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Hua'a Bekhudi ka asar dheere dheere -
2nd December 2009, 02:44 PM
DostoN,
Is mahine "dheere dheere" rafeef per "Gtm" chal raha hai tou maine socha ke maiN bhi kuch likhu.. "Tarahi ghazal hai" zara ghaur kijiye............ Beh'r 122/122/122/122 Hua'a Bekhudi ka asar dheere dheere Idhar dheere dheere udhar dheere dheere Theher jati hai mere seene meiN dhadkan Churate ho jab tum nazar dheere dheere Rahe tum tou masroof ranginiyoN meiN Katey mere charoN pahar dheere dheere Kaha tha ke wadoN pe qayem rahunga Magar phir gaye tum mukar dheere dheere Na jaane kahaaN manzileiN kho gayi haiN kaThin ho gaya hai safar dheere dheere Jalaa pyaar kaa aashiyaana mukammal lagi dushmanoN ki nazar dheere dheere Badalti fizaoN se seekha hai tumne badalne ka khud ko hunar dheere dheere Jo saathi mera tha, woh chuuta hai mujhse Kategi yeh ab rahguzar dheere dheere Guzarti hai kya mujhpe socha na tumne MaiN roti huuN yeh sochkar dheere dheere Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd December 2009, 03:32 PM
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waah zainy kamaal ka likha hai hame to isme koi gustakhi nazar nahi aai hai.. aur jahan tak mayank jee ka sawaal hai wo bhi aapki is masoom si nadani ko muaaf kar hi chuke honge.. kyon janab. wese behad haseen aur mile jule ehsaason ko pesh kiyahai... likhti rahie. shaad.. |
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2nd December 2009, 03:34 PM
Zainy jee Aadaab.............
Aapki yeh gazal to behad la jawab lagi...... Agar aap bhi GTM mein participet karti to yakinan GTM ki winner aap hi hoti........... Bahut khoob kahe hai aapne sabhi sher ....... Kuch sher wakai sher lage......... Tarif karun utni kam lagengi......  First do sher agar dekhen to Mujhe Mayank sahab ki gazal se milte jhulte lage but baki sabhi sher ekdum badiya hai......... Dil se daad kabool kijiye.......... Aur aap hi GTM ki winner ban gayi is baar yehi main kahunga....... Keep writting......... Apna khayal rakhiye, Khuda Hafez........... 
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2nd December 2009, 06:02 PM
Copy karna kitna aasaan hota hai na zainyyyyyyyyyyy
 Kidding ...har kisi ka apna touch hota hai .. tumhara apna touch hai .. mujhe behad accha laga har sher... aise hi likhti raho... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd December 2009, 06:28 PM
 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd December 2009, 06:52 PM
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yeh meri tishnagi ka bas alam na pucho hai teri nazm ka asar dheere dheere yunhi humpar yeh nashaa barqaraar rahkhiYeGaa -aapka apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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2nd December 2009, 07:47 PM
Kaha tha ke wadoN pe qayem rahunga Magar phir gaye tum mukar dheere dheere Na jaane kahaaN manzileiN kho gayi haiN kaThin ho gaya hai safar dheere dheere Jalaa pyaar kaa aashiyaana mukammal lagi dushmanoN ki nazar dheere dheere Badalti fizaoN se seekha hai tumne badalne ka khud ko hunar dheere dheere wahhhhhhhhh..............wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... bahut khoob Zainy.... kya baat hai dear... aapne to hamara dil jeet liya...uper ke kuch ashaar muje behad pasand aaye...kaabil-e-tarif.... dil se daad hazir hai...keep it up dear...  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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3rd December 2009, 03:30 AM
Zainy jiii,,,
Kiase hain aap? bahut aacha likha hai aapne ... keep posting ... Take carre aapki Mnadeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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5th December 2009, 01:05 PM
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bohat bohat shukriyaH sameer shaad saheb...mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri adnaa si koshish pasand aayi,well mayank ji ne muaaf kiya ya nahi ab tou woh khud hi yahaaN aakar batayeNge... wisey unki izazat lekar hi post kiya hai maine is ghazal ko... ..yuhi saath dete rahiyega... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th December 2009, 02:32 PM
hmmmm............bahut khoob...majja aa gaya padkar. ek sawaal hai mera ki es sher meiN kiski taraf ishara hai
 Hua'a Bekhudi ka asar dheere dheere Idhar dheere dheere udhar dheere dheere  yoon hi bazm ki ronak badati raho tumhari dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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5th December 2009, 03:04 PM
Zainy jii,
Bahut badhiya, Yuoo'n toh mujhe zyada ilm nahi hai lekin sdc pe jo bhi pata laga shayri ke baare, main yeh keh sakta hooN ki bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, mujhe behad pasand aaya... Daad haazir hai, Kabuul farmaayeN... Khush raheN aur issi tarha se padhne waloN ko bhi apni kalaam ki karishmayee taqat se khush karti raheN... Aapka dost, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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7th December 2009, 03:05 PM
