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dua jaisa... - 15th December 2010, 12:04 PM
ye samne aaya hai kaun dua jaisa
Ehsaas uska dil me tha saba jaisa..

aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

meri takdeere bhi roothi thi maan gayi jaise...
laga hai haath koi khawab aashna jaisa

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...

maukam apna dhoodh le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa...
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Boht KHooob KHayalat Or Jazbaat Shipra JI.....
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ye samne aaya hai kaun dua jaisa
Ehsaas uska dil me tha saba jaisa..

aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

meri takdeere bhi roothi thi maan gayi jaise...
laga hai haath koi khawab aashna jaisa

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...

maakam apna dhoodh le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa...
Hello shipraji,,,,,,,,,,aapne to kamal hi kar diya ,,,dil me chhipe huye jajbaat khushbu ki tarah bikher diya,,,,,,,,,i like so much,,,,,,,its very sweet.........really thankful too you......
   
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15th December 2010, 05:46 PM
aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

ambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...


Bahut khoob ....... Shipra Ji ! behtreen ehsaas ... dil se daad hazir hai ...

aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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SHIPRA JI,

Spelling mistakes ki wajah se padhne aur samajhne me dikkhat ho rahi hai...

shayed yeh sher kuch aysa hai..

muqaam apna dhooNd le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayaal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa.

Ehsaas acche hai..

Yuhi likhti rahiye.............







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behad haseen khayaal rahe hain shipra jeee... bas yoon samajh lijiye an moh gayi apki ye kavitaa.. dil khush kar diyaa. yoonhi likhtii rahen.. khush rahen..

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ye samne aaya hai kaun dua jaisa
Ehsaas uska dil me tha saba jaisa..

aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

meri takdeere bhi roothi thi maan gayi jaise...
laga hai haath koi khawab aashna jaisa

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...

maakam apna dhoodh le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa...

aadaab
aap ne yahaan bhi rang jamaa rakkhaa hai .. janaab hamaaraa yahaan aanaa to hotaa nahi ham dard ke maare dard me hi pade rahte hain
magar aaj dekhaa ki subhaanallah aap ne yahaan bhi apnaa rang bikher rakkhaa hai
badee peyaare ghazal hai


noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

is ko main ne kam se kam 5 baar parhaa aor maze le le ke parhaa
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kahaa hun
is liye aap ko sbas daad hi de saktaa hun
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ye samne aaya hai kaun dua jaisa
Ehsaas uska dil me tha saba jaisa..

aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

meri takdeere bhi roothi thi maan gayi jaise...
laga hai haath koi khawab aashna jaisa

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...

maakam apna dhoodh le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa...

bahut achha likha hai shipra keep it up
duaon ke saath

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ye samne aaya hai kaun dua jaisa
Ehsaas uska dil me tha saba jaisa..

aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

meri takdeere bhi roothi thi maan gayi jaise...
laga hai haath koi khawab aashna jaisa

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...

maakam apna dhoodh le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa...
wah wah shipra ji. bahaut hi khoobsurat khayaal aapne naazukee aur nafaasat se farmaaye hain. daad aur dua ke saath ... zarraa
   
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Boht KHooob KHayalat Or Jazbaat Shipra JI.....
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Hello shipraji,,,,,,,,,,aapne to kamal hi kar diya ,,,dil me chhipe huye jajbaat khushbu ki tarah bikher diya,,,,,,,,,i like so much,,,,,,,its very sweet.........really thankful too you......
thank you so much sneha ji.....
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aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

ambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...


Bahut khoob ....... Shipra Ji ! behtreen ehsaas ... dil se daad hazir hai ...

aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....
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apna saath banaye rakhiye...
   
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SHIPRA JI,

Spelling mistakes ki wajah se padhne aur samajhne me dikkhat ho rahi hai...

shayed yeh sher kuch aysa hai..

muqaam apna dhooNd le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayaal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa.

Ehsaas acche hai..

Yuhi likhti rahiye.............
thanks alot for your valuable suggesstion zainy ji............
   
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ye samne aaya hai kaun dua jaisa
Ehsaas uska dil me tha saba jaisa..

aaj khud ko hi pechanana mushkil hua
noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

meri takdeere bhi roothi thi maan gayi jaise...
laga hai haath koi khawab aashna jaisa

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
raat dhlte hi haal ho na tera shama jaisa...

maukam apna dhoodh le zara tu ab 'shipra'
khayal aaya hai dil me kuch kuch wafa jaisa...

ji very nice creation........................


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behad haseen khayaal rahe hain shipra jeee... bas yoon samajh lijiye an moh gayi apki ye kavitaa.. dil khush kar diyaa. yoonhi likhtii rahen.. khush rahen..

sambhal ishq ki garmi se pighal jaye na tu
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magar aaj dekhaa ki subhaanallah aap ne yahaan bhi apnaa rang bikher rakkhaa hai
badee peyaare ghazal hai


noor chalka hai chere pe kuch haya jaisa...

is ko main ne kam se kam 5 baar parhaa aor maze le le ke parhaa
daad haazir hai tahseen haazir hai aor ghareeb ke paas kuchh hai hi nahi wornaa wo bhi de detaa kiun ki
abhi chand roz pahle
jab kuchh na paa sakaa merey khan dar pe aake wo
sahmaa saa ek dil thaa wahee chheen kar gayaa
kahaa hun
is liye aap ko sbas daad hi de saktaa hun
khush rahye likhtee rahiye achhaa likhtee hain aap khoob likhtee hain
mukhlis
massood hassaas
shukria masood ji...
and your lines are mindblowing....
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