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16th August 2009, 12:51 AM
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai... Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai.... Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai... Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai.... Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th August 2009, 04:34 AM
Apne itni gehrayi se lika hai...ek bohot hi khubsurat andaz me pesh ki hai apne soch aur khyal ko...ese hi likh te rakiye...
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16th August 2009, 08:55 AM
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Congrats Naresh ji........aap jitni khubi se dard par likhte hai utni hi khubsurat aap ishq par bhi likhte hai....main aisa nahi kar pati  .... you are multi-talented ....God Bless Youyuhi likhte rahiyen Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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16th August 2009, 10:13 AM
Maine haath ki lakeeron mai use bante dekha hai
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai... Woh apne ghar mai ab gum-sum si rehti hai Maine uski payal ke ghungru ko bajte dekha hai.... Guzarti hai jab kabhi woh humari galii se Ek pal use maine apne darwaaze pe rukte dekha hai... Milaa kar nazar mujh se nahi milaati phir woh nazar Aisa nakhara use maine apne saath karte dekha hai.... Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai... Awasome I've no word's for ............! Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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16th August 2009, 03:41 PM
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aapne kimti waqt nikal ke meri rachna ko padha aur pasand kiya ....iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya........aise hi saath banaye rakhiyega..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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17th August 2009, 05:35 PM
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Praneeta ji.....aapki nawazish hai.....aise hi saath dete rahiyega.....hausla afzaai ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th August 2009, 09:45 AM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th August 2009, 01:06 PM
Naresh jee,
bahot hi khub soorat ,roomani ghazal kahi hai aapne aapki yeh andaaz wahkai kabile e tareef Youn hi pyaari pyaari ghazal kahte rahiye khus rahiye DuaoN ke saath Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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18th August 2009, 05:45 PM
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''dekhu tere hanton ko to lagta hai tere haath mandir me faqat deep jalane ke liye hai' bahut acchi koshish hai.......... ek acchi koshish par meri daad kabul kijiye regards |
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18th August 2009, 09:49 PM
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kya romantic romantic likha hai NARESH Jii aapne, hume to gazal ke ahsaas bahut pasand aaye. hume aapki aisi hi poetry ka intzaar aage bhi rehega, dard par to bahut dost likhtey haiN, pyar par likhne wale bahut kum dost haiN, dua hai pyar par likhne wale jayada dost hon.... aise hi pyar bhare ahsaas lekar bazm mein aate rahiye. kush rahiye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th August 2009, 08:15 AM
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ahhhhhhh............... waah nareshji.... subeh meri khoobsurat bana di aapne... kehte hai naa din ban gaya... wahi baat hui aaj... naa jaane kya sooji and subeh subeh yaaha aayi.... aapko padha... tooooooo gud... bohat masttttt likhte ho aap.... sachchi.... late reply k liye sorryyyyyyyyy bohat beautiful likha hai aapne u tc... aapki apni khanak |
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19th August 2009, 05:25 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st August 2009, 11:51 PM
Hasrat thi woh toh dil mai hi reh gai tumse mila jo dard use sehne mai umar beh gai YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th August 2009, 07:36 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th August 2009, 07:41 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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1st September 2009, 11:19 PM
Kiske Khayaalon mai baithi hai woh shaam se aake chupke se haathon mai mehndi laga gaya koi... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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3rd September 2009, 06:54 AM
" Main kahi bhi rahu, taur-tarikaa sab mera hi hoga Dard tumhe jab bhi hoga, aansu mera wahi gira hoga... " YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th September 2009, 02:45 PM
" Chhu ke gai thi tere jisum ki mehak aaj mujh ko Bulaa legi abhi jaise teri dilkash awaaj mujh ko... " YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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6th September 2009, 06:57 AM
" Bahut mumkin hai is baar tum yaad aao Bahut mumkin hai tum khud hi chali aao Par isse ab kiya fark padhegaa mujhe Murjhaaye phoolon mai jaise paani daal aao..." YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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7th September 2009, 07:36 AM
"Sukhe huye phool unke kab se kitaabo mai rakhe hai Jala ke diye mohabbat ke hamne khwaabo mai rakhe hai Chandni raat mai chamakte chand ko jaanna mushkil thaa Magar mere mehboob ke ashk gulaabo mai rakhe hai....." YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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9th September 2009, 06:08 PM
Muddaton baad aaj tumhe main yaha mil raha hu Guzre huye dino ki koi kitaab jaise padh raha hu.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th September 2009, 08:45 AM
" Kehne ko woh shakhs muddato se mere saath thaa Jab gaya toh uske aur mere beech faasla bahut thaa..." YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th September 2009, 06:55 PM
" Hamko yeh shikayat phir na tumse kabhi hoti Lafzo ki tehzeeb mai jab baat hamse kabhi hoti... " YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st July 2010, 01:12 PM
ek purani romani koshish.....ab NayeoN ke liye........ !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd August 2010, 08:39 AM
Bahut bahut shurkiya........aasefa Ji !!!!!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd August 2010, 06:58 PM
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bahut khoob dear.... dil se daad.... yuhi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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8th August 2010, 12:46 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob har ashar bahut umda hai dil se daad yun hi likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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15th August 2010, 10:48 AM
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duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd August 2010, 07:09 PM
speechless........................................ ...........mook
07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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Ji Nice Creation................... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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16th April 2012, 01:01 AM
naresh ji, mujhe nahi pata woh kya hai jo mujhe majboor kar rahi hai likne ko, maine usey apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai... kuch hai is line mein... main bol nahi pa raha par kuch cheed si gayi hai dil ke taar, koi yaad nahi hai itna toh pata hai.... kya piroya hai isme aap ne...
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16th April 2012, 11:44 AM
hmmmmm , kuchh kuchh lag raha hai , ek aag hai , jawalamookhi hai aap ki kawita me , jala ke rakh dia masha allah . khoob ,
Jaise aaine mai baalon ko sawarte dekha hai... vaise aajkal baal rah hi kitne gaye hain sar pe ki sanware jaa saken. DIL BAHLAANE KO KHAYAL ACHHA HAI |
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16th April 2012, 01:08 PM
naresh jee, dil ko choo gayee apki ye rachna. Dil se dua va daad hai apko.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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12th May 2012, 07:07 PM
Kitni suhaani ho jaati hai rozana meri subha
Maine use apni maa ke saath mandir jaate dekha hai... Just Amazing! Took me to nostalgia! Regards Sushil इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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29th June 2012, 09:02 PM
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bahut khoob naresh bhai app ki soch bhut bhadiya hai soch se insaan ka chrecter pata chalta hai appki soch sach me bhut high hai or shayri ki to baat hi alag hai bhut khoob sir.................. dheroo daad kabool karen kafiir mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye ...nm |
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