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26th July 2005, 07:41 PM
aik nazm jo kuch arsa qabl likhi thi mehfil ki nazar karta huuN.......apni aaraa se zaruur nawaazeN
mere khwaaboN ki jannat ka nazaraa haiN teri aaNkheN hujuum-e-Gham meiN khushiyoN ka ishaara haiN teri aaNkheN yeh pech-o-kham jo zulfoN ka kabhi maathe pe lehraaye jabeen-e-arsh pe goya GhaTaa kaali si bal khaaye teri baateN haiN jaise chaandii ta'riiKh raatoN meiN tabassum ye tera jaise ki sehra meiN ho barsaateiN tujhe har raNg har aNdaaz meiN maine hasiiN paaya bohat haiN maahjabiiN dekhe kahiiN tujhsa nahiiN paaya tu voh tasveer hai jiska mussavir khud bhi hairaaN hai tu kya hai khud naeeN tu jaan'ti, haaye , itni naadaaN hai mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN baRaa jee chahta hai tujhko baahoN meiN chhupa luuN maiN tere har dard ko apne kalejey se lagaa luuN maiN tere pairoN ke kaaNTe apni palkoN se uThaa luuN maiN meri jaanaaN jo ho mumkin tujhe apna banaa luuN maiN muhabbat tujhse hai itni ke maiN batlaa nahiiN sakta tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta ummiidoN ke khilonoN se maiN jee behlaa nahiiN sakta tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta maikash ------------ is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th July 2005, 09:27 PM
Maikash Sahib...
aapki nazm pur kashish soorat-e-tasviir ubharti jaati hai...kya khubsurat andaaz hai apni mehbooba ka husn bayaan karne ka...aur phir chahat kee bekasi...bahut khuub! Yoonhi aate rahieye...apne dilkash taraane gaate rahieye apna khayal rakhieyga *plz do post more of Majaz, kind of articles on other shayars...it was very interesting gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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26th July 2005, 11:06 PM
ummiidoN ke khilonoN se maiN jee behlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta Y SO ???????????????// ek khaamoshii hai sunatii hai kahaa karatii hai naa ye bujhatii hai naa rukatii hai naa Thaharii hai kahii.n nuur kii buu.Nd hai sadiyo.n se bahaa karatii hai sirf ehasaas hai ye, ruuh se mahasuus karo pyaar ko pyaar hii rahane do, koii naam naa do..... hamane dekhii hai in aa.Nkho.n kii mahakatii khushabuu haath se chhuuke ise rishto.n kaa ilzaam na do........... |
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27th July 2005, 07:22 AM
muhabbat tujhse hai itni ke maiN batlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta ummiidoN ke khilonoN se maiN jee behlaa nahiiN sakta tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta ---------------------------------------------------------------------- maikhaas ji... bahut khushi huyi bahut dinon baad aaisa kuch parh ke. absoluely your creation is fantastic...... lovely. keep writing...... take care! |
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27th July 2005, 11:13 AM
Marhaba, Marhaba..
Arbaab aap hain kahan..? kuch ziyaada hi taweel wakfa ho gaya iss baar, lekin waapsi par apni is pur-asar nazm ke tilism se, shikve gile ke moonh pe woh talaa lagayaa ke abb kya kahein. Ek shaandaar kalaam par hamaari mubaarakbaad aur daad qubool farmayein, aur .... aapka ghar hai, aayaa jaayaa karo. Dua go. Talib. |
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27th July 2005, 11:19 AM
tu voh tasveer hai jiska mussavir khud bhi hairaaN hai
tu kya hai khud naeeN tu jaan'ti, haaye , itni naadaaN hai mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN Maikash G.... Ek pur asar nazm......huzoor.....dil se daad qubool kijiye.....aur jaisa ki Talib G ne kaha...... aapka ghar hai ...aaya jaaye karo..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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29th July 2005, 12:54 PM
baRaa jee chahta hai tujhko baahoN meiN chhupa luuN maiN
tere har dard ko apne kalejey se lagaa luuN maiN ............................... ek khaamoshii hai sunatii hai kahaa karatii hai naa ye bujhatii hai naa rukatii hai naa Thaharii hai kahii.n nuur kii buu.Nd hai sadiyo.n se bahaa karatii hai sirf ehasaas hai ye, ruuh se mahasuus karo pyaar ko pyaar hii rahane do, koii naam naa do..... hamane dekhii hai in aa.Nkho.n kii mahakatii khushabuu haath se chhuuke ise rishto.n kaa ilzaam na do........... |
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29th July 2005, 04:21 PM
mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN
tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN.... Ye Ilm hona bahot badi baat hai janaab..... muhabbat hai to sab se pehle uske dard au ashq ko chhua jaye...varna husn ke deewane to bahot milte hain...aap ka ye khayal dil ko chhu lene wala hai.... mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN Aap ki muhabbat ke andaaz aur andaze bayan pe qurbaan  Aise hi apna dard e jigar kholte rahein.....aur ham bolte rahenge irshaad....irshaad....Pain and Love are always same....wherever...however....whenever... Khush rahiye -Ashish fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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29th July 2005, 04:23 PM
Gam ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi...
ye nazrana tera bhi hai mera bhi... fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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29th July 2005, 05:19 PM
hi,
You are super maikash dear... "tujhe main chaah sakta hoon lekin paa nahi sakta " jindagi kya hai main tujhako bata nahi sakta love the feeling... |
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