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24th January 2010, 01:06 AM
Hi Friends,
Writing somwthing after a long time... hope you'd like it... Please don't judge the same on technicalites as this is just a free flowing expression wih no rules...
Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khile
Do dil, ek jaan kab ban gaye, khabar nahin
Kaise, dil me tum bas gaye, thhe ajnabii
Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen
Dhadkanen, ab dil ke kaaboo me hain nahin
Maine, jaanaa kyaa hoti hai bekhudii
Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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24th January 2010, 01:44 AM
Dearest Pulkit ....
Oye Hoye!!!!
bahut badiya likha hai tumne...
aur arse ke baad tumhe yahan dekha hain ....
aur menu ..... pata hai ab lagg raha hai bhabhii ji ko miss kar rahye ho!!!!
thats so sweet of u...
keep coming in routine ....
aur hamehsa khush raho
duaon ke saath
tumharii behan
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24th January 2010, 01:54 AM
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Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khile
Do dil, ek jaan kab ban gaye, khabar nahin
Kaise, dil me tum bas gaye, thhe ajnabii
Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen
Dhadkanen, ab dil ke kaaboo me hain nahin
Maine, jaanaa kyaa hoti hai bekhudii
Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...
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Pulkit Ji...Aadaab ! aapki rachna ke ehsaasat bahut khubsurat lage mujhe....bahut achhi lagi sabhi panktiya.....yuhi likhte rahen....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th January 2010, 05:37 PM
Pulkit bhaiyaa:
namaste!
baRii hi saadagee se dil meN basii hu'ii baateN keh jaanaa aapki Khaasiyat rahiiN haii ! ees baar bhee seedhe saral lafzoN meiN ba-Khoobee ehsaasoN ko peSh kiyaa haii aapne.. yeh ehsaas mujhe bahot hi pasaNd aayeN
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Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen
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YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee... dil se niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl farmaayeN!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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25th January 2010, 01:23 AM
Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...[/QUOTE]
yeh bahut achha laga padh kar....kuch apna sa....
daad haazir hai...
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'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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25th January 2010, 12:11 PM
Nice Work Pulkit Jee.......................................
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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25th January 2010, 12:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Hi Friends,
Writing somwthing after a long time... hope you'd like it... Please don't judge the same on technicalites as this is just a free flowing expression wih no rules...
Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khile
Do dil, ek jaan kab ban gaye, khabar nahin
Kaise, dil me tum bas gaye, thhe ajnabii
Tumko, paakar huwin poori sabhi khwahishen
O Jaanaa! tumse hi hain ab meri mehfilen
Dhadkanen, ab dil ke kaaboo me hain nahin
Maine, jaanaa kyaa hoti hai bekhudii
Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...
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इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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26th January 2010, 06:50 PM
Dearest Mandy,
Tumhaari wishes to maine humesha apne saath hi mehsoos ki hain By the way is poetry ka credit bhi tumhe hi jaata hai... us din tumhaari poetry padhne ke baad mann huwaa kucch likhne ka
Yunhi saath raho aur apna khayaal rakhna
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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26th January 2010, 06:51 PM
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Pulkit Ji...Aadaab ! aapki rachna ke ehsaasat bahut khubsurat lage mujhe....bahut achhi lagi sabhi panktiya.....yuhi likhte rahen....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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Dear Naresh,
Aapko ehsaasaat pasand aaye jaankar bahut khushi huwi... yun hi hausla badhaate rahiyega... aage bhi saath banaaye rakhiyega... do take care...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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26th January 2010, 10:48 PM
kya baat hai pulkit...bhabhi ka asar saaf dikhaayi pad raha hai dost...arse baad tumhe padhkar aacha laga...yunhi aate raho likhte raho khush raho
tumhaara apnaa
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27th January 2010, 09:04 PM
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Pulkit bhaiyaa:
namaste!
baRii hi saadagee se dil meN basii hu'ii baateN keh jaanaa aapki Khaasiyat rahiiN haii ! ees baar bhee seedhe saral lafzoN meiN ba-Khoobee ehsaasoN ko peSh kiyaa haii aapne.. yeh ehsaas mujhe bahot hi pasaNd aayeN
YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee... dil se niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl farmaayeN!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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Dear Dhaval,
Kaise ho? Ummeed hai acche se honge
Tumhe ehsaas aur bayaani pasand aaye jaankar accha laga... "Complexity" is something I try to stay away from whether its in life or in poetry
Saath dete rehna...apna khayal rakhna...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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29th January 2010, 06:10 PM
Pulkit mere bhai
kaise hain aap.
mein aksar yahan aayaa karta hoon, bas puraane saathiyon ko talash kerke wapas chala jaata hoon.
aaj aap ka kalam nazar se guzra.
sahi kaha aap ne technaltees per jaye baghair hi is kalaam ko parha jaa sakta hai.
sab kuch mil jaaye gaa.
khuloos, ikhlaas, sachchayee, lagan,pyaar, hassasiyet,aur kalaam ke zoar awar hone ke liye yeh sab bohat kaafi hain.
meri bharpoor daad apne bhai pulkit ke liye, uski khushiyon ke liye,
God bless you.
