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23rd March 2008, 04:15 PM
Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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23rd March 2008, 04:56 PM
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Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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wah wah wah pooja her sher be misaal hai bohat arse baad parrhne ka moqa mila tumhe .... itna acha aur itna dilkash andaz hai ke tareef ke liye mujhe alfaz nahi mil rahe aur alfaz ka chunao bohat khoobi se kiya hai dili daad qubool karo yunhi likhti raho dear sweeeti humesha khush raho ameen
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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23rd March 2008, 11:29 PM
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Originally Posted by pooja_d
Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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hi Pooja
bahut accha likkha hai...padhkar bahut accha laga
umeed hai aise hi padhne ka mauqa dubara dogi
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
yeh sher dil ke kareeb raha
likhtee raho aise hi
taek caer
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
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duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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24th March 2008, 07:40 PM
Pooja jee :
Namaste!!
taveel arse ke baad bazm meiN aapkii taazaah Ghazal paRhne ko milii.. be-had KhuShii hu'ii.. aur aisaa beHteriN aNdaaz aapka pehle maiNe kabhee deKhaa nah Thaa.. urdu lafzoN kaa bhee ba-Khuubee iStemaal kiYaa hai aapne apnii Ghazal meiN.. aap ki sabhee GhazaloN meiN sey mujHe yeh Ghazal sab sey beHteriN lagii.. aur beHteriN to honi hi thee.. aapne itani meHnat jo kee hay.. Khudaa sey eezaab yahi hay kii wo aapko har kadam par kaamyaabee dete raheN.. ees nafeez Ghazal par merii dilii daad-o-mubaaraQbaad ko qabUl keejiyeNgaa.. YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiYe..!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka dost
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24th March 2008, 07:55 PM
namaste chirkut ma,m..........
koi urdu ki mahaan dictionary haath lag gayi hain kya???haan meri 2 din pehle hi chori ho gayi hain heeeeeee......chal chal meri aur se itni acchi kavvish par tarif kubool karle....tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi ki maine teri ulti sidhi kavvish ki tarif kar di............ gussa aaya na thanda paani peele..........main to mazaak kar rahin thi...........bahut hi acccha likha hain tumne...dil se daad kubool karna meri chirkut.........meanings dene ka shukriya madamji..............
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
tumhari di...
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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25th March 2008, 06:43 PM
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Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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wow wonderful pooja
keep it up the good work
regards
manu
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26th March 2008, 12:27 AM
Mani dii,
Aapko yahaa paa'kar behad khushi hui...aapki daad sar'aankhoN pe mohatarmaa....
bahot bahot shukriya saraahane ke liye..
saath deti rahiyega....
Grazie
Ur sweeti
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28th March 2008, 11:03 AM
hmmmmmmm..........yeh gazal pooja ki hi likhi hue hai kaya....sach kahuN matko mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha, ki aaltu faaltu ki gappe ladane wali pooja etni badiya shayri bhi karti hai.... just kidding
sach mein ek nayaab gazal padne ka mokka diya hai tumne humey....har sher kabiley tareef tha....aur meanings dekar bahut accha kiya warna samaj hi nahi aata ki kaya likha hai
vaise yeh dedicate kis ko hi hai matko rani
yoon hi badiya kalaam likhti raho
kush raho
tumhari punjabi kudi
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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hi Pooja
bahut accha likkha hai...padhkar bahut accha laga
umeed hai aise hi padhne ka mauqa dubara dogi
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
yeh sher dil ke kareeb raha
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thanku sis....aapne saath diya , bahot achha laga....ummid hai aage bhi aise hi saath detin ahengi.......graziepooja
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa pooja di ne tujhe altu faltu ke gappe ladane wali kaha chirkut.................... ab bol.
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th April 2008, 08:27 AM
Hi Pooja
apki ghazal padhi. bahot khoob hai. ghazal padhte huye chand ek baat zehn men aayiN so puch raha hu.n plz jawab dijiega. apki ghazal ki urdu qadre baland paaye kii he jis men apne farsi ki tarakeeb musta'mil kii hen aor apki is gahzal men ek kohna mashq shayara nazar aati he jiska kalam ustadanah he. share karne ke lie shukrya.
