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17th March 2006, 12:08 AM
Dosto BaHuT SaMaY BaaD Aaya Hu.... auR Kuch SuNa Raha Hu ...
***************** PeHle Mila Ke NaZaR MujhSe BaaT KiiJiyeE Phir Uske BaaD Shikve Shikhayat KiJiyeE HooGi Zaroor Apani Mohobbat Bhi KaMeeYaaB LekeR Khuda ka Naam ShuruWaaT KiJiyeE Selaab-E-Gum meiN Doob Kar Mit JayeGi HayaaT Aankho Se yu Na Ashko ki Barsaat KiJiyeE Haan ManTa Hu MeiN hu GunaahGaar AapKa Jo Chahe Vo SalooK Mere Shaat KiJiiyeE Kab Tak Wafa ki Lash Ko DhoTe RaheGe Aap Chaliye Rabbish Ke Duniya PaR GhaT KaJiyeR HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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17th March 2006, 12:15 AM
Sharad bhai..
Kise quote karuN... kise choruN .. poori gazal itni purasar hai .. aur sach kahiN aankhOn ko numi de hi gayi ... meri khamoshi maiN hi apni tareef dhuNd lijiye .. aate raha karo .. accha lagta hai ... aapka Bhai Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th March 2006, 06:41 AM
Bohot umda likha hai Sharad....
Toot gaye sab vaade Ab to khud ko chhalna hoga Yun hi tanha chalna hoga Armaano ki is arthi ka Bojha sar par laade |
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17th March 2006, 06:50 AM
shrad ji
aapki is rachna k liye hamare pass sabad nahi hai hum kya kahe n kuch sujh hi nahi raha bus itna hi shrdh 
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18th March 2006, 12:13 PM
Kunaal...
TuMaRi KhoMoShi..... KaaFi KucH Kah Gayi.... SuKaR GuZaR.. Hu AaPKa... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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20th March 2006, 03:57 PM
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
bahut hi khubh likha hai apne dil se likha hai hmm aur maza aa gaya aise hi aur likhte rahiye  you don't need to have anything else. If you don't have it, it doesn't matter much what else you do have. |
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Re: Ghazal.......... |
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Re: Ghazal.......... -
20th March 2006, 05:49 PM
HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad
KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE KYA BAAT HAI SHARAD BHAI bahoot sundar...!!! dil mein utar gayi yeh khubsurat gazal..meri daad kuboool kijiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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20th March 2006, 09:38 PM
gam main dube dil se nilki har shabd har ek dil ko chuu jati hain.
issi tarah is forum par apne nayab shayri aur gazal pesh kare humari yahi khwahish hain rabrakha |
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26th March 2006, 11:23 AM
Khalish
Thanx ..... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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26th March 2006, 11:59 AM
PeHle Mila Ke NaZaR MujhSe BaaT KiiJiyeE
Phir Uske BaaD Shikve Shikhayat KiJiyeE HooGi Zaroor Apani Mohobbat Bhi KaMeeYaaB LekeR Khuda ka Naam ShuruWaaT KiJiyeE Waaaaahh.. kya baat kahi hai janaab... Selaab-E-Gum meiN Doob Kar Mit JayeGi HayaaT Aankho Se yu Na Ashko ki Barsaat KiJiyeE Haan ManTa Hu MeiN hu GunaahGaar AapKa Jo Chahe Vo SalooK Mere Shaat KiJiiyeE kya baat hai... bahut khoob likha hai bhai... Kab Tak Wafa ki Lash Ko DhoTe RaheGe Aap Chaliye Rabbish Ke Duniya PaR GhaT KaJiyeR HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE Last sher bahut hi khoob thha bhai.... Sharad bhai, Kaafi dino baad aapko padhne ka mauka mila...waakayi bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hain....bahut hi khoob likha hia aapne... mere daad kubool karna... aise hi likhte raho bhai... khayal rkahna apna Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd September 2008, 06:40 PM
kyaa baat hai huzoor ...
aap itni acchi shaayri kar lete haiN hume to maloom hi naa thaa ! aaj naa jane kyoN purani yadoN meiN aapki iss khoobsorat ghazal se raabta ho gaya ! maktaa se le kar mutlaa tak poori ghazal behad haseen hai ! kuch ashaar mujhe jane pehchane se lage ! PeHle Mila Ke NaZaR MujhSe BaaT KiiJiyeE Phir Uske BaaD Shikve Shikhayat KiJiyeE HooGi Zaroor Apani Mohobbat Bhi KaMeeYaaB LekeR Khuda ka Naam ShuruWaaT KiJiyeE HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE bhai wah ! tareef ek baar fir se Qabool ki jaye ! |
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2nd September 2008, 07:55 PM
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aap ko pahli baar paDh raha huu.n amrit bhai, aur paDh kar achcha laga.. shukriya kshitiz bhai ka jo inhone aap ki post ko saamne DhunDh kar laaye aur jin ki badolat hame yeh paDhne ka mauqa mila... Ghazal behad achchhi hai, ehsaas zabardast, aur agai kamii kii baat kii jaaye to matle aur 4th sher me.n qaafiya kuchh durust kar denge to Ghazal aur bhi pyaari lagegii... yuu.n hi likhare rahe.n.. Mayank Reps + + |
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4th September 2008, 12:50 AM
KshitiZ SahiB....
