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1st June 2007, 06:55 PM
hello sar sri akal ji namste and aadab kaise ho app sabh? aj ek nazam leke akr hazir hoon umid hai appnu pasand ave ghy.................. aap ne itna pyaar diya to humko bhi mohabbat kyo na ho dua hai, aap sa didar mile aise mohabbat sabki kyo na ho dil mey ibbaadat aakhon mey shararat sada rahe bhini bhini aap ki aadayn itrati machalti sada rahe aap ne hamko sada yaad kiya takdeer saath mere kyo na ho aap ne haal-e-dil aitbar kiya to mohabbat sangeet kyo na ho rooh mey meri, aap ke nagme hai uter rahe muskraht labo pe khyalo main aap hai aarahe pyaar banke her dil ke dhadkan main shamil aap kyo na ho mohabbet ke is aalam main aap meri manzil kyo na ho umid hai hamesha di tara appda sath milda rave gha khush rehiye apna khiyal rakhna  appki preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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1st June 2007, 07:24 PM
hi Preet ji
kaisi hai aap? sacch maniye apki ye nazm mere dil ko choo gayi... sacch jab koi accha lagne lagta hai tab yahi jazbaat dil mein ghar kar jaate hai... u hin mehfill sajaate rahiye tc jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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1st June 2007, 11:13 PM
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bahut achii koshish hai...par isstarah khud ko satane se kya fayda....mughko bhi tum khud ko dukhi kar ke dukhi karti hoo.... aapnaa khayal rakhnaa khush rahna.. tumhari dost~ saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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2nd June 2007, 11:02 AM
hi preet ji
kese ho aap? preet ji aaj aapko yaha dekh ke khushi hui aur aap itni achchhi rachna ke sath nazar aaye ye dekhke dil khush ho gaya preet ji aapki is rachna ko padhte padhte ek pyaara sa ehsaas dil mein jagta hai jo pyaar aur dard dono se wakif karata hai bahut hi umde alfaaz hai aapke, padh ke achchha laga yuhi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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2nd June 2007, 08:21 PM
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ji me theek hoon app bataiye app kaisi ho? shukriya yaha par ane ke liye aur sath dene ke liye ji appne theek kaha jabh koi acha laghta hai bas yehi man me aata hai umid hai appka sath yuhi milta rahe gha khush rehiye take care appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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3rd June 2007, 11:06 PM
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dear saloni ji sabh se pehle appko pyar bhari sat sri akal ji kehndhi ha hellooo shukriya yaha par ane ke liye aur mera hosal badane ke liye bhot khushi hoy tuhanu ithe dekh kar sorry saloni ji me appko dhukhi nahi karna chahati par kya karu kismat kuch aisa ab kar rehi hai ki me sabh ko dhukh de rehi hoon dil se maffi manghti hoon ki meine appko dhukh diya sorry dear aghe se koshish karughy appko hamesha khuhsi dene ki khush rehna sath dete rehna appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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3rd June 2007, 11:12 PM
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kaisi hai aap? hmmmm preet ji kya baat hain, yakin maniye apka ek_ek ashar dil ko chhu gaya, apne pyar,ishq ki jo tasveer yahan dikhai hai,, mohabbat aur apna pan jo bayan kiya hain,, wo to kabil_e_tarif hain, apni is pyari si dost ko,dilse daad de rahe hain, umeed hai,aap ise kabul karengi, ALLAH se dua karte hain,,ke aaapko aur tarakki de,AAMIN, chaliye ab jaldi se apni nayi koshish se hame ru_ba_ru karwayiye,hum intezaar kar rahe hain, aap hamesha khush rahiye, aur apna khayal rakhiye, ALLAH HAFIZ aapki dost, HassoNi. ( HaSSaN Ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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4th June 2007, 12:34 PM
thats niceeeeeeeeeee
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4th June 2007, 02:52 PM
Namash kaar
A bewafa aaj agar hum teri mahfil se nikale gaye to gum nahi Kal teri mahfil ke samne hum apni ek mahfil saja lenge, Fir na kahna humne tujhe bataya nahi. Har tahra se wafa nibhai jati hai. Jab unhi ko hum se mohobbat nahi. Toh koun bar-bar najron se najren milaai jati hai. Atul_Puri |
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4th June 2007, 02:53 PM
Tord do hotoo ki khamoshi ye jhki najre to utaho
Jalti hai to duniya jalne do kam se kam aap hume to na jalao Har tahra se wafa nibhai jati hai. Jab unhi ko hum se mohobbat nahi. Toh koun bar-bar najron se najren milaai jati hai. Atul_Puri |
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4th June 2007, 02:58 PM
Kisi ki sath ko ehsash samjh lete hai.
Koi has ke do baat kare to pyaar samjh lete hai. Are roata to asmaa b hai apni zami ke liye. Par log uske aanshoo ko barshat samjh lete hai. Har tahra se wafa nibhai jati hai. Jab unhi ko hum se mohobbat nahi. Toh koun bar-bar najron se najren milaai jati hai. Atul_Puri |
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4th June 2007, 03:01 PM
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 preet bhaut vadiya likhiya hai....tahe-dil to meri mubarkbaad kabool karna...! teri aapni diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th June 2007, 03:14 PM
Likhte ho esha ki dil ko pighlate ho
hum to ehshas karate hai pyaar ka par na jane aap Q pyaar shikha jate ho Har tahra se wafa nibhai jati hai. Jab unhi ko hum se mohobbat nahi. Toh koun bar-bar najron se najren milaai jati hai. Atul_Puri |
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4th June 2007, 05:18 PM
Par'favore parli con me........
~Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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5th June 2007, 05:33 PM
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ji me theek hoon app bataiye app kaise ho? shukriya merul ji yaha par a kar padhne ka aur pasand karne ke liye merul ji agar pyar hai to dard to hogha hi na akeli khushi to mil nahi sakti pyar me khuhsi kam milti hai magar gumo ki ghinti nahi hoti app yuhi sath dete rehna hum yuhi likhte rahe ghe khush rehiye appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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6th June 2007, 08:13 AM
hello pret ji, bahut khoob likha apne, esas laga raha he jese ap ne apna haale dil suna diya ho bahut gehrai he ap ki baaton mein. bahut khoob esi hi likhti rahiye, bahut age jaoge insha allah..
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6th June 2007, 10:42 AM
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kaisi hai app? app ko yah apr dekhar khushi hoy shukriya hosla badene ke liye aise hi sath deti rehna appki daab hum dil se kabul karte hai khush rehiye apna khiyal rakhna appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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6th June 2007, 10:43 AM
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aise hi sath dete rehna khush rehiye preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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6th June 2007, 10:44 AM
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namaskar appko bhi appki shayri kafi achi hai aise hi likhte rehiye shukriya yaha ane ke liye kjhush rehiye preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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6th June 2007, 10:46 AM
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hello meir pyari diiiiiiiii kaisi ho app? appko yaha dekhar bhot khushi hoy thanks yaha ane ke liye aur hosla badane keliye aise hi sath deti rehna appki mubarkabad dil kabul kardi ha shukriya diiiii vaise je shayri kisi ke liye likhi hai uska ane to app janti hi hai (rajveer mera pyar hai) par who sath nahi isliye je appke liye hai    khush rehiye appki preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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6th June 2007, 10:47 AM
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dear pooja sto aprlando con te tu che non parli grazie che sei venuta qui khush rehna tumari preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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6th June 2007, 10:49 AM
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hello sam ji kaisi hai app? shukriya app yaha aye aur mera hosla badae app ayha aye bhot khushi hoy umid hai ki appka sath yuhi milta rahe gha khush rehiye preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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