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Aaja! - 4th March 2005, 12:09 PM

Aaja..

meri rago mein beh ja -Ajaa
meri aankhon mein reh ja -Ajaa
meri tabiyat behla ja ..-Aaja
mere armanon ko sehla ja -Aaja
Aalam e dil mehka ja -Aaja

mere labon pe sitaaron sa damak ja -Ajaa
mujh mein aahoN sa pighal ja -Ajaa
mujh mein saanson sa bhikhar ja -Ajaa
meri jist mein raahon sa theher ja -Ajaa
Rukh e zindagi badal ja -Ajaa

mere har aandaz mein nikhar ja -Ajaa
mere har ehssas mein utar ja -Ajja
mujh par neymatoN sa baras ja -Ajaa
mere sine mein bhi ghar kar ja -Aaja
Ey ishq" bas ekbaar chhukar guzar ja -Ajaa

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4th March 2005, 12:26 PM

well written komal ji
i like the way u have written it.

i m not able to understand from where ur words come, r they from heaven or directly from god's mouth.
i have no words in my small "budhi " to appretiate it, i mean all words r small for it.
Its simply fabulous

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4th March 2005, 01:42 PM

Dear Komal,

Kaik alag rite pan bahu saru lakhyu chhe...

bahu deep shbdo use karya chhe, very nice

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4th March 2005, 02:10 PM

meri rago mein beh ja -Ajaa
meri aankhon mein reh ja -Ajaa
meri tabiyat behla ja ..-Aaja
mere armanon ko sehla ja -Aaja
Aalam e dil mehka ja -Aaja

mere labon pe sitaaron sa damak ja -Ajaa
mujh mein aahoN sa pighal ja -Ajaa
mujh mein saanson sa bhikhar ja -Ajaa
meri jist mein raahon sa theher ja -Ajaa
Rukh e zindagi badal ja -Ajaa

mere har aandaz mein nikhar ja -Ajaa
mere har ehssas mein utar ja -Ajja
mujh par neymatoN sa baras ja -Ajaa
mere sine mein bhi ghar kar ja -Aaja
Ey ishq" bas ekbaar chhukar guzar ja -Ajaa


Dear Komal,

Jise bulaa rahi thhin woh aya ya nahi, pata nahi but hum aa gaye hain apni daad lekar Vaakayi me u have some way of words... Bahut acche shabd use kiye hain...Well Post is ought to be good as inspired by another Umda Shayar Karan... Uske shabdon ka andaaz to waqayi Qaabil e tareef hai....

Yaar yeh 'Aaja' se to mujhe hansi aa rahi hai...If i read this w/o aaja, its normal.. magar Aaja is adding a special effect....Just like in the Hindi films....

Kidding Abki baar aisa laga ke Komal ne apne vichaaron ko behne diya.. just let ur heart fill the paper.... Atleast I liked it this way 2... so Meri Daad bhi le hi lo...

Likhti Rehna...& Do TC


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hi! - 4th March 2005, 02:50 PM

From god's mouth...! apne kuch zyada hi izzat dedi...khuda khafa ho jayega..apse!..wel shukriya! ane ka amit
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HI! - 4th March 2005, 02:52 PM

Priya...kain alag toh hatu....enu tane gamvu.. mane pan gamyu!
saw u after ..long time again..ya ur busy i know...thx for spending time though!
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hi! - 4th March 2005, 02:59 PM

Hello..pulkit!....han tumne kaha toh mujhe bhi thoda filmi sound kar raha hai..par i liked it as a rhythm...wel jise bula rahi hu...voh aa jaye uske baad bhi bulana jari rahega!...vaise ab tak toh ya nahi hai!...........tumhe pasand aya na!...bas mein khush ho gayi!
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hi komal - 4th March 2005, 05:13 PM

hi komal

its really nice yaar nice words nice way of expressing feelings keep it up.



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4th March 2005, 06:40 PM

komalji

mazaa aa gaya!
aayega ishq bhi aapke daman mein samane aayega
lekin tabhi jab sahi waqt aayega

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Re: Aaja! - 5th March 2005, 12:05 AM

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Aaja..

meri rago mein beh ja -Ajaa
meri aankhon mein reh ja -Ajaa
meri tabiyat behla ja ..-Aaja
mere armanon ko sehla ja -Aaja
Aalam e dil mehka ja -Aaja

mere labon pe sitaaron sa damak ja -Ajaa
mujh mein aahoN sa pighal ja -Ajaa
mujh mein saanson sa bhikhar ja -Ajaa
meri jist mein raahon sa theher ja -Ajaa
Rukh e zindagi badal ja -Ajaa

mere har aandaz mein nikhar ja -Ajaa
mere har ehssas mein utar ja -Ajja
mujh par neymatoN sa baras ja -Ajaa
mere sine mein bhi ghar kar ja -Aaja
Ey ishq" bas ekbaar chhukar guzar ja -Ajaa

inspiration: "Main" by karan q from shayri e ustaad.
Hi Komal,

Woh jaroor aayega ....

Itne pyaare shabdon ko sun kaun nahi aayega...
Pata nahi but ur words have a magical effect so let the magic remain forever

Take Care
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5th March 2005, 01:53 PM

Ya its true komal these are really amazing words,

inki tarif jeetna bhi karo kam hai,

Aaj kuda bhi rutha jaye woh bhi manjoor hoga,
Aaj uski khudai ko bhi lalkar jayen toh kam hoga,
Aaj in lafzoo ki tarif mein hum bhi mit jaye toh gum na hoga.....

keep it up dear.........

Keep smiling always .................

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hi! - 7th March 2005, 02:07 PM

rohin ji...apko mere words pasand aye..bahot achha laga jaan kar..!sure i wd try 2 keep the magic flow always, if frens like u are around!
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hi! - 7th March 2005, 02:09 PM

thx amit...kuch zyada hi likh dete ho tum tariff mein...kisi din hum pad na jaye taklif mein!! kiddin..!
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