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Gazal:Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha.....D*D* -
24th June 2007, 09:46 PM
Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha Grazie Apki dost Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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25th June 2007, 10:22 AM
namaskaaR pooja:
baRe dino baad aap fir seY apnii kosiSh ko liYe bazm meiN taShreef laaYii..khuShii hu'ii..aor woH bhii itne khoob andaaz ke saath..aik umdaa Ghazal aaj aapkii aur seY paRHne ko milii hai..khaas t'aur pe Ghazal ka maqtaa be-Had pasaNd aaYa..ess mukammal kosiSh par mere dil se niklii huwii daad ko qabool farmaaYeN..aur yuuNhii apnii umdaa kosiShoN ke Z^ariiYe ess bazm ko sajaate rahiYe apnaa khayaal raKheN..khuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka dost Dhaval |
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25th June 2007, 10:30 AM
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aap ka dost Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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Aaa kar lein koi Sanjeen Jurm hum bhi aaj Marne ke liye shayad Mohabbat Kaafi nahin Ruksati mango ab Khuda se Jism ki mere Ke Rooh to ab yun bhi Baaki nahin Kisse karein Shikwa Jaam Khali hone ka Ke Maikhane mein ab koi Saaki nahin Ke jiske Deedar ko Taras gayi hain Aankhen Aaj wo Majaar se bahar aane ko Raazi nahin Ke Aaj wo Majaar se bahar aane ko Raazi nahin... |
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25th June 2007, 01:57 PM
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ohhhh very touchy sweety daad ke liye alfaz nahi her sher hi bohat gehrey ahsasaat liye howe hai ............ Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha bohat khub dear likhti raho aur umeed hai ye sirf poetry hi hai isse ziada kuch hona bhi nahi chahiye humesha khush raho hansti muskurati raho........ apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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25th June 2007, 03:05 PM
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kaise mizaz hain aapke aaj is gazal ko padke yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki tum bhii itna sanjeeda gazal likh saktii ho. wakai itne dino mainnahi aaya isii ka asar ha i ki kitna behtreen likhne lagii ho......... Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha kamal ka sher likha hai ye daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega janab shukriya duaaon ke sath izajat dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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meri pyari pyari matko gudiya bahut accha likha hai tumne, etni sanjeedgi kaha se aaye.....har sher dil par dastak de gaya...gudiya tujhe yakeen na hoga..maine teri es gazal ko baar baar pada aur ab reply kar rahi hoon...gudiya dua karti hoon ki yeh dard bas shayri tak hi seemat rahe, meri matko hamesha hansti muskurati rahe aur eski shayri din-b-din nikharti jaye.....  bahut sare pyar ke saath teri diiiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th June 2007, 05:44 PM
hi pooja...
sach kaha di ne bahut hi sanjeedgi se likha hain...... meri taraf se daad!yeh ashar jyada acche lage Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th June 2007, 12:44 AM
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Ji namskaar Dhaval ji, Aapka meri post pe sabse pahalaa reply, khushi huii ye dekh kar. Kabhi kabhi aisa hotaa hai ke hum jo kahanaa chaahte.n han.n, vo kahe nahi.n paate, ab jo kahanaa hai vo to kahanaa hi hai naa, bas isi liye likh daali gazal. Aapko pasand aai, aapne saraahaa uske liye aapko tah'e'dil se shukriiya. Ummiid hai ke aapka saath yu.n aage bhi milega. Ijaazat!! Grazie Apki dost Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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29th June 2007, 10:17 AM
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Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha apna khyaal rakhna...........raj......... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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9th July 2007, 03:37 PM
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Ji bahot bahot shukriya mujhe saraahane ke liye. Aapko yahaa.n dekh kar khushi hui. Bas kuch gam thha jo kaagaz pe utar gaya. Aapko pasand ayaa khush'kismati rahi meri. Saath dete rahiyega. Grazie Aapki dost, Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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14th July 2007, 04:08 AM
