~.... मकान मे कोई मकीन ढूँड़ो

[janumanu]

makaan mai koe makeen dhoondo
panv rakhne ko zameen dhoondo

jhooth ka dhol bajayen fir
kahi se dibba teen dhoondo

choodi tode mera nape pyar
bole tukda ik maheen dhoondo

arunachal se nazar hatao
aisa na ho fir cheen dhoondo

wafa ka pahle suraag mile
to baad mai shakl haseen dhoondo

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo


मकान मे कोई मकीन ढूँड़ो
पाँव रखने को ज़मीन ढूँड़ो

झूठ का ढोल बजाए फिर
कही से डिब्बा टीन ढूँड़ो

चूड़ी तोड़े मेरा नापे प्यार
बोले टुकड़ा इक महीन ढूँड़ो

अरुणाचल से नज़र हटाओ
ऐसा ना हो फिर चीन ढूँड़ो

वफ़ा का पहले सुराग मिले
तो बाद मे शक्ल हसीन ढूँड़ो

आस्तीनो से जो साँप निकाले
ऐसी जानूमानू कोई बीन ढूँड़ो

[naresh_mehra110]

Originally Posted by janumanu

मकान मे कोई मकीन ढूँड़ो
पाँव रखने को ज़मीन ढूँड़ो

झूठ का ढोल बजाए फिर
कही से डिब्बा टीन ढूँड़ो

चूड़ी तोड़े मेरा नापे प्यार
बोले टुकड़ा इक महीन ढूँड़ो

अरुणाचल से नज़र हटाओ
ऐसा ना हो फिर चीन ढूँड़ो

वफ़ा का पहले सुराग मिले
तो बाद मे शक्ल हसीन ढूँड़ो

आस्तीनो से जो साँप निकाले

ऐसी जानूमानू कोई बीन ढूँड़ो

Vikaas Ji...namaste !....aapke likhne ka koi jawaab nahi.....ek lajawaab rachna kahunga ise phir se......har ashaar taarif ke kaabil hai.....har sher ko dil se daad detaa hu...kabuul farmaaye.....very nice creation....aise hi likhte rahiye....

aapki nayi soch, gehri fikR, umda adaayegi ko salaam karta hu.....

khush rahiye...
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....

[vikramjethi]

Janumanu jii,
Kya baat hai, bahut khoob...

Aakhir ke teen sheyr dil me uttar gaye...

arunachal se nazar hatao
aisa na ho fir cheen dhoondo

Iss sheyr pe khaas taur pe daad...

wafa ka pahle suraag mile
to baad mai shakl haseen dhoondo

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo

[amit7600]

Vikasji,
aisi "been" milna mushkil hai....kaha kaha khojege!!....baki....aapki rachna ka hamesha intizar rahta hai.....accha laga ise bhi phad kar...aapki rachnaye kabhi bhi nazro se nahi, dil se phadta hu...

aur likhe khub likhe

aapna khyal rakhiye..

[ISHK EK IBADAT]

aapko jab jab pada. dubta hi chala gaya shabdo me
likhte raho sahib. bahut ache.

tc

[kwahish]

Bhai Very nice and deep thoughts..........

All the line are realy good truely express your feeling and thought's
Very nice and the last sher is so effective.......... Hatt's of You Bhai..

Keep writting keep visiting...
May God Bless you...

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo

[Pradhyuman]

Originally Posted by janumanu

makaan mai koe makeen dhoondo
panv rakhne ko zameen dhoondo

jhooth ka dhol bajayen fir
kahi se dibba teen dhoondo

choodi tode mera nape pyar
bole tukda ik maheen dhoondo

arunachal se nazar hatao
aisa na ho fir cheen dhoondo

wafa ka pahle suraag mile
to baad mai shakl haseen dhoondo

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo


मकान मे कोई मकीन ढूँड़ो
पाँव रखने को ज़मीन ढूँड़ो

झूठ का ढोल बजाए फिर
कही से डिब्बा टीन ढूँड़ो

चूड़ी तोड़े मेरा नापे प्यार
बोले टुकड़ा इक महीन ढूँड़ो

अरुणाचल से नज़र हटाओ
ऐसा ना हो फिर चीन ढूँड़ो

वफ़ा का पहले सुराग मिले
तो बाद मे शक्ल हसीन ढूँड़ो

आस्तीनो से जो साँप निकाले
ऐसी जानूमानू कोई बीन ढूँड़ो

Janumanu ji namaskaar

aap kaise haiN? bade dinoeN baad aapka likha padhne ko mila hai aur yakeen maniye intezaar rehta hai aapki rachnaoeN..yeh ghazal bhi achi thi..

yeh sher bahot pasand aaya:

wafa ka pahle suraag mile
to baad mai shakl haseen dhoondo

bahot khoob...bhagwaan aapka kaif salaamat rakhe aur aap hamesha khush rahiye...

