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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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2nd April 2009, 07:13 PM
is that you
duffffeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
mindblowing job sweety.......... !
ab main aur kya boloon
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wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use
wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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kis kambakht ne kaid kiya hai tumhe..................
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2nd April 2009, 08:25 PM
wonderful thots...
you've this uncanny ability to express your feelings... and i learned that one dont have to suffer thru or go thru the exact emotions, to come out with something exceptional.. you keep surprising me with your creations and I simply love going thru them... keep on writing and writing in such a beautiful way... absolutely loved it...specially the last two lines... way to go....
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Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
beautiful ........
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
Waah . !! Aaah !!
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
Katl ..... kyaa baat hai ..
this time u r very simple with words and very much deep .....!!
this time salute u
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
Katl .......... very much in flow ... in thought .....
its like u r thinking thinking ..........
and burst ....!!
God bless
And keep writing .....
aaj jee bhar ke socho ..
aur kal likho ..........
aur iske darmiyaan ... un khyalo ko palo-poso .....
fir agle din lafzo mai parso
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3rd April 2009, 11:04 AM
Lamha ji,
Bahot achha or saccha likha hai.....sacch..ek aurat ki yahi to zindagi hoti hai...chaahe zamaana badal jaaye..lekin aurat khud ko dusro ke liye samarpit karna nahi chhodti...khudki aankho me aansoo ho bhale hi...lekin dusro ke hoto me hansi laati hai humesha...
very well done...
Grazie
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Lamha ji,
Bahot achha or saccha likha hai.....sacch..ek aurat ki yahi to zindagi hoti hai...chaahe zamaana badal jaaye..lekin aurat khud ko dusro ke liye samarpit karna nahi chhodti...khudki aankho me aansoo ho bhale hi...lekin dusro ke hoto me hansi laati hai humesha...
very well done...
Grazie
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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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Mashallah............................
Kya ghazal likhi hai Lamha,
Bahot hee jyadaa khoobsurat hai.......... aage kuch yahan likh saku aise words nahi hai mere pass.... to bas itna kahungi... aise hee likhti raho...aur mahefil raunak karti raho...
Khush raho
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SUPERBLY REVEALED THE MOST AGONISING FACT..........BRILLIANTLY X'PLAINED THE DUMBNESS IN TRUSTING SOMEONE BLINDLY.............EXCELLENT WAY OF POTRAYING A GAL IN GENERAL............ITS A GHAZAL WHICH X'PRESSED A PRIDE IN BEING A GAL.......HATS OFF TO U
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3rd April 2009, 03:30 PM
Aadaab
sabse pehle to mubaraqbaad ek aise mudde ko uthane ke liye,,, shayri ke lihaz se sahi .. aur jazbaatoN ke lihaaz se bhi .. mujhe pasand aya aapka ye kalaam..
par thoda ise side maiN se aake dekhte hai .. ladkiyaN aise likhte waqt koun se zamaane maiN pahunch jaati hai .. main bas sochta hi reh jaata huN .. maanta huN ki ab bhi hum kayiN jagahoN pe isi daur se guzar rahe hai .. par tab bhi ... ladki khud ko itna kamzor har jagah kyuN likhti hai ... jabki sach to ye hai .. ki ladkiyoN se jyada strong koi nahi hota hai ...
Khair tab bhi aapki kavish qaabil-e-tareef hai.. meri taraf se dheroN daad aapke liye
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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3rd April 2009, 04:07 PM
Wah so amazing thought deep from Heart deep then Ocean. wakai kabile tarif likha hai aapne. Ye nachiz ke alfazon me dum nahi aapki shyari ki tarif ke liye.
Thanks for sharing and han Daad from botom of my heart.
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3rd April 2009, 04:20 PM
LaMhaa:
namaste!
aapki koShiSh bahot hi achchee rahee.. aik alag hi mudde par liKhaa haii aapne.. aur apni koShiSh ke saath pooraa iNsaaf bhee kiyaa haii! KhuShii hu'ii aapko paRh ke..! ummid kartaa huuN aap aise hi liKhatee raheNgee aage bhee! daad!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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yuppppppppppppppp.....thats ME...........
thanx a lot dear.....yuhi saath dete rehna....
aur haaaaaa...............LAMHA ek PAL (moment)hai....pal ko bhi koi kaid kar sakta hai bhala??
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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3rd April 2009, 07:17 PM
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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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Lamhaa jee:
aap ki yeh koshish achchhi lagiii.. is ke liye daad qubool kar hi leejiye...... par mai.n personally aap ki poetry par kahii gayee baat se agree nahii.n kartaa.....aise lag rahahai ki 'aartee' chal rahii hai..........aur zeyaadah kuchh kahana Theek bhii nahii.n hai......
