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itne haiN sadme ke jheley dil se jaate hii nahiiN
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itne haiN sadme ke jheley dil se jaate hii nahiiN - 21st February 2002, 07:31 PM

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itne haiN sadme ke jheley dil se jaaTe hii nahiiN
raNg haiN itne ki naqshey meiN samaaTe hii nahiiN

2.
kyaa hai saaqi ? jaam tere kaam aate hii nahiiN
hosh haiN qaayam hamaare laRkhRaaTe hii nahiiN

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vo bhi din the jab siTam pe voh siTam karte rahe
haaye ree qismaT !! ke ab to aazmaaTe hii nahiiN

4.
aek din chaahaT tumhaari kabar takk le jaayegi
bekhabar the hum vagarnaa dil lagaaTe hii nahiiN

5.
ab naa kaaNpegii hamaarii rooh hawaa ke khauf se
khiRkiyoN meN ab to deepak hum jalaaTe hii nahiiN

6.
naa bulaave bhej tuu "maikash" hamaare naam ke
ab tere aNdaaz , apney "jee" ko bhaaTe hii nahiiN


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21st February 2002, 08:23 PM

MaikasHji,

Hamesh ki tarah yeh bhi lajawab hai-



vo bhi din the jab siTam pe voh siTam karte rahe
haaye ree qismaT !! ke ab to aazmaaTe hii nahiiN

aek din chaahaT tumhaari kabar takk le jaayegi
bekhabar the hum vaarnaa dil lagaaTe hii nahiiN

Wah!!!

Bahot khoob-

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21st February 2002, 11:21 PM

SSA maikash ji

nr 3 and 4 was excellent !!!!!!!!
Bahut hi acha lika hai apne

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22nd February 2002, 02:44 PM

uff....kiya kamal kee shayri hai maikash sahab...
aap ke deewano ke list mein hamara naam bhee shumar kar lijye,
tu bari meherbani hogee!!...

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re - 22nd February 2002, 08:07 PM

hi maikash ,
mene bhi ek ghazal likhi hai pesh ker raha hoo


Tera aks ban jaaye mera wajood,
Is faasile ko mitaoon kaise !!!

Kuch din to aitbaar mein bitaa leta hoon,
Mahine intezaar mein bitaoon kaise !!!

Tum meri ho tamaam umr ke liye,
Tum ko duniya ki nigahon se chupaoon kaise !!!

Yeh jo muhobbat hai ik junoon hai,
Deewangi kaabu mein laoon kaise !!!

Zindagi beete jaati hai lamhaa lamhaa karke,
Tumhen ik umr seene se lagaoon kaise !!!

Khwaabon mein tera chehraa padhtaa hoon,
Khwaab ko haqeeqat banaoon kaise !!!

Ikhteyaar mein mere ab kuch bhi nahin,
Akele ik aashiyaan banaaon kaise !!!

Bekhudi ki yeh to iftedaa hai,
Intehaan ki hudd tak jaoon kaise !!!

Tu kehti hai hameshaan haste rahaa karo,
Ab youn akele muskuraoon kaise !!!

Meri ghazalein hain tumhaara aainaa,
tanhaayee mein ab nazm banaoon kaise

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aadaab arz hai - 3rd March 2002, 09:28 AM

Rajan miyaaN

bhaii aap ne bhi hamesha ki hi tarah hausla-afzaii ki hai...

bohat shukria janaab

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3rd March 2002, 09:31 AM

SSA neelo saahibaa

bade dinoN baad dua-salaam huii aapse...

kuch arsaa qabl ,iss gareeb ko janam-din ki mubarakbaad dene ke liye aapne jo zehmat uThaayi uske liye aapka mashkoor-o-mamnoon huuN...!!


shukria

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3rd March 2002, 09:38 AM

aaiyash saahab

bhaii aapne to aasmaan par hi bitthaa diya.....aadateN bigaad rahe haiN aap hamari....

jis qadr aapne tareef ki uske liye aapka tah-e-dil se ehsaanmaNd huuN...!!

aadaab kabool kijiye

aaiiNdaa chaNd roz meiN koshish karuuNga ke apni nayi ghazal aap sab dosto ki khidmat meiN haazir kar sakuN...

tab tak ke liye...

rab raakha
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