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Post Meri Kahani Mera Itihaas - 10th July 2007, 12:53 PM

Dosto ki is mehfil ek baar phir se mera salaam, is baar apke nazar main apne jazbaat nahi balki khud ko kar raha hun. In lines mein maine jab ghar se bahar rehna shuru kiya to uske baad se le kar ab tak ke safar ko byaan kiya hai...
Kuch umeedon ke saath yeh apke samne haazir hai.......


Anjaani raahon pe jab chala tha main
Koi nahi tha mera bilkul akela tha main

Din guzarte gaye log milte gaye
Raatein kat ti gayi yaari badti gayi
Rishte badhne lage armaan judne lage
Girne ke darr se anjaan ham udne lage

Bhool ke khud ko logo ke ho chale
Sapne bhi apne kahi door kho chale

Pahunchaate rahe sab ko manzilon pe
Apni hi manzil kahi kho gayi
Dekhte hi dekhte yeh duniya saari
Maano dushman hamari ho gayi

Rooth gayi sab khushiyan uth gayi sab mehfile
Reh gaye ham tanha bichhad gaye sab kaafile

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai




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Smile Hello - 26th July 2007, 11:04 AM

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Dosto ki is mehfil ek baar phir se mera salaam, is baar apke nazar main apne jazbaat nahi balki khud ko kar raha hun. In lines mein maine jab ghar se bahar rehna shuru kiya to uske baad se le kar ab tak ke safar ko byaan kiya hai...
Kuch umeedon ke saath yeh apke samne haazir hai.......


Anjaani raahon pe jab chala tha main
Koi nahi tha mera bilkul akela tha main

Din guzarte gaye log milte gaye
Raatein kat ti gayi yaari badti gayi
Rishte badhne lage armaan judne lage
Girne ke darr se anjaan ham udne lage

Bhool ke khud ko logo ke ho chale
Sapne bhi apne kahi door kho chale

Pahunchaate rahe sab ko manzilon pe
Apni hi manzil kahi kho gayi
Dekhte hi dekhte yeh duniya saari
Maano dushman hamari ho gayi

Rooth gayi sab khushiyan uth gayi sab mehfile
Reh gaye ham tanha bichhad gaye sab kaafile

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Hello Jasdeep Ji ,....aapne apani kahaani apna itehaas ...bahot hi khoobi se bayaan kiya hai.

Jisme anjaani raahon pe chalne ka hausla, Akele pan ki tanhaai, logon se milane ka sil-sila to doston se bichhadne ki judaai.

Duniya ke rang badlate haalat aur jasbaat bhi hai to Rishton mai toot ke bikharne ka dar bhi hai.

Dusaro ke sapano ko zindagi dene ke liye aur dusaron ko manzil tak pahonchaane ke liye khud ko qurbaan karne ka jasbaa bhi hai to apani har achhchhaai ke badale Duniya se Dushmani aur gum milane ka dard bhi hai.

Khushiyon ke jaane ke gum se jyaada isame apano se judaai ki tadap hai.

Sab khoke aur sab haar ke bhi jaane kis talaash mai Chal rahe ho uas raah par jahaan kuchh shikhawe bhi hai aur kuchh shikaayate bhi hai par fir bhi apani manzil ki aur kadam badhaaye jaane ka Andaaz bhi hai.

Kucch bhi haaton mai naa hote huye bhi apane alfaazon ke andaaze bayaan se kuchh dete jaane ki Adaa bhi hai.



Bahot khoob kuchh na kahete huye bhi bahot kuchh kahe jaane ka ye aapka andaaze bayaan hume bahot pasand aaya...

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe.

Aapki Dost: Gudia.

Jay Ambe.


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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
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26th July 2007, 11:10 AM

Arey Gudia G maine apko thanx to nai kehna tha par is baar main kahunga kyunki u really deserve it...

Thank you so much....

Mera yeh thread jo bahut logo ne padha par ek bhi reply nahi aaya.. Sach kahu to mujhe bahut dukh hua tha ke kisi ne bhi mere iss thread par reply nahi kiya.... shayad kisi ko samjha hi nahi paya tha main ke main kya kehna chahta tha par aapki nazron se yeh nahi bach paya aur aapne iska jitni achhi tarah se reply kiya hai sach mein aap nahi jaante ke aaj mujhe kitni khushi hui hai...

