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21st March 2008, 12:57 PM
Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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21st March 2008, 01:14 PM
Eh aasmaan wale zameen par uttar kar dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh.......
LOVE IS LIFE..... & MY LIFE IS PRECIOUS.....
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21st March 2008, 02:51 PM
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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bahoot hee achha likha hai aap ne sunita jee, allah kare aap ko unka saath jald hee mile aur phir kabhi na bichhare wo shaksh aap se.......AAMIN
yunhee likahtii rahe
regards
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21st March 2008, 04:32 PM
kaisehain aap di!!!!!!!!!!
apki ghazal behad pasand aayi...aapne jis waqt likha woh bhi aapka haal khoob samajhti hooN.jab kisis ki zaroorat ho aur woh saath na ho to kaise mehsoos hota hain.....allah kare woh jald hi aapke paas ho aur aap woh pyari pyari ghazalein hume sunayeN
aapki..
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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21st March 2008, 04:49 PM
- HI SUNITA JI,
- AAPNE TO JAISE YE SUB LIKH KER MERI DUKHTI RUG PER HAATH RAKH DIYA HO, KASH TUM AA JATE TITLE BAHOOT HI SUITABLE HAI, HUM AAPKE IS AHSAAS KA APNE DIL PER BHI MAHSOOS KARTE HAI.
- REALY AAPNE YE BAAT LIKH KER YE SUB KO BATA DIYA KI JISE HUM APNE JINDGI KA SUBSE AHAM HISSA MANTE HAI AGAR WO WAQT PER NAHI HO TO POORI DUNIA SIMTATI NAZAR AATI HAI.
- AGAIN GREAT AGSAAS.. SAINI SAHAB.
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21st March 2008, 06:48 PM
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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didi aapke ye ahsasaat parrh ker aik ajeeb si kefiat mehsoos hoi aik baar main khud guzar chuki hoon is ahsaas se aur bohat hi achi tarah mehsoos ker sakti hoon ke uswaqt kesi kefiat hoti hai jab aapko itne logon ke saath ke bawajood sirf aik shaks ki shiddat se kami mehsoos ho rahi hoti hai main bakhoobi janti hoon allah se dua kerti hoon aap per doobara kabhi aesi mushkil gharri na aye ameeen aur kuch aesa ho ajye ke woh her pal aapka saath de payen ameennn aur aapko kabhi akela pan mehsoos na ho khush rahain di humesha..
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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21st March 2008, 08:42 PM
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
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21st March 2008, 08:47 PM
bahut khub DI....apno se bichadne ka dard to yakeenan jaanleva hota hai....khuda aap ko hamesha khush rakhen...aur aap ke dil ki har muraad puri ho...aur aap jaldi se hamare JIJU se mil jaye...AAMEEN....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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21st March 2008, 10:12 PM
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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hello ji
dd ji
awesome creation hai yeh... har lines apne aap mein ek kahani kehtin hain...sacch padhkar bahut accha laga...or jab pyar durr ho toh aise hi ehsaas zubaan per aajate hain... or dunn taek tensions
we all r wid you alwayz
taek caer didi
or apki daughter ke liye bhi
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
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duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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22nd March 2008, 11:46 AM
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Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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Adaab Sunita Jee !!!
Mai nhi janta k appk sajan , app k hubby ka kya haal ho ga wahan per , who kya feel ker rahy hoon gay , but aik choooti se gustakhi ker rha hon un ki teref se jawab deny ki .... i know yeh unki feeling k zara bher bhi baraber nhi ho ga , lakin mulahiza fermaiye ...
