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21st June 2010, 05:16 PM
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
Aapka Apna Ishk
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21st June 2010, 06:08 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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Radhe Radhe, Ishk Ji...!
Ati sundar hai aapki yaha kavita...! Hamein bahut hi pasand aayi...!
Khush rahein...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st June 2010, 06:10 PM
Ishk Sahab ......Aadaab ! bahut umdaa khayal pesh kiye hai aapne....kahi sochne ko mazboor karte hai.....ek purasar peshkash....dil se daad ...yunhi likhte rahen....
yeh do sher dil ke khaas qareeb rahe....
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
aur maqtaa bhi tareef ke qaabil raha....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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21st June 2010, 06:16 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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Rajinder ji,
aapki is pyaari si koshish par dil se daad hazir hai... ehsaas bahut pyaare lage.... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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21st June 2010, 07:14 PM
Bohat khoob Ishk saheb............bohat khoob
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
Keep up the good work.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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21st June 2010, 07:46 PM
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
Ji......Prabhu se milan ki aas ko ........aapne pyaasa hi rakha.....waaqai yeh abhilasha hi aisi hai...bahut badhiya bhaaw kahe hai aapne.....ati uttam...
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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21st June 2010, 08:20 PM
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doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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hare krishna....ishk bhai,
maaN anandit hua aapke ehsaasoN ko padh kar......aadi se aNt tak prabhu ko samarpit............
aapka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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22nd June 2010, 05:45 PM
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Radhe Radhe, Ishk Ji...!
Ati sundar hai aapki yaha kavita...! Hamein bahut hi pasand aayi...!
Khush rahein...!
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shukriya...pasand karne ka aap jab bhi mere thread par aate hain mera hausla badh jaata hai
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24th June 2010, 01:11 PM
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Ishk Sahab ......Aadaab ! bahut umdaa khayal pesh kiye hai aapne....kahi sochne ko mazboor karte hai.....ek purasar peshkash....dil se daad ...yunhi likhte rahen....
yeh do sher dil ke khaas qareeb rahe....
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
aur maqtaa bhi tareef ke qaabil raha....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
shukriya..yun saath banaaye rakhiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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24th June 2010, 02:00 PM
Radhe radhe Ihhq ji! Ek achhi kavita likhi hai aapne. Likhte rahen.
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26th June 2010, 10:29 AM
lamha jee
radhe radhe
shukriya hausla afzai ka aise hi saath deti rahiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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26th June 2010, 10:44 AM
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doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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Bahut hi khubsurat kavita likhi hai Ishq ji,,,
Aise hi likhte rahe..Dil se daad qubool kijiyega.....!!!
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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27th June 2010, 12:32 AM
Ishq Sahab AadaaB!
Aapki prabhu prem aur bhakti bhav ko shabdoN mein achche se dhalne ka prayas kiya hia aapne..... Par shabdoN ke bandhaN meiN bhav vyakat nahi ho rahe hai aisa mujhe nazar aaya......
Baki aapka prayaas bahut safal hai ek baar fir is per koshish kijiye mere khayaal se........
Mujhe is meiN yeh sher bahut achcha laga......
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
Likhate rhaiye...
Khush rhaiye....
Khdua hafez....
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28th June 2010, 08:52 AM
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Bohat khoob Ishk saheb............bohat khoob
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
Keep up the good work.
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sajid bhai
radhe radhe
shukriya........aise hi saath dete rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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28th June 2010, 09:23 AM
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doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
ye dono bahut hi achy sher hia ishq bhayee
saf byaaN ho sahi baat kahi hai aapne
aise hi likhte raheN
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1st July 2010, 10:50 AM
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daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
Ji......Prabhu se milan ki aas ko ........aapne pyaasa hi rakha.....waaqai yeh abhilasha hi aisi hai...bahut badhiya bhaaw kahe hai aapne.....ati uttam...
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radhika jee
radhe radhe
prabhu milan ki pyaas bani rahe kabhi khatam naa ho yahi to chahiye virah ka sukh milan ke sukh se bada hota hai aapki tareef ka shukriya yun hi saath deti rahiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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3rd July 2010, 08:21 AM
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hare krishna....ishk bhai,
maaN anandit hua aapke ehsaasoN ko padh kar......aadi se aNt tak prabhu ko samarpit............
aapka.
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secret bhai
radhe radhe
shukriya.......daad dil se kubul hai
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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4th July 2010, 11:36 AM
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doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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very nice ishq ji...
keep writing....
take care..
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6th July 2010, 04:24 PM
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Radhe radhe Ihhq ji! Ek achhi kavita likhi hai aapne. Likhte rahen.
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mann bhai
radhe radhe
shukriya.........................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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9th July 2010, 08:53 AM
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Bahut hi khubsurat kavita likhi hai Ishq ji,,,
Aise hi likhte rahe..Dil se daad qubool kijiyega.....!!!
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kavita jee
radhe radhe
shukriya....................
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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12th July 2010, 11:29 AM
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Ishq Sahab AadaaB!
Aapki prabhu prem aur bhakti bhav ko shabdoN mein achche se dhalne ka prayas kiya hia aapne..... Par shabdoN ke bandhaN meiN bhav vyakat nahi ho rahe hai aisa mujhe nazar aaya......
