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Tum mile... - 24th January 2010, 01:06 AM

Hi Friends,

Writing somwthing after a long time... hope you'd like it... Please don't judge the same on technicalites as this is just a free flowing expression wih no rules...


Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khile


Do dil, ek jaan kab ban gaye, khabar nahin
Kaise, dil me tum bas gaye, thhe ajnabii


Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen


Dhadkanen, ab dil ke kaaboo me hain nahin
Maine, jaanaa kyaa hoti hai bekhudii


Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...


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Dearest Pulkit ....

Oye Hoye!!!!

bahut badiya likha hai tumne...
aur arse ke baad tumhe yahan dekha hain ....
aur menu ..... pata hai ab lagg raha hai bhabhii ji ko miss kar rahye ho!!!!

thats so sweet of u...

keep coming in routine ....

aur hamehsa khush raho

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tumharii behan

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24th January 2010, 01:54 AM

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Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khile

Do dil, ek jaan kab ban gaye, khabar nahin
Kaise, dil me tum bas gaye, thhe ajnabii

Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen

Dhadkanen, ab dil ke kaaboo me hain nahin
Maine, jaanaa kyaa hoti hai bekhudii

Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...
Pulkit Ji...Aadaab ! aapki rachna ke ehsaasat bahut khubsurat lage mujhe....bahut achhi lagi sabhi panktiya.....yuhi likhte rahen....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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24th January 2010, 05:37 PM

Pulkit bhaiyaa:

namaste!

baRii hi saadagee se dil meN basii hu'ii baateN keh jaanaa aapki Khaasiyat rahiiN haii ! ees baar bhee seedhe saral lafzoN meiN ba-Khoobee ehsaasoN ko peSh kiyaa haii aapne.. yeh ehsaas mujhe bahot hi pasaNd aayeN
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KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Nice Work Pulkit Jee.......................................


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Writing somwthing after a long time... hope you'd like it... Please don't judge the same on technicalites as this is just a free flowing expression wih no rules...


Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khile


Do dil, ek jaan kab ban gaye, khabar nahin
Kaise, dil me tum bas gaye, thhe ajnabii


Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen


Dhadkanen, ab dil ke kaaboo me hain nahin
Maine, jaanaa kyaa hoti hai bekhudii


Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...


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ishk


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Oye Hoye!!!!

bahut badiya likha hai tumne...
aur arse ke baad tumhe yahan dekha hain ....
aur menu ..... pata hai ab lagg raha hai bhabhii ji ko miss kar rahye ho!!!!

thats so sweet of u...

keep coming in routine ....

aur hamehsa khush raho

duaon ke saath

tumharii behan

mandy

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Tumhaari wishes to maine humesha apne saath hi mehsoos ki hain By the way is poetry ka credit bhi tumhe hi jaata hai... us din tumhaari poetry padhne ke baad mann huwaa kucch likhne ka

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kya baat hai pulkit...bhabhi ka asar saaf dikhaayi pad raha hai dost...arse baad tumhe padhkar aacha laga...yunhi aate raho likhte raho khush raho

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Pulkit bhaiyaa:

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baRii hi saadagee se dil meN basii hu'ii baateN keh jaanaa aapki Khaasiyat rahiiN haii ! ees baar bhee seedhe saral lafzoN meiN ba-Khoobee ehsaasoN ko peSh kiyaa haii aapne.. yeh ehsaas mujhe bahot hi pasaNd aayeN
YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee... dil se niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl farmaayeN!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Kaise ho? Ummeed hai acche se honge

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Pulkit mere bhai

kaise hain aap.
mein aksar yahan aayaa karta hoon, bas puraane saathiyon ko talash kerke wapas chala jaata hoon.
aaj aap ka kalam nazar se guzra.
sahi kaha aap ne technaltees per jaye baghair hi is kalaam ko parha jaa sakta hai.
sab kuch mil jaaye gaa.
khuloos, ikhlaas, sachchayee, lagan,pyaar, hassasiyet,aur kalaam ke zoar awar hone ke liye yeh sab bohat kaafi hain.
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Pulkit Gupta ji adaaab....kaise haiN aap?...shayad ab bhoolne ke kagaar per hi HoNge...?...aana kam hi ho pata hai....aapka peshkerda tamaam qalaam paRha...aapne ahsaasoN ko bator ker achha intekhaab pesh kiya hai.....our YuiN lagta hai apnii humsaaya ko shamil kiya hai is pur-kjuloos peshkash meiN....merii jaanib se iss dil paziir tehreer per dhairoN daaad qabool kareiN.

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26th February 2010, 08:12 AM

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Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khil

isay kehtay hein kisi matured writer ki matured rachna.bahut pasand aayee hai.
   
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Pulkit Gupta ji adaaab....kaise haiN aap?...shayad ab bhoolne ke kagaar per hi HoNge...?...aana kam hi ho pata hai....aapka peshkerda tamaam qalaam paRha...aapne ahsaasoN ko bator ker achha intekhaab pesh kiya hai.....our YuiN lagta hai apnii humsaaya ko shamil kiya hai is pur-kjuloos peshkash meiN....merii jaanib se iss dil paziir tehreer per dhairoN daaad qabool kareiN.

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Harsh Bhai,

Aadaab, main thheek hoon, ummeed hai aap bhi acche honge... Aur haan doston ko itni aasaani se bhoola nahin jaata...

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11th March 2010, 12:13 PM

Hi Parul,

Glad that you liked the expression... keep coming...tc


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originally posted by pulkit gupta

Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khil

isay kehtay hein kisi matured writer ki matured rachna.bahut pasand aayee hai.
Hi Rajni,

Glad you find the expression matured... It was just a free flow of feelings...no attempt to make it correct... neways...keep coming...tc


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hi pulkit how are u
bahut time ke baad ana hua aur aj bahut time ke bad apke kalam ko padha bahut hi acha likha hai aise hi likhte rahiye
new post ka itezar rahega

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hi pulkit how are u
bahut time ke baad ana hua aur aj bahut time ke bad apke kalam ko padha bahut hi acha likha hai aise hi likhte rahiye
new post ka itezar rahega

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I am good... hope you are doing good as well... Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, jaankar accha laga...aise hi saath deti rahiye... do take care...


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3rd April 2010, 08:05 AM

Pulkit Jii,,

Your composition is very romantic....

Its just an out-standing creation.. (Rep+++)

Keep writing,

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Pulkit Jii,,

Your composition is very romantic....

Its just an out-standing creation.. (Rep+++)

Keep writing,

Regardz,,
Thanks Hassan...Glad you liked it...


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