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16th August 2009, 12:51 AM
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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16th August 2009, 04:34 AM
Apne itni gehrayi se lika hai...ek bohot hi khubsurat andaz me pesh ki hai apne soch aur khyal ko...ese hi likh te rakiye...
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16th August 2009, 08:55 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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Congrats Naresh ji........aap jitni khubi se dard par likhte hai utni hi khubsurat aap ishq par bhi likhte hai....main aisa nahi kar pati.... you are multi-talented....God Bless You
yuhi likhte rahiyen
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_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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16th August 2009, 10:13 AM
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
Awasome I've no word's for ............!
Anil Arora
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
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16th August 2009, 03:41 PM
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Awasome I've no word's for ............!
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aapne kimti waqt nikal ke meri rachna ko padha aur pasand kiya ....iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya........aise hi saath banaye rakhiyega.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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17th August 2009, 05:35 PM
Praneeta ji.....aapki nawazish hai.....aise hi saath dete rahiyega.....hausla afzaai ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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18th August 2009, 09:45 AM
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Originally Posted by aasefa_4u
Apne itni gehrayi se lika hai...ek bohot hi khubsurat andaz me pesh ki hai apne soch aur khyal ko...ese hi likh te rakiye...
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Shukriya.........aapne kimti waqt nikal ke meri rachna ko padha aur sarahaa...aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega......hausla afzaai ke liye phir se shukriya......
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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18th August 2009, 01:06 PM
Naresh jee,
bahot hi khub soorat ,roomani ghazal kahi hai aapne
aapki yeh andaaz wahkai kabile e tareef
Youn hi pyaari pyaari ghazal kahte rahiye
khus rahiye
DuaoN ke saath
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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18th August 2009, 05:45 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
itni purani ghisi piti baat ko apne nayi tazgi di hai.........sukhe gulab ko phir se nikhar kar, uspar shabnam bhi daal di hai........
shuban allah
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
' payal ko bajte dekha hai !!!!'=apka personification unique hai.......bahut acche.........daad kabool kijiye
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
bahut acche..bahut rumani raha ........najakat bhara sher,,,
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
bahut saral aur acchi fikr janab......thode words mere opinion me yaha fail ho gaye...magar phir bhi daad...
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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ustadana rang hai isme......jaanisar akhtar sahab ne kaha hai
''dekhu tere hanton ko to lagta hai tere haath
mandir me faqat deep jalane ke liye hai'
bahut acchi koshish hai..........
ek acchi koshish par meri daad kabul kijiye
regards
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18th August 2009, 09:49 PM
last sher to masha-allah......!
kya romantic romantic likha hai NARESH Jii aapne, hume to gazal ke ahsaas bahut pasand aaye.
hume aapki aisi hi poetry ka intzaar aage bhi rehega, dard par to bahut dost likhtey haiN, pyar par likhne wale bahut kum dost haiN, dua hai pyar par likhne wale jayada dost hon....
aise hi pyar bhare ahsaas lekar bazm mein aate rahiye.
kush rahiye
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th August 2009, 08:15 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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ahhhhhhh............... waah nareshji.... subeh meri khoobsurat bana di aapne...
kehte hai naa din ban gaya... wahi baat hui aaj...
naa jaane kya sooji and subeh subeh yaaha aayi.... aapko padha... tooooooo gud...
bohat masttttt likhte ho aap.... sachchi....
late reply k liye sorryyyyyyyyy
bohat beautiful likha hai aapne
u tc... aapki apni khanak
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19th August 2009, 05:25 PM
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ahhhhhhh............... waah nareshji.... subeh meri khoobsurat bana di aapne...
kehte hai naa din ban gaya... wahi baat hui aaj...
naa jaane kya sooji and subeh subeh yaaha aayi.... aapko padha... tooooooo gud...
bohat masttttt likhte ho aap.... sachchi....
late reply k liye sorryyyyyyyyy
bohat beautiful likha hai aapne
u tc... aapki apni khanak
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Khanak ji.......aapko meri rachna pasand aai.........yeh toh theek hai......aaj aapko yaha dekhkar jiyada acha laga.......itne din ki chuppi toh aakhir tuti.........yeh meri khushi ka din hai.....iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya......yuhi aate rahiye......aise hi saath dete rahiye........aur khush rahiye........
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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21st August 2009, 11:51 PM
Hasrat thi woh toh dil mai hi reh gai
tumse mila jo dard use sehne mai umar beh gai
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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25th August 2009, 07:36 PM
Sunita ji....aapko yaha dekhkar acha lagta hai... mujhe hamesha.......aise hi aap aage bhi saath dete rahiyega.........shukriya.......
