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Dard.... Ek Aur Baar.... -
3rd August 2007, 01:16 AM
Aadab Dosto...
Aapki keemti raaye ka muntazir... Dil ka dard hai kuch muskurakar padhe... Abrar... ------------------------------------------------------- Main aaj apne is dil ka sara dard likhta... Kuch lamhe khushi ke kuch gumgeen likhta... Sitamgar duniya sitam karti rahi hamesha... Jo sitam mujhpar hue main woh sitam likhta... Raaste badal badal kar chalte hain sabhi... Koi raaste na ajaye mere darte hai sabhi... Dar ki baat laazmi nahi hai yahan sahab... Yeh daud kaamiyabi ki hai yeh saaf likhta... Mohabbat bhi ek pesha hai aj ke aashikon ka... Jo dil se karta hai use jhoot maan lete hai... Jhooto ki mohabbat par sitaare gaad dete hai... Sacchi mohabbat ki bhool galti hoti hai par, Jhooti mohabbat ki bhool bhool maan lete hai, Mohabbat Aankhon se phechaan ek salah likhta... Dastan khatm nahi hoti saanse khatm ho jaati hai... Udhaar deta koi saanse yahan par to ae khuda, Is kitaab mein jee bhar main sirf tujhse mutalif, Thoda tera rahem kuch zyada tera zulm likhta.... Saanse ab roke nahi rukti,Zabaan roke nahi rukti, Khatm zindagi hoti wahan jahan mera aagaz likhta... Thak gaya khudaya is ghum ko likhte hue main... Haar chuka is zindagi se is kadar ab to samajh... Machli hu dariya mein par saans ko tadapti hui... Zindagi ke aakhri lamhe kuch is kadar likhta... Likhne ko to bahot hai yahan par is lamhe mein, Shayad jo saath nahi main wo saath likhta, Nafrat hone lagi hai tumse suna humne fizaon se, Jo aansuon ki barsaat hui woh barsaat ka saath likhta, Kuch geele geele se khawb the unhe sooraj mein, Main rakhta bhi to kis aas se rakhta??? Jeeta to kis aas se jeeta marta to kis aas se marta... Gar woh hota saath mere to shayd hi main yeh dard likta....  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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3rd August 2007, 11:55 AM
SALAM ABRAR BHAI ............ek baar phir kamal kardiya hai apne apne kalam se apke ashar dil ko chulene wale rahey apki her post behtreen hoti hai janab unhi likhte rahiye aur hame padne ka mouka detey rahiye..............AAP KA
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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3rd August 2007, 12:56 PM
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Mohabbat bhi ek pesha hai aj ke aashikon ka... Jo dil se karta hai use jhoot maan lete hai... Jhooto ki mohabbat par sitaare gaad dete hai... Sacchi mohabbat ki bhool galti hoti hai par, Jhooti mohabbat ki bhool bhool maan lete hai, Mohabbat Aankhon se phechaan ek salah likhta... daad hazir hai kabool kare........raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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3rd August 2007, 06:44 PM
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HEY ABRAR, wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........kya baat hai............itna dard ek saath..................wonderful feelings............beleive me,its just amazing............itna acha padhe bahut time ho gaya.............is gazal ki tarif ke liye alfaaz nahi hai mere paas...............thank u sooooooooooooooooo much 4 sharing this with us................... aap ki dost, LAMHA................  |
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3rd August 2007, 08:08 PM
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Gar woh hota saath mere to shayd hi main yeh dard likta.... bohat khoob abrar yeh aik line hi sab kuch bayan ker rahi hai pehle se bohat behter balkay kafi acha likha hai aur isliye pehle se behter kaha kionki is baar aap jo bayan kerna chahte the bohat wazah samajh main aya matlab ahsasaat ko bayan kerne main sochon per mukammal control tha is baar bohat khoob yunhi likhte raho per khush raha karo itna mayoos rehna insaan ke liye acha nahi hota rab naraz hota hai ke bohat nashukra banda hai ke aik hi dard ko le ker rota rehta hai aur di hoi nematon ka kabhi shukar ada nahi kerta khush raho....... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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4th August 2007, 12:25 PM
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.............etna dard bhara padne ke baad kuch nahi hai mere paas kahne ko...... kush raho khuda aapko har dard se door rakhe duao.n ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Shukriya!!! |
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Shukriya!!! -
5th August 2007, 09:46 PM
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Bhai sahab Ab syaad hume apko hamari posts par dekhne ki aadar si ho rahi hai.... Bohot bohot shukriya... ab to bas seekh hi raha hun... bas aap yunhi saath nibhate rahe.. Apna khayal rakhe... Ijazat.... Apka Dost Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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Shukriya... |
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12th August 2007, 12:34 PM
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Bhai aap andaza nahi laga sakte ke aapko hamari post par dekh ar hume kitni khushi hui hai... Aapki di hui daad sar aankhon par... bas yunhi saath nibhate rahiyega... Apka dost Abrar.... Ijazat... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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Shukriyah... |
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18th August 2007, 09:12 PM
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bas aap yunhi saath nibhate rahe... Apka Dost Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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Shukriyah.... |
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29th August 2007, 11:35 PM
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Kaise ho aap?? Maanii ji bohot bohot shukriyah apka ke aapne apne itna waqt nikal kar hume kuch samjhaya... Dil kabhi kabhi bohot bezaar ho jata hai to itna dard ubhar kar bahaar aajata hai.... Naarazgi khuda se nahi hai apne aap se hai... haadsaat hai ek zindagi ka jis ke galat faisle se ek apne kho hai shayad zindgi bhar ke liye.. Ne wez... yunhi saath dete rahiye... Aapka Dost Abrar... Duaon ke saath ijazat... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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29th August 2007, 11:39 PM
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Bohot bohot shukriyah aapne hamare dard ko samjha... Yunhi saath dete rahe... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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30th August 2007, 09:57 AM
Aap bahut achha likhte hain dost...
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Shukriyah... |
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Shukriyah... -
14th October 2007, 09:37 AM
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Duaon ke saath Ijazat... Abrar.... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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