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~*GhAyAl MeHfIl~*--teri yaadon ko apne jakhmon pe bote hain - 6th December 2005, 12:24 PM

doston agla kalaam le kar aane me hui is deri ke liye maafi ka talabdar hoon.par sach kehta hoon bahut jaddojahad ke baad ye kalaam likh paya hoon.umeed hai ki aap logon ko nirash nahi kiya.aur aapko ye kalaam pasand aayega.to dosto pesh hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam.............................


tere har dukh ko seene pe hum dhote hain,
teri yaad me hum aaj bhi khote hain...........

teri har ek yaad ke sahare,unhe rakh ke,
apne sirhane hi to hum sote hain............

jab kabhi bhi hoti hain aankhen teri nam,
hum bhi apni palken bhigote hain..........

jab bhi ho tum akeli mud ke dekhna,
hum paas tere humesha khade hote hai....

teri ashkon ko apni aankhon me sanjokar,
gamon me tere hum bhi rote hain..........

tujhe chah ke bhi bhula na sake"ghayal",
so teri yaadon ko apne jakhmon pe bote hain.

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u will never change brother y to always write a dard yaar.................dard to humare paas bhi hai balke sabhi ke paas hai par dard ka section toh bas aap ke liye aur kunal bhaiya ke liye hi hai.................kuch pyara sa khayal karo yaar, pyar se sabko "ghayal" karo yaar....................


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break heart - 6th December 2005, 09:21 PM

jine k he 4 din ..................... baaki he bekaar din......................... jaye jaye 1 baar jo jaye jawani phir na aaye............................ carry on................................................ ......................................
   
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Lucky Bhaiya...!

jab kabhi bhi hoti hain aankhen teri nam,
hum bhi apni palken bhigote hain..........


Hamein yaha sher kuch khaas pasand aaya...!

Younhi likhte rehna...aur apna khayaal rakhna



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7th December 2005, 02:23 PM

thanks a lot mehul brother for liking it n ur comments also.juz keep wreading the same way.

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hi - 7th December 2005, 03:42 PM

Hey Lucky, har baar ki tarah ye kalaam bhi bahut hi behtareen lagaa,


teri har ek yaad ke sahare,unhe rakh ke,
apne sirhane hi to hum sote hain............

sabse acchi or pyari line.....

likhte raho u hin


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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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Re: break heart - 7th December 2005, 07:10 PM

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jine k he 4 din ..................... baaki he bekaar din......................... jaye jaye 1 baar jo jaye jawani phir na aaye............................ carry on................................................ ......................................
i will juz carry on writing dera.u juz keep reading.

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Lucky Bhaiya...!

jab kabhi bhi hoti hain aankhen teri nam,
hum bhi apni palken bhigote hain..........


Hamein yaha sher kuch khaas pasand aaya...!

Younhi likhte rehna...aur apna khayaal rakhna

bhaiya aap aaye itne dino baad meri post pe aur aapko mera likha pasand aaya.yahi bahut hai mere liye.bas yahi darkhwast hai ki aap yunhi padhte rahiye hume.

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Hey Lucky, har baar ki tarah ye kalaam bhi bahut hi behtareen lagaa,


teri har ek yaad ke sahare,unhe rakh ke,
apne sirhane hi to hum sote hain............

sabse acchi or pyari line.....

likhte raho u hin
thanks a lot shweta dd.bas aap yunhi padhte rahiye hume.

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:) - 5th January 2006, 04:48 AM

Dear Lucky Jee, Sabhi Sher Dil Ko Achchha Laga... **Younhi Likhte Rahiyega**Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phoul_Shukriya Aur Daad Bhi **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**God bless You.


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5th January 2006, 05:29 PM

dd kahan se dhoond nikala aapne is purani rachna ko.aapko ye pasand aayi jaan kar mujhe behad khushi hui.aur aapki daad mere sar aankhon pe.umeed karta hoon ki aap bas yunhi humari mehfil me aati rahiye.

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teri har ek yaad ke sahare,unhe rakh ke,
apne sirhane hi to hum sote hain............

jab kabhi bhi hoti hain aankhen teri nam,
hum bhi apni palken bhigote hain..........

hmm... good one...!


jab bhi ho tum akeli mud ke dekhna,
hum paas tere humesha khade hote hai....

teri ashkon ko apni aankhon me sanjokar,
gamon me tere hum bhi rote hain..........

hmmm...nice words..!

Lucky,

Accha likha hai tumne... Kucch sher acche lage to oopar high light kiye...Likhte raho yun hi....!


tere har dukh ko seene pe hum dhote hain,
teri yaad me hum aaj bhi khote hain...........

Tum use bojh samajhte ho tabhi dhote ho naa...humsafar ke dukh bhi apne hote hain...bojh nahi...!


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6th January 2006, 12:20 AM

lucky tumhe kuch din ki chutti le leni chaiye.. abhi ek gazal padi dil phola na samaya.. aur phir ise padha ..khayal nek hai .. par kuch naye pan ki talaash ab bhi hai mujhe..

khair likhte raho ..nikhar tabhi aayega

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teri har ek yaad ke sahare,unhe rakh ke,
apne sirhane hi to hum sote hain............

jab kabhi bhi hoti hain aankhen teri nam,
hum bhi apni palken bhigote hain..........

hmm... good one...!


jab bhi ho tum akeli mud ke dekhna,
hum paas tere humesha khade hote hai....

teri ashkon ko apni aankhon me sanjokar,
gamon me tere hum bhi rote hain..........

hmmm...nice words..!

Lucky,

Accha likha hai tumne... Kucch sher acche lage to oopar high light kiye...Likhte raho yun hi....!


tere har dukh ko seene pe hum dhote hain,
teri yaad me hum aaj bhi khote hain...........

Tum use bojh samajhte ho tabhi dhote ho naa...humsafar ke dukh bhi apne hote hain...bojh nahi...!
bhaiya bahut dino baad aaye aap humari mehfil me.bahut ahcha laga jaan kar ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya.umeed karta hoon ki aap yunhi kabhi kabhi aate rahenge.

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lucky tumhe kuch din ki chutti le leni chaiye.. abhi ek gazal padi dil phola na samaya.. aur phir ise padha ..khayal nek hai .. par kuch naye pan ki talaash ab bhi hai mujhe..

khair likhte raho ..nikhar tabhi aayega

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kya karoon bare bhai koi naya mil to sahi ,par kuch naya hota hi nahi,so bas yunhi chal rahi hai apni zindagani.bas aap yunhi aate rahiye humari mehfil me.

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