hello pooja,
kya haal hai? bahut acha likha hai aapne. har taraf dard hi dard hai is kavita mein. dil ko chu gayi. itna dard....... aap ki rachna humein bahut achi lagi. app aise hi likthe rahein. tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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19th July 2007, 04:12 PM
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Amit, Aapka bahot bahot swaagat hai meri post pe..aapne waqt diya meri shayri ko, saraaha uske liye shukriya..aur aapke ye sabhi sher bahot pyaare hai.N..saath dete rahiyega.. Grazie Aapki dost Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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19th July 2007, 04:14 PM
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Sabse pahale to ye ki aap ko bahot bahot shukriya, aapne mujhe saraaha..dusri baat ye ki ye sirf shayri hi nahi hai...haqiikat hai jo apne padha aur jo abse padhengi...shukriya daad ke liye..saath deti rahiyega.. Grazie Aapki Sweety Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:14 PM
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humare mijaaz ek dam durusat hai.N janaab, aap kahiye?..bahot bahot shukriya is naachiiz ko padhne.N ka waQt dene ke liye..bas sanjiidaa haalaat to sanjiidaa kalaam... shukriya janaab, apki daad sar'ankho.N pe.. Saath dete rahiyega...ijaazat!! Grazie Aapki dost Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:17 PM
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Dii aapka aana bahot achha lagta hai apni post pe..aapki taariff ke liye shukriya..ab ye shayri hai yaa haQikat aap behatar jaanti hai.N..aapki duao.N ke liye apki karz'daar rahungi..saath deti rahiyega.. Ijaazat!! Grazie Aapki matko gudiya Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:19 PM
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Aap meri post pe aai.N bahot achha laga..aapki daad sar'ankho.N pe..bahot bahot shukriya mujhe padhne ke liye aur saraahane ke liye..ummid hai aap yu.N hi mera saath deti.N raheNgi.N.. Ijaazat!! GRazie Aapki dost Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:22 PM
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Veer ji, main chaahe jitni badi ho jaau.N lekin har lahaje me.N aapse bahot chhoti rahungi..main badi hui to nahi lekin badi bana di gai hu.N..aap aaye, saraaha achha laga aur shukriya..maine jo bhi sikha apse hi sikha hai..saath dete rahiyega.. Ijaazat!! Grazie Aapki gudiya Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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O yaar saadde haal te changaa sii o tussi kede ho ji  ...well apne pasand kiya...saraaha uske liye shukriyaa...saath dete rahiyega yu.N hi.N...Grazie Aapki dost Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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9th May 2010, 11:34 AM
Hi, Remember ?
I m back Again after very long Time...I HOPE EVERYBODY FORGOT ME N MY POSTS.... U ALWAYS WROTE NICE...RAHUL |
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9th May 2010, 11:36 AM
Hi, Remember ?
I m back Again after very long Time...I HOPE EVERYBODY FORGOT ME N MY POSTS.... U ALWAYS WROTE NICE...RAHUL |
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9th May 2010, 11:45 AM
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Matko.......aaj phir teri es gazal par nazar gaye.......bahut kuch yaad aaya, aur teri bhi bahut yaad aaye.....SDC par teri kami mahsoos hoti hai Matko. vapis aaja bahut sare pyar ke saath teri punjabi kudi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th May 2010, 03:57 PM
Pooja JI......Namaste ! aapki bahut purani peshkash par nazar padhi toh ......padhe bina nahi reh saka....bahut umdaa khayal aur dilkash adaayegi ne samaa baandh diya....sabhi ashaar purasar lage.....yeh do sheyr toh khaas taur se dil kareeb rahe....
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen....yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath humesha aate rahen... khush rahen.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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9th May 2010, 05:35 PM
Pooja jee AadaaB!
Aaj aapko paheli martaba padha, aur aapki mukammal gazal padhker hairat zada ho gaya huN.... aap itna kamaal likhati hai to ab kyuN nahi likhati.. Aapki gazal bahut achchi lagi.. ahsaas aur bayani bahut umdaa rahi.. Mujhe matla yeh sher Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha aur maqta la jawab laga..... Daad hazir hai, kabool kijiye.. likhati rahiye... Khush rahiye...... Khuda Hafez.... 
