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kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga - 1st July 2011, 02:34 PM

chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga
kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga


   
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1st July 2011, 04:47 PM

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chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga
kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga


inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

Ji Saare hi aashar bhaut khoob rahe........Bhaut Sunder.........



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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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Zidd Sahab ! Sar Se Paa Tak ... Bahut TarannuM MeN Nazar Aaye ... Iss Ghazal MeN ... Aashaar Ke Khayaalaat Intne Khoobsurat Adaa Hue HaiN Ki ... PaDhte Hii Bantaa Hai ... Ek Ek Sher Zehn MeN Apni Mauzudhgii Kaa Ehsaas Der Tak Karaataa Mehsoos Hotaa Hai .... !

Iss Purasar Ghazal Par Humaari Dilee Mubaaraqbaad Aur DheroN Daad Qubuul KareN ....

Aise Hi Behtreen Kalaam Likhte ... Sunaate Aur PaDhaate RaheN Aage Bhi ... !

Khush RaheN ... !
DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga

kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HE

HAR SABD ITANA ACHA LIKHA HE

LIKATE RAHE

APKI POST KA INTZAR RAHEGA

YAH LINES BAHUT HI ACHI LAGY

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
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Gem! - 3rd July 2011, 01:19 AM

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bahot khub zidd sahab
ik apnapan sa laga ye ghazal padh kar
do lines likhne ki gustaqi kar rahi hun...

muskura rahe hai lab uske dekh kar teri khushiyan
dard-e-judaai dil mein toh beshaq usne paala hoga

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kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga
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bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
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Yahan hum bezubaa ho gaye hai..... bahot khoob..


Zidd Sahab,

aap ki is ghazal ka har sher dil ko chhu gaya....


Ummid hai aise hee nagme padhne ka mauka aap hameiN dete rahenge..

Aap ki Dost

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Aadaab Zidd Sahab....

Janaab bahut hi umda likha hai aapne djl pe asar kar gaya aapka kalaam...meri dili daad kubool farmaye..Hamesha khush rahe



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chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga

kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga



"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga
kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga


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6th July 2011, 10:34 AM

[QUOTE]mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
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inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

Ji Saare hi aashar bhaut khoob rahe........Bhaut Sunder.........
thanks radhikaji

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Zidd bhai,

ghazal achi hai...magar zidd waali baat nahi hai...matla aur maqta..donoeN hi pasand aaye..daad..

likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..god bless u

aapka dost,
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chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga
kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga




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