I salute you my dear friend.........



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Smile How Sweet - 26th July 2007, 11:18 AM

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Arey Gudia G maine apko thanx to nai kehna tha par is baar main kahunga kyunki u really deserve it...

Thank you so much....

Mera yeh thread jo bahut logo ne padha par ek bhi reply nahi aaya.. Sach kahu to mujhe bahut dukh hua tha ke kisi ne bhi mere iss thread par reply nahi kiya.... shayad kisi ko samjha hi nahi paya tha main ke main kya kehna chahta tha par aapki nazron se yeh nahi bach paya aur aapne iska jitni achhi tarah se reply kiya hai sach mein aap nahi jaante ke aaj mujhe kitni khushi hui hai...

I salute you my dear friend.........

Hello Jasdeep Ji, Aap bhi na bas . dost wo hota hai jo apane dost ki har baat ko samaje ..hai na ? ab jab hum dost ban gaye hai to mai aapki is thread ka matlab kaise na samajti ?? ..

Aur dukhi hone ki kya baat hai .... kisi ne reply nahi kiya to na sahi shayad uanke paas time nahi hoga ..aur shaayad kisi ko pasand nahi aai hogi ...ab har kisi ki apani soch apanaa nazariyaa hota hai ..

kisi ne reply nahi kiya to koi baat nahi ..main bhi to ab aapki dost hoon ..maine to reply kar diyana ... fir dukh kis baat ka ab ..hai na ??

yaad hai na yeh baat ...ki jo baat dukh de uase mat socho ...jo khushi de uan yaadon ko yaad karo .....jo pal achchhe se guazare uanhe yaad rakho jab sabne saath diya ...aur jab kisi ne saath nahi diya uan palon ko bhool jaana hi better hota hai ./

bas aap hammesha khush rahe ... Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe.

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Jay Ambe.


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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
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yaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi.



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26th July 2007, 11:33 AM

Haan sahi kaha aapne...
shayad sab ko yeh post achhi hi nahi lagi hogi..
mujhe kisi se gila thode na hai...

chalo jo waqt gya usse bhool jaate hai.......



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nice - 26th July 2007, 01:24 PM

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Dosto ki is mehfil ek baar phir se mera salaam, is baar apke nazar main apne jazbaat nahi balki khud ko kar raha hun. In lines mein maine jab ghar se bahar rehna shuru kiya to uske baad se le kar ab tak ke safar ko byaan kiya hai...
Kuch umeedon ke saath yeh apke samne haazir hai.......


Anjaani raahon pe jab chala tha main
Koi nahi tha mera bilkul akela tha main

Din guzarte gaye log milte gaye
Raatein kat ti gayi yaari badti gayi
Rishte badhne lage armaan judne lage
Girne ke darr se anjaan ham udne lage

Bhool ke khud ko logo ke ho chale
Sapne bhi apne kahi door kho chale

Pahunchaate rahe sab ko manzilon pe
Apni hi manzil kahi kho gayi
Dekhte hi dekhte yeh duniya saari
Maano dushman hamari ho gayi

Rooth gayi sab khushiyan uth gayi sab mehfile
Reh gaye ham tanha bichhad gaye sab kaafile

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
jasdeep ji sat sri akaal ji.....thuadee nazam parhi bhut changi laggi thuade khyaal bhut change ne.....bass koshish karde raho manzil door nahi hai........raj.....


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Dosto ki is mehfil ek baar phir se mera salaam, is baar apke nazar main apne jazbaat nahi balki khud ko kar raha hun. In lines mein maine jab ghar se bahar rehna shuru kiya to uske baad se le kar ab tak ke safar ko byaan kiya hai...
Kuch umeedon ke saath yeh apke samne haazir hai.......


Anjaani raahon pe jab chala tha main
Koi nahi tha mera bilkul akela tha main

Din guzarte gaye log milte gaye
Raatein kat ti gayi yaari badti gayi
Rishte badhne lage armaan judne lage
Girne ke darr se anjaan ham udne lage

Bhool ke khud ko logo ke ho chale
Sapne bhi apne kahi door kho chale

Pahunchaate rahe sab ko manzilon pe
Apni hi manzil kahi kho gayi
Dekhte hi dekhte yeh duniya saari
Maano dushman hamari ho gayi

Rooth gayi sab khushiyan uth gayi sab mehfile
Reh gaye ham tanha bichhad gaye sab kaafile

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
bhut badiyaa likha hai dear.........

