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Eak Jahil ko jo aalim se ulajhte dekha ( Qadeertoopchi ) - 13th February 2011, 01:27 PM
Yaarane Mahefil aadab o tasleemat ,,

Meri IK tazah ghazal Jisse 11 Feb-2011 ko Gulbarga shareef me munaqid ik Kul-hind mushaire me parhne ka sharf hasil howa ...Aane wale saturday raat 11 baje ap ETV urdu pe dekh sakte hain ...

Ab apki nazar kar raha hon umid hai apni khimti aara se nawazenge



Aaj Apno hi ko apno se jhagadte dekha
Humne apne hi gulistaa.N ujadte dekha

Humko ahesas ki ranaai ne ghera aise
Ik shajar humne bhi sahera me ubharte dekha

Bhooke Bacho.N ki Tadap dekh ke rote rote
Maa.N ki ankho.N se lahoo ko bhi tapakte dekha

Aaj Andaza howa ilm ki daulat ka mujhe
Eak jahil ko jo aalim se ulajhte dekha

Ho mubarak tumhe shamsheer hi ,lekin humne
Mas"halo.N ko to mahubbat se sulajhte dekha

Neend se jubse mai Maherom howa hun aye "Qadeer"
Khoob ko toot'te Dekha hai , Bikharte dekha


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13th February 2011, 01:34 PM
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Yaarane Mahefil aadab o tasleemat ,,

Meri IK tazah ghazal Jisse 11 Feb-2011 ko Gulbarga shareef me munaqid ik Kul-hind mushaire me parhne ka sharf hasil howa ...Aane wale saturday raat 11 baje ap ETV urdu pe dekh sakte hain ...

Ab apki nazar kar raha hon umid hai apni khimti aara se nawazenge



Aaj Apno hi ko apno se jhagadte dekha
Humne apne hi gulistaa.N ujadte dekha

Humko ahesas ki ranaai ne ghera aise
Ik shajar humne bhi sahera me ubharte dekha

Bhooke Bacho.N ki Tadap dekh ke rote rote
Maa.N ki ankho.N se lahoo ko bhi tapakte dekha

Aaj Andaza howa ilm ki daulat ka mujhe
Eak jahil ko jo aalim se ulajhte dekha

Ho mubarak tumhe shamsheer hi ,lekin humne
Mas"halo.N ko to mahubbat se sulajhte dekha

Neend se jubse mai Maherom howa hun aye "Qadeer"
Khoob ko toot'te Dekha hai , Bikharte dekha


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Waah, mashallah Qadeer Ji...! Kya khoob likhaa aapne, paDhkar bahut khushi houi...!

Maqtaa khaaskar pasand hai hameiN...!

YuNhi aate raheiN apne behtareen kalaam ke saath, ok...?

Duaaon ke saath


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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13th February 2011, 01:43 PM
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Waah, mashallah Qadeer Ji...! Kya khoob likhaa aapne, paDhkar bahut khushi houi...!

Maqtaa khaaskar pasand hai hameiN...!

YuNhi aate raheiN apne behtareen kalaam ke saath, ok...?

Duaaon ke saath

aadab ,,

Apsi Buradwar shaqsiyat se hukm badoli karna gunah hai ...apke israr pe ghazal lagai thi aur apne apni raai dekar gareeb ki laaj rakhli ...Inshallah mustaqbil me bhi apni duao.N se nawazte rahenge ..allah apko umr-e-khizr ata kare ..khush rahen hamesha ...


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13th February 2011, 01:50 PM
Bahut shukriyaa, Janaab...!

Aap ki duaa sar ankhoN par...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?

Regards


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13th February 2011, 02:59 PM
Humko ahesas ki ranaai ne ghera aise
Ik shajar humne bhi sahera me ubharte dekha

Bhooke Bacho.N ki Tadap dekh ke rote rote
Maa.N ki ankho.N se lahoo ko bhi tapakte dekha

Aaj Andaza howa ilm ki daulat ka mujhe
Eak jahil ko jo aalim se ulajhte dekha

Very Impressive .... Qadeer Sahab !

Bahut zindagi ke kareeb se likhe ashaar bayaan kiye hai aapne ... ek umdaa soch ko acchi khaasi uuNchaai de ke ghazal ko aur asardaar banaa diyaa janaab ... iss khoobsurat ghazal ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai .. qubuul farmaayeN ... aise hi behtreen ghazal ke saath aate rahen aur likhte raheN aage bhi ... khush rahen .. !

duaaoN ke saath ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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