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wonderful thots...
you've this uncanny ability to express your feelings... and i learned that one dont have to suffer thru or go thru the exact emotions, to come out with something exceptional.. you keep surprising me with your creations and I simply love going thru them... keep on writing and writing in such a beautiful way... absolutely loved it...specially the last two lines... way to go....
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wo wo wo wo........itni izzat afzai ke kaabil to nahi hu mai...bas ek chhoti si koshish ki hai,jo tumhe pasand aayi....tumhari shukr guzaar hu....aise hi apna saath banaye rakhna....take care dear.
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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3rd April 2009, 08:07 PM
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wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use
wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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Ye kisne likha hai???????????????????
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Ye kisne likha hai???????????????????
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maine hi likha hai AMIT....koi shaq ??..........ye kyu pucha tumne??...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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Tu itna achha bhi likh leti hai......????????
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3rd April 2009, 10:10 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya
aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare
sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use
wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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so very true LAMHA sweety
ek ek shabd dil chu gayi...keep up dear
Regards
Praneeta
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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Katl .......... very much in flow ... in thought .....
its like u r thinking thinking ..........
and burst ....!!
God bless
And keep writing .....
aaj jee bhar ke socho ..
aur kal likho ..........
aur iske darmiyaan ... un khyalo ko palo-poso .....
fir agle din lafzo mai parso
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thank u soooooooooooo much JANUMANU JI.....aapne apna kimati waqt nikaal kiar muje padha iske liye mai aapki shukra guzar hu..apna saath yuhi banaye rakhna............................................ ..
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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Lamha ji,
Bahot achha or saccha likha hai.....sacch..ek aurat ki yahi to zindagi hoti hai...chaahe zamaana badal jaaye..lekin aurat khud ko dusro ke liye samarpit karna nahi chhodti...khudki aankho me aansoo ho bhale hi...lekin dusro ke hoto me hansi laati hai humesha...
very well done...
Grazie
Pooja
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bilkul thik kaha POOJA tumne.....izzat afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya....yuhi apna pyaar aur saath banaye rakhna...................thanx a ton................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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4th April 2009, 07:34 PM
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Mashallah............................
Kya ghazal likhi hai Lamha,
Bahot hee jyadaa khoobsurat hai.......... aage kuch yahan likh saku aise words nahi hai mere pass.... to bas itna kahungi... aise hee likhti raho...aur mahefil raunak karti raho...
Khush raho
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shukriya PURVI diiii............aapne meri is koshish ko itni izzat bakshi,iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya diiiiiii....yuhi apna pyaar apni is chhoti bahen pe banaye rakhna........thanx a ton...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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4th April 2009, 07:36 PM
thanx a ton sweety........tumne itna waqt nikaal kar muje padha uske liye shukriya....izzat afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya dear.....yuhi saath deti rehna.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 02:10 AM
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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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6th April 2009, 02:23 PM
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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya
aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare
sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use
wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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very nice lamha ladkiyo ke bare me jo aapne likha wo bilkul sahi ha,
magar ye bhi sach ha ke-
parindo.n ko par khol kar udna sikhaya nahi jata,
har jakham par marham lagaya nahi jata,
waqth banath ha bewafa insan ko 'anant'
ye soch kar usko bhulaya nahi jata.
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Aadaab
sabse pehle to mubaraqbaad ek aise mudde ko uthane ke liye,,, shayri ke lihaz se sahi .. aur jazbaatoN ke lihaaz se bhi .. mujhe pasand aya aapka ye kalaam..
par thoda ise side maiN se aake dekhte hai .. ladkiyaN aise likhte waqt koun se zamaane maiN pahunch jaati hai .. main bas sochta hi reh jaata huN .. maanta huN ki ab bhi hum kayiN jagahoN pe isi daur se guzar rahe hai .. par tab bhi ... ladki khud ko itna kamzor har jagah kyuN likhti hai ... jabki sach to ye hai .. ki ladkiyoN se jyada strong koi nahi hota hai ...
Khair tab bhi aapki kavish qaabil-e-tareef hai.. meri taraf se dheroN daad aapke liye
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thank u soooooooooo much KUNAL.......is na-cheez ko itni izzat bakshne ka bahut bahut shukriya............apna saath yuhi banaye rakhna.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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Wah so amazing thought deep from Heart deep then Ocean. wakai kabile tarif likha hai aapne. Ye nachiz ke alfazon me dum nahi aapki shyari ki tarif ke liye.
Thanks for sharing and han Daad from botom of my heart.
