Dare 2 Try - Topic: Ek Ajnabi / Stranger

[Pulkit_gupta]

Joke

Ek din poori family ke saath baithhe hum log KBC dekh rahe thhe..

Ek Question screen pe appear hua ke "Ek Ladke ke Sasur ke bhaai ke bhateeje ki behan uski kyaa lagegi". Isse pehle ke koi kucch keh paata..

Meri behan ki awaaz aayi "Ajnabi"

[Pulkit_gupta]

Limerick

I saw a stranger standing on the stool
soon to realize that he is a fool
He had read Rohin's dare to try
was waiting for his imaginations to fly
making english poetry seem so easy and cool

[shayri12345]

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Joke

Ek din poori family ke saath baithhe hum log KBC dekh rahe thhe..

Ek Question screen pe appear hua ke "Ek Ladke ke Sasur ke bhaai ke bhateeje ki behan uski kyaa lagegi". Isse pehle ke koi kucch keh paata..

Meri behan ki awaaz aayi "Ajnabi"

lol hey bhai good one
areey behan ne kaha? Lol yaar

good one dear

Priya

[Pulkit_gupta]

Ghazal: For my Shayri Family

Ajnabi ek bazm me ek din main chala aayaa thha
Pyaar hi pyaar uske har kone me maine paayaa tha

Kya jaanta thha ke hai basi hui ek chhoti si duniya
har shaks ne wahan mere dil me ghar banaayaa thha

Kai dost mile mujhko, milii pyaari kaii behnen bhi
Mamta se ek maa ne mere sar par hataah badhaayaa thaa

Duniyaa ke har kone se wahaan aate hain kucch log
Mohabbat ki khushbu ne samaa rangeen banaayaa thha

Kya jaante thha main, milega pyaar itna yahaan par
Ek pal bhi door rehkar badi mushkil se bitaayaa thha

[shayri12345]

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Ghazal: For my Shayri Family

Ajnabi ek bazm me ek din main chala aayaa thha
Pyaar hi pyaar uske har kone me maine paayaa tha

Kya jaanta thha ke hai basi hui ek chhoti si duniya
har shaks ne wahan mere dil me ghar banaayaa thha

Kai dost mile mujhko, milii pyaari kaii behnen bhi
Mamta se ek maa ne mere sar par hataah badhaayaa thaa

Duniyaa ke har kone se wahaan aate hain kucch log
Mohabbat ki khushbu ne samaa rangeen banaayaa thha

Kya jaante thha main, milega pyaar itna yahaan par
Ek pal bhi door rehkar badi mushkil se bitaayaa thha

hi sweetu!!
so sweeet
luv u for this poem dil chura liya tumahre likhne ne brother

Kai dost mile mujhko, milii pyaari kaii behnen bhi
Mamta se ek maa ne mere sar par hataah badhaayaa thaa

itna pyar mila hai shayri.com ki family se, itne rishtey, tum jaisa itna sweet bhai!! friends, luv...sab kuch

cheers!! to you for this composition

Lots of luv

Priya DD

[Pulkit_gupta]

Ghazal

Raahon me ek ajnabii se nainaa mere takraaye hain
Chhote chhote khwaab uske palkon par sajaaye hain

Naa chehre pe udaasi, naa aaye matthhe pe shikan koi
Sukh dukh ek dooje ke humne janmon ko apnaaye hain

Dhhadkanen mere dil kii judii hain uskii dhhadkanon se
Khushbuen uski saason ki meri saason ko chalaaye hain

Har vaadi hai khoobsurat, lage pyaara har lamhaa hai
Anjaane is bandhan ne dil dono ke dhhadkaaye hain

Ehsaas humari mohabbat ka maine baandh liya lafzon me
Motii yeh khoobsuurat maine kaagaz par bikhraaye hain

[Pulkit_gupta]

Kavita

Mile the ek ajnabee raah chalti ek mod par
Bas gaye hain dil mai woh dharkan bankar

Mit gaye faansle dono ke beech se ab
Sama gaye hain mujhmai meri jaan banke

Subah shaam rehti hoon oonke khyalon mai gum
OOtar gaye hain mujhmai woh meri rooh banke

