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Mahobbat apni kabar me chhod aau kaise -
3rd December 2006, 02:10 AM
Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise, khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise... kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe, ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise... nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe, lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise... jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune, aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise... panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari, fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise... in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi, banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise... bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se, aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise.... ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse, ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise... JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE **=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====** grazie aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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3rd December 2006, 09:31 AM
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nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe, lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise... hi pooja kaisi ho yaar aaj bahut lambe intzar ke baad tumhara koi kalam padne ko mila. hamesha ki tarah bade hi gahre ehsas bayaa.n kiye hain tumne. or is sher ki gaharii pr to main kurwab jaoo.n. kya soch hai waah..................... pooja ab lagta hai tumhare jo ehsas hai.n wo bahut gahre hote ja rahe hain. aur ab bus jara sa wazan ( behar)main likha or seekh lo maza aajayega. is behtren peshkas per meri daad kabool farmao yaar shukriya tumhara dost dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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3rd December 2006, 10:50 AM
my dearest pooja
ab kya kahu main aur kuch maine to tumhari ghazal ekpehle to sirf do hi sher dekhe the aajto puri ghazal yaha dekhne ko mili sach me bahot hi dilkash ghazal lihi hai aapne har lafz iska dil ko chhu gaya bahot din bad hi sahi par likha to sahi!!!!!!!!  ehsas bahot hi pyaar hain aur mujhe ek sher bahot hi pasand aaya nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe, lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise... bas yuhi likha kijiye hum tumhe yuhi padhte rahenge dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenga khus rahiye aapka dost dhvaal |
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3rd December 2006, 03:57 PM
hai friends
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3rd December 2006, 06:09 PM
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Namaste wow pooja very nice written special this one Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise, khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise... keep writting like this thumara dost nadeem kazi |
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7th December 2006, 09:37 PM
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mein to thik hi aap kaise ho? ji mujhe kuch likhne ke liye khayal ki jaroorat hoti hai aur ye khayal bade dino baad aya mujhe so isi pe likha itne arse baad. khayal apko pasand aye shukriya. jijaroor mein behar pe ab se dhyan dungi. apki daad sar'ankho par dost. be happy all'ways. grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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7th December 2006, 09:47 PM
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aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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8th December 2006, 07:40 AM
pooja ji bahoot achh likha hai....nice one....
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22nd December 2006, 01:26 AM
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 grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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22nd December 2006, 01:29 AM
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ji shukriya 4 coming and liking....thanku so much...plz ate rahiyega....ok ji grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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22nd December 2006, 01:31 AM
thanku sandhya ji, aapko yahan dekh ke bahot khushi hoti hai. yn hi saath deti rahyega apni iss dost ka.. shukriya ji...
grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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22nd December 2006, 10:03 AM
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teri yeh rachna bahut pasand aaye.....sach mai.n clap karne ko dil cha raha hai....ahsaas dil ko chu gaye....bahut badiya....har sher bahut khoobsurti se likha hai tumne, nice............! love teri diii  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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for pooja -
22nd December 2006, 11:32 AM
hi pooja ji
bahut achcha likha hai. nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe, lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise... jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune, aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise... bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se, aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise.... these three quotes are relly good nice always write like thisone. have a nice day bye yours friend . Merul~~~~~~~. |
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Aaj tumhe pad ke jo khushi ka ehsaas hua woh bayaan nahi kar sakti.. aur dard dil ko choo gaya use bhi bayaan na kiya jaayega.. Saari hi rachna mujhe behad pasand aayi.. ek ek shab aur ek ek sher.. sab hi kaatil the.. Aise hi mehfil me rang sajaati raho.. Khush raho.. Tumhari Di.. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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22nd December 2006, 11:42 PM
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pranaam di, sabse pahale thanku apne ise pasand kiya. di apki gudiya bahot udaas hai aaj. koi mujhse pyaar nahi karta. bilkul tanha hu. sab apne kamo me uljhe rehate hai. kisiko fikar nahi meri......mein kya bol rahi hu uska kisipe asar hi nahi hota. mujhe sab ne sach me ek gudiya hi samajh liye. ek bejaan gudiya. jo jaise chahe waise suluuk kar ke chala jaata hai. ye bhi nahi sochta ki uske ruff an tuff hone se mujhpe kya biit'ti hogi. meri baate kisi pe koi asar nahi daalti. koi baat nahi. yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. bahot khushi hui ye sab bardash kar ke...... grazie aapki gudiya pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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23rd December 2006, 03:21 AM
Pyaar kya hai,ke lamha ya zindagi,ek sapna ya haqueqat,pyaar ek aina hai,sapna nahi,jo dikhta to hai par mehsus kiya nahi ja sakta,bus jod raha hue us toote aine ko,jo mere dil ki tarah hai,toota to hai par juda nahin ja sakta
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27th December 2006, 05:02 PM
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ok ji grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Har Dhadkan Main Ek Raaz hota hai -
27th December 2006, 05:57 PM
Dear Pooja ji,
Aap ki Gazal Achi Lagi . Keep going on --- Arz Hai, Har Dhadkan main ek raj hota hai , Har Baat Bataneka Andaz hota hai, Jab tak Thokar na lage Bewafai ki, HAr kisi ko apne payar par naz hota hai ...... |
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27th December 2006, 06:19 PM
thanku priya di.....
grazie aapki pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th December 2006, 06:21 PM
sumeet ji shukriya
grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th December 2006, 06:28 PM
ashok ji sabse pahale shukriya ise pasand karne k liye.....
apka sher haqikat bhi lagta hai aur fasana bhi....kya kahu ab age.. SHAMA KE PYAR ME JALNA YE PAGAL PARVANE JANTE HAI, MAHOBBAT ME UTHH KAR GIRNA SIRF DINVANE JANTE HAI.... ok ji saath dete rahiyega... grazie aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe, lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise... AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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kaise hai aap? maafi chahte hain bohot der se aapki ghazal se ru_ba_ru ho sake, sach dil khush ho gaya aapki ghazal padh kar,bohot hi achhi koshish ki hai aapne aapki ghazal ka ek ek ashaar kabile tarif hai, is mukammal koshish k liye dili daad kabul kijiye. khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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 apni is puraani post ko fir se dekhke achha laga....ise likhne me mere bahot pyaare dost Dilip ji ne madad ki thhi.....sach unko bahot miss karti hu.....whatever thanku once again.. grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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kya baat hai pooja ji kya baat hai,bahut hi bahut hi accha likha hai apne,likhte rahe,sukriya,apka....baagi....
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Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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