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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huie hai....
'veer'
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barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huie hai.....
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4th September 2006, 12:19 PM
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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....
'veer'
2nd sher
barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....
dilip
3rd share
kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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4th September 2006, 12:31 PM
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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....
'veer'
2nd sher
barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....
dilip
3rd share
kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....
'veer'
4th sher
unko to dil me basa liya hai maine hamesha k liye,
maine bhi unke liye kuch armaan sajaye huye hai..........
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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....
'veer'
2nd sher
barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....
dilip
3rd share
kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....
'veer'
4th sher
unko to dil me basa liya hai maine hamesha k liye,
maine bhi unke liye kuch armaan sajaye huye hai..........
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dosto se to dushman hi bhaley hai jo naam to kabhi lete hai,
phoolo se kantey hi acchey jo humey abhi tak apnaye huey hai...
-sunita virender
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7th September 2006, 01:27 PM
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dosto se to dushman hi bhaley hai jo naam to kabhi lete hai,
phoolo se kantey hi acchey jo humey abhi tak apnaye huey hai...
-sunita virender
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6th sher
dhaya hai sitam tune mujhper umarbahr sitamgar bankar
tere baad teri yaado.n ko hum seene se lagaye huey hai....
dilip
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dhaya hai sitam tune mujhper umarbahr sitamgar bankar
tere baad teri yaado.n ko hum seene se lagaye huey hai....
dilip
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umr bhar diya hai mera saath tumne humsafar bankar,
ab imtihaaney waffa hai to janey kyu nazrey jukaey huey hai..
-sunita virender
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7th September 2006, 05:20 PM
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umr bhar diya hai mera saath tumne humsafar bankar,
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8th sher
beshak kat jayega safar jo chalti rahegi tu youn hi sath mere,
imtihane wafa ne kuchh shool seene main chubhaye huey hai...
dilip
mujhe lagta hai isme kuch sudhar ki jaroorat hai.... aap ise sudhar sakte hain ya 8th sher dubara post kar sakte hain....
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beshak kat jayega safar jo chalti rahegi tu youn hi sath mere,
imtihane wafa ne kuchh shool seene main chubhaye huey hai...
dilip
mujhe lagta hai isme kuch sudhar ki jaroorat hai.... aap ise sudhar sakte hain ya 8th sher dubara post kar sakte hain....
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8th September 2006, 09:59 AM
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dushmano ki baat chhoro humne dost bhee ajmaye huie hai,
kaanto se nahi gilla humne phoolon se zakham khaye huye hai....
'veer'
2nd sher
barwad karke apna gulista.n, sadko main hum aaye huie hai,
chaha tha jinhe jaan se badkar unhi ke hum sataye huye hai.....
dilip
3rd share
kabar main bhee unki kush yaadain to saath rahe hamare,
hume wahi dafnana yaaro yaha unke khat dafnaye huye hai.....
'veer'
4th sher
unko dil main basa liya hai maine dharkan ki manind yaro,
unhone bhee dil main mere liye kuch armaan sajaye huye hai....
--dhaval--
5th share
dosto se to dushman hi bhaley hai jo naam to kabhi lete hai,
phoolo se kantey hi acchey jo humey abhi tak apnaye huye hai...
-sunita virender
6th sher
dhaya hai sitam tune mujhper umarbahr sitamgar bankar
tere baad teri yaado.n ko hum seene se lagaye huye hai....
dilip
7th share
umr bhar diya hai mera saath tumne humsafar bankar dekho,
ajj imthiyaan-e- waffa hai to kiyon tu nazrey jukaey huye hai..
-sunita virender
8th sher
kat jayega beshak safar jo tu chalti rahygi humsafar banke,
imtihan-e- wafa ne kuchh shool seene main chubhaye huey hai...
dilip
bhut achi or dilkash gazal bani hai meri taraf se app sab dosto ko mubarakbaad......yu hee saath dete rehna......raj.....
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8th September 2006, 10:18 AM
dosto ajj ek naya agaaz karne ja raha hoon umeed hai app saath denge.....
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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....
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dosto is gazal main kafia hai...qatil....dil....mehfil....manzil.....hasil.. ..buzdil....gafil......sahil....or is main ....tu hai.....radeef hai......ab app isko aage barao.....good luck.....raj......