ASRAA-E-AALAM = whole world
yeh murakkab lafz men ne na hi kabhi suna aor na hi kabhi padha. ap kia bata sakti hen k is lafz ke kia yehi mani he jo apne likha he. mera khayal he k apne lafz ka durust istemal nahin kiya he.
aapne apne dusre sher men " chain-o-sukoon" qalamband kiya he jis men chain Hindi kaa lafz he aur sukoon farsi ka. iski ijazat nahin he shairi men ku k "vao ataf" men donon alfaz ya to Farsi zaban ke hone chahiye ya phir arabi ke hone lazmi hen.
apke teesre sher men lafz aya he " lehaaza". is lafz ke mani mujhe nahin pata plz bata dijie. thank you. kia matlab he is shabd ka?
aapne apne chauthe sher men " lamha-e-judai ke dauran" likha hai. chun k apne "lamha" ko segha e wahid meN use kiya he is lie "dauran" ka lafz be-mani ho gaya hai. agar, " lamhaat-e-judai ke dauran" likhtin to saheeh hotaa. nazr-e-sani lar lijie
apne apne maqte men " harzah zamane" musta'mil kiya he air uske matlab "nonsense" bataya he. agar ye meaning liye jayen to sher ka matlab hii bhang ho jata he. r u sure k ye "harzah" hii word he jo ap use karna chahti thin? ye koi aor lafz to nahin?
is post men maiN ne urdu zara mushkil si likhi he ye soch kar k masha Allah apki urdu to bahot achhi he aor apko samajhne men koi mushkil nahin hogi.
PLEASE MERE SAWALAAT KAA KHAATIR kHOWAAH JAWAAB BIL-ZAROOR DIJIEGA. shukrya.
faqat MuKhlis
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Originally Posted by pooja_d
Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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23rd April 2008, 07:04 PM
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Pooja jee :
Namaste!!
taveel arse ke baad bazm meiN aapkii taazaah Ghazal paRhne ko milii.. be-had KhuShii hu'ii.. aur aisaa beHteriN aNdaaz aapka pehle maiNe kabhee deKhaa nah Thaa.. urdu lafzoN kaa bhee ba-Khuubee iStemaal kiYaa hai aapne apnii Ghazal meiN.. aap ki sabhee GhazaloN meiN sey mujHe yeh Ghazal sab sey beHteriN lagii.. aur beHteriN to honi hi thee.. aapne itani meHnat jo kee hay.. Khudaa sey eezaab yahi hay kii wo aapko har kadam par kaamyaabee dete raheN.. ees nafeez Ghazal par merii dilii daad-o-mubaaraQbaad ko qabUl keejiyeNgaa.. YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiYe..!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka dost
~ Dhaval
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Jee Namaste,
Jee, sacch, bahot lambe antraal ke baad kuch likha...ghazal likhne baitthi to laga jaise likhna bhool gai hu...lekin yahaa ghazal ke saath haziree dene ke baad achhaa lagaa...or jab aap sabhi ka saath milta hai to khushi me izaafa ho jaata hai..aapki honsla'hafzaai ke liye tah'e'dil se shukriya..
saath dete rahiyega..
Ijaazat!!
grazie
pooja
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24th April 2008, 05:02 PM
Hi Pooja,
kesi ho? aap ne mere sawaloN ka jawab abhi tak nahiN diya he. i'm still waiting. plz reply. thank you
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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24th April 2008, 05:08 PM
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hmmmmmmm..........yeh gazal pooja ki hi likhi hue hai kaya....sach kahuN matko mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha, ki aaltu faaltu ki gappe ladane wali pooja etni badiya shayri bhi karti hai.... just kidding
sach mein ek nayaab gazal padne ka mokka diya hai tumne humey....har sher kabiley tareef tha....aur meanings dekar bahut accha kiya warna samaj hi nahi aata ki kaya likha hai
vaise yeh dedicate kis ko hi hai matko rani
yoon hi badiya kalaam likhti raho
kush raho
tumhari punjabi kudi
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Zamane ko dikhane ke liye muskura rahe the hum.......
aur apne dard ko seene mein dafna rahe the hum.........
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26th April 2008, 10:31 PM
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namaste chirkut ma,m..........
koi urdu ki mahaan dictionary haath lag gayi hain kya???haan meri 2 din pehle hi chori ho gayi hain heeeeeee......chal chal meri aur se itni acchi kavvish par tarif kubool karle....tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi ki maine teri ulti sidhi kavvish ki tarif kar di............ gussa aaya na thanda paani peele..........main to mazaak kar rahin thi...........bahut hi acccha likha hain tumne...dil se daad kubool karna meri chirkut.........meanings dene ka shukriya madamji..............