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11th February 2010, 06:21 PM
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Baatein, likhii hain tumhaare liye, dil kii
Tumse, haan tumse hi hai ab meri shayri...
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yeh bahut achha laga padh kar....kuch apna sa....
daad haazir hai...
vikram...[/quote]
Glad you liked it... keep motivating like this...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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11th February 2010, 06:35 PM
Thanks Sajid...Do Keep coming... take care...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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11th February 2010, 06:36 PM
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pulkit jee
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Radhr radhe ishk bhai... hausla afzaai ke liye shukriya... yun hi saath dete rahiyega...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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18th February 2010, 10:23 PM
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kya baat hai pulkit...bhabhi ka asar saaf dikhaayi pad raha hai dost...arse baad tumhe padhkar aacha laga...yunhi aate raho likhte raho khush raho
tumhaara apnaa
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Dear Anu bhai,
I am glad you liked the feelings...Aapko yahaan dekh mujhe bhi bahut accha laga... Likhtye rahiye kuch na kucch humaari bhaabi aur gudiya ke liye... Aaj bhi woh poem yaad hai jo aapne gudiya ke liye likhi thhi...
Apna khayal rakhiye...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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18th February 2010, 10:26 PM
Mushi Bhai! Aadaab,
Main bata nahin sakta aapko shayri.com par dobara dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi huwi hai... aapke bina sooni hain yeh mehfilen... Aap log aayenge to humaara bhi mann karega yahaan regular aane kaa..
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Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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19th February 2010, 06:48 PM
Pulkit Gupta ji adaaab....kaise haiN aap?...shayad ab bhoolne ke kagaar per hi HoNge...?...aana kam hi ho pata hai....aapka peshkerda tamaam qalaam paRha...aapne ahsaasoN ko bator ker achha intekhaab pesh kiya hai.....our YuiN lagta hai apnii humsaaya ko shamil kiya hai is pur-kjuloos peshkash meiN....merii jaanib se iss dil paziir tehreer per dhairoN daaad qabool kareiN.
Khush rahiyega
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20th February 2010, 08:04 AM
hi pulkit,
bahot samay baad aap ko parha. so cute.. bahot khubsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye hai...
keep writing.
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26th February 2010, 08:12 AM
originally posted by pulkit gupta
Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khil
isay kehtay hein kisi matured writer ki matured rachna.bahut pasand aayee hai.
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Pulkit Gupta ji adaaab....kaise haiN aap?...shayad ab bhoolne ke kagaar per hi HoNge...?...aana kam hi ho pata hai....aapka peshkerda tamaam qalaam paRha...aapne ahsaasoN ko bator ker achha intekhaab pesh kiya hai.....our YuiN lagta hai apnii humsaaya ko shamil kiya hai is pur-kjuloos peshkash meiN....merii jaanib se iss dil paziir tehreer per dhairoN daaad qabool kareiN.
Khush rahiyega
Harash
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Harsh Bhai,
Aadaab, main thheek hoon, ummeed hai aap bhi acche honge... Aur haan doston ko itni aasaani se bhoola nahin jaata...
Aapko ehsaas-o-bayaani pasand aaye, jaankar bahut khushi huwi...yunhi saath dete rahiye...Apna khayal rakhiyega...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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11th March 2010, 12:13 PM
Hi Parul,
Glad that you liked the expression... keep coming...tc
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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11th March 2010, 12:23 PM
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originally posted by pulkit gupta
Tanhaa, raahein thhin zindagi kii, tum mile
Silsile, chaahat ke shuru huwe, kaii gul khil
isay kehtay hein kisi matured writer ki matured rachna.bahut pasand aayee hai.
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Hi Rajni,
Glad you find the expression matured... It was just a free flow of feelings...no attempt to make it correct... neways...keep coming...tc
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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30th March 2010, 03:36 PM
hi pulkit how are u
bahut time ke baad ana hua aur aj bahut time ke bad apke kalam ko padha bahut hi acha likha hai aise hi likhte rahiye
new post ka itezar rahega
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If you don't have it,
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hi pulkit how are u
bahut time ke baad ana hua aur aj bahut time ke bad apke kalam ko padha bahut hi acha likha hai aise hi likhte rahiye
new post ka itezar rahega
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Hi Pallavi,
I am good... hope you are doing good as well... Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, jaankar accha laga...aise hi saath deti rahiye... do take care...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd April 2010, 08:05 AM
Pulkit Jii,,
Your composition is very romantic....
Its just an out-standing creation.. (Rep+++)
Keep writing,
Regardz,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Pulkit Jii,,
Your composition is very romantic....
Its just an out-standing creation.. (Rep+++)
Keep writing,
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Thanks Hassan...Glad you liked it...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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