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Ek Ajeeb Sa Din -
15th April 2005, 07:32 PM
Aaj ka din kutchh ajeeb sa nikla
Haalaanki savera bhi hua Aur sooraj bhi nikla Raaston par aamad-daraft bhi rahee Aur bazaaron mein raunaq bhi…….. Dopahar apnee tanhayiyon ko samete Sooraj ke jaane ka intezar kartee rahee Jab tak ki shaam nein apne hathon mein uska haath lekar Andhere ki chadar uske upar daal dee Aisa laga ki raat ho gayee Raat bhi aayee Aasman mein chaand sitaron ka Nazara bhi tha Thandak bhi Lekin kahin par Kutchh na hone ka ehsaas Bhi raha Kutchh qami si rahee Saanson ko chalne ka Intezar hi raha Aur dil yuhin Bewajah dhardkta raha……….. Shayad Tumhaare yahan na hone ka Ehsaas Poore din ko kutchh Ajeeb sa Kar chala…………. |
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16th April 2005, 02:22 PM
Subah se dopahar,
dopahar se shaam suraj ka zikar shaam se raat raat se fir chaand sitaaron ka zikar, yun to raat ke baad fir subah hoti hai, per yahaan to jaise armaano per oas padh gayi ho, Likhte achha hain,per maayusiyaan achhi nahi khush rahein... Lailaa..... Lag raha hai yuun jaise gumshuda pahelii hoon mein. |
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1st May 2005, 06:46 PM
Bahout khoubsoorat Kavita likhi hai aapne...Sem ji!
Younhi likhte rahiyega... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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18th May 2005, 12:25 AM
semji
acha likha hai ek din kya ek lamha aisa nahi jo guzra ho unke bin sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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18th May 2005, 07:45 PM
thenxx my friend
arz hai Ankhon ki Saja tab tak hai, Jab tak Didar na ho, Dil ki saza tab tak hai, Jab tak Yaar na Ho! Yeh Zindagi bhi ek saza hai, Jab Tak Kisi se Pyar na ho! |
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18th May 2005, 10:39 PM
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bohot hi achi aur somehow relaxing wali poem hai yeh apki!! behat pasand ayi!! keep it up!!!
 Ansowon ke shabd hai behe jayenge... |
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