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
tumhari di...
mausam
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Thanks chirkut......
kyaa karuN yaar, dictionary hii churaa lii....lekin vo aapki nahiN...balki meri thhi jo aapne churaai thhi...maangne pe mili nahN to churaanee hee paree....uff.....
Aapkaa bahoot bahoot shukriiyaah iss koshish ko pasand karne ke liye...or honsla'hafzaaii ke liye...or mujhe aapki kisee bhii baat par kabhee bhee gussa nahiN aataa...jaanti huN jock maarne ki aadat hai aapki
Saath detiN rahiyegaah...
ijaazat!!
Grazie
Pooja
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27th April 2008, 05:27 AM
hello miss pooja
agar aapne ghalthi ki hai,aur koi aapse savaal kar raha hai to aap uska javab kyon nahin de rahi hai?
Mr. Mukhlis ne aapse kuch reply maangi hai.
Kya apki ghazal ka explanation aap nahin de sakthi?
many people are waiting for your reply.
very funny.
Why dont you dare to answer such people?
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27th April 2008, 09:36 AM
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Silence speaks louder than words!
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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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hello miss pooja
agar aapne ghalthi ki hai,aur koi aapse savaal kar raha hai to aap uska javab kyon nahin de rahi hai?
Mr. Mukhlis ne aapse kuch reply maangi hai.
Kya apki ghazal ka explanation aap nahin de sakthi?
many people are waiting for your reply.
very funny.
Why dont you dare to answer such people?
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Namaste!!..
Mohataram, main Mukhils jee se kahe chuki huN kii, jab unke javaab kaa no. aayegaa, main unheN javaab dedungi..dusri baat himmat ki apne kee..to aap khud hi andaazaa lagaa lijiye..jisne itne nukhs ke saath ek ghazal is anjuman meN rakhi ho..usmeN kitnee himmat hogi...nanana ye himmat nahiN gustaakhi huii..hmm... waise mere paas Mukhlis jee ke har savaal kaa javaab hai janaab, agar aapse intezaar nahiN hotaa to Mukhlis jee ke savaaloN ka main aaj hii javaab dedungi..
Ijaazat!!
grazie
Pooja
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27th April 2008, 05:14 PM
uffo!
Sanaash sahib aur Pooja Ji, aap log kyuN ladne lage bhai? muddayi sust aor gawah chust shayad isi ko kahte heN. yes! Pooja Ji ne mujhe PM kar ke yeh baat kahi thi. mujhe koi jaldi nahiN, meri Train to nahiN chhuTi ja rahi hai!!!
Pooja Ji, take ur time 'coz i'm in no hurry! thank you.
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Hello Mukhlis jee,
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apki ghazal padhi. bahot khoob hai. ghazal padhte huye chand ek baat zehn men aayiN so puch raha hu.n plz jawab dijiega. apki ghazal ki urdu qadre baland paaye kii he jis men apne farsi ki tarakeeb musta'mil kii hen aor apki is gahzal men ek kohna mashq shayara nazar aati he jiska kalam ustadanah he. share karne ke lie shukrya.
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Jee sabse pahale to aapka bahot bahot shukriyaah jo itne dil'kash andaaz meN tareef kee..jee janaab sacch kahuN to main humeshaa se hii aise savaal'o'javaaboN ki muntazirr rahi huN..mujhe bahot hee achhaa lagaa ke aapne dil se is ghazal ko padhaa..
Haazirr hai ye naacheez aapki khidmat meN...
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ASRAA-E-AALAM = whole world
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Iske maaanii poorii duniyaa
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yeh murakkab lafz men ne na hi kabhi suna aor na hi kabhi padha. ap kia bata sakti hen k is lafz ke kia yehi mani he jo apne likha he. mera khayal he k apne lafz ka durust istemal nahin kiya he.
