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Re: hi - 3rd September 2006, 07:38 AM

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chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huie hai.....

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hi - 4th September 2006, 12:19 PM

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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....

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barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....

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kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....

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4th September 2006, 12:31 PM

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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....

'veer'

2nd sher

barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....

dilip

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kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....

'veer'

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unko to dil me basa liya hai maine hamesha k liye,
maine bhi unke liye kuch armaan sajaye huye hai..........

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6th September 2006, 10:58 AM

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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....

'veer'

2nd sher

barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....

dilip

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kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....

'veer'

4th sher

unko to dil me basa liya hai maine hamesha k liye,
maine bhi unke liye kuch armaan sajaye huye hai..........

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dosto se to dushman hi bhaley hai jo naam to kabhi lete hai,
phoolo se kantey hi acchey jo humey abhi tak apnaye huey hai...

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phoolo se kantey hi acchey jo humey abhi tak apnaye huey hai...

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dhaya hai sitam tune mujhper umarbahr sitamgar bankar
tere baad teri yaado.n ko hum seene se lagaye huey hai....

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7th September 2006, 05:10 PM

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dhaya hai sitam tune mujhper umarbahr sitamgar bankar
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umr bhar diya hai mera saath tumne humsafar bankar,
ab imtihaaney waffa hai to janey kyu nazrey jukaey huey hai..

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beshak kat jayega safar jo chalti rahegi tu youn hi sath mere,
imtihane wafa ne kuchh shool seene main chubhaye huey hai...

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beshak kat jayega safar jo chalti rahegi tu youn hi sath mere,
imtihane wafa ne kuchh shool seene main chubhaye huey hai...

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mujhe lagta hai isme kuch sudhar ki jaroorat hai.... aap ise sudhar sakte hain ya 8th sher dubara post kar sakte hain....
dilip sa mai kuch thik karna hai to woh rajveer ji hi kar saktey hai, agar thik hai to unse request hai ki pls aaye aur naye gazal shuru karey.......!


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hi - 8th September 2006, 09:59 AM

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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....
'veer'
2nd sher
barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....
dilip
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kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....
'veer'
4th sher
unko dil main basa liya hai maine dharkan ki manind yaro,
unhone bhee dil main mere liye kuch armaan sajaye huye hai....
--dhaval--
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dosto se to dushman hi bhaley hai jo naam to kabhi lete hai,
phoolo se kantey hi acchey jo humey abhi tak apnaye huye hai...
-sunita virender

6th sher
dhaya hai sitam tune mujhper umarbahr sitamgar bankar
tere baad teri yaado.n ko hum seene se lagaye huye hai....
dilip
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umr bhar diya hai mera saath tumne humsafar bankar dekho,
ajj imthiyaan-e- waffa hai to kiyon tu nazrey jukaey huye hai..
-sunita virender
8th sher
kat jayega beshak safar jo tu chalti rahygi humsafar banke,
imtihan-e- wafa ne kuchh shool seene main chubhaye huey hai...
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bhut achi or dilkash gazal bani hai meri taraf se app sab dosto ko mubarakbaad......yu hee saath dete rehna......raj.....


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hi - 8th September 2006, 10:18 AM

dosto ajj ek naya agaaz karne ja raha hoon umeed hai app saath denge.....

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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....

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Re: hi - 8th September 2006, 10:51 AM

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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
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raahey - waffa main mera haath kahi tum chod na dena,
mushkil hai yeh raah phir bhi mere pyar ki manzil tu hai...

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hi - 8th September 2006, 12:23 PM

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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....

'veer'

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raahey - waffa main mera haath kahi tum chod na dena,
mushkil hai yeh raah phir bhi mere pyar ki manzil tu hai...

-sunita virender

sunita ji weldone......bhut acha kaha ye share.....

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meri kashti ko toofano se koi khauf nahi mere sanam,
jeewan sagar ke tufano ke aage jab tak mera sahil tu hai.....

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8th September 2006, 01:22 PM

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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....

'veer'

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raahey - waffa main mera haath kahi tum chod na dena,
mushkil hai yeh raah phir bhi mere pyar ki manzil tu hai...

-sunita virender

sunita ji weldone......bhut acha kaha ye share.....

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meri kashti ko toofano se koi khauf nahi mere sanam,
jeewan sagar ke tufano ke aage jab tak mera sahil tu hai.....

'veer'


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har raat tumhare liye sajai hai khwabo se maine,
mere is sajaye hue khwabo ki sachchai tu hai....................


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sorry big b chota sher likh diya tha, and thank u dilip


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meri chahat sirf tere liye ,meri chahat ki MANZIL tu hai.......


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sorry big b chota sher likh diya tha, and thank u dilip


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mere pyaar ka ehsaas tu hai,is ehsas ka vishwas tu hai,
meri chahat sirf tere liye ,meri chahat ki MANZIL tu hai.......


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hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......

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hi - 11th September 2006, 11:13 AM

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bool jata hoo.n sab kucch maine teri baho.n main aakar,
hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......

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tum mano na mano mujhe yakee hai yahi mohabat hai,
main teri chhahat main gafil, meri arrzu main gafil tu hai......

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hi - 11th September 2006, 12:26 PM

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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi thi jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN mai thi mai aur meri dhadkan mai tu hai....

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sunita ji is share main app kaffiye se chuk gai thee maine isko thora daruusat kiya hai ,gar bura lage to maaf kar dena....raj..

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teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....

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hi - 11th September 2006, 05:13 PM

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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi hai jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....

