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Ajab dil ki duniya... -
27th July 2009, 02:43 PM
Hi Friends,
Just wrote something, thought of sharing... Please don't judge it on technicalities, it is a mere expression of feelings... ------------------------------------------------------------------- Ajab dil ki duniya, ajab iski yaarii hum naa samajh paaye yeh duniyadaarii Apne dil lagaayen, apne hi rulaayen dil ne jataayi humse aksar yeh laachaarii hum chaahen aapko aur woh bhi apne hi kal aap dil dukhaaye aaj hai unki baarii hum jinse bhi mile, sab log waaiz thhe ek hum me nahin bass, itni samajhdaarii apni taraf se karte purzor koshishen hum har koshish me barti humne imaandaarii Khudaaya, too jahaan me ek hi mukammal sikhaa de mujhko kucch apni adaakaarii... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st August 2009, 07:52 PM
Dear Pulkit,
HMMM .... beautiful ...  ]mere bhai bilkul sehi farmaaya ...sab kuch semeta hai es badii c duniya mein .... aur tumhare hisee aaye dheer saari khushiyaan ghazal behaat pasand aayii .. aur koshish karna ese routine ke saath beautiful ehsaason ke saath aate rehna mujhe ab ek ghana yaad aagya .... I dont if im writing it rite or wrong ...  " sab kuch seekha hume na sekhi hoshiyaari ... yeh saach hai duniya walaon ..." take good care milte hain aapki sis mandeep Quote:
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2nd August 2009, 10:14 AM
Pulkit ji......aapne bahut khub kaha hai is ghazal se.....
hum jinse bhi mile, sab log waaiz thhemujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aai...aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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Dearest Mandy, Yaar... bahut hi sahi gaana likha tumne.... is rachna ka saar hi wahi hai.... Kucch khayaal ghoom rahe thhe mann me, bass unhi ko lekar yeh likh diya thha... tum jaane kahaan se dhoond laayin ise... khair tumhe humehsa ki tarah ehsaas acche lage...jaan khushi hui... saath deti rehna... apna khayal rakhna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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bahot khubsurat...............daad qabul kijiyen Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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6th August 2009, 10:50 AM
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Aapko ehsaas o aashaar pasand aaye, jaankar bahut khushi hui... aag bhi yun hi haunsla badhaate rahiyehga...Apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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