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Post guzarish - 16th October 2008, 04:08 PM
dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

sambhal jane ki har kosish ko naakam kardo,
koi dil na lagaye kisise,is kadar pyar ko badnaam kardo

mohabbat k zanjiro ko buland kardo,
dekh k zamana hase,is tarah hume aajiz(helpless) kardo

guzarish hai chandh lamho ko hamare naam kardo,
jab duniya se hum rawana hojaye,ek jhalak dekhkar humpe ehsaan hi kardo



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16th October 2008, 09:45 PM
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dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

sambhal jane ki har kosish ko naakam kardo,
koi dil na lagaye kisise,is kadar pyar ko badnaam kardo

mohabbat k zanjiro ko buland kardo,
dekh k zamana hase,is tarah hume aajiz(helpless) kardo

guzarish hai chandh lamho ko hamare naam kardo,
jab duniya se hum rawana hojaye,ek jhalak dekhkar humpe ehsaan hi kardo



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Ye zindagi to khuda ki azim naemat hai
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17th October 2008, 03:39 AM
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Anuji, Ghazal bahut achchi hai. Ghazal meN dard jitanaa bhi ho woh achchaa hi lagtaa hai. Ham to yehi maanate haiN ki dard aur maayuusi ek achchii Ghazal ki sahi pehchaan haiN. Aap yuuN hi hameN dard-e-muhabbat ke ehsaas dilaate rahiye

aaKhirii hichaki tere zaanoN pe aaye
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really bahut hi badiya likha hai
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17th October 2008, 10:40 AM
Hi Doston.....

hume khushi hui janke k aap sabko meri writing pasand aayi..
dard mein hi pyar ka sahi ehsaas chupa hai,insan jitna dard jhelta hai,utna hi
woh pyar ko samajhta hai,uski kimat samjhta hai,lekin dard kuch hadh tak thik hai warna woh pyar bhara dil bhi maut ki duwaye mangne lagta hai.

Fezan ji,hum kya kare...kuch acha sochke hi likhna shuru karte hai
par duniya mein jude huwe dilo se zyada tute dil hi nazar aate hai....

prasad ji,namaskar...aapne sahi farmaya,jitna dard rehta hai utna hi acha lagta hai woh ghazal padhne me..

aur dkj554 ji.......aapki taarif k liye shukriya....

take care


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17th October 2008, 04:22 PM
bahut najuk ahsaas hain ji,bahut dard hai apki shayri me,likhte rahn.......khush rahen

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17th October 2008, 11:55 PM
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dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

sambhal jane ki har kosish ko naakam kardo,
koi dil na lagaye kisise,is kadar pyar ko badnaam kardo

mohabbat k zanjiro ko buland kardo,
dekh k zamana hase,is tarah hume aajiz(helpless) kardo

guzarish hai chandh lamho ko hamare naam kardo,
jab duniya se hum rawana hojaye,ek jhalak dekhkar humpe ehsaan hi kardo



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18th October 2008, 12:53 PM
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dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

sambhal jane ki har kosish ko naakam kardo,
koi dil na lagaye kisise,is kadar pyar ko badnaam kardo

mohabbat k zanjiro ko buland kardo,
dekh k zamana hase,is tarah hume aajiz(helpless) kardo

guzarish hai chandh lamho ko hamare naam kardo,
jab duniya se hum rawana hojaye,ek jhalak dekhkar humpe ehsaan hi kardo



anu
its too touching, very nice,
tk cr,

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18th October 2008, 03:07 PM
"dard hi dard bhar gaya dil mein.
etna gaayal kar diya gum ne,
jab kisi aankh se gira aansu,
apni palko.n par dhar liya humne"


anu ji hume aapki shayri aur eska dard apna sa laga........likhti rahiye, kush rahiye.


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18th October 2008, 07:15 PM
anu jee !

bahut achha kalaam kahaa aapne !

mujhe tamaam ashaar behad pasand aaye ...

koshish ki jiye kuch aur kam lafzoN kaa istemaal karne kii ...

baki ..

