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Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye -
16th February 2006, 02:09 PM
Sabhi dosto ko mera pyar bhara hi.. Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye, Yu katre lahu k nigalte huye Chalti hu yaado ke ped ke patte, Apne Pero tale kuchalte huye Aksar kai aarzu karta he ye dil Shamo ko tanha tahelte huye Berang ho chala har tinka tinka Jindgi ke rango me dhalte huye, Shayad ak arsa guzar bhi gaya Khushi ki chav me machalte huye Dard se rishta nibha rahi hu Pal pal is tapish me jalte huye, Bemani is daud me tham jau bas! Rota he dil bhi dahal te huye Manzil hi meri muzse khafa hein Kya chalna ab raste badalte huye….  Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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16th February 2006, 05:13 PM
Dear Naaz,
Very Nice. Really Bahut Hi Badhiya Likha Hai. Hum To Aap Ki Taraif Bhi Kin Lafzon Me Kare Humare Paas Lafz Hi Nahi Hai Bahut Khub Likhte Rahiye Hum Padhte Rahenge Aur Aap Ki Dil Ki Gehrai Me Chupe Lafz Take Jitna Hoke Sake Utna Nazdik Pahoch Ne Ki Koshish Karte Rahenge. Adab. Take Care. Milte Hai 1 Chote Se Break Ke Baad...  [COLOR=deeppink] |
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Re: Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye -
16th February 2006, 06:59 PM
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wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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16th February 2006, 07:05 PM
its very nice line keep it up
Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye, Dil Itna Naazuk Hota Hai Ke, Isski Tootne Ki Awaaz Bilkul Nahi Aathi, ****************************** MEIN TUJHKO BHOOL JAUN YE KISSS KITAAB MEIN LIKHA HAI. ------------------------------------------------ socha tha woh hame tut kar chahenge par chaha bhi hami ne aur tute bhi hum KISHOR R KARKERA NEW PANVEL NAVI MUMBAi,410206 PH:-09322764070 
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Re: Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye -
16th February 2006, 07:13 PM
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keep writing like this and hope we will be reading u soon again shrdh 
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17th February 2006, 11:22 AM
Dear Naaz,
Very Nice. Really Bahut Hi Badhiya Likha Hai. Hum To Aap Ki Taraif Bhi Kin Lafzon Me Kare Humare Paas Lafz Hi Nahi Hai Bahut Khub Likhte Rahiye Hum Padhte Rahenge Aur Aap Ki Dil Ki Gehrai Me Chupe Lafz Take Jitna Hoke Sake Utna Nazdik Pahoch Ne Ki Koshish Karte Rahenge. Adab. Take Care. Dear Bhavesh Ye kya baat hui, ki aap ko tarif ke liye Lafz nahi mil rahe, are ham to aap ki bate bina kahe hi sun sakte he, aur aap in labzo me chipi gaherai se kai jyada gaherai me bas gaye ho to, don't worry, just keep coming and reading Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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17th February 2006, 11:26 AM
bahut hi acchi hai magar bahut dard hai aur lai ankaheee baatein bhi hai jo aapne zahir nahi ki ............. khush raho aur likhte raho
Tarif Ke liye Tahe Dilse me aap ki shukraguzar hu.. bas aise hi aate rahiye, God Bless You. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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17th February 2006, 11:27 AM
Kishor ji..
