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Love kiya tha mujhe yaad kya.... - 17th October 2014, 04:15 PM

Baji tere ghar me fir shehnai hogi,
Haathon mein toone mehndi bhi rachai hogi,
Chipaya tha mera bhi kya naam kahin
Ya mere naam kee mehndi toone bachai hogi....


Saj ke sawar ke sakhiyo sang jati hogi
Ek aawaaz tujhe apni or bulati hogi
Dekha tha mud ke kya toone peeche
Ya fir hontho pe geet koi gungunati hogi.....

Mala toone fir gale me pehnai hogi
Palkein jhuka ke haya bhi dikhai hogi
Aaya tha yaad kya meri baahon ka haar
Ya bhool ke sab nayi duniya basai hogi....

Baith ke toone fir tasveere khinchai hogi
Kaandhe pe apne julfe bhi lehrayi hogi
Dekha tha ek pal ko kya mujhe bheed me
Ya apne khwabon kee duniya sajai hogi....

Agni ke fir toone fere saato liye honge
Thaam ke haath vaade bhi kiye honge
Aaye the tab kya kuch toote vaade yaad
Ya bharwa ke maang saare bhula diye honge...

Vidaai pe apni tum bhi royi hogi
Palkon ko apne bhi bhigoyi hogi
Nikla tha koi aansu kya mere naam ka
Ya nayi zindagi me tum khoyi hogi...

Sez pe baithe baithe foolo ko nochti hogi
Aatma kahin na kahin to kachotti hogi
Band karke aankhein kya kiya tha mujhe yaad
Ya bs aane wali bahaar sochti hogi...



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17th October 2014, 04:48 PM

Aru bhai....aapke ehsaas bahut nazuk se hai, aik dard aik tadap hai aapki shayri meiN aur hamne es tadap es dard ko aapki takreeban har shayri meiN mehsoos kiya hai. dard se bahar aao aur next time kuch ishq par likhiye yaani ki aapki next shayri Shayr-e-Ishq fourm par ho

duaoN ke saath


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17th October 2014, 05:53 PM

Kitna sunder likha hai apne.....shayad har koi aise hi sochta hoga jinka pyar adhura reh jata hoga ....good job


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Baji tere ghar me fir shehnai hogi,
Haathon mein toone mehndi bhi rachai hogi,
Chipaya tha mera bhi kya naam kahin
Ya mere naam kee mehndi toone bachai hogi....


Saj ke sawar ke sakhiyo sang jati hogi
Ek aawaaz tujhe apni or bulati hogi
Dekha tha mud ke kya toone peeche
Ya fir hontho pe geet koi gungunati hogi.....

Mala toone fir gale me pehnai hogi
Palkein jhuka ke haya bhi dikhai hogi
Aaya tha yaad kya meri baahon ka haar
Ya bhool ke sab nayi duniya basai hogi....

Baith ke toone fir tasveere khinchai hogi
Kaandhe pe apne julfe bhi lehrayi hogi
Dekha tha ek pal ko kya mujhe bheed me
Ya apne khwabon kee duniya sajai hogi....

Agni ke fir toone fere saato liye honge
Thaam ke haath vaade bhi kiye honge
Aaye the tab kya kuch toote vaade yaad
Ya bharwa ke maang saare bhula diye honge...

Vidaai pe apni tum royi to hogi
Pakon ko apne bhigoyi to hogi
Nikla tha koi aansu kya mere naam ka
Ya nayi zindagi me tum khoyi hogi...

Sez pe baithe baithe foolo ko nochti hogi
Aatma kahin na kahin to kachotti hogi
Band karke aankhein kya kiya tha mujhe yaad
Ya bs aane wali bahaar sochti hogi...
Waah arvind ji...aapko padna hamesha pasand aata hai mujhe..dil se nikle huye zazbaat bahut sachche aur seedhe shabdon me hote hain..aur isiliye mere dil tak pahunchte hain........bahut umda kalaam.......dil se daad.



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18th October 2014, 12:55 AM


Aru Jee Aadaab ...!

WaaH kyaa taswwur hai kya manzar kashi kii hai aapne Aru jee ... just mindblowing ...
No words to phrase for this ....