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Jee, maaanii main bataa chukee huN..ye ek faarsi alfaaz hai..dekhiye saaheb, har insaan kaa apnaa apnaa nazariyaa hai likhne padhne samajhne kaa..aapke maa'ine meN maine iss alfaaz kaa sahee istemaal nahiN kiyaa, or mere nazariye se dekheN to iss sher meN iss alfaaz se beh'tariin koi dusraa alfaaz thha hii nahiN..agar aap iss sher ka matlab dekheN to kuch yuN hoga:
Iss pooree duniyaa meN muhabbat saa badaa raaz nahiN hai..lekin jab ye raaz faash hotaa hai to apne bhi begaane ban jaate haiN..ye baat aap bhi jaante haiN or main bhi..{maine dekhaa hai apno ko paraayoN saa sulooQ karte hue}.. isii liye dusrii line meN likhaa ke duniyaa ke logoN kaa ek dost jaisaa andaaz kahaaN?...Sahii kahaa naa Mukhlis jee?
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aapne apne dusre sher men "chain-o-sukoon" qalamband kiya he jis men chain Hindi kaa lafz he aur sukoon farsi ka. iski ijazat nahin he shairi men ku k "vao ataf" men donon alfaz ya to Farsi zaban ke hone chahiye ya phir arabi ke hone lazmi hen.
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Jee mwaafii dijiyegaah..chain hindi ka lafz nahiN hai..hindi meN chain ko WISHRAM YA ARAAM kahate haiN..
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apke teesre sher men lafz aya he "lehaaza". is lafz ke mani mujhe nahin pata plz bata dijie. thank you. kia matlab he is shabd ka?
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Lehaaza = Hence = iss jaghNaa se = taraf n in hindi its prakaar
Is lafz ko maine apni ghazal meN jaghNaa dee..kyuki mujhe yahii achhaa lagaa..agar aap iss lafz ke saath sher ka matlab main bataau to kuch yuN hoga:
Main apni zindagii meN bahot chaahne waaloN se roo'b'roo hui huN, lekin jise maine chaaha uske mukaable meN sab haar gayeN haiN..main jise chaahti huN uskaa har andaaz baakiyoN se jooda hai..har andaaz ko baNyaa karne ke liye maine '' khiraam-e-naaz '' ka example diya hai..
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aapne apne chauthe sher men "lamha-e-judai ke dauran" likha hai. chun k apne "lamha" ko segha e wahid meN use kiya he is lie "dauran" ka lafz be-mani ho gaya hai. agar, "lamhaat-e-judai ke dauran" likhtin to saheeh hotaa.
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Jee, main aapki iss baat se ittefaaQ rakhti huN ke lamhaat'e'judaai ka istemaal durust hotaa..shukriyaah aapki iss salaah ke liye...
Be'shaq
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apne apne maqte men "harzah zamane" musta'mil kiya he air uske matlab "nonsense" bataya he. agar ye meaning liye jayen to sher ka matlab hii bhang ho jata he. r u sure k ye "harzah" hii word he jo ap use karna chahti thin? ye koi aor lafz to nahin?
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Jeee nahiN..mwaaf kijiye..aap galat haiN..zaraa aap sher ko fir se padhiye..or samajhne ki koshish kijiye..aap pahale iss sher ki aakhirii line padhiye uske baad usse pahale waali..sher ke maani kuch iss tarhaa haiN:
Harzah = nonsense = na'samajh
Ye zamaanaa sacch meN naa'samajh hai..be'shaQ do pyaar karne waaloN ko tan se joodaa kar diyaa jaaye, lekin Mann, dil, dimmaag to ek dusre ke paas hii rahataa hai naa..zamaanaa chaahne waaloN ko joodaa karte waqt ye kyuN bhool jaataa hai ke pyaar mitaane se nahi mit'taa..pyaar tan se nahiN Mann se hotaa hai..bhale hi milne ki ijaazat naa ho, lein apne pyaar ke baare meN soch to sakte hi haiN naa..jab tak do pyaar karne waale khud apni marzi se alag nahi ho jaate tab tak duniyaa unhe alag nahiN kar saktii..chaahe jitnii bhii koshisheN kar leN log, lekin jab tak dil hai, tab tak apne pyaar kaa khayaal zahan meN haiN..
NA'SAMAJH ZAMAANE KO KOUN SAMJHAAYE KE PAHARE DARR PE LAGAAYE JAATE HAIN..DIL'O'DIMMAG PE NAHIn..SOCH TO AISII HOTI HAI JO HAR PAHARE KO PAAR KARKE KAHIn BHII PAHONCH JAATI HAI..
Ji haaN maine iss lafz ka ek dam durust istemaal kiya hai..
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is post men maiN ne urdu zara mushkil si likhi he ye soch kar k masha Allah apki urdu to bahot achhi he aor apko samajhne men koi mushkil nahin hogi.