Vaake hi zindagi kyun jiye jaa rahe ham..
Roz marte hain fir bhi , hanse ja rahe hai hum...


Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
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26th July 2007, 02:18 PM

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai


aise nahin kehte jasdeep ji......... kabhi kabhi hota hain aise kisi post pe nazar nahin jaati..iska matlab yeh thodina ki accha nahin likha hain......di ne ek baar mujhe kaha tha dil se likha kuch bhi bura nahin hota....so aise khyal na laana dil mein....aajkal sab games section mein jyada mashruf rehte hain... isisliye to maine kaha tha yaar nikal do us post ko take aur post bhi dekh sake........

apna khyal rakhna....
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26th July 2007, 02:27 PM

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jasdeep ji sat sri akaal ji.....thuadee nazam parhi bhut changi laggi thuade khyaal bhut change ne.....bass koshish karde raho manzil door nahi hai........raj.....

Rajveer G Sat Shri Akal

Sach kaha ta mainu likhna bilkul nahi aaunda par pata nahi main kiven likh denda haan te jo kuchh v tutta futta main likhda haan tuhaade sab de sahmne rakh dinda haan.
Aur tusi sab itne achhe ho ke meri tareef v kar dinde ho par mainu ta pata hai ke main ki likhya hai...
par phir v main tuhada sab da bahut shukarguzar haan..



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26th July 2007, 02:29 PM

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bhut badiyaa likha hai dear.........

Vaake hi zindagi kyun jiye jaa rahe ham..
Roz marte hain fir bhi , hanse ja rahe hai hum...


Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai

Smilly G aapki haunsla afzai ke liye shukriya par aap to mujse kahi jyada achha likhte ho aur yeh aapne apni pehli hi nazm mein ham sabko bata diya hai....
pihr bhi mujhe padhne aur sarahne ke liye shukriya



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26th July 2007, 02:32 PM

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Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai

aise nahin kehte jasdeep ji......... kabhi kabhi hota hain aise kisi post pe nazar nahin jaati..iska matlab yeh thodina ki accha nahin likha hain......di ne ek baar mujhe kaha tha dil se likha kuch bhi bura nahin hota....so aise khyal na laana dil mein....aajkal sab games section mein jyada mashruf rehte hain... isisliye to maine kaha tha yaar nikal do us post ko take aur post bhi dekh sake........

apna khyal rakhna....
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Waise aap Gujraat se hai aur ab mujhe Gujraat ke bahut se log mil rahe hain aur sach mein aap log kitne acche ho sab ke sab...



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Smilly G aapki haunsla afzai ke liye shukriya par aap to mujse kahi jyada achha likhte ho aur yeh aapne apni pehli hi nazm mein ham sabko bata diya hai....
pihr bhi mujhe padhne aur sarahne ke liye shukriya

Thanx bhut jayada hi izzat de rahe hain aap sub... Par dear main utna badiyaa nahi likh pata hindi mein bas koishis karta hon.... punjabi section mein bhi post kiya thread.. Meri hindi thoodi kamjor hai dear....

Aap ne yeh vake hi bhut badiyaa likha hai dear......

Khus ravoo aur tarki karo dear...
   
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Dosto ki is mehfil ek baar phir se mera salaam, is baar apke nazar main apne jazbaat nahi balki khud ko kar raha hun. In lines mein maine jab ghar se bahar rehna shuru kiya to uske baad se le kar ab tak ke safar ko byaan kiya hai...
Kuch umeedon ke saath yeh apke samne haazir hai.......


Anjaani raahon pe jab chala tha main
Koi nahi tha mera bilkul akela tha main

Din guzarte gaye log milte gaye
Raatein kat ti gayi yaari badti gayi
Rishte badhne lage armaan judne lage
Girne ke darr se anjaan ham udne lage

Bhool ke khud ko logo ke ho chale
Sapne bhi apne kahi door kho chale

Pahunchaate rahe sab ko manzilon pe
Apni hi manzil kahi kho gayi
Dekhte hi dekhte yeh duniya saari
Maano dushman hamari ho gayi

Rooth gayi sab khushiyan uth gayi sab mehfile
Reh gaye ham tanha bichhad gaye sab kaafile

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai

Aadab jasdeep ji,
kaise hain aap?

jasdeep ji,,aap aur itne udaas,,hame to yakin hi nahi aaraha hai.

