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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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1st March 2015, 04:52 PM
Ik alag mijaz ki ghazal aap sab ki mohabbaton ke hawaale....
chipaao mat muhabbat ko bata do saaNwli ladki...
vo maiN hiN hooN jise tum chaahti ho saaNwli ladki...
anaa ke jung meiN saare marasim bhoolti duniya,
mujhe paagal si duniya se bachaa lo saaNwli ladki...
tumhare baad mehfil meiN tumhi ko dhooNdhta rehta,
sabhi se poochta hooN kaun thi vo saaNwli ladki...
teri khushboo fiza meiN hai tabhi to saaNs leta hooN,
tu meri hai, maiN tera hooN ari o saaNwli ladki...
kisi ko chaaNd ki khwaish, kisi ko raat ki chaahat,
mera dil ab tumhara hai, sambhalo saNwli ladki...
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1st March 2015, 05:11 PM
Lucky bhai kahan mili ye saanwali ladki ...
Dil chura ke le gayee vo saanwali ladki..
Bahut rumani lagi tumhari ye pyar bhari ghazal
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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2nd March 2015, 12:23 AM
bohat khoob acha likha aaap ne aur ye sher bht pasand aya.....
"anaa ke jung meiN saare marasim bhoolti duniya,
mujhe paagal si duniya se bachaa lo saaNwli ladki..."
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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2nd March 2015, 02:58 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Lucky bhai kahan mili ye saanwali ladki ...
Dil chura ke le gayee vo saanwali ladki..
Bahut rumani lagi tumhari ye pyar bhari ghazal
Sanjay Sehgal
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bade bhaiya bas ab bhi usi ka intezaar hai... bahut aabhari huN ki aapne khayaloN ko itni tarzeef di...
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2nd March 2015, 08:32 AM
Waah waah waah taish jee apki ye alag mijaz ki gazal padkar maza aa gaya....bahut pyara kalaam...
dil se daad kubool kijiye...
aur dua hai...aapka intzaar jald khatm ho..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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2nd March 2015, 01:54 PM
Bohot khoob jenab.
Bohot bohot mubarak iss peshkash keliye.
Har ek sheyr lajawab hai.
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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3rd March 2015, 01:39 PM
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bohat khoob acha likha aaap ne aur ye sher bht pasand aya.....
"anaa ke jung meiN saare marasim bhoolti duniya,
mujhe paagal si duniya se bachaa lo saaNwli ladki..."
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is ahusla afzayi ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukraguzaar huN....
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3rd March 2015, 02:26 PM
teri khushboo fiza meiN hai tabhi to saaNs leta hooN,
tu meri hai, maiN tera hooN ari o saaNwli ladki...
waaah .. waaah ..
kia kehny.....
bohat khoob.!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd March 2015, 03:11 PM
Wah bhai waah
Lucky bhai...mazaa aa gayaa... dil se daad
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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3rd March 2015, 08:48 PM
MACHAL TE DIL KI KAHANi,, GAZAL KI ZABANi,, wah bhai wah
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4th March 2015, 02:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Waah waah waah taish jee apki ye alag mijaz ki gazal padkar maza aa gaya....bahut pyara kalaam...
dil se daad kubool kijiye...
aur dua hai...aapka intzaar jald khatm ho..
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aapke muNh meiN ghee shakkar, bas yuNhi aashirwad dete raheN....
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4th March 2015, 07:17 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
Ik alag mijaz ki ghazal aap sab ki mohabbaton ke hawaale....
chipaao mat muhabbat ko bata do saaNwli ladki...
vo maiN hiN hooN jise tum chaahti ho saaNwli ladki...
anaa ke jung meiN saare marasim bhoolti duniya,
mujhe paagal si duniya se bachaa lo saaNwli ladki...
tumhare baad mehfil meiN tumhi ko dhooNdhta rehta,
sabhi se poochta hooN kaun thi vo saaNwli ladki...
teri khushboo fiza meiN hai tabhi to saaNs leta hooN,
tu meri hai, maiN tera hooN ari o saaNwli ladki...
kisi ko chaaNd ki khwaish, kisi ko raat ki chaahat,
mera dil ab tumhara hai, sambhalo saNwli ladki...
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Wow! truly romantic...........................shayad shayri e ishq was more appropriate i guess. simply loved it.
++ Reps added
regards
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5th March 2015, 08:43 AM
teri khushboo fiza meiN hai tabhi to saaNs leta
hooN,
tu meri hai, maiN tera hooN ari o saaNwli ladki...
kya baat kya baat..
bahut achi or pyaari lagi aapki peshkash saheb..
aisi gazalo se to koi b ladki ek pal m aapko chahne lage
yuhi likhte rahe.. kush rahe..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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5th March 2015, 10:06 AM
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Bohot khoob jenab.
Bohot bohot mubarak iss peshkash keliye.
Har ek sheyr lajawab hai.
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shukriya sagar saahib, aapki hausla afzaayi ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukraguzaar hooN...
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6th March 2015, 11:31 PM
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teri khushboo fiza meiN hai tabhi to saaNs leta hooN,
tu meri hai, maiN tera hooN ari o saaNwli ladki...
waaah .. waaah ..
kia kehny.....
bohat khoob.!
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shukriya bhai jaan, tahe dil se shukraguzaar hun is hausla afzaayi ke liye...
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10th March 2015, 10:32 PM
Maafi chote bhai meri nazar is khoobsurat nagme par der se padi. Hairaan mat ho nagma isliye kaha ki maine ise padha nahi gungunaya bhi hai.
Bahut khoob daad qabool farmaayein
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20th March 2015, 07:30 PM
Taish bhai bohot bohot pasand aai aapki ye peshkash....behad juda hai ye peshkash....
Dil se daad....
Aapka apna
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20th March 2015, 09:55 PM
saNwali Ladki...
Baby ko crazy kar gai vo saNwali Ladki
janab kavita badi achi hai.....
rajinderseep
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21st March 2015, 01:32 PM
lucky bhai....bahut hee khoobsurat ghazal hai....badhaai ho aapko.......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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