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"Kaash tum aa jate" -
21st March 2008, 12:57 PM
Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
 Kaash tum aa jate Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate, Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate, Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine, Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate, Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe, Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate, Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”, Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate, Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai, Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st March 2008, 01:14 PM
Eh aasmaan wale zameen par uttar kar dekh,
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21st March 2008, 02:51 PM
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21st March 2008, 04:32 PM
kaisehain aap di!!!!!!!!!!
apki ghazal behad pasand aayi...aapne jis waqt likha woh bhi aapka haal khoob samajhti hooN.jab kisis ki zaroorat ho aur woh saath na ho to kaise mehsoos hota hain.....allah kare woh jald hi aapke paas ho aur aap woh pyari pyari ghazalein hume sunayeN  aapki.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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21st March 2008, 06:48 PM
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21st March 2008, 08:42 PM
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Aaj kafi time baad aapko pada aur bahut hi khushi hui aapki nai post ko dekh kar ehsas khuch dil par dastak dene wale rahey ati rahiye aur apne ehsaaso se hame rubaro karati rahiye........daad hazir hai kubool kijiye Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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21st March 2008, 08:47 PM
bahut khub DI....apno se bichadne ka dard to yakeenan jaanleva hota hai....khuda aap ko hamesha khush rakhen...aur aap ke dil ki har muraad puri ho...aur aap jaldi se hamare JIJU se mil jaye...AAMEEN....
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21st March 2008, 10:12 PM
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hello ji dd ji awesome creation hai yeh... har lines apne aap mein ek kahani kehtin hain...sacch padhkar bahut accha laga...or jab pyar durr ho toh aise hi ehsaas zubaan per aajate hain... or dunn taek tensions we all r wid you alwayz taek caer didi or apki daughter ke liye bhi jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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22nd March 2008, 11:46 AM
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Adaab Sunita Jee !!! Mai nhi janta k appk sajan , app k hubby ka kya haal ho ga wahan per , who kya feel ker rahy hoon gay , but aik choooti se gustakhi ker rha hon un ki teref se jawab deny ki .... i know yeh unki feeling k zara bher bhi baraber nhi ho ga , lakin mulahiza fermaiye ... Tujhy kaisy samjhaon , mai kis bhais mein hon saton smander paar , tanha pardes mein hon kuch khaber mily mujhy k sab theek hai atkaey howy jaan , her aik sandes pe hon Ro ro k tuny dil apna halka to ker liya main ro bhi nhi sakta , mai pardes mein hon Tum ho preshan wahan to khush yahan main bhi nhi laut ker b aa nhi sakta , mai ik andesh mein hon na ker majboor mujhy "Sunita" sanmbhal apny apko bekarar hon us dinko,jab kahon ga "Aj mai apny des mein hon" |
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22nd March 2008, 12:29 PM
Pranaam Sister:
aapne uN haalaatoN ko apnii kavviSh meN baRii hi geHrA'ii se peSh kiYaa hai.. aapki yeh kavviSh dil meN utar gaYii.. aur mere liYe to sab sey baRii KhuShii kii baat yeh haii ki wo ab Theek haii. ! YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe aage bhee..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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24th March 2008, 03:57 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:00 PM
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kush rahiye aur yoon hi saath banaye rakhiyega .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:03 PM
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mausam teri baat se main sahmat hoon....kyuki us waqt ko yaad karke ab bhi meri aankho.n mein aansu aa jate haiN....! aur teri dua jald rang laye..... phir dekhna kaise pyari payri gazley tujhe sunati hoon  teri diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:19 PM
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mere ahsaas aapko apne dil ke ahsaas lage to main samjati hoon mera likha saarthak hua.....mere ahsaao.n ko samjne ke liye dil se shukriya. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:20 PM
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duao.n ke liye shukriya tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:23 PM
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maafi chahti hoon ki mahfil mein roj roj aana nahi ho raha.....par jab bhi fursat milti hai...yaha aana nahi bhoolti.... aapki daad hume dil se kabool hai god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:25 PM
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dear lamha...........pyari pyari duao.n ke liye bahut sare pyar ke saath shukriya tumahri diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:28 PM
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aur haan dear lagta hai reply peg sheg laga kar kiya hai....aagey peeche kar diye hai spellings.....hai na lots of love tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:32 PM
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grrrrrrrrrr88888888888 mujeeb bahi A-Slaam-Walekum aapne to bahut khoobi se unke ahsaaso.n ko pesh kiya hai, aapne etni gahrai se mere ahsaaso.n ko pada aur utni hi gahrai se unke ahsaaso.n ko llikha...thanks alot bahut sahi likha hai aapne, haan mujeeb bhai main aapke ahsaaso.n ke saath sahmat hoon.....yakeenan unke ahsaas bhi kuch aise hi honge.....bahut bahut shukriya bhai yoon hi saath detey rahiyega har kadam kush rahiyega duao.n ke saath aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:38 PM
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mere pyarey chottu.......dil se shukriya ki tum meri adna si kavish ko bhi etna sanmaan detey ho.....main kushnaseeb hoon ki mujhe tuj jaisa bhai milla....khuda aisa bhai sabko de..... duao.n ke saath teri sister .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:58 PM
Oye sonniyo tussi ki gal kar ditti....
