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Tumhari Cahat Dekho Kya Rang Laayi -
23rd August 2003, 05:56 PM
Tumhari yaadon ka safar bahot kathin raha
Tumhari chahat dekho kya rang laayi Ankho se ansoo baras na paye TOo nila asman ro pada Tumhari yaadon ka safar bahot kathin raha Hara hua dil sine main dabaye hua Khuli chat ko takti ye bejaan ankhe Kahin maut ka paigam sun ne ko tarsti yae nazarein Khali haath phailaye bahgwan se maut mange Tumhari chahat dekho kya rang laayi Dhire se kanon se hasin chalki Hoth thar tharaye maut ke aane se Tumhari yadon ka safar bahot kathin raha Kahin kisi ne meri rooh ko pechana Dhire se saraha hawan main hasin chalki Tumhari chahat dekho kya rang laayi |
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23rd August 2003, 09:09 PM
Meeta Ji ..
Tumhari chahat dekho kya rang laayi Ji Kahna chahunga ki chahat to hamesha hi rang lati hai chahe vo ashiQ ke khooN ka hi kyon na ho .. Aap Bahut khoobSurat Likhti haiN .. LIkhne ki ye ada har bar dil me ghar kar jati hai Tareef kabul farmaiye .. |
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25th August 2003, 10:56 AM
Pranaam Mita ji...
kaisi haiN aap...? maine pehle bhi kaha tha.. aaj phir keh raha hooN k aapka andaaz sabse juda aur kaayal kar dene waala hai... aapki is rachna bhi meiN bhi wahi bebasi hai jo aapki her rachna meiN nazar aati hai... aapke ehsaas bohat khoobsurat haiN... aur jis sada bayaanii se aapne inhe shabdoN meiN piroya hai wo qaabil-e-daad hai... Tumhari yaadon ka safar bahot kathin raha sach hai... ati sundar... ek choti si daad qubool kariye... |
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thanks -
25th August 2003, 01:14 PM
Kshitiz
Thanks a lot jabhi reply padhti hoo likhne ka hosla badhta hai |
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THANK U -
25th August 2003, 01:16 PM
Bedilji
aap ka bahot shukriya.hameha padh ke aap tarif karte ho hosla badhate hoo. |
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25th August 2003, 08:34 PM
bohat zabardast, bohat khoob.
mita dost mein sochta hoon ke kabhi to tanqeedi alfaaz likhoon aap ke kalam per magar mujhe khushi hai mujhe is mein kamyabi na ho saki. yeh nazm bhi aap apni shahkaar nazmon mein shumaar ker sakti ho. bohat di ko mon leni wali aur sunder alfaaz se saji is nazm ke bare mein mein kuch tareefi kalmaat keh naheen pa raha hoon. simply kahoon gaa ke bohat khoob. dua go hoon mita likhti rahen aur agar aisa likhen to kya baat hai. wishing you all the best musharrafhusain |
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THANK U -
26th August 2003, 10:00 AM
Thank u 1 again. Mufi dost i am repeating my words i admire towards ur replying. 1 request i have sumitted 1 shayri on dard plz go through it i am waiting 4 yr reply. when ur planning 2 visit india? take care.
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chahat -
26th August 2003, 06:15 PM
Itna sundar likhna aur sarhana,
muje tumhari yade pasand hai, aur isi tarah ishq pe do paigam dard ko ishq ki dawa do. Likhte rahiye |
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