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8th September 2006, 10:51 AM
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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....
'veer'
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raahey - waffa main mera haath kahi tum chod na dena,
mushkil hai yeh raah phir bhi mere pyar ki manzil tu hai...
-sunita virender
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8th September 2006, 12:23 PM
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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....
'veer'
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raahey - waffa main mera haath kahi tum chod na dena,
mushkil hai yeh raah phir bhi mere pyar ki manzil tu hai...
-sunita virender
sunita ji weldone......bhut acha kaha ye share.....
3rd share
meri kashti ko toofano se koi khauf nahi mere sanam,
jeewan sagar ke tufano ke aage jab tak mera sahil tu hai.....
'veer'
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8th September 2006, 01:22 PM
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mere har safar ki manzil tu hai,har duaa ka hasil tu hai,
phir bhe tujhe chhahta hoon janta hoon mera qatil tu hai....
'veer'
2nd share
raahey - waffa main mera haath kahi tum chod na dena,
mushkil hai yeh raah phir bhi mere pyar ki manzil tu hai...
-sunita virender
sunita ji weldone......bhut acha kaha ye share.....
3rd share
meri kashti ko toofano se koi khauf nahi mere sanam,
jeewan sagar ke tufano ke aage jab tak mera sahil tu hai.....
'veer'
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har raat tumhare liye sajai hai khwabo se maine,
mere is sajaye hue khwabo ki sachchai tu hai....................
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10th September 2006, 10:43 AM
sorry big b chota sher likh diya tha, and thank u dilip
4th sher
mere pyaar ka ehsaas tu hai,is ehsas ka vishwas tu hai,
meri chahat sirf tere liye ,meri chahat ki MANZIL tu hai.......
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10th September 2006, 10:55 AM
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sorry big b chota sher likh diya tha, and thank u dilip
4th sher
mere pyaar ka ehsaas tu hai,is ehsas ka vishwas tu hai,
meri chahat sirf tere liye ,meri chahat ki MANZIL tu hai.......
--dhaval--
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5t sher
bool jata hoo.n sab kucch maine teri baho.n main aakar,
hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......
dilip
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11th September 2006, 11:13 AM
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bool jata hoo.n sab kucch maine teri baho.n main aakar,
hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......
dilip
6th share
tum mano na mano mujhe yakee hai yahi mohabat hai,
main teri chhahat main gafil, meri arrzu main gafil tu hai......
,veer'
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11th September 2006, 11:33 AM
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bool jata hoo.n sab kucch maine teri baho.n main aakar,
hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......
dilip
6th share
tum mano na mano mujhe yakee hai yahi mohabat hai,
main teri chhahat main gafil, meri arrzu main gafil tu hai......
,veer'
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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi thi jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN mai thi mai aur meri dhadkan mai tu hai....
-sunita virender
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11th September 2006, 12:26 PM
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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi thi jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN mai thi mai aur meri dhadkan mai tu hai....
-sunita virender
sunita ji is share main app kaffiye se chuk gai thee maine isko thora daruusat kiya hai ,gar bura lage to maaf kar dena....raj..
7th share
yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi hai jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....
-sunita virender
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11th September 2006, 05:13 PM
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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi hai jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....
-sunita virender
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kiyon tu mere mehboob ki khubsurti se jalta hai aakhir,
chaand tu hoga hasee to hoga meri nazar main zahil tu hai.....
'veer'
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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi hai jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....
-sunita virender
8th share
kiyon tu mere mehboob ki khubsurti se jalta hai aakhir,
chaand tu hoga hasee to hoga meri nazar main zahil tu hai.....
'veer'
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5t sher
bool jata hoo.n sab kucch maine teri baho.n main aakar,
hoo.n kitna khushkismat main ki mujhko hasail tu hai......
dilip
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tum mano na mano mujhe yakee hai yahi mohabat hai,
main teri chhahat main gafil, meri arrzu main gafil tu hai......
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ab mein na apse kuch puchne vali hu veer ji aap confuse bahot karte hai aapne ajeeb ajeeb se shabdon se.
ab ye gafil kya hai.
niche likha kijiye aise shabdon ka meaning
mere jaise kam dimaag vale bhi apna dimaag lagane lagte hai aise shabdon me.
aapki dost
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yeh sapna nahi ek haqiqat hi hai jo kal gujar gaya,
teri bahhoN main mai meri dhadkan mai shamil tu hai....