PehlE To AaP Ka SuKaRGuZaR HooN... Jo Aap Ke PuRaNiii YaaDeiN TaaZa Kii Uske LiyE!!! AuR SacH MeiN BehaD KhusHi Huyi!! AaP Ko HamaRi GhazaL AccHi LeGiii... MilTa HooN.... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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4th September 2008, 01:00 AM
MayaK SahiB....
Wakai MeiN BahuT AccHa LeGa!!! AuR Aap Kii BaaT Ek Dum DurusT Hai!! MujhE BehaD KhushI Huyi Aap Ne Is ko ItNee GahRaayi Ye PaDa Aur MujhE BaTaYa!!..... KhaakSaaR Ko MaaF KaRe!! AuR MeiN KoshisH KaruuGa! AaGe AaP Ko Is TaraH Ki Koi GalTi Na MilE ...... ShuKriYa! AaP Ka!! AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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4th September 2008, 08:32 AM
PeHle Mila Ke NaZaR MujhSe BaaT KiiJiyeE
Phir Uske BaaD Shikve Shikhayat KiJiyeE HooGi Zaroor Apani Mohobbat Bhi KaMeeYaaB LekeR Khuda ka Naam ShuruWaaT KiJiyeE Kyaa baat hai huzoor... Selaab-E-Gum meiN Doob Kar Mit JayeGi HayaaT Aankho Se yu Na Ashko ki Barsaat KiJiyeE Haan ManTa Hu MeiN hu GunaahGaar AapKa Jo Chahe Vo SalooK Mere Shaat KiJiiyeE Janaab bahut khoob... baaki kal ki gayi charcha is sher pe yaad aa gayi... [b] Kab Tak Wafa ki Lash Ko DhoTe RaheGe Aap Chaliye Rabbish Ke Duniya PaR GhaT KaJiyeR HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE[/QUOTE] Kya baat hai... Sharad bhai, Ek baar firse yeh ghzal padh raha hoon aur firse ek baard daad nikli hai dil se... Kubool kijiyega... khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th September 2008, 04:48 PM
Pulkit Bhai...
Kaise Hai AaP .... MulaaKaaT Ke BaaD aaP Ko Yeha PaR Dekh KaR BahuT AccHa Lega! AaP Ke Wapas Aane PaR BahuT Khushi Huyii... PuraNe Dino.N Ki YaaDeiN WapaS Aa Gayi JaisE!! MeiN SaB Ka IntZaaR KaR RaHa hooN !!! Isi TahaR MahFil SaJaaTe RahE....... AuR AaP Ki TareeF ko TahediL Se QabooL KarTa Hai Ye NaCheezZ.... ApaNa KhayaaL RakeeYe! ChalTa hooN.... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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16th September 2008, 01:05 PM
HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad
KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE Bahut khub amritji.....puri ghazal behad hi acchi hain par yehwala sher bahut hi accha laga....yunhi likhte rahe... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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16th September 2008, 03:53 PM
HooGi Zaroor Apani Mohobbat Bhi KaMeeYaaB
LekeR Khuda ka Naam ShuruWaaT KiJiyeE wah.....kaya idea hai  Selaab-E-Gum meiN Doob Kar Mit JayeGi HayaaT Aankho Se yu Na Ashko ki Barsaat KiJiyeE bahut khoob amrit jee.....! HaaSil Yehi Hai !! Pyar Hey HasRate-E- Sharad KarWat Badal Badal Ke BasaaR RaaT KiJiyeE wow......aap to bahut accha likhtey haiN.... sabhi sher acche lage, par yeh 3 sher bahut khaas lage....yoon hi likhtey rahiye, aapki tazza gazal ka humey intzaar rahega god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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20th September 2008, 12:20 AM
mausam Jee!!
Shukriya aap ke tareeF ko Dil Se Qabool karte hai aur koshish kareeGe ki Aage aur Acche Qalaam Likh SaaKe AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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20th September 2008, 12:22 AM
sunita virender Jee
aaP ko PasanD aaya!! Bus Ye Hi Daad hai HamaaRe Liye!! Shukriya AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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