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kiyon tu mere mehboob ki khubsurti se jalta hai aakhir,
chaand tu hoga hasee to hoga meri nazar main zahil tu hai.....

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Re: hi - 11th September 2006, 05:22 PM

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kiyon tu mere mehboob ki khubsurti se jalta hai aakhir,
chaand tu hoga hasee to hoga meri nazar main zahil tu hai.....

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Re: hi - 11th September 2006, 07:32 PM

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5t sher

bool jata hoo.n sab kucch maine teri baho.n main aakar,
hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......

dilip

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tum mano na mano mujhe yakee hai yahi mohabat hai,
main teri chhahat main gafil, meri arrzu main gafil tu hai......

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ab ye gafil kya hai.
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mere jaise kam dimaag vale bhi apna dimaag lagane lagte hai aise shabdon me.

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Re: hi - 11th September 2006, 07:39 PM

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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi hai jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....

-sunita virender

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kiyon tu mere mehboob ki khubsurti se jalta hai aakhir,
chaand tu hoga hasee to hoga meri nazar main zahil tu hai.....

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sorry veer ji fir se gustakhi kar di
ab ye zahil kya hai iska kya matlab hota hai. maaf karna ab aap shabd na jane kaha kaha se late hai jo samajh nahi ate mein kya karu. aur agar mere kuch samajh nahi aata na to mera dimag kharab ho jata hai. sp plz

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hi - 13th September 2006, 12:11 PM

dosto pichli gazal poori huie ab ek naya agaaz phir se.....

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zakham-e-jigar ko ab tak humme seena na aiya,
mere khushak sahil pe ab tak koi safeena na aiya.....

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Re: hi - 13th September 2006, 02:43 PM

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Re: Re: hi - 13th September 2006, 03:10 PM

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Tukde tukde ho gaya dil tere sitam sahte sahte
liye baithe hain in tukdo ko hame seena na aaya

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aapni barbaadi ka elzaam tumko kyu du mai,
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hi - 13th September 2006, 03:14 PM

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zakham-e-jigar ko ab tak humme seena na aiya,
mere khushak sahil pe ab tak koi safeena na aiya.....

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Tukde tukde ho gaya dil tere sitam sahte sahte
liye baithe hain in tukdo ko hame seena na aaya

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aapni barbaadi ka elzaam tumko kyu du mai,
mujko hi aaj tak kushiyo ke sang jeena na aaya..

-sunita virender

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guzrne ko to sadiya guzar gai tere intzaar main,
nahi aaya to bass tere wade ka maheena na aaya....

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guzrne ko to sadiya guzar gai tere intzaar main,
nahi aaya to bass tere wade ka maheena na aaya....

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yadpi moon sahab ka ye sher sahi kafiye pr nahi hai per ise sahi karne ka adhikar sirf raj sahab ko hai is liye mera next sher hazir hai

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tabiyat apni ghabrati hai ab is bewafao ki duniya main
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yadpi moon sahab ka ye sher sahi kafiye pr nahi hai per ise sahi karne ka adhikar sirf raj sahab ko hai is liye mera next sher hazir hai

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tabiyat apni ghabrati hai ab is bewafao ki duniya main
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hi - 15th September 2006, 12:57 PM

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Re: hi - 15th September 2006, 02:04 PM

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Re: hi - 15th September 2006, 02:24 PM

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'veer' hamari nazar main tujhsa koi kameena na aaya.....

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raj yeh gazal bahut hansi ke saath anjaam tak pahunchi hai, appka last wala share pad kar bahut majja aaya. ab pls naye shuruyaat kijiye.

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19th September 2006, 10:35 AM

dosto pls es gazal ko shuru karne ki gustakhi ki hai, umeed hai aap mera saath dogey.

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19th September 2006, 10:41 AM

dosto pls es gazal ko shuru karne ki gustakhi ki hai, umeed hai aap mera saath dogey.

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hi - 19th September 2006, 01:22 PM

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sath deta hu tera chalne ka aagaaz to kar,
mujhe bewafa kenhe wale tu wafa to kar....

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phir mangna mujhse wafa ka hisaab dost,
pehle ek aadh daffa mujhse tu wafa to kar.......

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Re: hi - 19th September 2006, 01:33 PM

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2nd sher

sath deta hu tera chalne ka aagaaz to kar,
mujhe bewafa kenhe wale tu wafa to kar....

dhaval


3rd sare

phir mangna mujhse wafa ka hisaab dost,
pehle ek aadh daffa mujhse tu wafa to kar.......

'veer'
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maine nibhayi.n hai wafadari ki sab kasme,
un kasmo ka koi haqk aaj tu ada to kar.....

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Re: Re: hi - 19th September 2006, 02:06 PM

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maine nibhayi.n hai wafadari ki sab kasme,
un kasmo ka koi haqk aaj tu ada to kar.....

dilip
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ab sahi nahi jati hai zamane ki dushbariya,
eh kudha es dard se mujko juda to kar.....

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Re: Re: Re: hi - 19th September 2006, 02:14 PM

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ab sahi nahi jati hai zamane ki dushbariya,
eh kudha es dard se mujko juda to kar.....

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Re: Re: Re: Re: hi - 20th September 2006, 03:01 PM

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hum dil to kaya rooh main uttar jayegey,
tu ek baar ba-waffa ki tarah waffa to kar...

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hi - 20th September 2006, 03:48 PM

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hum dil to kaya rooh main uttar jayegey,
tu ek baar ba-waffa ki tarah waffa to kar...

-sunita virender

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mujhe apne tan badan main mehsoos karoge,
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