-sunita virender
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kiyon tu mere mehboob ki khubsurti se jalta hai aakhir,
chaand tu hoga hasee to hoga meri nazar main zahil tu hai.....
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sorry veer ji fir se gustakhi kar di
ab ye zahil kya hai iska kya matlab hota hai. maaf karna ab aap shabd na jane kaha kaha se late hai jo samajh nahi ate mein kya karu. aur agar mere kuch samajh nahi aata na to mera dimag kharab ho jata hai. sp plz
samjhaiye mujhe
aapki dost
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13th September 2006, 12:11 PM
dosto pichli gazal poori huie ab ek naya agaaz phir se.....
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mere khushak sahil pe ab tak koi safeena na aiya.....
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dosto is gazal ka kaffiya hai....seena....safeena....peena....jeena......pas eena....nageena....haseena....meena....or iska radeef hai.....na aiya.....ab app isko aage barao.......raj.......
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zakham-e-jigar ko ab tak humme seena na aiya,
mere khushak sahil pe ab tak koi safeena na aiya.....
2nd sher
Tukde tukde ho gaya dil tere sitam sahte sahte
liye baithe hain in tukdo ko hame seena na aaya
dilip
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13th September 2006, 03:10 PM
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zakham-e-jigar ko ab tak humme seena na aiya,
mere khushak sahil pe ab tak koi safeena na aiya.....
2nd sher
Tukde tukde ho gaya dil tere sitam sahte sahte
liye baithe hain in tukdo ko hame seena na aaya
dilip
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aapni barbaadi ka elzaam tumko kyu du mai,
mujko hi aaj tak kushiyo ke sang jeena na aaya..
-sunita virender
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13th September 2006, 03:14 PM
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zakham-e-jigar ko ab tak humme seena na aiya,
mere khushak sahil pe ab tak koi safeena na aiya.....
2nd sher
Tukde tukde ho gaya dil tere sitam sahte sahte
liye baithe hain in tukdo ko hame seena na aaya
dilip
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aapni barbaadi ka elzaam tumko kyu du mai,
mujko hi aaj tak kushiyo ke sang jeena na aaya..
-sunita virender
4th share
guzrne ko to sadiya guzar gai tere intzaar main,
nahi aaya to bass tere wade ka maheena na aaya....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th September 2006, 09:35 PM
4th share
guzrne ko to sadiya guzar gai tere intzaar main,
nahi aaya to bass tere wade ka maheena na aaya....
'veer'
5th sher
Hum to tere her jhoot ko sach maantay aye hain
nahi aya to tujhay hi aetbaar qayam rakhna na aaya...
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15th September 2006, 11:49 AM
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guzrne ko to sadiya guzar gai tere intzaar main,
nahi aaya to bass tere wade ka maheena na aaya....
'veer'
5th sher
Hum to tere her jhoot ko sach maantay aye hain
nahi aya to tujhay hi aetbaar qayam rakhna na aaya...
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yadpi moon sahab ka ye sher sahi kafiye pr nahi hai per ise sahi karne ka adhikar sirf raj sahab ko hai is liye mera next sher hazir hai
6th sher
tabiyat apni ghabrati hai ab is bewafao ki duniya main
ye wo duniya hai jisme.n hame.n kabhi jeena na aaya..
dilip
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Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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15th September 2006, 12:34 PM
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yadpi moon sahab ka ye sher sahi kafiye pr nahi hai per ise sahi karne ka adhikar sirf raj sahab ko hai is liye mera next sher hazir hai
6th sher
tabiyat apni ghabrati hai ab is bewafao ki duniya main
ye wo duniya hai jisme.n hame.n kabhi jeena na aaya..
dilip
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7th share
yu to duniya ke diye sab dard hum hans ke seh gaye,
nahi aaya to humey teri judai ka zahar peena na aaya.
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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15th September 2006, 12:57 PM
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yu to duniya ke diye sab dard hum hans ke seh gaye,
nahi aaya to humey teri judai ka zahar peena na aaya.