ALLAH se dua karege,ke ALLAH hamare parivaar ke,itne pyare dost ko,

har khushi de,
unhe unki manzil mil jaye,,
unki har dua kabul ho,
aur wo jald apno ke beech pohonch jaye,
AAMIN.SUMM AAMIN.

aur jahan tak aapki nazam ka sawal hai,

aapne apni is nazam me,,,apni dili kefiyat bayan ki hai,
aur yakin maniye,bohot hi khubsutrti se bayan ki hai,
daad kabul kijiye.

apna khayal rakhiye,
KHUSH RAHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

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Aadab jasdeep ji,
kaise hain aap?

jasdeep ji,,aap aur itne udaas,,hame to yakin hi nahi aaraha hai.

ALLAH se dua karege,ke ALLAH hamare parivaar ke,itne pyare dost ko,

har khushi de,
unhe unki manzil mil jaye,,
unki har dua kabul ho,
aur wo jald apno ke beech pohonch jaye,
AAMIN.SUMM AAMIN.

aur jahan tak aapki nazam ka sawal hai,

aapne apni is nazam me,,,apni dili kefiyat bayan ki hai,
aur yakin maniye,bohot hi khubsutrti se bayan ki hai,
daad kabul kijiye.

apna khayal rakhiye,
KHUSH RAHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

Apki dost
HASSONI,
( HaSSaN ki SoNi )

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(`.) Always *************
`.(`.) Keep
(`.). Smiling!
`..

Hassoni G aapne meri is kahani ko padha, ise samjha, aur ise itne pyaar bhare reply se saraha. yeh sab padh kar hamein bahut hi achha laga. sach kahe to aapne hamein itna pyaar bhara reply bheja hai ke ham aapko bata bhi nahi sakte.
Aapne hamein is parivaar ka pyaara sa dost kaha yeh padh kar to jaise main bilkul hi kho gaya.

Main aapka shukarguzar rahunga...

Khush rahiye



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dear jasdeep.........bahut dino baad tumhari es poem par nazar gaye...bahut accha likha hai...ahsaas bahut acchey hai.n....aur ha, mausam ki baat se mai.n bhi sahmat hoon, games ke chakkar mei.n shayri padney se chook jatey hai.n hum aur ha dil se likha hua kuch bhi bura nahi hota...yeh baat tum bhi dil mei.n rakh lo, mausam ki tarah....

kush rahiye


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Smile too good - 31st July 2007, 06:02 AM

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Dosto ki is mehfil ek baar phir se mera salaam, is baar apke nazar main apne jazbaat nahi balki khud ko kar raha hun. In lines mein maine jab ghar se bahar rehna shuru kiya to uske baad se le kar ab tak ke safar ko byaan kiya hai...
Kuch umeedon ke saath yeh apke samne haazir hai.......


Anjaani raahon pe jab chala tha main
Koi nahi tha mera bilkul akela tha main

Din guzarte gaye log milte gaye
Raatein kat ti gayi yaari badti gayi
Rishte badhne lage armaan judne lage
Girne ke darr se anjaan ham udne lage

Bhool ke khud ko logo ke ho chale
Sapne bhi apne kahi door kho chale

Pahunchaate rahe sab ko manzilon pe
Apni hi manzil kahi kho gayi
Dekhte hi dekhte yeh duniya saari
Maano dushman hamari ho gayi

Rooth gayi sab khushiyan uth gayi sab mehfile
Reh gaye ham tanha bichhad gaye sab kaafile

Magar na jaane kyu jee rahe hai
Jaane kiski talaash hai
Bas kuch beeti hui yaadon ke siva
Kuch bhi nahi hamare paas hai
Bas kar raha hun nazar apke kuch shabad apne
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Yehi meri kahani yehi mera itehaas hai
Hey dost kaise ho? its just 2 good apani kahani kis khoobi se bayan kardi apne. kisi ne pahele read nahi ki so what? dont need 2 worry about that there r many people out there who likes ur work. its just simply great. keep writing

god bless u

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Hey dost kaise ho? its just 2 good apani kahani kis khoobi se bayan kardi apne. kisi ne pahele read nahi ki so what? dont need 2 worry about that there r many people out there who likes ur work. its just simply great. keep writing

god bless u

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Main bilkul theek hoon dost....
aur aapki khariyat ki bhi kaamna karta hoon........
Ita really a pleasure to know that some people like my shayri.....

