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Koi lauta de mere bachpan ke woh din
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Koi lauta de mere bachpan ke woh din - 29th May 2005, 04:10 PM

Koi lauta de mere bachpan ke woh din

Raat katati thi jab maa ki gaud main

To sawera hota tha unhin chawon main

Koi lauta de mere bachpan ke woh din

Jab sirf main thi aur mera bachpan tha

Na koi gham tha aur na koi uljhan thi

Jahan zindagi khel khel main aage badhti thi

Na apno ka aabhaas tha aur na paraye ka ehsaas tha

Janhan pata na chalta tha kab raat hui aur kab din

Koi lauta de mere bachpan ke woh din

Jahan koi fikar na thi aur na koi khuwaab tha

Na kahin nafrat thi aur na hi chaahat thi

Sambhalna na aata tha phir bhi girne ka dar na tha

Jab na koi shikwa tha aur na shikayat ka ehsaas tha

Pata nahi zindagi ne woh sab liya kyun chin

Koi lauta de mere bachpan ke woh din........................

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29th May 2005, 06:11 PM

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bahut hi sachai hai ismein jo rituji ne likha hai
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30th May 2005, 08:38 AM

bachpan humesha nirala hota hai. lekin yeh sach hai ki har insaan ke andar ek bachha chupa hota hai. u can even now have the facilities of ur childhood, though not to that extent.
do u know, im 15, still my mother feeds me.
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30th May 2005, 10:06 AM

Hi Asgher Bhai,

Jab chhote hote hai toh intezaar rehta hai ke kab badhe ho jaaye. Aur jab jawaan ho jaate hai toh bachpan ke din yaad karte rehte hai. Insaan bhi ajeeb hai na.

Khair, bohot acchhi lagi yeh poem. Shukriya isse yaha humare saath baantne ke liye.


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Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.

We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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30th May 2005, 12:57 PM

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bahut hi sachai hai ismein jo rituji ne likha hai
thanks for sharing it here

sonal
sonal ji Phool ki tarah haste raho to hum khush hai dil khol kar milte raho to hum khush hain yeh nahi chahate ke roz milon kisi din yaad kar liya to hum khush hain......alvida


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30th May 2005, 01:01 PM

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bachpan humesha nirala hota hai. lekin yeh sach hai ki har insaan ke andar ek bachha chupa hota hai. u can even now have the facilities of ur childhood, though not to that extent.
do u know, im 15, still my mother feeds me.
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Faasle Kam Bhi Kiye Maine Faasle Mitane Ke Liye

Door Tum Kyun Chale Gaye Yaad Aane Ke Liye

Woh Wade Woh Kasmein Woh Irade Bhool Jane Ke Baad

Phir Kyun Tum Chale Aaye Khuwaabon Main Mujhe Satane Ke Liye

Saath Teri Tarah Chod Rahi Hain Saanse Meri

Lo Koi Chala Aaya Hai Mujhe Le Jane Ke Liye.....................


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30th May 2005, 01:14 PM

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Hi Asgher Bhai,

Jab chhote hote hai toh intezaar rehta hai ke kab badhe ho jaaye. Aur jab jawaan ho jaate hai toh bachpan ke din yaad karte rehte hai. Insaan bhi ajeeb hai na.

Khair, bohot acchhi lagi yeh poem. Shukriya isse yaha humare saath baantne ke liye.
salim bhai


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Muskuraane ki wajeh ban jaye

Na jane kab jane anjaane

ain nigaahoN ko tumhaari aadat pad jaye......................


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Salam Asgher Bhai ,

Bahot hi Khub




I like U , Utna ; U like me jitna;
I like U , tabse,U like me jabse;
I like U , tab tak,U like me jab tak;
'U'like me Jane kab tak;
But I like u MARTE DUM TAK
   
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30th May 2005, 01:42 PM

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Salam Asgher Bhai ,

Bahot hi Khub
w/salam captain bhai

har dard ab apna sa lagta hai

kia kare ain se koi rishta sa lagta hai

har dard se hum dosti kia karte hain

kyu ke ain main hum koi apna dhoondta kia karte hain

ab tanhayi bhi humhein tanha nahi kar pati

pata nahi log kyun ais ke naam se dara karte hain.....................


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