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11th May 2010, 09:04 PM
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I m sorry i really dont remember u...by the way, how r u?.. n thanku for liking my gazal.. Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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9th October 2014, 08:30 PM
Sunita ji ,
Namaskar ..Aapke janib se is ghazal ko parne ka mauka laga ...Wah kya baat hai , purane logon ki purani ghazlein per ke mehsoos hua ki kaaash mai pehle yahan kyun na aya .. Anyway Pooja ji ..aapki ye ghazal bahut hi badiya lagi .. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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16th October 2014, 05:50 PM
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Didi , wo din bahot pyare the na... kese har post pe hum hi hum nazar aya karte the  .. or mujhe to yakin nahi ho raha ke ye shayri mene likhi hai kisi time me hehehee....i missd u too di ... luvs apki matko ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th October 2014, 05:51 PM
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thanku so much for liking this post... Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th October 2014, 07:42 PM
Dear pooja
Aapko bazm mein dekh kar bahot khushi hui... darkhaast yahee hai ki aap shayri pariwaar ko apnaa qeemtee waqt jitnaa bhi de pao do aur jald hi aapki likhi hui koshishen bazm mein sab padh saken Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka dost Dhaval |
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16th October 2014, 09:12 PM
hello pooja jee....bahut dino baad aapko pada...sach me mujhe bhi vo beeta hua jamana yaad aa gaya...kya khumaari thi..kya shayri thi....ek alag see duniya hamari thi....aa jaiye aap bhi fir se...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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17th October 2014, 03:42 PM
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sabse pahle to tumko shaadi ki bahot bahot badhaai ... yaha aai to pata chala ki tumhari shaadi ho gai hai .... so congrtz dude...anyways.... likhna to bilkul nahi ho'pata ab.... last jo yaha post kiya tha wahi likha tha me aakhir me .. uske baad kuch nahi likha..or ab to aise lagta hai jese shaayri ka "S" b bhool gai hu ... hehehe... baaki rahi yahaa aate rahne ki baat to ofcoz aati rahungi ab ... thanks once again... Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th October 2014, 03:48 PM
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sanjay ji....aap yeh soch kar udhas mat hoyeN ki purane members ke waqt aap kyu nahi thy yahan, dekhiye purane members phir aa rhe hai Lout aaye hai phir se roothi bahaareN, kitna haseeN hai samma........... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th October 2014, 03:58 PM
Waah bahut khoobsurat nazm...pooja ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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17th October 2014, 03:58 PM
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sach wo time bahot pyaara tha... shaayriya aaj b likhte hain yaha log or bahot achhi likhte honge i m sure... baat bas itni si hai ke kuch saal pahle hum the jaha..waha aaj naye members hain... main koshish karungi regulr ate rahne ki..aap b aate rahiyega... pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th October 2014, 04:00 PM
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and di luv u bhi ... apki matko ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th October 2014, 04:03 PM
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sabse pahle to mujhe pooja ji naa kahe kar sirf pooja kahiye... or apka bahot bahot dhanyewad ke apne paddha is nazam ko or sarahaa... Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th October 2014, 04:10 PM
Jaisa aap kahein pooja..
aur hamari khushnaseebi ki aap logon ko padne ka mauka mila..sunita di..thnks to uअर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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17th October 2014, 04:53 PM
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Matko, tu 2 line ki baat karti hai, tere liye to main bahut kuch likh sakti hu phir yeh soch kar nahi likhti ki kahiN Mausam bigad na jaaye...ki pooja ke liye etna pyar aur mujse hamesha pange  bahut saraaaaaaaa pyar .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th October 2014, 05:03 PM
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Dear Madhu....accha lagta hai jab jab aapke compliments padti hu Madhu hamara aik group tha...ab phir se wo group vapis aa rha hai...tab koi panga nahi hota tha...shayri ke saath saath full masti hoti thi SDC par ab aap bhi shamil ho jayeN es masti meiN .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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