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Mehfil meN tu tanha kyuN hai, -
23rd April 2006, 08:45 PM
Mujhse ab tu judaa kyuN hai?
Kismat itni khafaa kyuN hai? Dil patthar ke bhi hote haiN, Patthar dil khuda kyuN hai? Maine tujh se wafaaeN ki, tum ne kiya jafaa kyuN hai? Ham ne Har-dum duaaeN ki Tune di bad-duaa kyuN hai? Dil ye toda kal Behayaaii se Aaj laboN pe haya kyuN hai? Tanhaayi merii mehfil bane, Mehfil meN tu tanha kyuN hai, -Mayank 23.04.2006 08.46 PM IST |
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23rd April 2006, 09:27 PM
Mujhse ab tu judaa kyuN hai?
Kismat itni khafaa kyuN hai? Dil patthar ke bhi hote haiN, Patthar dil khuda kyuN hai? Maine tujh se wafaaeN ki, tum ne kiya jafaa kyuN hai? Ham ne Har-dum duaaeN ki Tune di bad-duaa kyuN hai? Dil ye toda kal Behayaaii se Aaj laboN pe haya kyuN hai? Tanhaayi merii mehfil bane, Mehfil meN tu tanha kyuN hai, Chhotti behar ki nazmen mujhe humesha se bahut pasand rahi hain... Afshan bahut likhti thhin....aap likhte ho to accha lagta hai.... aise hi likhte raho bhai... TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th April 2006, 10:58 AM
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padh kar bahut achha laga likhte rahiye take care bye Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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25th April 2006, 10:50 AM
mayank dost
aap ki yeh khoobsurat kaawish achchi lagi. yeh ghazel aap ki likhaayee ke ek naey more ki nishaandahi karti hai. mera khayal hai yeh tarz aap ke mizaaj aur soach se ziayaada qareeb hai. isi tarah likhte rahiye. hamari dua hai ke kaamiyaabi aap ke hamesha shamil e haal rahe. musharrafhusain |
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27th April 2006, 09:38 AM
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Chhotti misroN meN likhan mujhe bhi achchha lagTa hai, kabhi kabhi aasaan hiTa hailikhna aur kabho bohat mushkil kyuNki hame bohat kam aasaar milTe haiN ehsaas bayaaN karne ke liye.. Afshaan jee to kher bohat achchha likhTi haiN, ham to bas kosish kar lete haiN... Izzat aur hausla afzaayi ke liye shukr gujaar hai Mayank.. Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa Mayank |
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27th April 2006, 09:45 AM
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Aap ki is hausla aur izzat afzaayi ke liye meN aap ka shukr gujaar huuN.. Jaisa aap logoN ko paRhta huuN waisa hi kuchh likhne ki kosish karTa huuN.. Aap logoN ki duaa hihai jo Mayank kuchh likh paa raha hai.. Yah ghazal mujeh bhi behad pasand hai.. Aur aap sab ki duaaoN se is se behtar likhne ki kosish karuNga.. Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa... Aap ka apna Mayank |
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