Ek ek khayaal dil ko chhu jaaye .... waqai behad umdaa aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai aapne ...
Meri tah e dil se nikli daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye Bhai ... aise khoobsurat kalaamoN se rubaru karaate rahiye ...
Shaaf O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...


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Aru bhai....aapke ehsaas bahut nazuk se hai, aik dard aik tadap hai aapki shayri meiN aur hamne es tadap es dard ko aapki takreeban har shayri meiN mehsoos kiya hai. dard se bahar aao aur next time kuch ishq par likhiye yaani ki aapki next shayri Shayr-e-Ishq fourm par ho

duaoN ke saath
Thanx a lot sunita dii.,and aapka hukum sar aankho pe agli shayri..ishq pe hee hogi...par aisa nahin hai kee maine ishq pe nahn likhi hai...



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19th October 2014, 09:01 AM

Arvind Bhai ,

Aap flashback mein le gaye humein ...kisi ka milan aur kisi ki judaee..

do lines aap ke sentiments meiN jor raha hun ...

YuN dil torna tha ek din tau dil se dil milaya kyuN tha,
YunN Saath chorna tha ek din tau itna pass bulaya kyun tha,
Khud ko bewafa samajh lun ye mujhe nahin kabool,
Tujh pe aitbaar kar ke mujh se hui bhool.

Baaki aapki lekni , apki soch aur apke jazbe ko mera Salaaaam ..

Khudh raho , abad raho .. Sab se alag raho per Nayab raho ..

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Kitna sunder likha hai apne.....shayad har koi aise hi sochta hoga jinka pyar adhura reh jata hoga ....good job
Thanx a lot palulovable jee....aapne aru ko pada aur pasand kiya uske liye shukriya....,.....



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20th October 2014, 12:19 PM

ek alag hi andaaz hai aapka aru bhai..... jab bhi likhte hain mann chanchal ho uthtaa hai . wo gaaoN ki gorii, wo ithlaana, wo balkhaana... wo rijhaana wo sharmaana.... sab yaad aa jaata hai.....

aur is baar jis vayathaa ka varnana aapne kiyaa hai shaayad hhar shaayar kka janam usi paristithii se hotaa hai... shaayad wahi ek samay hota hai jab ek pyaar ki maut hotii hai aur ek shaayar ka janam hotaa hai.....

bahot khoob,.... aapki rachna ne mujhe jhakjhor diya ahai aru bhi... jeete raho


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just speechless.. padh ke aankho mein aansu aa gaye.. yu hi likhte rahe Aru bhai..


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Yein bazm aap hi logon se rosan hai..
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Waah arvind ji...aapko padna hamesha pasand aata hai mujhe..dil se nikle huye zazbaat bahut sachche aur seedhe shabdon me hote hain..aur isiliye mere dil tak pahunchte hain........bahut umda kalaam.......dil se daad.
Thanx a lot madhu jee....aapki reply ka mujhe hamesha intezaar rehta hai........



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Aru Jee Aadaab ...!

WaaH kyaa taswwur hai kya manzar kashi kii hai aapne Aru jee ... just mindblowing ...
No words to phrase for this ....

Ek ek khayaal dil ko chhu jaaye .... waqai behad umdaa aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai aapne ...
Meri tah e dil se nikli daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye Bhai ... aise khoobsurat kalaamoN se rubaru karaate rahiye ...
Shaaf O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...
Thanx khwaish jee.....sorry for late reply....aate raha kariye..aap to gayab hee ho gaye....



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Arvind Bhai ,

Aap flashback mein le gaye humein ...kisi ka milan aur kisi ki judaee..

do lines aap ke sentiments meiN jor raha hun ...

YuN dil torna tha ek din tau dil se dil milaya kyuN tha,
YunN Saath chorna tha ek din tau itna pass bulaya kyun tha,
Khud ko bewafa samajh lun ye mujhe nahin kabool,
Tujh pe aitbaar kar ke mujh se hui bhool.

Baaki aapki lekni , apki soch aur apke jazbe ko mera Salaaaam ..

Khudh raho , abad raho .. Sab se alag raho per Nayab raho ..

regds
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Thanx a lot sanjay jee...aapne mere jasbaaton ko samjha usle liye aapja aabhaar...



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