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Love Woh na aaye unki yaad...... - 28th December 2006, 10:22 PM
"Woh na aaye unki yaad aakar wafa kar gayi,
Unse milne ki tamanna sukun tabah kar gayi,
Zazba-e-wefa yun aakhen nam kar gayi,
Intezaar mein unke tamam raat guzar gayi,
Aahat hui socha asar dua hamari kar gayi,
Darvaja khol kar dekha to mazaak humse hawa kar gayi".
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Wah Wah kya baat hai apne bahoot acha lika hai.



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good reva keep it up
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31st December 2006, 01:11 PM
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"Woh na aaye unki yaad aakar wafa kar gayi,
Unse milne ki tamanna sukun tabah kar gayi,
Zazba-e-wefa yun aakhen nam kar gayi,
Intezaar mein unke tamam raat guzar gayi,
Aahat hui socha asar dua hamari kar gayi,
Darvaja khol kar dekha to mazaak humse hawa kar gayi".
Rewa....
wah dost kya haquikat bayan ki hai aapne
Bahut hi acchchha laga.

"Naye saal ki dher sari shubhkamnayein".

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rewa ji, maafi chahunga,par ye aapki likhi hui nahi hai,ek sms post hai, aur umeed karta hun ki aap aage se aisa nahi karengi...! sms posts ke liye alag forum hai ise wahaan post kijiye, aur plz doosron ki post apne naam se post na kijiye...! umeed hai aap samajh gayi hongi meri baat ko...!


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2nd January 2007, 10:57 AM
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"Woh na aaye unki yaad aakar wafa kar gayi,
Unse milne ki tamanna sukun tabah kar gayi,
Zazba-e-wefa yun aakhen nam kar gayi,
Intezaar mein unke tamam raat guzar gayi,
Aahat hui socha asar dua hamari kar gayi,
Darvaja khol kar dekha to mazaak humse hawa kar gayi".
Rewa....
I might have read the same stuff some where else also!!! Is it yours.. If not ..plz state the name whoever had his hand on this work!!! Hope u dont mind!!!!
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Thakns 4 ur advice.
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Thakns 4 ur advice. - 3rd January 2007, 12:37 AM
Dear
dheeraj ji!
I haven't mention anywhere ,that is my composition and it's true that i also haven't mention that it's belong to who?bcz i really dont know.i m very new to this site so i dont know the all rules for posting,but i'll try to post composition according to its category.
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Cool Thanks for ur mail - 3rd January 2007, 12:39 AM
Dear
ghayal ji!
I haven't mention anywhere ,that is my composition and it's true that i also haven't mention that it's belong to who?bcz i really dont know.i m very new to this site so i dont know the all rules for posting,but i'll try to post composition according to its category.
Wishing u happy new year.
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rewa ji aapko dhaval ka namskaar

aap is parivaar me nayi hai isiliye shuruaat me galtiyaaN to hoti hai , koi baat nahi par ab aage se khayal rakhiyenga aapko jo bat kahi gayi hai uske bare meiN , agar koi post aapki na ho to aap uske niche "not mine" likhiyega

aur don worry , bas kosisH kijiye apne aap kuch likhne ki ,aapki peshkas ka intezar rahenga


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Hi,
dhavalji,
I m thankful for ur guidance,i'll try to keep on working on ur advice.happy new Year!
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rewa ji, maafi chahunga,par ye aapki likhi hui nahi hai,ek sms post hai, aur umeed karta hun ki aap aage se aisa nahi karengi...! sms posts ke liye alag forum hai ise wahaan post kijiye, aur plz doosron ki post apne naam se post na kijiye...! umeed hai aap samajh gayi hongi meri baat ko...!


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reva ji mai "Ghayal" ji se sahmat hoon. pls jo sher aapka likha na ho, uske nichey "NOT MINE" jaroor likhiye....!

vaise yeh sher mujhe behad pasand hai....

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