 Sannu tuhoddi ae nazam bhot hi vaddiya lagi...hunn rab nu saddi ilteja heggi ke saddi panjaabi kudi nu duniya bhar di khushiya dede...or tuhodde dil di muraad vellya hi puri ho jaye.....or saddi gudiya nu lakh lakh pyaar sadda. oye ki panjaabi de vich galla kardi assi vi....vekhya sannu vi panjabi ondi e... grazie tuhoddi matko  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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25th March 2008, 05:38 AM
hi sunita,
aapki yeh tehreer dekh kar dil ko apna beeta kal yaad aa gaya. Haan, dear jis samay se aap jugri hain, bahut dukh datain hain aur inme hum apne ap ko asamarth pate hain, lekin don't loose heart dear.... its just a phase in your life, be strong and courageous and believe in yourself. Better times will soon show up. In the mean time, keep writing and penning down your feelings, it helps. take care with best regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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25th March 2008, 03:13 PM
[quote=sunita virender;276775]Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate, Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate, Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine, Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate, Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe, Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate, Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”, Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate, Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai, Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate. wah di apne bahut hi acha likha hai hum chahte hai ki apne is gazal me jo likha hai aisa kabhi na ho app jo bhi chahte ho vo humesha apke pass mange bina hi aa jaaye aur humesha khush rahiye di me yahi dua karuga humesha apke liye kabhi apke samne andhera naa aaye AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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25th March 2008, 03:20 PM
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11th April 2008, 05:31 PM
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aida hi apni punjabi kudi da saath deNdiya rahna bahut sare pyar naal teri apni punjabi kudi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2008, 05:33 PM
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kush raho, duao.n ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2008, 05:35 PM
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aap bhi kush rahiye abaad rahiye duao.n ke saath aapki diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2008, 05:36 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2008, 10:28 PM
boht khub masha allah
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12th April 2008, 08:07 AM
Hi Didi Ji...
kaise hai aap? aaj bahut dino baad aapki ghazal padh kar bahut hi aacha laga.. aur aapki beti kaise hain ab? dua karti hu aapka intezaar jaldi khatam ho .. aur khushiyaan se aapka ghar bhar jaye ... take careaaur yu hi aate rahye take care aapki mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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12th April 2008, 02:26 PM
hi sunita jee,
Eh aasmaan wale zameen par uttar kar dekh, hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh....... aapka yeh vaala sher tho mujhe hamesha achha lagtha hee hai ... par aaj tho mai bas...dekhthi reh gayi... u have written really good... Aapke kaalam tho har baar kaayal karthe hain... WAKE UP...!  Love, SIMRAN |
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13th April 2008, 03:41 PM
Mujhe bhi koi samjhao ki ye kya ho raha hai....mere bas main nahi hai itni shayari padhniii
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14th April 2008, 03:10 PM
AAP KE GAZAL KO THODA AUR BDHA RAHI HUN.
KASH TUM AA JATE, *************** JIS DUNIYAME HAIN HAM BIKHRE , USI DUNIYAKO SWARNE KASH TU AA JATE, JIS WAQT KO YAD KAR HAR PAL ROTE HAIN, USI WAQT HASANE KASH TUM AA JATE, HAM TO AKELE THE AUR AKELE HAIN, FIR BHI HAMARA SATH DENE KASH TUM AA JATE. *********************************************** |
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17th April 2008, 04:26 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th April 2008, 04:28 PM
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kush raho aur yoon hi saath raho tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th April 2008, 04:29 PM
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kush raho .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th April 2008, 04:30 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th April 2008, 04:32 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th April 2008, 09:38 PM
diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..
kaise hain aap? abb kahan se shuru karun. har taraf is ghazal mein sirf...bebassi....majboori...intezaar aur dard hi nazar aata hai. hum aapke jazbaaton ko samaj sakte hain. lagta hai kaafi dard barra waqt tha jab aapne yeh ghazal likhi hogi. hum to aapko humesha hasta hua dekhna chahte haain. dhua to yehi hai k uppar vala aapki har khwaaish ko purri kare. rab tuvanu chad-di kala che rakhe tuvada munna Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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