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman

[Hassan]

Vikaas Bhai,,

Aap ne be-had khoobsorat ghazal pesh ki,

Kamal shayri hai,,,

DIL se daad qabool kijiye,

Aise hi likhte rahiye aur humain heraan karte rahiye,,,

HSN

[m.mayoos]

Originally Posted by janumanu

makaan mai koe makeen dhoondo

panv rakhne ko zameen dhoondo

jhooth ka dhol bajayen fir
kahi se dibba teen dhoondo

choodi tode mera nape pyar
bole tukda ik maheen dhoondo

arunachal se nazar hatao
aisa na ho fir cheen dhoondo

wafa ka pahle suraag mile
to baad mai shakl haseen dhoondo

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo

मकान मे कोई मकीन ढूँड़ो
पाँव रखने को ज़मीन ढूँड़ो

झूठ का ढोल बजाए फिर
कही से डिब्बा टीन ढूँड़ो

चूड़ी तोड़े मेरा नापे प्यार
बोले टुकड़ा इक महीन ढूँड़ो

अरुणाचल से नज़र हटाओ
ऐसा ना हो फिर चीन ढूँड़ो

वफ़ा का पहले सुराग मिले
तो बाद मे शक्ल हसीन ढूँड़ो

आस्तीनो से जो साँप निकाले

ऐसी जानूमानू कोई बीन ढूँड़ो

Good one JanuManu, As usual - different.

[janumanu]

Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110

Vikaas Ji...namaste !....aapke likhne ka koi jawaab nahi.....ek lajawaab rachna kahunga ise phir se......har ashaar taarif ke kaabil hai.....har sher ko dil se daad detaa hu...kabuul farmaaye.....very nice creation....aise hi likhte rahiye....

aapki nayi soch, gehri fikR, umda adaayegi ko salaam karta hu.....

khush rahiye...
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....

naresh bhayee

aapka hardik swagat hai ... humesha hi .....
aap padht ho isliye likhte hain
barna ab mere pas ek bhi bajah nahi hai likhne ki

shukriyaa

[janumanu]

Originally Posted by vikramjethi

Janumanu jii,
Kya baat hai, bahut khoob...

Aakhir ke teen sheyr dil me uttar gaye...

arunachal se nazar hatao
aisa na ho fir cheen dhoondo

Iss sheyr pe khaas taur pe daad...

wafa ka pahle suraag mile
to baad mai shakl haseen dhoondo

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo

vikram bhayee shukriyaa aapka bahut

[janumanu]

Originally Posted by amit7600

Vikasji,
aisi "been" milna mushkil hai....kaha kaha khojege!!....baki....aapki rachna ka hamesha intizar rahta hai.....accha laga ise bhi phad kar...aapki rachnaye kabhi bhi nazro se nahi, dil se phadta hu...

aur likhe khub likhe

aapna khyal rakhiye..

amit bhayee ...

mushkil kya asaan kya .... umeed to mushkil nahi ....

khair intzaar karne ka shukriyaa

[janumanu]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Bhai Very nice and deep thoughts..........

All the line are realy good truely express your feeling and thought's
Very nice and the last sher is so effective.......... Hatt's of You Bhai..

Keep writting keep visiting...
May God Bless you...

aasteno se jo saanp nikale
aisi Janumanu koe been dhoondo

aajkal angreji seekh rahe ho lagta hai .. hindi na bhool jana

munda sadda pardesh gaya ... sikh ke aaya pardeshi vaani
water water kehndi mar gayee.. sirhane rakkha paani

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by janumanu

aajkal angreji seekh rahe ho lagta hai .. hindi na bhool jana

munda sadda pardesh gaya ... sikh ke aaya pardeshi vaani
water water kehndi mar gayee.. sirhane rakkha paani

Ha Ha ................ Bhai Aap bhi naa............

Dushmana yaar sade dil per churiyaN na chala
Sanu aise hi mar jawa tu aur duriyaan na bada

[mann_chand]

Vikas jii..

Kaise hain aap? Ghazal behaad pasand aayii.. har sher dil ke kareeb raha ... likhtey rahye ...

Take care

Mandeep