its very nice line keep it up Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye, Bahot Bhot Shukriya Aate Rahiye.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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17th February 2006, 11:33 AM
naaz as usual u r gud
keep writing like this and hope we will be reading u soon again shrdh Dear Shrd Thanks a Ton. Thank you for encouraging me to write much better next time, keep coming.. take care God Bless You.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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Re: Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye -
17th February 2006, 03:19 PM
Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye,
Yu katre lahu k nigalte huye Chalti hu yaado ke ped ke patte, Apne Pero tale kuchalte huye Aksar kai aarzu karta he ye dil Shamo ko tanha tahelte huye Berang ho chala har tinka tinka Jindgi ke rango me dhalte huye, Shayad ak arsa guzar bhi gaya Khushi ki chav me machalte huye Dard se rishta nibha rahi hu Pal pal is tapish me jalte huye, Bemani is daud me tham jau bas! Rota he dil bhi dahal te huye Manzil hi meri muzse khafa hein Kya chalna ab raste badalte huye…. NAAZ SAHIBA KYA BAAT HAI...AAPKO PADH KAR BAS MUAH se sirf ""wah" hi nikal ta raha...bahoot sundar likha hai aapne,,chote behar mein gehri baatein baayaan kar di ...aapka andaaz-e-bayaan behad pur-asar laga mujhe...meri daad kuboool kijiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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17th February 2006, 03:27 PM
NAAZ SAHIBA
KYA BAAT HAI...AAPKO PADH KAR BAS MUAH se sirf ""wah" hi nikal ta raha...bahoot sundar likha hai aapne,,chote behar mein gehri baatein baayaan kar di ...aapka andaaz-e-bayaan behad pur-asar laga mujhe...meri daad kuboool kijiye -MANOJ Manoj ji, bahot bahot shukriya.. Bas yu hi aate rahiye, aap ki tarif sunkar dilko tasalli hoti he, Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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17th February 2006, 04:34 PM
Aksar kai aarzu karta he ye dil
Shamo ko tanha tahelte huye Berang ho chala har tinka tinka Jindgi ke rango me dhalte huye, These lines just touched me... Hi Naaz, Kam alfaazon me dil ke ehsaas khoobsurati se baandhe hain aapne... chhoti beher waali ghazalon ki apni baat hoti hai... mujhe padha bahut acchi lagai apaki rachna... likhti rahiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th February 2006, 10:25 PM
Hey naaz,
Bahut achha likha hain tumne, keep writting dear. take care! |
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18th February 2006, 11:10 AM
Aksar kai aarzu karta he ye dil
Shamo ko tanha tahelte huye Berang ho chala har tinka tinka Jindgi ke rango me dhalte huye, These lines just touched me... Hi Naaz, Kam alfaazon me dil ke ehsaas khoobsurati se baandhe hain aapne... chhoti beher waali ghazalon ki apni baat hoti hai... mujhe padha bahut acchi lagai apaki rachna... likhti rahiye... Hi.. Pulkit Thanks a ton.. I was just wondering.. that why no reply from you.. but finally i got.. keep coming.. and Take Care.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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18th February 2006, 11:17 AM
Dear Parul
Meri hosla afzai ke liye tahe dilse main aapki shukra guzar hu.. keep coming.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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Re: Ek umra ho gayi tanha chalte huye -
18th February 2006, 11:20 AM
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meri shuru se ek aadat rahi hai maiN nayepan ka deewana huN... jaisa maiN kayiyoN se keh chuka huN ehsaas lagbhag sabhi ke ek samaan hote hai ,,, par soch aur stithi use doosre se aledha banate hai... aapka khayal ek bohat hi aam sa aur seedha sada sa raha .. par jis tarah aapne inhe alfazon se bandha kabil-e-taareef hai ye... shayad dil ki tees .. seedhe sil se nikal padi... aapne bohat accha likha hai ... mujhe behad pasand aaya ... aur kya kahuN.. yuN to main abhi khud lkhna nahi janta .. par dil ko jo bha jaye wahi sacchi shayri hai... aap yun hi likhti rahen kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th February 2006, 01:40 PM
Naaz ji...
meri shuru se ek aadat rahi hai maiN nayepan ka deewana huN... jaisa maiN kayiyoN se keh chuka huN ehsaas lagbhag sabhi ke ek samaan hote hai ,,, par soch aur stithi use doosre se aledha banate hai... aapka khayal ek bohat hi aam sa aur seedha sada sa raha .. par jis tarah aapne inhe alfazon se bandha kabil-e-taareef hai ye... shayad dil ki tees .. seedhe sil se nikal padi... aapne bohat accha likha hai ... mujhe behad pasand aaya ... aur kya kahuN.. yuN to main abhi khud lkhna nahi janta .. par dil ko jo bha jaye wahi sacchi shayri hai... aap yun hi likhti rahen kunal Kunal ji.. paheli bar meri post par aapko dekh kar bahot khushi hui, sach kaha aapne ki ehsaas ak hote he par soch aur stithi sabhi ki alag hoti hey.. aap ne is nacheez ki soch ko samza aur use nawaza.. is ke liye ham aap ka tahe dilse shukriya ada kartein hein.. Keep Coming.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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