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sameer saheb mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri yeh ghazal pasand aayi, Gtm ka hissa na sahi, Gtm se judi tou hai yeh ghazal, aur yahaaN kuch members ko shikayat bhi thi ke mods gtm me hissa nahi lete, maine socha chalo maiN bhi isi radeef per kuch likhti huuN...... Gtm me mods hissa nahi le sakte ..yehi rule hai.... Khair ..tareef ka bohat bohat shukriyah... Yuhi saath dete rahiyega.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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7th December 2009, 03:15 PM
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YUHI SAATH DETE RAHIYE........................ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th December 2009, 11:21 AM
Zainy Jii,,
Waqai aik umda tehreer hai............. Likhte rahiye,,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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8th December 2009, 02:44 PM
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Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th December 2009, 02:55 PM
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thnx 4 sharing these lines b bye tkcr (๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏) Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai, dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai..... ***************************** Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai.. Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai.. kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai....... hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai.... |
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14th December 2009, 09:42 PM
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mujhe behad khushi hai keH aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi...zarra nawazi ka bahot bahot shukriyaH naresh ji.... aap ki ek baat bohat acchi lagti hai mujhe, aap har naye puraane shayer ki hausla afzaai dil se kartey haiN... yuhi saath dete rahiyega..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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hmmmm.... -
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Ghazal was written thru the heart.... A master piece |
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15th December 2009, 01:18 PM
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Ohh!! sorry.. i forgot to mention below my ghazal "Not related to my personal life" Every ghazal need not be related to shayars personal life....generally i write ghazals keeping some situation in mind... Infact none of my ghazals r in anyways related to my life...they r just imaginations..... All situations appearing in this ghazal are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental and unintentional............ THANKS ANYWAYS...................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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16th December 2009, 01:43 AM
Achcha hain bohat achchaa hain..........khoobsurat peshkash Zainy jee.
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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22nd December 2009, 03:36 AM
Hua'a Bekhudi ka asar dheere dheere
Idhar dheere dheere udhar dheere dheere Theher jati hai mere seene meiN dhadkan Churate ho jab tum nazar dheere dheere Kaha tha ke wadoN pe qayem rahunga Magar phir gaye tum mukar dheere dheere Badalti fizaoN se seekha hai tumne badalne ka khud ko hunar dheere dheere Guzarti hai kya mujhpe socha na tumne MaiN roti huuN yeh sochkar dheere dheere ek khoobsurat kaawish aapki ghazal ke ye aashaar bhut achay lage, apni is purkashish takhleeq pe daad qubool keejiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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22nd December 2009, 10:16 AM
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Mashallah.................. har ek sher behad khubsurat hai....... Ishq ke rango meiN duba huwa .....aise hee likhte rahiye.... aap ki dost Purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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22nd December 2009, 11:21 AM
Zainy :
namaste! Hmmm dheere dheere... waah g waah! bahot Khoob Ghazal kahi hay aapne tou! aSh'aar dil-fareb raheN! aur aNdaaz-e-bayaan bhee bahot Khoob lagaa aapka! yuuNhi bazm ki raunq afzA'ii karte raheN apnii koShiShoN ke Zar'iiYe!daad hi daad! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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10th February 2010, 01:48 AM
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Anu ji.. aapka tareef karne ka andaaz bhi bahut khoobsorat hai ! aapke sher ne tou dil chu liya...... aage bhi hausla afzzayi ki muntazir rahungi ! Ghazal pasand aayi iski behad khushi hai aur aage bhi aur accha likhne ki koshish jaari rahegi....... saath banaaye rakhiye....... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th February 2010, 02:26 PM
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zainy jee radhe radhe wah dard me itna kamaal..mai bada khushnaseed jo is mehfil me hoon aur tum jiasi shayra ko padne ka mauka mil raha hai...daad dil se nikli hai kubul farmaayen. aapka apna ishk Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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10th February 2010, 03:14 PM
very nice .
