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16th September 2014, 10:52 AM
Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..
Ki koi meraa khyaal nhi rakhtaa.. Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa Waakif haiN hm unki har ek chaal se Esliye to wo koi nyi chaal nhi rakhtaa... KhaNjar tham liya najuk haathoN meiN kyoN haathoN meiN gulaal nhi rakhtaa ? Aakhir ek din mout se mulaakaat honi hai "Raj" bachne ke liye ab dhaal nhi rakhtaa... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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16th September 2014, 11:51 AM
Bohut khoob Rajeev ji.
Matla bohut khoobsurat hai. Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa.. Ki koi meraa khyaal nhi rakhtaa.. Mubarak ho Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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16th September 2014, 11:56 AM
Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa
Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa wahh! Rajeev bhai.. Kia kehne.. bohat umdaaH khayaalat aur jazbaat .. superb! Likhte rahiye, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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16th September 2014, 01:50 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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16th September 2014, 02:47 PM
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waahhhh kya baat hai Raj saahab..... pahli baar aapki shayri ka jo lutf mujhe aaj milaa hai wo yaqeenan sab se behtar raha hai........ aapne kaafi had tak khud ki shaayrii me sudhaar laaya hai jo ki saaf nazar aa raha hai.... meri duaa hai ke din dooni raat chougnii badhtii rahe..... likhte rahiye Shaad...... |
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17th September 2014, 09:41 AM
bahot khub, Rajeevji.....
shaayad ye aapki pehli koshish hai urdu shaayrii meN aur kya khubsurat kaavish kii hai........ hamaari jaanibse dheroN dheroN daad..... likhtey rahiye.. Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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17th September 2014, 09:58 AM
बेहद खूबसूरत लिखा है राजीव जी...
Aakhir ek din mout se mulaakaat honi hai "Raj" bachne ke liye ab dhaal nhi rakhtaa... |
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19th September 2014, 01:37 PM
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Mujeeb ji.bahut bahut shukriyaa....... apnaa sath yuN banaaye rakheN..... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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19th September 2014, 01:39 PM
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Hassan bhaai.......hoNsalaa afzaai ka shukrguzaar huN..... apnaa sath yuN hi barkaraar rakheN..... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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19th September 2014, 02:17 PM
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wahhh bahut khoob..............!  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd September 2014, 12:13 PM
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6th October 2014, 05:00 PM
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shaad bhaai... shukriyaa.... aap sabhi ke pyaar aur aashirwaad hai ye sab... aur shukriyaa adaa krnaa chaahugaa maiN SDC aur SDC ke sabhi logoN ka ... aap sabhi se bahut kuch sikhne ko milaa aur umeed hai hameshaa miltaa rahegaa............. shukriyaa......... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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10th October 2014, 11:46 AM
namaste rajeev bhaii:
aik achchhi koshish par dil se daad KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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10th October 2014, 09:11 PM
bahut khoob Raj ji, achchha laga parhkar.
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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10th October 2014, 11:25 PM
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Shukriya Chaand ji, hame behad khushi hue aapki haziri dekh kar... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th October 2014, 11:58 AM
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Adil Bhaai.. bahut bahut shukriyaa................... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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