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Sara Aakash - 26th September 2003, 05:26 PM

Aaj suraj ki kiran ko ubharte dekha
Unka hath meri aur badhte dekha
Ankho main hasin phool khilte dekha
Aaj ek nai kiran ki aur chalte dekha
Rumzom karti geet gati titli ko dekha
Gungunate bhwarein ko dekha
Aasman ko rang bikhrate dekha
Aaj chand main chupte badal ko dekha
Aaj sara akash meri bahon main dekha


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26th September 2003, 05:28 PM

Waah waah.....
aur kya kya dekha.......
   
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thanks - 26th September 2003, 05:34 PM

Mohit thanks. i think u r very busy after a long time u mailed me.


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26th September 2003, 05:50 PM

Meeta Jee ..

taReef kaBuL faRmaiye ItNa KHooBsuRaT LikHNe ki ..

BaHuT pyaRa LikHa Hai .. PaDH kaR acHHa LaGa ..

LikHTi RaHiye


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thanks - 26th September 2003, 06:23 PM

Kshitiz ji
tarif kabul hai. hosla badhane ka shukriya.


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hi - 26th September 2003, 07:07 PM

Hello mita ji,
Waqui bahut hi achha likha hai aapne......behad khoobsurati se...
daad ke saath..
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26th September 2003, 07:55 PM

mita,
hey..... tum meri coffee banaao tab tak maie tumhe tumhaare hi com se tumhari hi post par tumhe reply de du.
-------------- meena
yep...... mitaaaaa,
hmmmmm..... kya reply du?????
mita yah kis ke ahesaas hai? tumhaare? par fir yah to poorani baat hai is maie navin kya? haaan agar tum kaho ke yah mere ahesaas tumne yaha likhae to yah bhi baat nahi thhik lag rahi....
hmmmm....
kuchh to gadbad lag rahi hai muje..... tum jab bhi isqh par likhti ho tab sochti hu k tum dard maie kaise likh paaogi?
yahi likha karo yaar .... yahi tumhari bahetar jagah hai... ab dard maie tum nahi dikhni chahiaye ok?
lol haahahahhahaha
ab kitni der? ek coffee banate?
-------- meena


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kya kahu??????????
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kya kahu?????????? - 26th September 2003, 08:34 PM

Mina
is sawal ka jawab do dost
ishaq aur dard do pehlu jeeven ke
kun na chale do saath saath
ek rath ke do pahiye saman
kun na chale dono saath saath


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thanks - 26th September 2003, 08:36 PM

Pari ji
dad kabool hai. pari ki tarah kash mere do pankh hote
udti rehti sara akash pankh philaye


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Ishq - 30th September 2003, 01:00 PM

bahoot achha laga,
ke dard se hatkar kiya tumne ishq,
sare jahan ko samaya anchal main,
tumhe ishq mein paya kareeb se,
kaash main bhi pita coffee tumhare sang

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30th September 2003, 01:48 PM

mita,
tumne puchha hai.........
Mina
is sawal ka jawab do dost
ishaq aur dard do pehlu jeeven ke
kun na chale do saath saath
ek rath ke do pahiye saman
kun na chale dono saath saath
hmmmmmmmm kya kahu??

ek chhalke aankhao se
duja basae hothhao par
sathh kabhi nahi chalte dono
jaise suraj chaand gagan maie
kaise chale dono sathh?
   
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hello - 30th September 2003, 05:51 PM

Mita ji,

aapne bahut badhiya likha hai. padh ke bahut achchha laga. prarmbh ki, line bahut achhhi lagi. you hi likhati rahiye.



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THANK u - 30th September 2003, 07:01 PM

Akant ji
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30th September 2003, 07:04 PM

is sawal ka jawab do dost
ishaq aur dard do pehlu jeeven ke
kun na chale do saath saath
ek rath ke do pahiye saman
kun na chale dono saath saath
hmmmmmmmm kya kahu??

ek chhalke aankhao se
duja basae hothhao par
sathh kabhi nahi chalte dono
jaise suraj chaand gagan maie
kaise chale dono sathh?
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ishq ka safar gar dard se hokar na gujare to kahate hain pura nahi hota.

is safar main gar suffer na ho to safar kya ho??

ishq ek ahsaas hai......dard ek hakiiqat.


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THANK u - 30th September 2003, 07:08 PM

Popatji
thanks 4 reply i agreed with u. mina kehti kuch alag.make herunderstand.


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