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hahaha..mujhe aapki urdu samajhne meN koi dikkat nahiN huii..iss chand arse meN maine thhodi bahut urdu zabaan sikhii hai...
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PLEASE MERE SAWALAAT KAA KHAATIR kHOWAAH JAWAAB BIL-ZAROOR DIJIEGA.
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maine aapke har savaal ka javaab diya hai, ummid hogi ke aap sahamat ho gaye honge mere javaaboN se..agar nahiN..to aap mujhse fir puchh sakte haiN..
Shukriyaah to aapko kahungii jo aapne mujhe itne pyaare savaaloN se navaazaa or khidmat ka maukaa diya
Grazie
Pooja
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27th April 2008, 08:07 PM
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
bhut hii khub.....kaisii ho meri gudia? kahan gaye wo haseen din jab ye bazam mehkti thii lakhon phoolo.n se abaad thaa ye chaman....teri gazal bhut achi laggi...khush raho......raj.....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Hello Mukhlis jee,
Hi Pooja Ji
Jee sabse pahale to aapka bahot bahot shukriyaah jo itne dil'kash andaaz meN tareef kee..jee janaab sacch kahuN to main humeshaa se hii aise savaal'o'javaaboN ki muntazirr rahi huN..mujhe bahot hee achhaa lagaa ke aapne dil se is ghazal ko padhaa..
good...thats the spirit. aise hii ham ek dusre se kuchh seekh sakeNge
Haazirr hai ye naacheez aapki khidmat meN...
jawaab-dehii ke liye shukria bahot bahot aapkaa
Iske maaanii poorii duniyaa
Jee, maaanii main bataa chukee huN..ye ek faarsi alfaaz hai..dekhiye saaheb, har insaan kaa apnaa apnaa nazariyaa hai likhne padhne samajhne kaa..aapke maa'ine meN maine iss alfaaz kaa sahee istemaal nahiN kiyaa, or mere nazariye se dekheN to iss sher meN iss alfaaz se beh'tariin koi dusraa alfaaz thha hii nahiN..agar aap iss sher ka matlab dekheN to kuch yuN hoga:
sab se pahle, aapne kaii jagah likhaa "alfaaz" likha aur use singular ke taur par istemaal kiya hai. yeh, by the way, plural hai aur iska singular hai "lafz". Khair.
aapne jo ma'nii bataaye haiN vo saheeh hai magar "asraa-e-aalam" koi lafz nahiN hai bal k vo murakkab lafz hai "ARSA-E-AALAM" and NOT "asra-e-aalam" as u have used. is it clear now? mere Khayaal se aapne jahaN se sunaa yaa paRhaa hai vo apako Ghalat yaad ho gaya.
by the way, arsa aur aalam donoN hii Arabii ke alfaaz haiN
Jee mwaafii dijiyegaah..chain hindi ka lafz nahiN hai..hindi meN chain ko WISHRAM YA ARAAM kahate haiN..
are mu'aaf karne waali koi baat nahiiN. Pooja, aapko Ghalat-fehmi ho rahi hai. chain is a Hindi word. aap chaaheN to kisi luGhat [dictionary] meN dekh saktii haiN.
by the way, AARAAM lafz FARSI ka hai
Lehaaza = Hence = iss jaghNaa se = taraf n in hindi its prakaar
is baar phir aapse sunne aur samajhne meN Ghalatii huii hai, sorry to say
yeh lafz "lehaaza [hence]" jo aapne use kiya hai vo actually arabi ka COMPOUND word hai [le=for ; haazaa=this---for this (reason) = hence]. aapne jo lafz sher meN use kiya hai ba-ma'ni lehaaza nahiiN hai kyuN k is lafz ke use ke saath she'r kaa koi matlab nahiiN nikalta.
