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29th March 2008, 08:33 PM

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di ab last me reply karne ka bhi mann nahi lag raha hai kya keh kar reply karu kya ab bolu jo tha vo to sab chala gaya pehle bahut khushi ho rahi thi per ab ye sab padhkar bahut dkhu ho raha hai.
aur di app ka bahut bahut shukriya jo appne is kahani ko ek ache andaz me pesh kiya kyu ki aisa vahi likh sakta hai jiske pass ek sacha dil ho apne hume sunakar bahut acha kiya ki aisa bhi hota hai isi liye to kehte hai na ki pyar amar hota hai jo kabhi nahi mit ta hai use mitane wale mit jaate hai per pyar nahi mit ta hai
muje bahut khushi ho rahi hai itna pyar karte the saba aur piyush per saba ne agar vo file padh li hoti to aaj piyush ke ghar me bahut khushi hoti fir bhale hi piyush us khushi me shamil na ho.
thank you so much di apne hume ye kahani suniyi
Bhaiyaa....

apne samjha, or saath diya uske liye bahot bahot shukriya....haa sahi kaha....zindagi ke har pal ka hume saamna karna chaahiye....jiss tarha khushiya zindagi ka hissa hain usi tarha gham bhi ek sacchaai hai....bas usi ko maine darshaane ki koshish ki hai....aapko asand aaya shukriyaa

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29th March 2008, 08:34 PM

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ok di ab kabhi us se baat nahi karuga haan apne sahi kaha ki usko reply nahi dena chahiye aur di apka end padhke bahut dukh ho raha hai aur kismat ke aage hum kaha tik paate hai.
ya, jab main ise type kar rahi thhi to mujhe bhi bahot dukh ho raha thha...fir bhi maine ise likhaa

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29th March 2008, 08:35 PM

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ek toh waise hi udaas thi abh or ho gayi
kuch nahi kehna mujhe
taek caer u
sorry sis........

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29th March 2008, 08:39 PM

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Pooja:

kahaani ka aNt paRhaa... aNt paRh kar jaise lagaa ki dard Khud saamne naZar aa rahaa ho. tumne baRii meHnat kii hay ees kahaani par.. mujhe baRii KhuShii hu'ii tum itanaa umdaah liKhatii ho aur itani geHrii soch raKhatii ho.. guzaariSh haii yuuNhi liKhatii raho... Khudaa tumhe haMeShaa KhuSh raKheN aur ziNdagee meN kaamyaabee deN..!

KhuSh raho.. apnaa Khayaal raKhanaa..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Bahot bahot shukriya aapke saath ke liye or kahaani ko dil se padhne ke liye or fir ant ko accept karne ke liye....sacch karu to maine aajtak kabhi kuch likhne me mehanat ki hi nahi hai....meri mehanat mujhe kabhi kuch nahi deti..ye maine mehsoos kiya hai....is kahaani ko mehanat sirf typing me di hai maine.....baaki socha to bas sab kuch apne aap dimmag me aa gaya..starting se lekar ending tak or dialog se lekar simple lining tak or serious mood se lekar joks tak..sab easy thha......mushkil thha sirf ise likhna....vo maine puure ek maine me poora kiya....
zindagi ki haqikat yahi hai, insaan ko har kadam khushiya nahi milti....dukho ka bhi saamna karna parta hai...khushiya bhi milti hain lekin insaan khud unhe gaNwaa deta hai...usska zimmedaar insaan khud hai...

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29th March 2008, 08:41 PM

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tune mana kiya hain na ki jisko teri kahaani ka end pasand na aye woh reply na kare....main par fir bhi karungi.....jo karna hain karle..........dikha diya na ki tu chirkut hain.....pagal hathodi.. mandbuddhi ..kahiki....kya end likhte waqt manojkumar ,rajendra kumar ya meenakumari ki koi film dekhi thi kyaa.....jo itna ashay end likha hain tune.....kamse kam mujhe dekh leti to kuch accha sa to end likhti ttu??? ya to mujhe lagta hain tune kadve karele ka juice piya hoga likhte waqt jo aisa dardnak.....end likha haiN.............mujhe bilkul bhi accha nahin laga..rotdu kisam ka end..............itne prem aur chaav se hum tumhari story padh rahe the.....to rulane ki kya zaroorat thi...........chokri tune accha nahin kiyaaa..badal de end...........warna......

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ha to kisne kaha thha aane ke liye.....maine bulaya thha kya.....chalo aa gai to koi baat nahi.....ab yaar accept to karna hi parega.....ab miss Pooja ji ne kuch likha hai to usska aadar karna sikho chirkut.......jab dekho meri criations ko bhala bura bolti rahati ho......ab end kaha se badlu.....aisa karo aap apni kahani me is kahani ko daal kar jo chaahe vo end likh do..hahahahahaha

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29th March 2008, 08:43 PM

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hmmm to bil akhir ker hi dia tregic end wesay end parrh ker dukh to mehsoos howa lekin haan ye sahi kaha ke her story ki happy ending nahi hoti ... per happy ending dekh ker dukhi dilon ko thorra sukoon zaroor milta hai per khair haqeeqat to haqeeqat hoti hai stories se kauson door aik sabaq zaroor mila tumhari story se woh ye ke .... allah ne to behar haal insaan ke liye kuch na kuch agay acha hi likha hota hai mager insaan bohat be sabra hota hai aur isi chaker main woh ghalat qadam uthane main bilkul dair nahi kerta agar woh shadeed ghum main bhi uper wale per bharosa rakhe saber rakhe to use sila zaroor milta hai kisi bhi shaqal main thanks dear itna acha end dene ke liye kionki tumne haqeeqat ka rukh dikhaya hai bajaye iske ke afsanwi batain hoti jin main koi haqeeqat nahi hoti itni achi story likhne ke liye dhair sari mubarakbaad
jee didi, aapne sahi kaha.....sahamat hu poori tarhaa apki soch se....lekin kismat me Saba ke naam itni hi saaNse likhi thhi, usne jee li to use jaana paraa.....fir bahana chaahe koi bhi ho....maut kisipe karam nahi farmaati.....aapne saath diye uske liye tahedil se shukriyaa....

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jee didi, aapne sahi kaha.....sahamat hu poori tarhaa apki soch se....lekin kismat me Saba ke naam itni hi saaNse likhi thhi, usne jee li to use jaana paraa.....fir bahana chaahe koi bhi ho....maut kisipe karam nahi farmaati.....aapne saath diye uske liye tahedil se shukriyaa....

grazie

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bahut khub POOJA.....ye kahani ka ant bahut dardnaak tha par ye to zindagi ka asli chehra hai...hum jaisa sochte hai waisa hota nahi hai.....
bahut khub ....muje tum par bahut garv hai ki tum jaisi member bhi hai sdc pe...i m proud to be ur sis...bahut mehnat ki hai tumne is kahani par...aur tumhari mehnat safal hui hai....hum sab ko ye kahani padte hue bahut hi mazaa aaya...aur rahi baat SAHIL jaise logo ki to mai sirf ek hi baat kahungi ki samajdaar log kabhi kichad me paththar nahi fekte kyon ki aisa karne se kichad hamare hi upar aa jata hai...to ignore them and just chill.....
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