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~~~~~Maut ki talash me hun!!~~~~~ -
23rd February 2005, 11:20 PM
Shaken hopes, flood in eyes,,,, lonly life, The pain on rise .............Forced me to write few lines.......
deeda-e-tar chalak jate hein yun bebas jo jikr-e-katil-o-wada-khilaaf karta hun intezaar-e-be-wafa karta hun, wo mili thi jahan ae ahad-e-maazii*, khali ahad-e-tarab karta hun *ahad-e-maazii - past Zikr-e-firaaq* me naam-e-quatil aaye na kabhi Jaahil-e-mutlaq**, Dast-e-tihii***, maut ki fariyaad karta hun *Zikr-e-firaaq - judai ka jikr **Jaahil-e-mutlaq - anjaan ***Dast-e-tihii - empty handed ho jata hei khamosh be-gairat jane kyun aks-e-yaar me ae "sush" kyun tujhko talash karta hun Naa-vaaqif-e-anjaam tanha dasht-e-duaa* hun ae "sush" Ja badnaseeb teri har khata mei maaf karta hun *dasht-e-duaa - hands raised in prayer Another One aainon me dikhta nahin ab is kadar ab Faash hun mein jeet saka na bazi koi patton ka wo tash hun mein mat mar patthar yaar mere bahut badhawas hun mein maut ki talash me hun ek zinda laash hun mein WARM REGARDS इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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24th February 2005, 09:30 AM
Dard-e-shush ji......
aapke ye dard bhare sher.....ek ehsaas jaga jaate hain......maano murda dil mein ek kampan ho uthti hai....... yunhi likhte rahiye....... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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24th February 2005, 03:04 PM
Bro aman,
I dont expect much from any of my threads..... This one a bit hardcore urdu stuff...... Anyway, They r reflaction of my thots.... Some share the same feelings some dont..... U ejoid it!! .... Thanks Warm Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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25th February 2005, 12:04 AM
hi sush ...
Naa-vaaqif-e-anjaam tanha dasht-e-duaa* hun ae "sush" Ja badnaseeb teri har khata mei maaf karta hun bohat hi accha kalaam likha hai aapne padh ke accha laga ... khuda kare aapko sukoon mile ... ye aashar dil chu gaye ... meri daad teh dil se kabool kareN aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th February 2005, 06:39 AM
Shaken hopes, flood in eyes,,,, lonly life, The pain on rise .............Forced me to write few lines.......
Sush... tumhare iss kalaam pe mein kuch nahin keh paaongi.... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th June 2005, 10:10 PM
bohat hi accha kalaam likha hai aapne padh ke accha laga ... khuda kare aapko sukoon mile ... ye aashar dil chu gaye ... meri daad teh dil se kabool kareN
aapka apna kunal ************************************************** Aman Bhai!! I still remember one of your this outstanding work-- sawaalon ne ghera hai…. Jawaboon ki talash hai…. Aaine mein apni hi…. pehchaan ki talash hai i am honoured by your presense on this thread warm regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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Re: ~~~~~Maut ki talash me hun!!~~~~~ -
18th June 2005, 07:48 AM
maut ki talash.....shayad dard ki intehaa likhdi yahan....gum mein sarobaar hai...par padkar achha lagaa!
Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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18th June 2005, 11:39 AM
deeda-e-tar chalak jate hein yun bebas
jo jikr-e-katil-o-wada-khilaaf karta hun intezaar-e-be-wafa karta hun, wo mili thi jahan ae ahad-e-maazii*, khali ahad-e-tarab karta hun Zikr-e-firaaq* me naam-e-quatil aaye na kabhi Jaahil-e-mutlaq**, Dast-e-tihii***, maut ki fariyaad karta hun ho jata hei khamosh be-gairat jane kyun aks-e-yaar me ae "sush" kyun tujhko talash karta hun Naa-vaaqif-e-anjaam tanha dasht-e-duaa* hun ae "sush" Ja badnaseeb teri har khata mei maaf karta hun Sushil bhai! Kaafi samay baad aapko padhne ka mauka haasil hua... Dill cheerte hue alfaaz likhe hain aapne.. Dard se bharpoor... mafgar behad asradaar aur khoobsurat...Likhne se dil ka dard kam ho too aise hi likhte rahiye.... MEri Daad kubool kar lijiyega... Do TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th June 2005, 11:41 AM
aainon me dikhta nahin ab
is kadar ab Faash hun mein jeet saka na bazi koi patton ka wo tash hun mein mat mar patthar yaar mere bahut badhawas hun mein maut ki talash me hun ek zinda laash hun mein Bhaai...! Ek rachna ke nazariye se dekhoon to dil se waah nikalti hai... Ehsaas samajh paata hoon to nahin chaahoonga ke mere Bhai aisa kahen... AAte rahiye.. Likte rhaiye.. apna khayal rakhiye! ------------ Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th June 2005, 02:59 PM
Sushil Bhai.. Adaab.