humne aap ki kalam ko padha dheere dheere . ish kore kagaj par sabdo ki suruat aap se ho . hum bahut tadpe aab tadpne ki suruat aap se ho. tamana hai sanso ki aap ban jaye meri jindagi. meri har subah har saam har raat aapse ho .
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Very nice...! -
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Dil loot gaya aapki shaayri par dheere dheere
Jo rouh talak kar aayi ek safar dheere dheere Bahut baDiyaa likha hai aapne, Zainy Betiya...! Just an amazing one...! Waise har ek sher dil ke khareed hein par 4th, 7th and 8th are my favourites...! Khudaa Ji aap ke kalam ko salaamat rakhe...! Thanks for sharing Take very good care of yourself, ok...? Ashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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25th February 2010, 12:59 PM
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Hello Zainy ji apne to bahut hi khooob likha aa, har line me hi kamaal aa,  GOD IS GREAT
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9th May 2010, 07:20 PM
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Thanks dear, ..mujhe khushi hai ke aapko yeh ashaar pasand aaye... .Daad qubool ki........ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th May 2010, 07:22 PM
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Ghazal ki pasandegi ke liye shukriyah Mandeep ji... kahaaN ghayab haiN aap aajkal..?... yuhi saath deti rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th May 2010, 07:35 PM
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...Di ishara kisi ki taraf nahi hai......actually is ghazal meiN, maiN un premikaoN ke, ya patniyoN ke dard ko batana chahti huuN, jinke premi, ya pati ke paas inke liye time nahi hai, ya bohat zyada busy haiN...ya phir apni hi kisi duniya meiN kho gaye hai ya phir kisi aur wajah se inko bhool gaye ho, tab woh ladki ya patni kya mehsoos karti hai...shayed inhi jazbaat ko lihne ki koshish ki hai maine...ab plzz yeh mat poochna ke maiN is dard ko kyuN mehsoos kar rahi huuN...  yeh sirf ek ghazal hai, aas paas ke mahaul ,aur logoN ke dard ko likhne ki koshish ki hai bas.....nothing personal..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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12th June 2010, 07:47 PM
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Bohat bohat shukriyah vikram ji, der se reply dene ke liye muafi ki talabgaar huuN...aapki daad qubool kI... yuhi saath dete rahiye......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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12th June 2010, 07:48 PM
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Shukriyah Hassan sahab............ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th June 2010, 02:45 PM
Ho gaya hun aapka main fan dheere dheere....
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24th June 2010, 03:53 PM
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ye Beh'r mutkaarib musamman saalim....ye Beh'r bahoot hi prachlit behr'ro mein se ek hai...our aapne isey Dheere dheere Radeef ke saath khoob nibhaya hai Hum toh gaye yuN fiscal iss Ghazal par Mushqile huiN dar-badar dheere dheere Harash |
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6th November 2010, 09:13 AM
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Ji sahi kaha aapne, gunguna ker padheN tou waqay mazaa aayega aapko, Mujhe khushi hai ke ghazal aapko pasand aayi.. Yuhi saath deti rahiye.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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6th November 2010, 09:16 AM
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Shukriyah ghayel sahab............................ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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6th November 2010, 09:17 AM
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Shukriyah Aslam Sahab........... Mujhe khushi hai ke aapko ghazal pasand aayi Yuhi saath dete rahiye..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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15th November 2010, 05:20 PM
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Shukriyah Purvi ji....................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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15th November 2010, 05:36 PM
Wahhhh Boht Boht Kamal Or Zabardast Ghazal Kahi.....
Meri Taraf Se Dil Se Daad Qabool Farmaiye...... Dil Khush Ho Gaya Parh Kr.... ALLAH AAP KO AASANIAN BAKHSHAY..... Duaon Ka Talib: Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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