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
har IS LIYE (is prakaar) tajrabaat huye haiN zaat e ushshaaq par (se nahiiN)
ab aap Khud dekhiye she'r meN le-haaza ke koi ma'nii nahiiN nikalte.
dar asl, aapko ek aur lafz hai jisse muGhaalta [confusion] huaa hai aur vo lafz hai laHza [moment, pal, chhaNR, ghaRii] ab dekhiye k she'r ka matlab Theek ho jaayega, ya'ni
Har laHza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se [par]
har PAL [har chhaNR, every moment] ushshaaq kii zaat par tajarabaat huye haiN.
lehaazaa aur laHza kii hijje [spellings]
lehazaa = laam, chhoTi he, chhoTaa alif, ze, alif]
kaHza = laam, baRii He, zuaad, chhoTi he]
Is lafz ko maine apni ghazal meN jaghNaa dee..kyuki mujhe yahii achhaa lagaa..agar aap iss lafz ke saath sher ka matlab main bataau to kuch yuN hoga:
Main apni zindagii meN bahot chaahne waaloN se roo'b'roo hui huN, lekin jise maine chaaha uske mukaable meN sab haar gayeN haiN..main jise chaahti huN uskaa har andaaz baakiyoN se jooda hai..har andaaz ko baNyaa karne ke liye maine '' khiraam-e-naaz '' ka example diya hai..
by the way, roo-ba-roo ka matlab muNh dar muNh ya'ni aamne-saamne haiN. i think this is NOT what u meant by roo-ba-roo...RIGHT?
Jee, main aapki iss baat se ittefaaQ rakhti huN ke lamhaat'e'judaai ka istemaal durust hotaa..shukriyaah aapki iss salaah ke liye...
thank you!
Be'shaq
thank you
Jeee nahiN..mwaaf kijiye..aap galat haiN..zaraa aap sher ko fir se padhiye..or samajhne ki koshish kijiye..aap pahale iss sher ki aakhirii line padhiye uske baad usse pahale waali..sher ke maani kuch iss tarhaa haiN:
Harzah = nonsense = na'samajh
Ye zamaanaa sacch meN naa'samajh hai..be'shaQ do pyaar karne waaloN ko tan se joodaa kar diyaa jaaye, lekin Mann, dil, dimmaag to ek dusre ke paas hii rahataa hai naa..zamaanaa chaahne waaloN ko joodaa karte waqt ye kyuN bhool jaataa hai ke pyaar mitaane se nahi mit'taa..pyaar tan se nahiN Mann se hotaa hai..bhale hi milne ki ijaazat naa ho, lein apne pyaar ke baare meN soch to sakte hi haiN naa..jab tak do pyaar karne waale khud apni marzi se alag nahi ho jaate tab tak duniyaa unhe alag nahiN kar saktii..chaahe jitnii bhii koshisheN kar leN log, lekin jab tak dil hai, tab tak apne pyaar kaa khayaal zahan meN haiN..
NA'SAMAJH ZAMAANE KO KOUN SAMJHAAYE KE PAHARE DARR PE LAGAAYE JAATE HAIN..DIL'O'DIMMAG PE NAHIn..SOCH TO AISII HOTI HAI JO HAR PAHARE KO PAAR KARKE KAHIn BHII PAHONCH JAATI HAI..
Ji haaN maine iss lafz ka ek dam durust istemaal kiya hai..
maiN ne she'r ko paRhaa aur aapne "harzah" lafz ko "nonsense" ke ma'ni meN use kiyaa hai jo k saheeh nahiN hai kyuN k harzah ke ma'ni nonsense nahiN hai bal k iska saheeh matlab hai "gaali galauj karna" in other words to swear at some one lo "harzah saraaii" kahte haiN. mere Khayal se "har jaa" [har jagah] munaasib hogaa. agar aap chaaheN to yeh lafz qubool kar lijiye ya chaahe to radd kar dijiye
hahaha..mujhe aapki urdu samajhne meN koi dikkat nahiN huii..iss chand arse meN maine thhodi bahut urdu zabaan sikhii hai...
i'm glad to know that you have indeed learned quite a bit. i hope u'll continue this process. i wish u all the best.
maine aapke har savaal ka javaab diya hai, ummid hogi ke aap sahamat ho gaye honge mere javaaboN se..agar nahiN..to aap mujhse fir puchh sakte haiN..
thank you, shukria, karam, mehrbaanii
Shukriyaah to aapko kahungii jo aapne mujhe itne pyaare savaaloN se navaazaa or khidmat ka maukaa diya
u r most welcome. its all my pleasure
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maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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wow wonderful pooja
keep it up the good work
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Thanks Manoo jii...