Tujhy kaisy samjhaon , mai kis bhais mein hon
saton smander paar , tanha pardes mein hon
kuch khaber mily mujhy k sab theek hai
atkaey howy jaan , her aik sandes pe hon
Ro ro k tuny dil apna halka to ker liya
main ro bhi nhi sakta , mai pardes mein hon
Tum ho preshan wahan to khush yahan main bhi nhi
laut ker b aa nhi sakta , mai ik andesh mein hon
na ker majboor mujhy "Sunita" sanmbhal apny apko
bekarar hon us dinko,jab kahon ga "Aj mai apny des mein hon"
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22nd March 2008, 12:29 PM
Pranaam Sister:
aapne uN haalaatoN ko apnii kavviSh meN baRii hi geHrA'ii se peSh kiYaa hai.. aapki yeh kavviSh dil meN utar gaYii.. aur mere liYe to sab sey baRii KhuShii kii baat yeh haii ki wo ab Theek haii. !
YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe aage bhee..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
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Eh aasmaan wale zameen par uttar kar dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh.......
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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bahoot hee achha likha hai aap ne sunita jee, allah kare aap ko unka saath jald hee mile aur phir kabhi na bichhare wo shaksh aap se.......AAMIN
yunhee likahtii rahe
regards
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manu jee.........tahe dil se shukriya kahna chahti hoon aapko....aapne bahut pyari si dua ki hai mere liye....yakeen hai ki allah etne pyar si ki gaye dua ko jalad kabool karega
kush rahiye aur yoon hi saath banaye rakhiyega
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:03 PM
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kaisehain aap di!!!!!!!!!!
apki ghazal behad pasand aayi...aapne jis waqt likha woh bhi aapka haal khoob samajhti hooN.jab kisis ki zaroorat ho aur woh saath na ho to kaise mehsoos hota hain.....allah kare woh jald hi aapke paas ho aur aap woh pyari pyari ghazalein hume sunayeN
aapki..
mausam
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mast hoon dear....
mausam teri baat se main sahmat hoon....kyuki us waqt ko yaad karke ab bhi meri aankho.n mein aansu aa jate haiN....!
aur teri dua jald rang laye.....
phir dekhna kaise pyari payri gazley tujhe sunati hoon
teri diii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:19 PM
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- HI SUNITA JI,
- AAPNE TO JAISE YE SUB LIKH KER MERI DUKHTI RUG PER HAATH RAKH DIYA HO, KASH TUM AA JATE TITLE BAHOOT HI SUITABLE HAI, HUM AAPKE IS AHSAAS KA APNE DIL PER BHI MAHSOOS KARTE HAI.
- REALY AAPNE YE BAAT LIKH KER YE SUB KO BATA DIYA KI JISE HUM APNE JINDGI KA SUBSE AHAM HISSA MANTE HAI AGAR WO WAQT PER NAHI HO TO POORI DUNIA SIMTATI NAZAR AATI HAI.
- AGAIN GREAT AGSAAS.. SAINI SAHAB.
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namaskaar jaswinder saini jee..........sabse phele to aapka SDC pariwaar mein aur 2ndly meri post par aapka dil se suwagat hai...
mere ahsaas aapko apne dil ke ahsaas lage to main samjati hoon mera likha saarthak hua.....mere ahsaao.n ko samjne ke liye dil se shukriya.
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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didi aapke ye ahsasaat parrh ker aik ajeeb si kefiat mehsoos hoi aik baar main khud guzar chuki hoon is ahsaas se aur bohat hi achi tarah mehsoos ker sakti hoon ke uswaqt kesi kefiat hoti hai jab aapko itne logon ke saath ke bawajood sirf aik shaks ki shiddat se kami mehsoos ho rahi hoti hai main bakhoobi janti hoon allah se dua kerti hoon aap per doobara kabhi aesi mushkil gharri na aye ameeen aur kuch aesa ho ajye ke woh her pal aapka saath de payen ameennn aur aapko kabhi akela pan mehsoos na ho khush rahain di humesha..
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dear kaya kahuN.........bas dil khol kar aapke saamne rakh diya hai...aur kuch nahi hai kahne ko.
duao.n ke liye shukriya
tumhari diii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Aadaab Sunita ji kesi hain aap ?
