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kyu lagtaa hai mujhe tum paas hi ho -
30th April 2005, 02:58 PM
dosto aaj mujhe apne pyaar ki bahut yad aa rahi hai bas usi ki yaad me pareshaan me kaagaj kalam leke baith raha hun aur ye kavita likhne ki koshish ki hai kaisi ban pari hai iske jabaab kaa mujhe intjaaar rahega ...............
kyu lagta hai mujhe tum paas hi homere yahi kahin bilkul aas-paas agar tum paas nahi ho to kisko dhoondta hun me khud ko yaaa tumko har pal ek hi baat dil me ek hi ahsaas tum ho,agar tum nahi ho to kisko sochta hun me khud ko yaa tumko ek hi chahat , ek hi intjaar kabhi to paa saku tumhara pyaar agar ye pyaar nahi to ksiko chahtaa hun me khud ko yaa tumko kyu sab kuch nahi bhul pata maut ke jhule me nahi jhool pata agar ye jindagi se berukhi nahi to ksiko mitaanaa chahta hun me khud ko yaa tumko khud ko yaa tumko khud ko yaa tumko .......................................    nahi samjhe the jindagi ko ab tak jiye to jaana jindagi maut hai ajijo jo me mar jaaoun to mera itnaa saa kaam kar dena mere maathe pe likh dena "beemaar-e-ishq" |
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30th April 2005, 06:41 PM
kyu lagta hai mujhe
tum paas hi homere yahi kahin bilkul aas-paas agar tum paas nahi ho to kisko dhoondta hun me khud ko yaaa tumko Waaah! har pal ek hi baat dil me ek hi ahsaas tum ho,agar tum nahi ho to kisko sochta hun me khud ko yaa tumko Well Said!! [b ek hi chahat , ek hi intjaar kabhi to paa saku tumhara pyaar agar ye pyaar nahi to ksiko chahtaa hun me khud ko yaa tumko [/b] Again welll said!! kyu sab kuch nahi bhul pata maut ke jhule me nahi jhool pata agar ye jindagi se berukhi nahi to ksiko mitaanaa chahta hun me khud ko yaa tumko khud ko yaa tumko Very Nice!! Hi! Acchi ban padi hai aapki kavita....Khayaal kaafi umda hain aapke... mujhe padhkar khushi hui.. yun hi likhte rahiyega... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st May 2005, 03:25 PM
pulkit ji thanks
aaapko meri kavita pasand aayi aur aapne jo shabd kahe hai bo mere liye tonic ki tarah kaam karenge ab mere andar likhne ke liye aur jyaada material ban raha hai thanks again aapko yun hi aapke pyaar ke intjaar me aapka tiyagi the ``vyathit`` nahi samjhe the jindagi ko ab tak jiye to jaana jindagi maut hai ajijo jo me mar jaaoun to mera itnaa saa kaam kar dena mere maathe pe likh dena "beemaar-e-ishq" |
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19th May 2005, 12:49 AM
behad khoob likha hai
sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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