Baki aapka prayaas bahut safal hai ek baar fir is per koshish kijiye mere khayaal se........
Mujhe is meiN yeh sher bahut achcha laga......
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
Likhate rhaiye...
Khush rhaiye....
Khdua hafez....
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sameer bhai
radhe radhe
aapki baat bulkul sahi hai shabdon ke bandhan me bhav poori tarah se vyakt nahi ho paaye hain kuchh adhoora pan hai mujhe bhi aisa laga hai dekhte hain is adhure bhav ko thakurjee kaise apne shabdon me vyakt karaate hain
sher ko pasand karne ka shukriya
aate rahiye aaur saath nibhaate rahiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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16th July 2010, 08:51 AM
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dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
ye dono bahut hi achy sher hia ishq bhayee
saf byaaN ho sahi baat kahi hai aapne
aise hi likhte raheN
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vikas bhai
radhe radhe
hausla afzai ka shukriya yun hi saath nibhaate rahiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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18th July 2010, 11:07 AM
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very nice ishq ji...
keep writing....
take care..
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shipra jee
radhe radhe
shukriya..........
Aapka Apna Ishk
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11th October 2010, 07:55 AM
Ishk sahab
radhe radhe
khubsurat rachna hai yeh aap ki
yuhi likhte rahe
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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15th October 2010, 11:50 AM
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Ishk sahab
radhe radhe
khubsurat rachna hai yeh aap ki
yuhi likhte rahe
Regards
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radhe radhe
shukriya.................
Aapka Apna Ishk
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14th January 2012, 01:14 PM
doston ........... ............................radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
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14th January 2012, 03:03 PM
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
radhe -2 ishq jee.bahut khoob sher likhe hai aapne.
aapko is sundar peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbaad
khush rahiye..........likhte rahiye.....................
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17th January 2012, 11:37 AM
Radhee-Radhee,
Bhai wah badiya rahi... hasheen andaaz se hasheen peshkash...!!
Daad Qabool ho...!
regard,
Omi
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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18th January 2012, 11:23 AM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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zara der se nazar padi aapke is qalaam pe rajinder ji...
wah, bahut khoob likha hai aapne....isi tarha likhte rahiye aur bazm ko raushan karte rahiye....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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RADHE RADHE
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19th January 2012, 05:44 AM
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dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
radhe -2 ishq jee.bahut khoob sher likhe hai aapne.
aapko is sundar peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbaad
khush rahiye..........likhte rahiye.....................
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Shukriya ............... radhe radhe ..................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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19th January 2012, 09:12 AM
"Yeh Bhi Acha Hai ke Sirf Sunta Hai Dil
Agar Boltaa to Qayamat na Aaa Jaaati.…."
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Jaise sadiyon se kisi Bahane Ki Talaash Thiii….."- Anonymous
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21st January 2012, 08:42 AM
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Radhee-Radhee,
Bhai wah badiya rahi... hasheen andaaz se hasheen peshkash...!!
Daad Qabool ho...!
regard,
Omi
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bahut bahut shukriya .... omi ji ! radhe radhe ................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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21st January 2012, 09:49 AM
ishk ji
aapki peshkash bahut khoob hai , padhakar bahut hi aacha laga. aise hi likhte rahiyegaa. khus rahiyegaa.
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par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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23rd January 2012, 06:45 PM
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zara der se nazar padi aapke is qalaam pe rajinder ji...
wah, bahut khoob likha hai aapne....isi tarha likhte rahiye aur bazm ko raushan karte rahiye....
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bahut bahut shukriya ... vikram bhai ... radhe radhe .................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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26th January 2012, 01:37 PM
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"Yeh Bhi Acha Hai ke Sirf Sunta Hai Dil
Agar Boltaa to Qayamat na Aaa Jaaati.…."
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behad shukriya ..... radhe radhe ................................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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28th September 2012, 03:02 PM
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ishk ji
aapki peshkash bahut khoob hai , padhakar bahut hi aacha laga. aise hi likhte rahiyegaa. khus rahiyegaa.
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shukriya ajay bhai.............radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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28th September 2012, 03:11 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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rajinder ji bahut khoob hai ye us paramatma se milan ki ye adhuri chah ka varnan.............................
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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26th October 2012, 04:46 PM
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rajinder ji bahut khoob hai ye us paramatma se milan ki ye adhuri chah ka varnan.............................
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shukriya rashmi jee...............radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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28th October 2012, 12:34 AM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
doston is mehfil me aapke saamne ek bhakt ka bhav hai jise abhi prabhu ke darshan nahi mile hain usko vyakt karne ki koshish ki hai kahan tak safal hua hun ye aapse jaanna chahunga
kaise kahoon ki badnaseeb hoon
yaadon me teri kitna kareeb hoon
dunaayavi sukhon ko mere dekhkar
zamaane ne kaha khushnaseeb hoon
dikha naa sakunga kabhi apna dil
tu bhi to samajh ki tera habeeb hoon
daulat se madmaati is duniya me
teri rahmat ke bina kitna gareeb hoon
ishk' ki tanha zindagi gulzaar ho jaaye
gar tu kah de main bhi tera habeeb hoon
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bahot acha sahaab dil se likha nazar aata hai..god bless
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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