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~*~Har aahat se lagta hai tu aaya hai...~*~ - 20th June 2007, 10:57 PM

Namaste Dosto,
Bahot dino ke baad hum ne phir kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.
Aap ko pasand aaye to batana,


Hum jaha bhi dekhte hai har chehra aap sa lagta hai
hum bhi jaan gaye ke pyaar karma kaisa lagta hai

Do-chaar lamhe do-chaar baato me
tum se ab janmo ka rishta sa lagta hai

Barso tak ham tum se anjaan the
aur ab do pal me tu kitna apna sa lagta hai

Aasmaan me sietaaro ki mahvil sadji hai
ek dil hai mera djo tanha sa lagta hai

Har aahat par dil sochta hai ke tu aaya hai
ham bhi djaan gay eke intezaar karma kaisa lagta hai

Reshma,


Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi,
Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
   
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21st June 2007, 10:23 AM

jise bhi dekhte hain har chehra aapsa lagta hai
hum jaan gaye ke pyaar mein kaisa lagta hai........

do-chaar baato mein do chaar mulakaaton mein
ab tum se apna janmo ka rishta lagta hai........

Barson ham tum se anjaan rahe
ab do pal mein tu kitna apna sa lagta hai.....

yun to sitaaron ki mehfil sajji hai
phir bhi dil mera kitna tanha sa lagta hai........

Har aahat pe lagta hai jaise ki tu aaiya hai
ham jaan gaye intezaar mein kaisa lagta hai........


reshma ji aapke ehsaas bhut purasar lagge lakin lafzon ki adjustment mein kush kami lagi thii so usko maine apne dhang se likha hai......umeed hai aapko bura nahi lagega........gar meri koii bhi baat aapko buri lage to muaafi ka talabgaar hoon.......yun hi likhti rahiyega.........raj..........


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thanx veer ji - 21st June 2007, 03:15 PM

Namaste Veer ji,
Nahi, mujhe bura nahi lagaa. Mai yaha ke har member ko bahot respect karti hu,lekin aap ko maloom nahi,ke aap mere favorite hai. Aur jab aap ne mujhe kuch sikhane ki koshish ki to mujhe bahot accha lagaa.Shukriya,

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21st June 2007, 04:39 PM

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Namaste Dosto,
Bahot dino ke baad hum ne phir kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.
Aap ko pasand aaye to batana,


Hum jaha bhi dekhte hai har chehra aap sa lagta hai
hum bhi jaan gaye ke pyaar karma kaisa lagta hai

Do-chaar lamhe do-chaar baato me
tum se ab janmo ka rishta sa lagta hai

Barso tak ham tum se anjaan the
aur ab do pal me tu kitna apna sa lagta hai

Aasmaan me sietaaro ki mahvil sadji hai
ek dil hai mera djo tanha sa lagta hai

Har aahat par dil sochta hai ke tu aaya hai
ham bhi djaan gay eke intezaar karma kaisa lagta hai

Reshma,
RESHMA ji ko mera salam aap kesi hay..................ek acchi koshish ke liye aapko daad deta houn unhi likhti rahiye han ek baat kehnachahounga jo raj bhai ne kahi uska agey se dhyan rakhey to gazal men aur maza aajayega ..........keepit up ...........ALLAH HAFIZ


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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Shukriya Kashif ji - 21st June 2007, 05:16 PM

Kashif ji ko mera salaam,
Jo aap ne likha hai wo sahi hai, jo veer ji ne likha hai wo bhi. Mai yaha apne sher o shairy isliye post karti hu taake aap log us par comment kar sake,tab hi mai aur achha likh paawoengi, Jo bhi yaha se sikh sakungi,us par aage me dhyaan rakhungi,
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21st June 2007, 06:11 PM

Reshma ji...

Bahut hi khoobsoorat ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne.. uske liye mubarakbaad kubool keejiye..

Bas kuch purani lines yaad aa rahi hai...

"Mohabbat bhi kya khoob bana deti hai..
Ik ajnabi ko Mehboob bana deti hai..."


- Not mine though -

Take Care.. & Always be happy!!!

~Priya



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22nd June 2007, 09:08 PM

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Reshma ji...

Bahut hi khoobsoorat ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne.. uske liye mubarakbaad kubool keejiye..

Bas kuch purani lines yaad aa rahi hai...

"Mohabbat bhi kya khoob bana deti hai..
Ik ajnabi ko Mehboob bana deti hai..."

- Not mine though -

Take Care.. & Always be happy!!!

~Priya
Namaste Priya ji,
Aap ko ye ehsaas khoobsurat lage uske liye bahot shukriya,

sach baat likhi hai aap ne:
"Mohabbat bhi kya khoob bana deti hai..
Ik ajnabi ko Mehboob bana deti hai..."


Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi,
Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
   
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