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28th January 2011, 12:23 PM
Mere Pyaare dosto.n: Namaskaar aur Aadaab! ik arse baad yahaaN kuChh peSh kar rahaa huuN.. ees baar qaatil Thandi ka mausam aur Exam dono.n ek saath hi chale aaye the.. qaatil Thandi ke mausam ki aisii hi ik subHa mei.n mai.n chaa'y peene apne room se baahar niklaa thaa.. socha thaa thoDii si raahat mil jaaye.n...wo chaa'y mujhe bahot kuChh baate.n seeKhaa gayii.n jo mai.n kabhee bhool nahii.n paaungaa..! mere uss ehsaas ko aap sab ke saath aaj baanT rahaa huuN.. ummid hai aap samjhenge.. aur aapka pyaar aur saath hameShaa ki tarah mujhe ees baar bhii zaruur milenga ************************************************* qaatil Thand ke mausam mei.n haath jahaaN kaanp rahe ho badan thartharaata ho log Khud ko apne Ghar mei.n qai'd kar ke baiThe ho aisi hi ik subHa mei.n main chalaa tha chaa'y ki chuski lene socha tha garam chaa'y se zaraa si raahat mil jaaye saath mei.n Thand ka mijaaz bhee deKh luuN chaa'y ka garam gilaas mere haath mein aate hi raahat ka ehsaas huaa apne dono haathon se uss gilaas ko pakaD lia aur bas chaa'y ki chuski lene lagaa aise hi chaae'y ka mazaa uThaate -uThaate achaanak se meri nazar saamne aate huye ik buDhe Shaks par jaa paDi badan pe nah ziyaadah kapRe kandho.n par saamaan uThaaye thartharaata kaanptaa huaa badan laDkhaDaate hue kadam Khaansi ke maare unse saamaan bhee Theek se uThaaya nahin jaa rahaa tha unki nazar bhee mujh par aa paDii chaa'y ka gilaas mez pe rakh unhe hi deKhta rahaa unka mere nazdiik aana aur mujhse fir rahaa nah gaya maine kaha unse "chaachaa" zaraa kuch der ruk jaa'iye saamaan kuch der niche raKh de.n aap bimaar bhi lag rahe hai.n, Khaansi ke maare aapse saamaan bhi nahin uThaya ja rahaa Thand se poora badan bhee kaanp rahaa hai garma-garam ik chaa'y pee leejiye wo muskuraaye aur bole "BeTa" Shukriyaa'h itni parwaah karne ke liye yeh to roz kaa hai fir waqt pe saamaan bhi to pahuchaana hai tabhi to rozi roTi chal paayegi "Garibi har taqlifen bhoolaa detee hai Garibi ke saamne har bimaari bimaar paD jaatii haii" bas itna keh kar wo chal diye num aankhoN se apni chaa'y ka wo adhuura gilaas deKh mai.n uss din bahot kuChh baaten samjh gayaa! jo kabhee bhii samjh nah paata..! ************************************************* |
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28th January 2011, 01:14 PM
bahot khoob mere bhai.. aaj bhi tumhari kalam me wo jaadu hai ki log khud bakhud khiche chale aate hain.. tumhari soch ki main har baar ki tarah is bar bhi daad deta hoon.. kitna sochte ho na tum sab ke baare me... accha hai.. dil se appreciation is nek soch ke liye...likhte raho.. khush raho..
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28th January 2011, 01:55 PM
aadab dhaval sahab!!!
ek arse ke baad aapne apna kalam pesh kiya hai hai ur ek arse ke baad hi hamara yahan aana ho paya hai, ese main jaise hi aapke is kalam per nazar padi padne chala aayan. ehsas to aapke hamesha se hi khoob hote hain unki tariff ki to baat hai hi nahi, is baar jis marmsparshi se aapne gariibii ka dukh bayaan kiya hai wo wakai kabile tariif hai, aap likhte rahen aur mahfil ko raunak karte hahen bus yahii hamarii duaa hai. apna khyaal rakhiyga. bakai ThanD kafii pad rahi hai. kahin beemar mat paD jaiyega..... aapkii sagaaii ke din nikat hain  shukriyaa....... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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28th January 2011, 02:14 PM
Dhaval Ji ... Namaste !
Rachna meN maarmiik manzar dikhaane ... mehsoos karaane aur nasiihat ki lakeer ko bahut khoobi se rekhaankit karke .... ek acchi soch dikhaai hai iss peshkash meN....dil se daad hai hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... ! Yunhi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! apna theek se khayaal rakhen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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28th January 2011, 05:40 PM
mere chhotu ko mera bhut pyar bhara parnaam....tere ahsaas parhe bhut ache lage, magar parthe waqt aisa bilkul nahi laga ki kavita parh raha hoon.....ek kahani jaisi lagii....agar isko kavita ki tarha pesh karte to or khub banti ye....aag se dhyaan rakhna....apna khyaal rakhna....Raj.....
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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29th January 2011, 08:50 AM
Dhaval
tumhaari soch bahoot achhi hai, kaii baar majboori, gareebi, lacchaari pareshaaniyon ka saamna bhi karwaati hai aur kaii saari pareshaaniyon ko najarandaaj karne ki takat bhi det hai. lekin gareebi se upar wahi uth sakata hai jo in pareshaaniyon me apni duty na pura karke wakai me jeena seekh le apna khayaal rakhna tumhaari didi |
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29th January 2011, 09:30 AM
Dhaval Ji
radhe radhe bahut khoob likha hai bhai ....... humari bhi daad li jiye .......  Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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29th January 2011, 10:51 AM
Chottu, tere yeh ahsaas padey, sach meiN dil ko yeh ahsaas chuu gye aur accha laga yeh jaankar ki tu etna naram-dil hai, kahte haiN na ki jiske dil meiN raham hai kisi ke liye wahi saccha insaaN hai, aur jaha raham hai usi dil meiN bhagwaaN bhi rahte haiN, so bhagwaan ki shukarguzaar hoon ki aaj ki es bhaag-daud bhari zindgi meiN bhi aise ensaaN haiN ki jo ki doosrey ka duak-dard mahsoos karte haiN.
aur khaas baat maiN bhi Rajveer jii se shamat hoon ki yeh kavita nahi lag rahi, aise lga muje jaise tum muje koi aap-beet baat bata rhe ho, thoda sa lafzoN ka heir-pher karke esko kavita ka roop de sakte ho abhi bhi. keep writing bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath sister .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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29th January 2011, 11:09 AM
Kya kahu Dhaval Saheb.......aapne aisi haqeeqat samne rakh di ke kaiee ghanto tak shayed aaj has na paoo. Mohd. Aziz ka gaya woh gana kano me goonjne laga.
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30th January 2011, 01:35 PM
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31st January 2011, 02:27 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Shaad bhaa'ii: namaste! koShiSh ko samjhne ke liye mai.n aapka bahot bahot ShuKraGuzaar huuN.. aage bhee yuuNhi saath dete rahe.n KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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namaste! bahot KhuShii huii aapko merii koShiSh par deKh kar.. aage bhee saath dete rahiyengaa yahee KhaahiSh hay merii.. aur sagaa'ii ke baare mei.n abhee to kuChh sochaa nahii.n bhaa'ii.. filhaal paRhaa'ii .. KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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namaste! koShiSh ko aapne samjhaa sukooN milaa.. saath dete rahe.n aage bhee..! KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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7th February 2011, 03:08 PM
dhaval bhai namaskaar,
kaise haiN aap? aapki ye nazm bahut achhi lagi...bahut umdaH khayalaat haiN iske... daad dil se haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega... aapka dost, masttt... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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