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man gamo ka sahara leta raha - 21st September 2003, 12:15 PM

dhalta suraj ankho main dubta raha
dil pyar ka izhar karne se darta raha
umeedo ka daman chuta raha
man gamo ka sahara leta raha
bhichaye jo kante meri raho main unhe
inhi hath se unke liye duwaye mangta raha
kabool ho jaye meri duwaye unke liye
khushiyo se daman unka wo bharta gaya
man gamo se mera bharta gaya
unka daman phool se bharta gaya


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21st September 2003, 12:19 PM

arreee ye kya mita ji

itni jald aapka poem with continuety?//

ye to pahele se bhi khoobsoorat hai

one of the beeeest that i ever read

see u

gulieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


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THANK U - 21st September 2003, 12:24 PM

Thanks alot Guli ji
really u mean it u liked it?


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21st September 2003, 12:31 PM

mita ji

ek bataau ki
muje to kya jab aapne ise likha hoga to pataa chal gaya hoga ki kya khoob likha gaya hai aapse... sahi hai na??/ agar aapko ye feeling aayegi to auro ko to ... pata nahi kaise karu taarif aapki aur aapki ye bahot bahot khoobsurat is rachana ki..

ise mere computor main filhaal save karke rakha hai .. thode dino main dimaag main save ho jaayega.

see u........


gulieeeeeeeeeee


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thanks - 21st September 2003, 12:36 PM

Guli ji
i have allways felt that what ever i am writing its really good? i dont have confidence. thanks a lot.


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HI - 21st September 2003, 11:03 PM

HI MITAJI


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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HI - 21st September 2003, 11:04 PM

HI MITA JI AISA LAGA ISEY PADHKAR JAISE MERE HI BAARE MNE KUCH LIKH DAALA HAI AAPNE,..AUR TARIF KE LIYE KYA KAHU DOST?

PRIYA


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thanks - 22nd September 2003, 08:08 PM

priya ji
thanks a lot. sometimes it happens if v read other shayri v felt that itsswritten 4 us only. even i allways admire with yr shayri 2.take care.


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22nd September 2003, 09:10 PM

Bohot achha laga. Yeh toh ek Pyaar karne waleki dilse nikli huyi hein. Sirf "Pyaar" hi nazar aya mujhe. Aise hi likhterahiyega. Sukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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thanks - 23rd September 2003, 09:26 AM

Shimul ji
bas ye pyar ke liye jite hai aur bar bar marte hai.maloon nahi manzil kab milegi thanks a lot. u also take care.


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23rd September 2003, 09:49 AM

Mita ji,

aapne bhi kya sachayi farmayi hai...aisa lagta hai ke kuch raah tak humari manzil ek si hongi...ke aapne aisa likha hai..par kuch khas hai...bohat hi lajawab hai...
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THANK U - 23rd September 2003, 11:27 AM

Tulsika ji
kahin bar aisa hota hai ke koi shayri main hum apne aap ko dekhte hai. shayad aapko aisa laga ho thanks


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suraj - 23rd September 2003, 11:29 AM

Hi, Mita ji,

padhkar rona bhi aya aur himmat bhi hui
suraj dhalta jarror hai par ugtabhi hai har roz,
is tarah pyar bhi kabhi badaolon ke piche choopa ho
aur jab yeh badal hat jayenge to saf suthra samne
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THANK u - 23rd September 2003, 12:59 PM

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har chahat ke piche gam ke badal madrate kun hai
mujhe nahi lagta iska jawab ho kise ke pas thanks .


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23rd September 2003, 02:16 PM

Dear Mita Jee, sukriya reply ke liye.
Ha, yeh toh mein keh nehi sakti ke kab milega.
Waise ek baat kehsakti hu ke, jo Pyaar karta hein woh sirf Pyaar karte hi jate hein. Kab Pyaar milega yeh sochke nehi karte hein.
Kyu ke yeh Pyaar shayed ek tarfa hi hota hein. Ha, mein duwa zaroor karti rahungi ke aapko aapka Pyaar miljaye.
Khuda Kare aap khush rahe, baas itni hi meri bash meh hein aur yeh mein dilse kehrahi hu. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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Tum yaad na aya karo!!
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23rd September 2003, 02:30 PM

mita
waah.......
par yakinan yah mere ahesaas to nahi bayaan kiyae na tumnae?
soch kar jawab dena........
aaj ki coffee tumhare naam gar jawab sahi diya warna mere naam lol
   
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THANK u - 23rd September 2003, 06:38 PM

Shimul ji
u r abs. right. no1 thinks be4 pyar. u take care 2.


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23rd September 2003, 06:55 PM

Sukriya aapne reply kiya. Achha laga.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
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