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Question Kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta - 7th April 2008, 10:51 PM
aik or kohshish haazir hai ........JAWABAT ka intazaar rahy ga

Bin waja dil ko dukhaey ja rha hon
unginat aanso bahay ja rha hon

umer bher jiski khuwahish kerta rha
aj who hi lamha ganwaey ja rha hon

who kehta hai kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta
isliye wajood apna mitaey ja rha hon

howi doori ab itni k laut bhi nhi sakta
bebasi main sirf pachtaey ja rha hon

intaha-e-safar yeh yad aya , jald baazi main Mujeeb
kuch yaadien usk dil main bhulaey ja rha hon


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8th April 2008, 12:22 AM
apki ghazal padhi. men kuch likhta magar kia faida ku ki apki pichhli ghazal par jo tabsirah men ne kiya tha uska to apne koi jawab hi nahin diya. kahin aesa to nahin k apko bura laga ho so isi lie men kuchh nahin likh raha ku ki men apko naraz nahin karna chahta. its a good effort, keep writing.
   
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Kaisi bat kerty hain app ?????
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Kaisi bat kerty hain app ????? - 8th April 2008, 01:38 AM
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apki ghazal padhi. men kuch likhta magar kia faida ku ki apki pichhli ghazal par jo tabsirah men ne kiya tha uska to apne koi jawab hi nahin diya. kahin aesa to nahin k apko bura laga ho so isi lie men kuchh nahin likh raha ku ki men apko naraz nahin karna chahta. its a good effort, keep writing.

Dar asal , sahi bataon to mein ne app ka tabsirah pedh liya tha mager ... actually mein kuch dino se upset tha is liye shayad appko reply nhi kiya .......yakeen maaniye mujhy app k is mukhlisaana pan per thoda sa bhi ranj nhi howa ulta mujhy bahut khushi howi k app ne meri islaah k liye meri madad ki ............mein app ka shuker guzar hon or haan yaad rahy .......younhi saath dety rahiye ... mujhy daad nhi chahiye but islah chahiye

bahut bahut bahut shukriya

umeed kerta hon meri is koshish per bhi app tabsirah zaroor kerien gay or mein sab shayars se iltaja kerta hon k please mein jahan ghalti keron mujhy zaroor agah kijye ....jhooti daad nhi chahiye mujhy

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aik or kohshish haazir hai ........JAWABAT ka intazaar rahy ga

Bin waja dil ko dukhaey ja rha hon
unginat aanso bahay ja rha hon

umer bher jiski khuwahish kerta rha
aj who hi lamha ganwaey ja rha hon

who kehta hai kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta
isliye wajood apna mitaey ja rha hon

howi doori ab itni k laut bhi nhi sakta
bebasi main sirf pachtaey ja rha hon

intaha-e-safar yeh yad aya , jald baazi main Mujeeb
kuch yaadien usk dil main bhulaey ja rha hon


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bohat khoob mujeeb saheb...bohat khoob likha hai aapne...yuhi likhte rahiye.....

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25th November 2009, 09:57 PM
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aik or kohshish haazir hai ........JAWABAT ka intazaar rahy ga

Bin waja dil ko dukhaey ja rha hon
unginat aanso bahay ja rha hon

umer bher jiski khuwahish kerta rha
aj who hi lamha ganwaey ja rha hon

who kehta hai kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta
isliye wajood apna mitaey ja rha hon

howi doori ab itni k laut bhi nhi sakta
bebasi main sirf pachtaey ja rha hon

intaha-e-safar yeh yad aya , jald baazi main Mujeeb
kuch yaadien usk dil main bhulaey ja rha hon


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Dear Mujeeb.....aaj tumhari es poetry par nazar gaye tp padey bina rah na saki....bahut accha likha hai tumne, ahsaas acche lage par yeh 2 sher dil ke khaas kareeb rahe.


woh kehta hai kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta
isliye wajood apna mitaey ja rha hon

howi doori ab itni k laut bhi nhi sakta
bebasi main sirf pachtaey ja rha hon

salamat raho
duao.n ke saath

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Exclamation 26th November 2009, 12:19 PM
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aik or kohshish haazir hai ........JAWABAT ka intazaar rahy ga

Bin waja dil ko dukhaey ja rha hon
unginat aanso bahay ja rha hon

umer bher jiski khuwahish kerta rha
aj who hi lamha ganwaey ja rha hon

who kehta hai kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta
isliye wajood apna mitaey ja rha hon

howi doori ab itni k laut bhi nhi sakta
bebasi main sirf pachtaey ja rha hon

intaha-e-safar yeh yad aya , jald baazi main Mujeeb
kuch yaadien usk dil main bhulaey ja rha hon


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kuch yaadien usk dil main bhulaey ja rha hon

Dua go,
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aik or kohshish haazir hai ........JAWABAT ka intazaar rahy ga

Bin waja dil ko dukhaey ja rha hon
unginat aanso bahay ja rha hon

umer bher jiski khuwahish kerta rha
aj who hi lamha ganwaey ja rha hon

who kehta hai kisi k jaany se koi farq nhi pedta
isliye wajood apna mitaey ja rha hon

howi doori ab itni k laut bhi nhi sakta
bebasi main sirf pachtaey ja rha hon

intaha-e-safar yeh yad aya , jald baazi main Mujeeb
kuch yaadien usk dil main bhulaey ja rha hon


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