-sunita virender
8th share
zamane ki aankho se aansu bhee churana chhahta hai,
'veer' hamari nazar main tujhsa koi kameena na aaya.....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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15th September 2006, 02:04 PM
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7th share
yu to duniya ke diye sab dard hum hans ke seh gaye,
nahi aaya to humey teri judai ka zahar peena na aaya.
-sunita virender
8th share
zamane ki aankho se aansu bhee churana chhahta hai,
'veer' hamari nazar main tujhsa koi kameena na aaya.....
'veer'
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veer ji bura na mano apke sher ki last ki line padh ke hansi aagai.
lekin sabne yahan bahot khoob likha hai ji.
lage rahiye. mera kaam hai padhna aap sab ka kaam hai likhna to likhiye unhi ok ji
gratse
aapki dost
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15th September 2006, 02:24 PM
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7th share
yu to duniya ke diye sab dard hum hans ke seh gaye,
nahi aaya to humey teri judai ka zahar peena na aaya.
-sunita virender
8th share
zamane ki aankho se aansu bhee churana chhahta hai,
'veer' hamari nazar main tujhsa koi kameena na aaya.....
'veer'
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raj yeh gazal bahut hansi ke saath anjaam tak pahunchi hai, appka last wala share pad kar bahut majja aaya. ab pls naye shuruyaat kijiye.
appki dost
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19th September 2006, 10:35 AM
dosto pls es gazal ko shuru karne ki gustakhi ki hai, umeed hai aap mera saath dogey.
1st share
eh dost mere gum ka kuch to dawa kar,
sakoon nahi to na sahi mere marney ki dua kar......
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th September 2006, 10:41 AM
dosto pls es gazal ko shuru karne ki gustakhi ki hai, umeed hai aap mera saath dogey.
1st share
eh dost mere gum ka kuch to dawa kar,
sakoon nahi to na sahi mere marney ki dua kar......
-sunita virender
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eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh.........
2nd sher
sath deta hu main tera chalne ki shuruat kar,
rukna tu thodi der k liye aneka mera intezar kar...................
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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hi -
19th September 2006, 01:22 PM
2nd sher
sath deta hu tera chalne ka aagaaz to kar,
mujhe bewafa kenhe wale tu wafa to kar....
dhaval
3rd sare
phir mangna mujhse wafa ka hisaab dost,
pehle ek aadh daffa mujhse tu wafa to kar.......
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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19th September 2006, 01:33 PM
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2nd sher
sath deta hu tera chalne ka aagaaz to kar,
mujhe bewafa kenhe wale tu wafa to kar....
dhaval
3rd sare
phir mangna mujhse wafa ka hisaab dost,
pehle ek aadh daffa mujhse tu wafa to kar.......
'veer'
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maine nibhayi.n hai wafadari ki sab kasme,
un kasmo ka koi haqk aaj tu ada to kar.....
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
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19th September 2006, 02:06 PM
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4th share
maine nibhayi.n hai wafadari ki sab kasme,
un kasmo ka koi haqk aaj tu ada to kar.....
dilip
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ab sahi nahi jati hai zamane ki dushbariya,
eh kudha es dard se mujko juda to kar.....
-sunita virender
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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19th September 2006, 02:14 PM
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ab sahi nahi jati hai zamane ki dushbariya,
eh kudha es dard se mujko juda to kar.....
-sunita virender
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Mukkammal Jahan Vaar Denge Tujh Par,
Mere Pyaar Par Tu Ek Daffa Etabaar To Kar...
agar koi galti hai to aap ise thik kar sakte hai hi.......
shukriya
gratse
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20th September 2006, 03:01 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by pooja4588
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Mukkammal Jahan Vaar Denge Tujh Par,
Mere Pyaar Par Tu Ek Daffa Etabaar To Kar...
-pooja
7th share
hum dil to kaya rooh main uttar jayegey,
tu ek baar ba-waffa ki tarah waffa to kar...
-sunita virender
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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20th September 2006, 03:48 PM
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hum dil to kaya rooh main uttar jayegey,
tu ek baar ba-waffa ki tarah waffa to kar...
-sunita virender
8th share
mujhe apne tan badan main mehsoos karoge,
bass ek baar mujhse milne ki tu duaa to kar.....
'veer'
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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