Aaj kafi time baad aapko pada aur bahut hi khushi hui aapki nai post ko dekh kar ehsas khuch dil par dastak dene wale rahey ati rahiye aur apne ehsaaso se hame rubaro karati rahiye........daad hazir hai kubool kijiye
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kashif ji kaise hain aap....??????
maafi chahti hoon ki mahfil mein roj roj aana nahi ho raha.....par jab bhi fursat milti hai...yaha aana nahi bhoolti....
aapki daad hume dil se kabool hai
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:25 PM
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bahut khub DI....apno se bichadne ka dard to yakeenan jaanleva hota hai....khuda aap ko hamesha khush rakhen...aur aap ke dil ki har muraad puri ho...aur aap jaldi se hamare JIJU se mil jaye...AAMEEN....
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dear lamha...........pyari pyari duao.n ke liye bahut sare pyar ke saath shukriya
tumahri diiii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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hello ji
dd ji
awesome creation hai yeh... har lines apne aap mein ek kahani kehtin hain...sacch padhkar bahut accha laga...or jab pyar durr ho toh aise hi ehsaas zubaan per aajate hain... or dunn taek tensions
we all r wid you alwayz
taek caer didi
or apki daughter ke liye bhi
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hello shweta.............bahut bahut shukriya ki tumne mere ahsaaso.n ko samja.....!
aur haan dear lagta hai reply peg sheg laga kar kiya hai....aagey peeche kar diye hai spellings.....hai na
lots of love
tumhari diii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:32 PM
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Adaab Sunita Jee !!!
Mai nhi janta k appk sajan , app k hubby ka kya haal ho ga wahan per , who kya feel ker rahy hoon gay , but aik choooti se gustakhi ker rha hon un ki teref se jawab deny ki .... i know yeh unki feeling k zara bher bhi baraber nhi ho ga , lakin mulahiza fermaiye ...
Tujhy kaisy samjhaon , mai kis bhais mein hon
saton smander paar , tanha pardes mein hon
kuch khaber mily mujhy k sab theek hai
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Ro ro k tuny dil apna halka to ker liya
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Tum ho preshan wahan to khush yahan main bhi nhi
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na ker majboor mujhy "Sunita" sanmbhal apny apko
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aapne to bahut khoobi se unke ahsaaso.n ko pesh kiya hai, aapne etni gahrai se mere ahsaaso.n ko pada aur utni hi gahrai se unke ahsaaso.n ko llikha...thanks alot
bahut sahi likha hai aapne, haan mujeeb bhai main aapke ahsaaso.n ke saath sahmat hoon.....yakeenan unke ahsaas bhi kuch aise hi honge.....bahut bahut shukriya bhai
yoon hi saath detey rahiyega har kadam
kush rahiyega
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aapne uN haalaatoN ko apnii kavviSh meN baRii hi geHrA'ii se peSh kiYaa hai.. aapki yeh kavviSh dil meN utar gaYii.. aur mere liYe to sab sey baRii KhuShii kii baat yeh haii ki wo ab Theek haii. !
YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe aage bhee..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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mere pyarey chottu.......dil se shukriya ki tum meri adna si kavish ko bhi etna sanmaan detey ho.....main kushnaseeb hoon ki mujhe tuj jaisa bhai milla....khuda aisa bhai sabko de.....
duao.n ke saath
teri sister
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24th March 2008, 04:58 PM
Oye sonniyo tussi ki gal kar ditti....
Sannu tuhoddi ae nazam bhot hi vaddiya lagi...hunn rab nu saddi ilteja heggi ke saddi panjaabi kudi nu duniya bhar di khushiya dede...or tuhodde dil di muraad vellya hi puri ho jaye.....or saddi gudiya nu lakh lakh pyaar sadda.
oye ki panjaabi de vich galla kardi assi vi....vekhya sannu vi panjabi ondi e...
grazie
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25th March 2008, 05:38 AM
hi sunita,
aapki yeh tehreer dekh kar dil ko apna beeta kal yaad aa gaya. Haan, dear jis samay se aap jugri hain, bahut dukh datain hain aur inme hum apne ap ko asamarth pate hain, lekin don't loose heart dear.... its just a phase in your life, be strong and courageous and believe in yourself. Better times will soon show up.