I will come with a new one very soon...

Take care



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Smile Kyaa Baat Hai Jasdeep Ji .......! - 31st July 2007, 08:50 AM

Hello Jasdeep Ji ..kya baat hai ... ek baar fir se aap to chhaaaa gaye ....
Humane kaha thaana ki aapi likhi hui gazal bahot hi achhchhi hai ... ab to yakeen ho gaya naa ??? hahahaaa

Tabhi to kaheti hoon ki ..........jo mai kaheti hoon wo sab sach hota hai ...par ek aap ho ki apani is dost ki baat maanate hi nahi ho ....aese thodi na chalega...?? not fair ok ???

Well ....forget it .....

ek baar fir se aapki shayri par hum aapko daad dehi dete hai ...

Jasdeep ji, aapne bahot hi achhchhaa likha hai bas yunhi likhate rahiyegaa ..aur mahefil sajaate rahiyega ...aur fir hum to yahaan par hai hi ..aapko aur aapke Joke jhel ne ke liye .....hahahahaaa sorry just kidding

i mean .... aapki pyaari si gazale aur shayris padhane ke liye ...
Bas yungi likhate rahenaa ..

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe.

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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31st July 2007, 08:56 AM

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Aapne ek baar phir se hamari is post pe dastak di to ham bagh bagh ho uthe....

Aur shayad itni taareef ke to ham kaabil bhi nahi jitni aapne kar di hai
yeh to aapka pyaar aur apnapan hi hai jo ham yaha is parivaar ke beech hai warna ham to bas naam ke hi shayar hai.

Yeh aapke liye::::
Par muaaf kar is baar bhi yeh copy kiya hai mera apna likha nahi hai

"Aaj phir uski yaad ne rula diya,
kaisa hain ye chera jisne ye sila diya,
do lafj likhne ka salika na tha,
uske pyar ne mujhe shayar bana diya."



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Smile Wah wah wah wah ........ - 31st July 2007, 09:03 AM

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Aapne ek baar phir se hamari is post pe dastak di to ham bagh bagh ho uthe....

Aur shayad itni taareef ke to ham kaabil bhi nahi jitni aapne kar di hai
yeh to aapka pyaar aur apnapan hi hai jo ham yaha is parivaar ke beech hai warna ham to bas naam ke hi shayar hai.

Yeh aapke liye::::
Par muaaf kar is baar bhi yeh copy kiya hai mera apna likha nahi hai

"Aaj phir uski yaad ne rula diya,
kaisa hain ye chera jisne ye sila diya,
do lafj likhne ka salika na tha,
uske pyar ne mujhe shayar bana diya."

wah wah wah wah ,,,kya baat hai janaab ..... shayraana andaaz mai baatein kiye jaa rahe ho aur kahete ho ki hum shayar nahi ...... very good ...
uumm..ab aap maafi mang hi rahe ho to socha ......kyon na is baar aapko Maaf NAAAAAAAAAA kiya jaaye ? ....kyon kya khayaal hai janaab ka ?

ab hum aapke dost hai thoda sa to haq bantaa hi hai aapko pareshaan karne ka ...

to socha kyon na is baar thodi si punishment hi dedi jaaye ... maafi to ab aapko milane se rahi ..

To hum soch te hai ki aapko kya saza de ....to fir yaad aaya aapko Green mirchi aur Aur Karele ki sabzi naa khaane ki sazaa de ... kyon thik hai naa ... ?? ab maan na to padega aapko no cheating ok

aur haan ek aur saza aapki baaki rahi ...ek sweet sa Gaana sunaa ne ki ... par aaj to Hindi aur Punjaabi dono mai sunaa na padega .....so done ...ab apani punishments bhool naa jaana ...

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe.

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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Ok Boss!!!!!



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