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Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,
Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,
Jala do woh sare khat jo kabhi humne likhe the,
Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.

Ab neend kise kahte hain yeh bhi bhool gaya main,
Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.

Main jaanta hoon ki ab woh nahin aayenge,
Fir bhi raahon mein palken bichhaye baithe hain.
Aey kaash koii jaa ke unse pooche
kis ke sahare pe mujhe chhor gaye hain woh.

   
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26th July 2007, 06:56 PM

kaise hain jawed ji..............
bahut dard hain aapki kalam mein ..par sachaai bhi..aur likha bhi kafi badhiya hain.....aise hi likhte rehna

Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,
Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,

Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.

Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.


aise hi yaha aate rehna.........

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26th July 2007, 09:38 PM

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Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,

Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,
Jala do woh sare khat jo kabhi humne likhe the,
Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.
Ab neend kise kahte hain yeh bhi bhool gaya main,
Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.
Main jaanta hoon ki ab woh nahin aayenge,
Fir bhi raahon mein palken bichhaye baithe hain.
Aey kaash koii jaa ke unse pooche
kis ke sahare pe mujhe chhor gaye hain woh.
JAVED sahab ko mera salam bahut hi umda likha hai apne apka likh hume pasand aya dilse nikli daad hazir hai kubool ho.........aap ka dost


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27th July 2007, 03:30 PM

Bahut Bahut shukria Kashif sahab.....

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Thumbs up frnd 4 ever - 27th July 2007, 03:55 PM

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Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,

Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,
Jala do woh sare khat jo kabhi humne likhe the,
Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.
Ab neend kise kahte hain yeh bhi bhool gaya main,
Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.
Main jaanta hoon ki ab woh nahin aayenge,
Fir bhi raahon mein palken bichhaye baithe hain.
Aey kaash koii jaa ke unse pooche
kis ke sahare pe mujhe chhor gaye hain woh.

Aadab JAWED ji,
kaise hain aap?

MASHA ALLAH,

BOHOT KHOOB.

dard se bhare,,aur dil ko chhu jane wali,,is mukammal nazam ke liye,,,dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye,

ALLAH apko aur tarakki de,
AAMIN,SUMM AAMIN.

apna khayal rakhiye,
KHUSH RAHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

Apki dost
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27th July 2007, 07:17 PM

Zaaranawazi ka shukriya sony sahiba....

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jawed jee:

Really an outstanding work

Kitna aasaan hota hai yeh kahana kii bhool jaao.. lekin.........

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nice - 28th July 2007, 11:44 AM

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Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,
Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,
Jala do woh sare khat jo kabhi humne likhe the,
Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.

Ab neend kise kahte hain yeh bhi bhool gaya main,
Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.

Main jaanta hoon ki ab woh nahin aayenge,
Fir bhi raahon mein palken bichhaye baithe hain.
Aey kaash koii jaa ke unse pooche
kis ke sahare pe mujhe chhor gaye hain woh.


jawed bhai ko raj ka adaab........jawed ji bhut khub bilkul ek ek lafaz sacha hai aapki nazam ka.....daad hazir hai........raj.......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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28th July 2007, 12:18 PM

Bahot Khuub jawed jee....

apney jaZbaatoN ko YuuN hii bayaaN karte rahiYe...

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN...

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka dost

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Shukriya Mayank ji, Rajveer ji and Dhaval ji.....ki aap logon ko mera likha kalaam pasand aaya....bas iase hi aate rahiye...
   
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hi - 30th July 2007, 04:09 PM

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Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,
Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,
Jala do woh sare khat jo kabhi humne likhe the,
Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.

Ab neend kise kahte hain yeh bhi bhool gaya main,
Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.

Main jaanta hoon ki ab woh nahin aayenge,
Fir bhi raahon mein palken bichhaye baithe hain.
Aey kaash koii jaa ke unse pooche
kis ke sahare pe mujhe chhor gaye hain woh.

bahut hi achha likha hai jawed ji aap ne yunhi likhte rahiyega
dil se daad kabool karen

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Woh kahte hain humse ki bhool jaaao hamein,
Bhula do woh sare pal jo kabhi humne saath guzare the,
Jala do woh sare khat jo kabhi humne likhe the,
Woh badi aasani se yeh kahker mera sab kuchh chheen le gaye,
Na main unhen jawaab de paaya aur na woh sunne ke liye ruke.

Ab neend kise kahte hain yeh bhi bhool gaya main,
Aksar tanhaaiyon mein unhen yaad kerna,
Unke likhe khaton ko baar baar padhna,
Yahi mera muqaddar ban gaya hai.

Main jaanta hoon ki ab woh nahin aayenge,
Fir bhi raahon mein palken bichhaye baithe hain.
Aey kaash koii jaa ke unse pooche
kis ke sahare pe mujhe chhor gaye hain woh.
hello Jawed well said. kitana badhiya likha hai apne its an excellent work. apne dard ko badi khoobi se zuban di hai apne. keep writing

god bless u

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hello Jawed well said. kitana badhiya likha hai apne its an excellent work. apne dard ko badi khoobi se zuban di hai apne. keep writing

god bless u

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dil se daad kabool karen

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