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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25th August 2009, 07:41 PM
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ustadana rang hai isme......jaanisar akhtar sahab ne kaha hai
''dekhu tere hanton ko to lagta hai tere haath
mandir me faqat deep jalane ke liye hai'
bahut acchi koshish hai..........
ek acchi koshish par meri daad kabul kijiye
regards
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Zidd sahab ji......aapkne meri ghazal ki sher waaiz jo partikiriya viyakt ki mujhe acha laga.......aise hi housla afzaai karte rahiyega.......saath dete rahiyega......shukriya.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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1st September 2009, 11:19 PM
Kiske Khayaalon mai baithi hai woh shaam se
aake chupke se haathon mai mehndi laga gaya koi...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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3rd September 2009, 06:54 AM
" Main kahi bhi rahu, taur-tarikaa sab mera hi hoga
Dard tumhe jab bhi hoga, aansu mera wahi gira hoga... "
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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5th September 2009, 02:45 PM
" Chhu ke gai thi tere jisum ki mehak aaj mujh ko
Bulaa legi abhi jaise teri dilkash awaaj mujh ko... "
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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6th September 2009, 06:57 AM
" Bahut mumkin hai is baar tum yaad aao
Bahut mumkin hai tum khud hi chali aao
Par isse ab kiya fark padhegaa mujhe
Murjhaaye phoolon mai jaise paani daal aao..."
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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7th September 2009, 07:36 AM
"Sukhe huye phool unke kab se kitaabo mai rakhe hai
Jala ke diye mohabbat ke hamne khwaabo mai rakhe hai
Chandni raat mai chamakte chand ko jaanna mushkil thaa
Magar mere mehboob ke ashk gulaabo mai rakhe hai....."
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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9th September 2009, 06:08 PM
Muddaton baad aaj tumhe main yaha mil raha hu
Guzre huye dino ki koi kitaab jaise padh raha hu....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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10th September 2009, 08:45 AM
" Kehne ko woh shakhs muddato se mere saath thaa
Jab gaya toh uske aur mere beech faasla bahut thaa..."
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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11th September 2009, 06:55 PM
" Hamko yeh shikayat phir na tumse kabhi hoti
Lafzo ki tehzeeb mai jab baat hamse kabhi hoti... "
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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31st July 2010, 01:12 PM
ek purani romani koshish.....ab NayeoN ke liye........ !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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2nd August 2010, 08:39 AM
Bahut bahut shurkiya........aasefa Ji !!!!!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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2nd August 2010, 06:58 PM
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Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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Naresh ji,
bahut khoob dear.... dil se daad.... yuhi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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8th August 2010, 12:39 PM
Aapki taareef aur daad ka ...........bahut bahut shukriya ......Lamha Ji !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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8th August 2010, 12:46 PM
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Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob har ashar bahut umda hai dil se daad
yun hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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15th August 2010, 10:48 AM
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob har ashar bahut umda hai dil se daad
yun hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
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Bahut bahut shukriya.....Rajinder Bhaai ! aapki hausla afzaai aur daad ka ! khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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22nd August 2010, 07:09 PM
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10th April 2012, 12:37 PM
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Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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Ji Nice Creation...................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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16th April 2012, 01:01 AM
naresh ji, mujhe nahi pata woh kya hai jo mujhe majboor kar rahi hai likne ko, maine usey apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai... kuch hai is line mein... main bol nahi pa raha par kuch cheed si gayi hai dil ke taar, koi yaad nahi hai itna toh pata hai.... kya piroya hai isme aap ne...
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16th April 2012, 11:44 AM
hmmmmm , kuchh kuchh lag raha hai , ek aag hai , jawalamookhi hai aap ki kawita me , jala ke rakh dia masha allah . khoob ,
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
vaise aajkal baal rah hi kitne gaye hain sar pe ki sanware jaa saken. DIL BAHLAANE KO KHAYAL ACHHA HAI
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16th April 2012, 01:08 PM
naresh jee, dil ko choo gayee apki ye rachna. Dil se dua va daad hai apko.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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12th May 2012, 07:07 PM
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
Just Amazing! Took me to nostalgia!
Regards
Sushil
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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29th June 2012, 09:02 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai...
Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai
Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai....
Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se
Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai...
Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar
Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai....
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...
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bahut khoob naresh bhai app ki soch bhut bhadiya hai
soch se insaan ka chrecter pata chalta hai appki soch sach me bhut high hai
or shayri ki to baat hi alag hai bhut khoob sir..................
dheroo daad kabool karen
kafiir
na jane kon kon hume duaaon mai yaad rakhta hai
mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai
Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye
tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye
...nm
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