to kuchh dino se shayri likhna to duur, shayri paRne ka bhi man nahi tha.. kaii doston ke naye kalaam dekhe, magar paRne ki himmat nahi juTa paaye... Khair..

Aaj jab aapki ye nazm par nazar paRi, to samajh nahi aaya ki kya kahein aapse. Kaai baar paR chuke hain ise.. ek ajab sa ehsaas hota hai jab ise paRo.. jise lafzon me bayaan karna mushkil ho raha hai. Kisi ke chale jaane ke baad, uski yaadon ki jo ehmiyat ho jaati hai, uske pyaar ka, mohabbat ka jo asar hota hai, saaf bayaan kiya hai aapne. Beeti baaton ko chhod dena, shayad sab ki ye chah nahi hoti.. aksar in yaadon ke sahaare hi hum jeete hain, in yaadon ke liye hi marte hain.. Jab koi nahi hota hai.. to uski har baat yaad aati hai.. woh kahan baiTHta tha.. woh kaise hansta tha.. kiasi baatein karta tha.. uski aankhein kya kehti thi.. uske chehre par lakeerein kaisi thi.. woh chalta kaise tha.. woh naraaz kaise hota tha.. woh kkaise manaata tha, aur kaise maan jaata tha.. har ek shay me maano uska aks nazar aata hai.. In sab baaton ko aapne ek nazm me keh diya.. waqai.. baRi sachchi nazm likhi hai aapne.


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... - 26th August 2003, 04:38 PM

Akant bhai,

Apni apni nazariya hei. kisi ko kuch nazar aata hei kisi ko kuch. Bas jo dil kahe keh do. yahi to sachi bandagi hei.

aapne begharon ke dard ko samjha
maskoor hun aapka


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26th August 2003, 09:17 PM

Sush SaHaB ..

baHut BehtaReeN LikHa hai ..

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afsan..mere bhai mere yaar,

Sach kahun. shayri.com ne mujhe wo apne de diye hein jo mere dil ko padhte hein. warna to kisi ko fursat nahin. Yadein zindagi ka aaina hoti hein. bahot se logon ki asset hoti hein jinhein wo bahut samhal ke rakhna chahte hein. dard ki yadein. kisi apne ki yadein zindagi ko naye aayam deti hein. inspire bhi karti hei kai bar.

mere bhai, ye to mumkin nahin ke ham har gazal ya presentation ko padh payin, aapne isko padha aapko ik aaina mila is presentation me. mujhe tassali mili ke koi or bhi hei jo wahi feel karta hei jo mei karta hun.

Aap hosle ke sath jiyein, kisi mod pe ghabrayeiin nahin. ham apke sath hein.

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khushi jee

bayan karta rahunga apne dil ko jab tak aap mere sath hein.

aap sab padh rahe hein bat kar rahe hein . sach me lag raha hei jese mere kandhe pe hath hei aap sab ka. akela nahin hun.


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dost
kisi ka saaath dene mein insaaan ka ka khud ka bhi bohot bada matlab hota hai kyunki jab koi kisi dooosre ka saaath deta hai to use khud bhi ek saaath milta hai.agar har koi yeh baaat yaaad rakhe to is duniya mein koi akela na rahe.
main bhi na..........bas shurooo ho gai per jo dil mein aaaya likh diya.


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lol@afshan bhai


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Shukriya ksitiz bhai,

mashkoor hun aap aaye, padha or samjha.


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dard jee

hamara naam tabassum hei. waise naam me kya rakha hei.


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asslam-o-alaikum tabassum,

thanx for reply. wht u do.


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khushi jee...

hamare kismat me to koi khushi nahin.. kaash hoti..


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Dost Sush
Khushi sab ki kismat mein hoti hai bas zaroorat hai to use dhoondne ki aur pehchanne ki.Allah aap ko hamesha khush rakhe Ameen


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Hi - 28th August 2003, 12:35 PM

KhuB kahi sahaaB dil ko bada sukun mila apka likha padh kar yu hii likhte rahoo......dost!!!!!!


AFSHAN BHAI KESE HOO....

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28th August 2003, 09:56 PM

yaar bedil, yaar swapneel,

ye lol kisliye. kya share nai karoge lol ka raz.

waise aapka Shukriya is page pe aane ka.


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28th August 2003, 10:30 PM

Dard ji
LOL means Lots Of Laughter.
Aapne is ka meaning pooochhha bhale hi mujh se nahin poochhha per mujhe acha laga kyunki is ne mujhe yaad dila diya mera yahi sawaaal kisi aur se poochhna.Yahi sawal hum ne bhi apne ek dost se poochha tha.Woh incident yaad dilane ke liye shukriya.


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28th August 2003, 10:36 PM

khushii jee,

magar ye LOL ka itne serious matter(poem) me kya relevance hei.
but please help me understand how LOL relates to my poem. What did these frnds mean by lol here in a serious poem's reply.

May b i m askin 2 much.


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ji yeh to hum bhi nahin samajh pae
sorrry


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Lagta hei Delhi me rehke mei duffer ho gaya hun.

thanks for help khushii jee


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hai to kya delhi mein rehne waale duffer hote hai
tab to hum bhi duffer hue


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28th August 2003, 10:49 PM

o'really,

u in Delhi. ahh!!!! I was talkin abt me.. not all delhites.

What do u do Khushii jee. a littl more abt u will be great if possible.


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are dard sahab aap to khushii jee ko behen banane me ulajh gaye.. kuch or bhi likhenge ya nahin..


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