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Rote Rote Dard Apna Sunata Hai Koi/kkkhan - 24th September 2008, 12:14 AM

Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../

Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../

Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../

Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../


Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./

"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN


shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../

Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./




wah tahir saheb kya khoob likha hai apne....ye do sher zyada acche lage hamein..yuhi likhte rahiye....aur apki Anaa hamesha ke liye apki hojaye yahi duwa hai hamari..."Ameen"

ek aur baat ...meri apni zati rai hai ye ke shayad ye ghazal shayri-e-dard section me zyada suit karegi....aagay apki marzi...


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24th September 2008, 01:00 PM

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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../

Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../

Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../

Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../


Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./

"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN


bahut hi...accha likha hai...taahir sahab....very gud work....dard saaf jhalak raha hai.....
   
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Bahut khoob likha tahir ji, padkar achha laga. agle thread ka intjaar rahega.
   
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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
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Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./




wah tahir saheb kya khoob likha hai apne....ye do sher zyada acche lage hamein..yuhi likhte rahiye....aur apki Anaa hamesha ke liye apki hojaye yahi duwa hai hamari..."Ameen"

ek aur baat ...meri apni zati rai hai ye ke shayad ye ghazal shayri-e-dard section me zyada suit karegi....aagay apki marzi...


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Teri tarah tera dil bhi khubsurat ho.....

Duaa se pehle mile jo tu chahe,
k khud duaa ko tere hatho ki zarurat ho..
fe amaan allah...


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Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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24th September 2008, 02:48 PM

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bahut hi...accha likha hai...taahir sahab....very gud work....dard saaf jhalak raha hai.....
Thanks Bade Bhai,aapko mere jaise HAQEER insaan ka qalaam pasand aaya..
mein aapka tehdil se shukra guzaar hu,

take care...


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Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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Bahut khoob likha tahir ji, padkar achha laga. agle thread ka intjaar rahega.

INSHALLAH bahut jald apna naya qalaam aap logo ki nazar karunga.


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thanks sweet friend,aako meri GAZAL pasand aai..

FE AMAAN ALLAH


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aapko meri GAZAL pasand aai,iske liye mein aapka shukr guzaar hu,
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WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH KYA KHUB LIKHA H

APKI SAYRI M DARD TO SAF DHIKHAE DATE H

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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../

Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../

Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../

Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../


Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./

"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN


Tahir ji,


Tareef ke qabil to hai ki aap ...Daad dilse kabool kijiye ..youn hi mahfil ko roshan karte rahiye ....... humesha aap ke new gazal ki Intezar rahegi ..

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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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Tareef ke qabil to hai ki aap ...Daad dilse kabool kijiye ..youn hi mahfil ko roshan karte rahiye ....... humesha aap ke new gazal ki Intezar rahegi ..

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THANKS DIYA ,AAPKO MERI GAZAL PASAND AAI


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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../

Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../

Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../

Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../


Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./

"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN


Khan bhai....accha likha hai aapne..ahsaas bhi dil fareb haiN....yoon hi likhte rahiye aur apni "aana" ke saath sadha kush rahiye.

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inshallah bahut jald muskurate hue mohabbat ko yaad kaise kiya jaata hain koshish karoonga ki zaroor likhu,.
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As salam walekum! Tahir sahab.............

Wakai aapke kalam mein aapke dil ka dard saaf jhalakta hai.....
Bahut sadgi se aapne yeh kalam likha hai aur behad umda likha hai..........

Aapke likhe sabhi sher pasand aaye........ Daad kabool kijiye......

Aur kuch naya lihiye hume intezar rahenga aako padhne ka.........

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As salam walekum! Tahir sahab.............

Wakai aapke kalam mein aapke dil ka dard saaf jhalakta hai.....
Bahut sadgi se aapne yeh kalam likha hai aur behad umda likha hai..........

Aapke likhe sabhi sher pasand aaye........ Daad kabool kijiye......

Aur kuch naya lihiye hume intezar rahenga aako padhne ka.........

YaadoN mein ta umar sama jata hai koi
Bichad ker dil se door kahan jata hai koi


va alaikum as salam va rahamtullah,
thanks...khwahhish bhai...aapne mujhe padha....


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Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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Tahir Bhai...aapki nazm padhi bahut acha likha hai aapne.....kuch panktiya dil ko chhu jaati hai....andar ka duand...dard banke bahar nikal ke aata dikhai detaa hai.....aapki nazm mai....aise hi bazm mai aate rahiye....aur aise hi likhte rahiye....humse milte rahiye....





YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Bohat khoob Tahir Saheb......Bohat umda peshkash

as salamu alaikum va rahamtullah

thanks sajid bhai....meri ghazal aapko pasand aai,


shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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