aainon me dikhta nahin ab is kadar ab Faash hun mein jeet saka na bazi koi patton ka wo tash hun mein mat mar patthar yaar mere bahut badhawas hun mein maut ki talash me hun ek zinda laash hun mein ------------------------------------------ bohot hi shiddat ka dard hai aapke iss kalaam mein.. kuch dil udaas udaas tha aaj aur usspe aapka kalaam paDha.. to raha nahi gaya... iss liye yeh kuch likhne ki gustakhi ho hi gayee.... kya kahoon ke dard sara-pa bhara hua, zinda dikhayee deta par hai mara hua. ye aalam-e-duniya bhi abb jaan-gulis hua, harr matha hai bal khaya har dil dara hua. Talib. |
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19th June 2005, 02:30 PM
hmm.. sir kalam to kaafi achha likha hai.. lekin itna dard bhara kyu.. aur us par bhi ye title maut ki talash .. kuchh kahate nahi banta.. take care
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17th July 2005, 04:54 PM
MY BRO. kUNAL JEE, PULKIT BHAI, DEAREST PARAS JEE, MERE AJEEZ TALIB BHAI
I know very little about poetry stuff. All i can write is mere reflaction of what i generally feel. I can write only Whn the nostalgia is on extremes, tears r in eyes when the storm is in life, when the pain on rise I hold very high regards for all u holy souls. Thanks for understanding me again. Warm Regards Dear Shalini Jee, Garima Jee U r among one of the most talented and upconing poets on this site. I extend my warmest thank and gratitude for being here. Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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22nd July 2005, 12:58 PM
Sushil saahab...aap tak is Chaand ka salaam pahuNche...
aapki rachnaaeiN...or unse bhi uper aapke khayaalat...nek iraade...in sabhi ko ...ye Chaand jhuk.kar salaam karta hai... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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23rd July 2005, 10:07 AM
dard e sush
mere bhai : apne dard ko behad pur asr aur mutawazin alfaaz mein bayaan kiyaa hai aap ne. "maut ki talash me hun" "ek zinda laash hun mein" mein dua go hoon aap ki khushiyon ke liye, aur zindagi mein kaamiyabiyon ke liye, aap ki khuahishaat ki takmeel ke liye. God bless you. musharrafhusain |
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7th October 2005, 10:44 PM
Chand Bhai,
I hold very high regards for many great souls here. U r one of the very outstandingly natural writers here. I am honored by your words and appreciation. Warm Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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8th October 2005, 12:34 AM
hi susheel,
how r u?ur writing has really touched my heart...bahaut khoobsurti is behisaab dard ko bayaan kiya hai aapne.really nice...take care dear.bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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Re: ~~~~~Maut ki talash me hun!!~~~~~ -
8th October 2005, 10:26 AM
aainon me dikhta nahin ab
is kadar ab Faash hun mein jeet saka na bazi koi patton ka wo tash hun mein mat mar patthar yaar mere bahut badhawas hun mein maut ki talash me hun ek zinda laash hun mein dard bhai wah...!!! kya baat hai,,,,,dard par wah kehne ka gunaah karwa diya aapne....bahooot behtreeen likha hai aapne...dil ko chooo liya aapne..meri daad kuboool kijiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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28th April 2007, 12:23 AM
Apologise for Being so late....
I owe you for your kindness.. Mushi bhai, Manoj Ji, Farhana! Missing u all very much where r u all! Thanks for your views on this thread! Regards Sush इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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28th April 2007, 10:45 AM
sushil jee namakskaaR:
aapke eeS kalaam ke har lafz se dard chHalaktaa hai..bahot hi gehraaYii se aapne daed ko bayaaN kiYaa hai Zikr-e-firaaq* me naam-e-quatil aaye na kabhi Jaahil-e-mutlaq**, Dast-e-tihii***, maut ki fariyaad karta hun yeH sher dil ko behot pasaNd aaYaa .. yuuNhii liKHte raheN...khuSh raheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapkaa dost dhaval |
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28th April 2007, 11:55 AM
bahut khub likha hai apne superb
yuhi likhte rahiye sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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