In the mean time, keep writing and penning down your feelings, it helps.
take care
with best regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
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[quote=sunita virender;276775] Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
wah di apne bahut hi acha likha hai hum chahte hai ki apne is gazal me jo likha hai aisa kabhi na ho app jo bhi chahte ho vo humesha apke pass mange bina hi aa jaaye
aur humesha khush rahiye di me yahi dua karuga humesha apke liye kabhi apke samne andhera naa aaye
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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25th March 2008, 03:20 PM
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
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Khuda na kare apko koi gam mile
par khushian or hansi har pal mile
gam jab bhi chale apki aur
khuda kare raste main U-S-E ham mile
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Oye sonniyo tussi ki gal kar ditti....
Sannu tuhoddi ae nazam bhot hi vaddiya lagi...hunn rab nu saddi ilteja heggi ke saddi panjaabi kudi nu duniya bhar di khushiya dede...or tuhodde dil di muraad vellya hi puri ho jaye.....or saddi gudiya nu lakh lakh pyaar sadda.
oye ki panjaabi de vich galla kardi assi vi....vekhya sannu vi panjabi ondi e...
grazie
tuhoddi matko
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meri pyari matko..........teri punjabi padke bahut kushi hoe, aine pyar naal tu menu padiya te aine pyari jehi dua kiti mere laye
aida hi apni punjabi kudi da saath deNdiya rahna
bahut sare pyar naal
teri apni punjabi kudi
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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hi sunita,
aapki yeh tehreer dekh kar dil ko apna beeta kal yaad aa gaya. Haan, dear jis samay se aap jugri hain, bahut dukh datain hain aur inme hum apne ap ko asamarth pate hain, lekin don't loose heart dear.... its just a phase in your life, be strong and courageous and believe in yourself. Better times will soon show up.
In the mean time, keep writing and penning down your feelings, it helps.
take care
with best regards
aarya
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thanks aarya........bas aise hi to pyar ke lafzo.n mein dunia simti hue hai....aapka review dekh kar bahut apnepan ka ahsaas hua....yu hi saath rahna.
kush raho, duao.n ke saath
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Dosto bahut din phele yeh chand ahsaas maine kagaz par likhey thy, bas en ahsaaso.n ko aapke saath share karne ka mokka hi nahi mil raha tha, dosto yeh ahsaas tab mere zehan meiN aaye jis waqt meri nanhi si jaan (meri bitiya) operation theater meiN thi, us waqt apne ko bahut bebas aur tanha sa mahsoos kar rahi thi main, vaise to sab thy mere paas….par jo shakas mere liye sab kuch hai wahi nahi tha bas mere paas….to unhi ke liye hain yeh mere ahsaas…..
Kaash tum aa jate
Aaj kuch waqt ke liye paas mere, kaash tum aa jate,
Bahut tanha hoon main aaj, kaash tum aa jate,
Kabhi khud ko etna kamjor na hone diya maine,
Par aaj bikhar gaye hoon main, kaash tum aa jate,
Tumhi se milta hai housla harpal mujhe,
Chahiye aaj bahho.n ka sahara, kaash tum aa jate,
Barso.n se jee rahi hoon bin tere “Sajan”,
Aaj nahi guzar raha ek pal, kaash tum aa jate,
Waqt ki raftaar bhi jaise thum se gaye hai,
Thum na jaye “sunita” ki nabaz, kaash tum aa jate.
wah di apne bahut hi acha likha hai hum chahte hai ki apne is gazal me jo likha hai aisa kabhi na ho app jo bhi chahte ho vo humesha apke pass mange bina hi aa jaaye
aur humesha khush rahiye di me yahi dua karuga humesha apke liye kabhi apke samne andhera naa aaye
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sooooooooo chweet dinesh bhai.....kitni pyari payri dua ki hai aapne, bas mujhe yoon hi aapka pyar milta rahe......main kush hoon
aap bhi kush rahiye abaad rahiye
duao.n ke saath
aapki diiii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Khuda na kare apko koi gam mile
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gam jab bhi chale apki aur
khuda kare raste main U-S-E ham mile
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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boht khub masha allah
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12th April 2008, 08:07 AM
Hi Didi Ji...
