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' Un Ka Pyaar Sacchaa Lagtaa Hai...! ' - 10th October 2007, 05:39 AM

Un ka pyaar sacchaa lagtaa hai
Aasmaan se U.nchaa lagtaa hai

Shaakh se issko judaa na karna
Phal thoDaa kacchaa lagtaa hai

Dulhan ke lebaas ka kya kehna
Shimul* ka Gu.nchaa lagtaa hai

Husn ki Devi ki baatein hoti hai
To un ka hi charchaa lagtaa hai

Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai

Baat jo kare wo humse to qiimti
Pal ka un ko kharchaa lagtaa hai

Meri baaton par Gaur na kijiiye
Un ko sataana acchaa lagtaa hai

Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai

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Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai


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10th October 2007, 11:35 AM

Adaab Amanush sahab..................
Apka Kalaam to wakei main bahut khobsorat laga is kalaam ne apne apne khayalo ko bahut umda Andaaz se pesh kiya hai jise padhker kuch khayalo mein kho gaya meri Daad apke liye hazir hai kubool ho.................TC


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10th October 2007, 02:09 PM

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Un ka pyaar sacchaa lagtaa hai
Aasmaan se U.nchaa lagtaa hai

Shaakh se issko judaa na karna
Phal thoDaa kacchaa lagtaa hai

Dulhan ke lebaas ka kya kehna
Shimul* ka Gu.nchaa lagtaa hai

Husn ki Devi ki baatein hoti hai
To un ka hi charchaa lagtaa hai

Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai

Baat jo kare wo humse to qiimti
Pal ka un ko kharchaa lagtaa hai

Meri baaton par Gaur na kijiiye
Un ko sataana acchaa lagtaa hai

Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai

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danny ji namsakaar..........ek behtreen gazal padne ka mokka diya aapne, yu hi likhtey rahiye aur mahfil ko rangeeN banatey rahiye.

god bless u


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Un ka pyaar sacchaa lagtaa hai
Aasmaan se U.nchaa lagtaa hai

Shaakh se issko judaa na karna
Phal thoDaa kacchaa lagtaa hai

Dulhan ke lebaas ka kya kehna
Shimul* ka Gu.nchaa lagtaa hai

Husn ki Devi ki baatein hoti hai
To un ka hi charchaa lagtaa hai

Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai

Baat jo kare wo humse to qiimti
Pal ka un ko kharchaa lagtaa hai

Meri baaton par Gaur na kijiiye
Un ko sataana acchaa lagtaa hai

Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai

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Aapka likha hua bhi bahut acha lagta hai!!!!

Aaage bhi intzaar rahega!!!

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12th October 2007, 06:10 PM

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Adaab Amanush sahab..................
Apka Kalaam to wakei main bahut khobsorat laga is kalaam ne apne apne khayalo ko bahut umda Andaaz se pesh kiya hai jise padhker kuch khayalo mein kho gaya meri Daad apke liye hazir hai kubool ho.................TC
Hamein bhi to sunein aap kiss khayaalon main kho gaye the, Kashif Ji...!

Aap ko yaha shaayri bhi acchi lagii so hamein khushi houi aur daad dil ki
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Hausle ke liye shukriyaa...!

Eid Mubaarak...!



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Meri baaton par Gaur na kijiiye
Un ko sataana acchaa lagtaa hai

Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai


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Un ka pyaar sacchaa lagtaa hai
Aasmaan se U.nchaa lagtaa hai

Shaakh se issko judaa na karna
Phal thoDaa kacchaa lagtaa hai

Dulhan ke lebaas ka kya kehna
Shimul* ka Gu.nchaa lagtaa hai

Husn ki Devi ki baatein hoti hai
To un ka hi charchaa lagtaa hai

Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai

Baat jo kare wo humse to qiimti
Pal ka un ko kharchaa lagtaa hai

Meri baaton par Gaur na kijiiye
Un ko sataana acchaa lagtaa hai

Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai

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Danny jee:

bohat achchhe aur pyaare ehsaas hai.n.. paRh kar lutf aaya.. itna khuub-suurat likhane ke liye mere jaanib se daad aur mubaaraq baad qubool keejiye.. aur yuu.n hii mehfil ko apne nagmo.n se sajaate rahe.n.

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namaskaar danny ji

aapki ghazal humein bahut hi achi lagi. aapke ehsaas dil ko chu gaye. aapka likha yeh sher to zehan mein shamma gaya:


Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai


yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein.

aapka dost

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bhut khub - 15th October 2007, 01:44 PM

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Un ka pyaar sacchaa lagtaa hai
Aasmaan se U.nchaa lagtaa hai

Shaakh se issko judaa na karna
Phal thoDaa kacchaa lagtaa hai

Dulhan ke lebaas ka kya kehna
Shimul* ka Gu.nchaa lagtaa hai

Husn ki Devi ki baatein hoti hai
To un ka hi charchaa lagtaa hai

Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai

Baat jo kare wo humse to qiimti
Pal ka un ko kharchaa lagtaa hai

Meri baaton par Gaur na kijiiye
Un ko sataana acchaa lagtaa hai

Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai

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danny ji ko raj ki pyaar bhari namaskaar......bhai aapki gazal parhi bhut achi laggi gazab ka likha hai.....ehsaas dil ko chhune waale hain....kasam se lajawaab likha hai aapne.....is khaakhsaar ki daad kabool karna.....raj......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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Kehti hai tere taur se ‘Amanush ’
Abhi talak tu bacchaa lagtaa hai


Bass..... And it's simple yet done its job! Nicely written as usual but these ones caught my eyes...

Take care.. okay?
Kaisi hein aap, Miss Pallo...?

So nice to receive your compliments after so long...!

I'll take care and do so too, ok...?

Keep coming, we miss your laughs

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aapki ghazal humein bahut hi achi lagi. aapke ehsaas dil ko chu gaye. aapka likha yeh sher to zehan mein shamma gaya:


Sitaaredaar mehfil ko dekh kar
Falak aaj kal niichaa lagtaa hai


yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein.

aapka dost

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Kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!

Yun hi aate rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhein, ok...?

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Raaj Ji ko hamara saadar pranaam...!

Kalaam ki tareef karke aap ne hamein khush kar diya...!

Yun hi saath dete rahein aur apna khayaal bhi rakhiyega...!

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Kabhi Tu Chhalia Lagta Hai
Kabhi Deewana Lagta Hai
Kabhi Anari Lagta Hai
Kabhi Awara Lagta Hai



*Film: Patthar Ke Phool**

Your Poetry Did Made Me Smile **Dilki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phool,Shukriya **Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Chahungi Main **May Your God Go With You~*~May Your God Bless You **
Pyaar deewaana hota hai
Mastaana hota hai
Har khushii har gham se
Begaana hota hai...!

Film : Kati Patang...!

Bas, yahi ganaa dil main aaya , and I wonder if you'll like it...!

I can guess why the poetry made you smile and I wish that you always keep
a smile along with you...!

Many thanks for reading this poetry...!

May God bless you too...!



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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So sorry for late reply...! - 24th October 2007, 12:31 AM

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apki shayri buhat acchi lagi hume
aage bhi likhna
bye
Shayri ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriya, Khushi Ji...!

Tah e dil se swaagat hai aap ka iss parivaar main...!

Aap ko bhi paRhne ki tamanna rakhte hein hum, theek hai...?

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