Grazie
Pooja
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hmmmmmmm..........yeh gazal pooja ki hi likhi hue hai kaya....sach kahuN matko mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha, ki aaltu faaltu ki gappe ladane wali pooja etni badiya shayri bhi karti hai.... just kidding
sach mein ek nayaab gazal padne ka mokka diya hai tumne humey....har sher kabiley tareef tha....aur meanings dekar bahut accha kiya warna samaj hi nahi aata ki kaya likha hai
vaise yeh dedicate kis ko hi hai matko rani
yoon hi badiya kalaam likhti raho
kush raho
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Pranaam di..{Kabhi kabhi sanskaar yaad aa jaate hain }
Wah wah..itne time se mujhe padh rahi hain..or aaj kaha ke yakeen nahi hua...great haa... .....waise likhi to maine hi hai..lekin likh sakoo, uske kabil aapne banaaya hai.. ...aapke saath chalte chalte bahot kuch sikha hai... ...
Shukriya shukriya mohtarmaa jii ...saraahaane ke liye, aane ke liye..wah wah kya line hai ....
Dedicate kise ho sakti hai.....aapko pata hai ke kise kiya hoga
Saath deti rahiyegaa...
Grazie
Aapki
Matko gudiya rani
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3rd June 2008, 09:46 PM
good very nice
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Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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Matko....teri es gazal par aaj phir reply karne ko dil kar rha hai, kyuki wo beeta waqt yaad aa rha hai...kitna haseen tha wo daur...tu aa jaye to shayad wo daur phir se lout aaye.
bahuttttt saare pyar ke saath
dii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
*Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world
Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world
Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N
Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se
Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N
Tajribaah = Experience
Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers
Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking
Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan
Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N
Niyaaz = Desir
Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja''
kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N
Harzah = Nonsense
Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight
Grazie
Pooja
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bahut khoob likhatee ho poojaa waah
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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14th May 2015, 10:38 PM
Dear Pooja
Main aaj bhi yahee kahuunga urdu lafzon ka behterin istemaal..khushii huii ees Ghaza ko paDh kar...sister ki baaton se sehmat huun fir se liKhnaa shuru kar do.... aik baar fir se dil se daad
Grazie
tumhara dost
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Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
Ahaal-e-duniya ka Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
waaaaaaaaaaaaah... Pooja jee waaaaaaaaaaaaah...
Tamaam ki tamaam ghazal kisi mussawwir ki mussawwiri ki tasveer sii lagi...
daad qaabol kejiye!
likhte rahiye..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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15th May 2015, 04:14 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
Matko....teri es gazal par aaj phir reply karne ko dil kar rha hai, kyuki wo beeta waqt yaad aa rha hai...kitna haseen tha wo daur...tu aa jaye to shayad wo daur phir se lout aaye.
bahuttttt saare pyar ke saath
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Sunita di,
main agar or kuch din yaha naa au to aap shayad meri purani saari posts ko highlight kar doge hahahaha
sach me bada maza aata hai apki pyari pyari bate padhke..jab ap mujhe yaad karte ho tb to waaaahhhhh :* kissshhhii apke liye
or di..thanku so muchhhh wapas ise front page pe lane ke liye...
aati rahungi ab to...
apki matko
pooja
grazie
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15th May 2015, 04:15 PM
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bahut khoob likhatee ho poojaa waah
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bahot bahot shukriya Masoom ji yaha aane ke liye or pasand karne ke liye....
pooja
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15th May 2015, 04:17 PM
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Dear Pooja
Main aaj bhi yahee kahuunga urdu lafzon ka behterin istemaal..khushii huii ees Ghaza ko paDh kar...sister ki baaton se sehmat huun fir se liKhnaa shuru kar do.... aik baar fir se dil se daad
Grazie
tumhara dost
Dhaval
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Dhaval...Tera gala naa daba du main ..... wese sach batau.. mujhe khud ko yakiin nahi ho raha ke ye main likhi hai hihihihi...shoooooo
jaa jaa faafda dhokla khaa.. grazie sirf mera hai gujju
GRAZIE
pooja
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15th May 2015, 04:18 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
Ahaal-e-duniya ka Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N
waaaaaaaaaaaaah... Pooja jee waaaaaaaaaaaaah...
Tamaam ki tamaam ghazal kisi mussawwir ki mussawwiri ki tasveer sii lagi...
daad qaabol kejiye!
likhte rahiye..
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Thanks for liking Hassan jee ....
grazie
Pooja
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18th May 2015, 12:29 AM
Pooja ji, Namaskar ...!
Bohot achha laga aapka kalaam. Pehli dafeh paDh raha huuN aapko. Andaaz-e-bayaaN bhi lajawaab hai. Nacheez ki taraf se daad qubool farmaayeiN..