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DaaD haazir hai

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19th October 2008, 08:28 PM
dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

sambhal jane ki har kosish ko naakam kardo,
koi dil na lagaye kisise,is kadar pyar ko badnaam kardo

Anu ji
dard hi dard aur usko bayaan karne ki aapke yeh andaz qabil ke tareef hai.........Daad kabool kijiye ...Younhi apne dilki baat humse share karte rahiye khus rahiye

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20th October 2008, 12:06 PM
namaskar sunitaji,
aapko yeh dard mehsus huwa aur apna sa laga..toh hum maan gaye k humne kuch acha likha hai.bahot bahot shukriya...aapke suggestions se hum bahot kuch sikh rahe hai..aapne jo link bheja tha..usse bahot madad mili hume.

baagi ji, koi toh ho ji aur jass ji ko mera 'Hi'...hume khushi hui janke k aapko yeh dard bhare ashaar pasand aaye.

kshitizji,aapke tarif aur suggestion k liye shukriya...

hi diya,hume aapki writings bahot pasand hai...aap bahot acha likhti hai.hum toh bus kosish kar rahe hai acha likhne ki.aapki daad kubul hai...

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23rd October 2008, 11:03 AM
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dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

sambhal jane ki har kosish ko naakam kardo,
koi dil na lagaye kisise,is kadar pyar ko badnaam kardo

mohabbat k zanjiro ko buland kardo,
dekh k zamana hase,is tarah hume aajiz(helpless) kardo

guzarish hai chandh lamho ko hamare naam kardo,
jab duniya se hum rawana hojaye,ek jhalak dekhkar humpe ehsaan hi kardo



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ahsas bhuta achhe hai. yu hi likhte rahe.

magroor waqt ne ye kiya kar diya,
hasne muskare wali anu ko bhi dard se bhar diya,
tere ahsas ne aj fir, tapti ret ko askho se nam kar diya

dil ne kaha ki tere ansuo ka sauda kar lu
par tune to usko ko mana kar diya

e anu ye tune kiay kar diya.
apne chane walo ko fir apne ahsaso ne khus kar diya.

raj

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26th October 2008, 11:03 AM
Salaam muhtarma,

Abhi guzar raha tha forum se, to socha kuch padhta chaluN, bura mat maaniyega par mere replies se jyada controversy hpti hi, to agar kuch v mera kaha bura lage to plz hume maaf kar dijiyega...!!

Aapki pehli dp lines ahchi rahiN, part uske baad poora kalaam bikhra hua sa laga, har aashaar ki lenght badhti chali gayi jisse flow khatm hota gaya aur har line me kardo daal kar thodi tukbandi si ho gayi aur ehsash behad hassah hote hue v bujh se gaye...!! Aapse darkhwast karuNga, ki ek baar likhne ke baad un lafzoN ko hataa dijiye jinki jrurat nahiN hoti aur jo sirf kalaam me ehsashoN ko kam karte haiN, aur kosish kareN ki hr pankti barabar ho, aapki pehli do lines me thodi islaah karna chahuNga...

dhadkano ko dilse judah kardo,
koi armaan na reh jaye,u hume tabah kardo

DhadkanoN ko dil se judaa kardo,
Koi armaan na rahe yuN tabah kar do.

ye understood hai ki aap khud ko tabah karne ki baat hiN kahenGi,waise log kehte haiN maiN bahut talk mizaaz hun, agar aisa kuch lage to mafi ka talabgaar rahuNga, waise aapne urdu ka ek lafz istemaal kiya usse khushi hui aur aisa laga ki aapke paas lafoN ki kmi nahiN bas unhe pirone me thoda waqt lg jaaye, umeed hai jal hiN mukhatib hoNge...!!


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26th October 2008, 11:24 AM
ghayal shayarji ko hamara namaskar,

yeh hamari khush kismati hai jo aapki nazar hamari post par padhi.Aapke kuch writings humne padhe the...aapke writings toh kaabiley taarif hai.aapne jo bhi kaha usse hume bura nahi laga...hume toh aap jaise doston k suggestions ki behad zarurat hai......hum aage se dhyan rakhenge in baaton ka.....aapke reply k liye bahot bahot shukriya.....uhi hamari galtiyon k baare mein hume bataate rahiye taaki hamara likhne ka style thoda nikhar jaaye.......khush rahiye


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