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aap ka bahut bahut shukriya KWAHISH ji....meri is koshish ko aapne itna pyaar diya uske liye thanx a ton....yuhi apna pyaar aur saath banaye rakhna....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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wowww............. i love Na.... CHEEZ
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LaMhaa:
namaste!
aapki koShiSh bahot hi achchee rahee.. aik alag hi mudde par liKhaa haii aapne.. aur apni koShiSh ke saath pooraa iNsaaf bhee kiyaa haii! KhuShii hu'ii aapko paRh ke..! ummid kartaa huuN aap aise hi liKhatee raheNgee aage bhee! daad!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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shukriya bhaiyya..........aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi, mai aabhari hu....aap aise hi saath dete rahiyega to mai bhi aise hi likhti rahungi....reply karne ka shukriya..........take care bhaiyya...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 06:29 PM
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Lamhaa jee:
aap ki yeh koshish achchhi lagiii.. is ke liye daad qubool kar hi leejiye...... par mai.n personally aap ki poetry par kahii gayee baat se agree nahii.n kartaa.....aise lag rahahai ki 'aartee' chal rahii hai..........aur zeyaadah kuchh kahana Theek bhii nahii.n hai......
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shukriya MAYANK.......meri is baat se agree karna ya naa karna ye sab ka apna apna faisla hai..par ek baat zaroor kehna chahungi ke zamana bahut badal gaya hai...aaj ki ladki aasmaan ki unchaiyon ko chhu rahi hai, par kahi na kahi , aaj bhi ladkiyon ki haalat aisi hi jaisi hamesha se thi....wo kitni bhi aage badh jaye, par fir bhi uske farz aur majbooriyan aaj bhi uske paaon ki zanjeer bani hui hai....kartavya ke naam par aaj bhi usse apni khushiyon ki bali deni padti hai.....bas aur kya kahu......
thanx anyways.......................saath banaye rakhiyega.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 06:31 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 06:33 PM
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Bahut khoob....
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aap ka bahut bahut shukriya janab.....................keep supporting.........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 06:36 PM
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very nice lamha ladkiyo ke bare me jo aapne likha wo bilkul sahi ha,
magar ye bhi sach ha ke-
parindo.n ko par khol kar udna sikhaya nahi jata,
har jakham par marham lagaya nahi jata,
waqth banath ha bewafa insan ko 'anant'
ye soch kar usko bhulaya nahi jata.
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shukriya DAYANAND ji.......meri baat se agree karne ke liye thanx....yuhi saath dete rahiyega............................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 06:37 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th April 2009, 06:39 PM
Kabhi naiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ...................
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
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6th April 2009, 10:39 PM
..Aji ek dusare ke support se hi.. Insaan ka hausala badta hai..
.. waise bhi Hum aap ke " Gazaloo " Fan hai..
..Keep it up..
u will always hav a reply frm me..
tk.Cr..
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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6th April 2009, 10:52 PM
lamha ji sala walekom,
bohut hi pyari aur sachhi gazal aapne share ki hai
shayad hi itni sachayi maine koi ghazal main mehsus kiya hoga
very much true aur bohut hi shukra guzar hu main ke aapne
itni pyari ghazal share kiya aapne yuhi likhte rahiye
take care lamha ji
Har ek prem kahaani main,
mera hi kissa aata hai..........
surat main apni dekhu,
aur nazar woh aata hai..........
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7th April 2009, 11:07 PM
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~KYU ZINDAGI APNI NAHI~
Hoti hai zindagi apni magar apni nahi kyu ladkiyo ki shaam-o-sahar apni nahi
unke liye ankho ko hai jheel banati kabhi bhi hoti jinki nazar apni nahi
khwaab uske palko pe saja leti hain aisa safar jiski gard-e-safar apni nahi
safar ke anjaam pe maloom hua use jispe chal rahi thi wo rehguzar apni nahi
har kisi ke dard ko apna hai banaya
aur apne dard ki hi khabar apni nahi
jisse mile dhoka usi pai yaqeen kare
sheher-e-wafaa ki koi dagar apni nahi
wo shokh titli hai "LAMHA" ke udne do use
wo bani sabki par khud humsafar apni nahi
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kya baat hai lamha aaj kal to tum badal gai ho pahele achhi ghazal likhti thi lekin ab to mind-blowing ghazal likhna shuru kar diya hai sach me tumne apni is ghazal me ladki ka bahot hi achha ahesas baya kiya hai aur ye ghazal sari ladkiyo ko dedicate ki hai yahi sabse badi baat hai
Woh Keh Gaye Ki Mera Intezaar Mat Karna,
Main Kahu Bhi To Muj Pe Aitbaar Mat Karna,
Wo Kehte Hai Ke Mujhe Tumse Mohabaat Nahi,
Par Tum Kisi Aur Se Pyaar Mat Karna…!!!
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7th April 2009, 11:09 PM
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..Aji ek dusare ke support se hi.. Insaan ka hausala badta hai..
.. waise bhi Hum aap ke " Gazaloo " Fan hai..
..Keep it up..
u will always hav a reply frm me..
tk.Cr..
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thanx a lot again dear............................................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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