Aate raheiN..Likhte raheiN.
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18th May 2015, 08:49 AM
Hi pooja...
kya kamaal likhti hain aap waaaah! Shukraguzar hoon di ki meharbani se ham ise padh paye.....aage bhi hamare sath apne thoughts share kijiye..intzaar rahega....
Aati rahiye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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16th June 2015, 08:37 PM
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Hi pooja...
kya kamaal likhti hain aap waaaah! Shukraguzar hoon di ki meharbani se ham ise padh paye.....aage bhi hamare sath apne thoughts share kijiye..intzaar rahega....
Aati rahiye....
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Hi madhu,
Mujhe to khud ko yad nhi ke maine kon kon si ghazal nazam likhi hai.. Ye to sunita di hain jo bas mujhe pdhti rahti hain or purani post highlight kaerti rahti hain hehehehe....
Thanku so much for coming reading and liking...
Grazie
Pooja
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16th June 2015, 08:41 PM
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Pooja ji, Namaskar ...!
Bohot achha laga aapka kalaam. Pehli dafeh paDh raha huuN aapko. Andaaz-e-bayaaN bhi lajawaab hai. Nacheez ki taraf se daad qubool farmaayeiN..
Aate raheiN..Likhte raheiN.
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Sagar jee, namaste..
Mujhe bhi bahot achha laga purani koshish ko wapas pdh kar or aap sab se fir se taarif sunn kar ... So your compliment is accepted
Thanku so much
Grazie
Pooja
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16th June 2015, 08:51 PM
Pooja ji ....hum moderator forum meiN charcha ker rahe the ki , purane shayroN ki ghaziN doond ker dobara post ki jaye under the head Yadon ke Zharokhon se........
Taaki ane wale naye shayron ko pata chale ki unke buzurg (sorry seniors) ke jamane mein kaise shayri hoti thi aur ye lo aapki 7 years old purani ghazal padne ka mauka mila..aur bhari bharkam urdu aur farsee ke lazon ke mayne pad ke ehsaas hua ki hum logon ko bahut kuch seekhna hai apbe buzurgon se ..........
Rahi aap ki ghazal ki baat tau ye apne aap meiN mukammal thi aur sabse acha mujhe makta laga .
Bahut khushi hui aapko per ke aur umeed karte haiN ki aap apna keemti waqt humein deti rahaeingi aur apni kavishon se sdc pe raunak badati rahengi.
ShubhkamnaoN sahit ,
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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16th June 2015, 09:07 PM
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Pooja ji ....hum moderator forum meiN charcha ker rahe the ki , purane shayroN ki ghaziN doond ker dobara post ki jaye under the head Yadon ke Zharokhon se........
Taaki ane wale naye shayron ko pata chale ki unke buzurg (sorry seniors) ke jamane mein kaise shayri hoti thi aur ye lo aapki 7 years old purani ghazal padne ka mauka mila..aur bhari bharkam urdu aur farsee ke lazon ke mayne pad ke ehsaas hua ki hum logon ko bahut kuch seekhna hai apbe buzurgon se ..........
Rahi aap ki ghazal ki baat tau ye apne aap meiN mukammal thi aur sabse acha mujhe makta laga .
Bahut khushi hui aapko per ke aur umeed karte haiN ki aap apna keemti waqt humein deti rahaeingi aur apni kavishon se sdc pe raunak badati rahengi.
ShubhkamnaoN sahit ,
Sanjay Sehgal
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Sanjay ji...
Yun to khud ko buzurg kehlawana kisiko pasand nhi par aaj apne kuch is tarha se mujhe buzurgo ki list me daal diya k bas khushi horahi hai vo bhi bahot zyada... Aapki taarif k shabd padh k lag raha hai maano main bahot achha likhti hu ...jabki mujhe itna zyada likhna aata nhi... Bas kabhi kabhi man me aajata to likh leti thi... Ab aadat chhoot si gai hai... Par chu.n kiii aapne itni izzat bakshi hai to mera bhi farz banta hai ki main pahle ki tarha writing resume karu .... Koshish karungi jald hi kuch naaya laane ki ... Taaki aap ko salo purani ghazal na search karni pde ...
Saraahne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya... Or meri purani ghazal ko highlight karne ke layak samajhne ke liye or bhi zyada shukriya...
Milte rahenge...
Grazie
Pooja
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17th June 2015, 12:32 PM
wah bahut khoob......................................
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