kaise hai aap? aaj bahut dino baad aapki ghazal padh kar bahut hi aacha laga.. aur aapki beti kaise hain ab? dua karti hu aapka intezaar jaldi khatam ho .. aur khushiyaan se aapka ghar bhar jaye ... take care
aaur yu hi aate rahye
take care
aapki
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12th April 2008, 02:26 PM
hi sunita jee,
Eh aasmaan wale zameen par uttar kar dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh.......
aapka yeh vaala sher tho mujhe hamesha achha lagtha hee hai ...
par aaj tho mai bas...dekhthi reh gayi...
u have written really good...
Aapke kaalam tho har baar kaayal karthe hain...
If you want ur dreams to cum true...
WAKE UP...!
Love,
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13th April 2008, 03:41 PM
Mujhe bhi koi samjhao ki ye kya ho raha hai....mere bas main nahi hai itni shayari padhniii
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14th April 2008, 03:10 PM
AAP KE GAZAL KO THODA AUR BDHA RAHI HUN.
KASH TUM AA JATE,
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JIS DUNIYAME HAIN HAM BIKHRE ,
USI DUNIYAKO SWARNE KASH TU AA JATE,
JIS WAQT KO YAD KAR HAR PAL ROTE HAIN,
USI WAQT HASANE KASH TUM AA JATE,
HAM TO AKELE THE AUR AKELE HAIN,
FIR BHI HAMARA SATH DENE KASH TUM AA JATE.
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boht khub masha allah
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Hi Didi Ji...
kaise hai aap? aaj bahut dino baad aapki ghazal padh kar bahut hi aacha laga.. aur aapki beti kaise hain ab? dua karti hu aapka intezaar jaldi khatam ho .. aur khushiyaan se aapka ghar bhar jaye ... take care
aaur yu hi aate rahye
take care
aapki
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pyari mandeep...........meri bitiya ab theek hai, tumne meri poetry pasand ki bahut bahut shukriya....aur apni tarah bahut pyari si dua bhi ki mere liye...bahut accha laga.
kush raho aur yoon hi saath raho
tumhari diii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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hi sunita jee,
Eh aasmaan wale zameen par uttar kar dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh.......
aapka yeh vaala sher tho mujhe hamesha achha lagtha hee hai ...
par aaj tho mai bas...dekhthi reh gayi...
u have written really good...
Aapke kaalam tho har baar kaayal karthe hain...
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Dear simran..........etna pyara sa review padke dil kush ho gaya....dil se shukriya
kush raho
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Mujhe bhi koi samjhao ki ye kya ho raha hai....mere bas main nahi hai itni shayari padhniii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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AAP KE GAZAL KO THODA AUR BDHA RAHI HUN.
KASH TUM AA JATE,
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JIS DUNIYAME HAIN HAM BIKHRE ,
USI DUNIYAKO SWARNE KASH TU AA JATE,
JIS WAQT KO YAD KAR HAR PAL ROTE HAIN,
USI WAQT HASANE KASH TUM AA JATE,
HAM TO AKELE THE AUR AKELE HAIN,
FIR BHI HAMARA SATH DENE KASH TUM AA JATE.
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Prity accha laga.............aapne apne ahsaas mere ahsaao.n se milla diye...bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th April 2008, 09:38 PM
diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..
kaise hain aap?
abb kahan se shuru karun. har taraf is ghazal mein sirf...bebassi....majboori...intezaar aur dard hi nazar aata hai. hum aapke jazbaaton ko samaj sakte hain. lagta hai kaafi dard barra waqt tha jab aapne yeh ghazal likhi hogi. hum to aapko humesha hasta hua dekhna chahte haain. dhua to yehi hai k uppar vala aapki har khwaaish ko purri kare.
rab tuvanu chad-di kala che rakhe
tuvada
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Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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