Alag hona mushkil nahi naamumkin hai oonse
Sang rehte hain mere hurdam woh mera saaya banke

Socha naa kuch ab oonke elaava iss dil ne ab
Sama gaye hain mere zehan mai haseen khayaal banke

[ruhani]

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Ghazal: For my Shayri Family

Ajnabi ek bazm me ek din main chala aayaa thha
Pyaar hi pyaar uske har kone me maine paayaa tha

Kya jaanta thha ke hai basi hui ek chhoti si duniya
har shaks ne wahan mere dil me ghar banaayaa thha

Kai dost mile mujhko, milii pyaari kaii behnen bhi
Mamta se ek maa ne mere sar par hataah badhaayaa thaa

Duniyaa ke har kone se wahaan aate hain kucch log
Mohabbat ki khushbu ne samaa rangeen banaayaa thha

Kya jaante thha main, milega pyaar itna yahaan par
Ek pal bhi door rehkar badi mushkil se bitaayaa thha

dearest pulkit,
this one is awesome buddy. pata nahi kyu jab koi bhi is pariwar ke liye likhta hai it feels so good n yes u r true in each n every word of ur thoughts. just loved reading it. pyaara sa ek mandir hai yeh jismein farishtey baste hai. yeh woh jagah hai jahan hum ek doosre ke itne kareeb aa gaye aur kitne hi rishtey humne paaye yahan. aapne dukh aapne sukh sab sang sunaye. just love this family n may god bestow his love n BLESSINGS on this family. take care n keep flowing ur thoughts buddy. ur each word reflects the love for this family buddy. ur love for everyone is so intense,ur care so tender,ur concern for this family is so deep,ur thoughts for this family so adoring,ur way of praising others is so genorous,ur joy in others joy is so overflowing, all this makes me feel proud to be ur friend buddy. u can write soo deeply. this one touched my soul. gr8. keep going n wish u all the best buddy. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

[Pulkit_gupta]

Kavita

Tum jo ek ajnabee ho mere liye
kyon mere khayalon mai samaye ho
Tum jo mere koi nahi lagte ho
Kyon meri dharkan mai samaye ho

Tum jisse main janata bhi nahi hoo
meri zindagi ka haas hissa ban gaye ho
Tum jo ek anjaane se kam nahi ho
meri aatma...meri rooh mai bas gaye ho

Tum jisse maine kabhi dekha bhi nahi hai
Mere aankhon ka sapna ban gaye ho
Tum jisse main pehchanta bhi nahi hoo
mere dil ki dharkan meri jaan ban gaye ho

Tum jo mere khwaabon me baste thhe
Aaj mere jeene ka armaan ban gaye ho
naa rha jaata hai tumse ek pal bhi door
tum meri iklauti tamanna ban gaye ho

Tum jo door mujhse tthe itne
aaj meri dhhadkaon me bass gaye ho
Reh reh ke utthati hai tumhaari hi yaad
Kyun tum meri dil-o-jaan ban gaye ho

[garima]

well ab tak ye pulkit bhaiya contest winner ho chuke hai... fir bhi ek aur post jaroor daalungee...


Gazal-

bahoot pyaari si meri ek bhabhi hai
bhaiya se jyaada mujhpar pyaar lutati hai

palako par baitha, rakhati khayaal mera
Gudiya kahkar mujhe wo bulaati hai

Koi na puchhe unaka naam mujhase
Wo bahoot hi sharmaati hai

Dekh unka pyaar mere liye
Meri ye aankhe bhar aati hai

Nazar na lage unako kisi Ajanbee ki
Yehi duwa har baar dil me samati hai

Garima ki bhabhi hai sabse niraali
Kaise bataoon mujase kitna pyaar jatati hai

Laakho me ek, is dil dhadkan
Meri bhabhI bhabhi mujhase kehlaati hai

[Amanush...]

Sonnet : A Stranger's smile

I have written this Sonnet to emphasize
the value of a smile

Once I was walking down a dusty street
My loneliness with myself I had to share
That day a few problems I came to meet
And I wondered if someone would care
If I had just died ,where I was right there
Then my eyes from the ground displaced
And saw a girl,she was sweet and so dear
I noticed that she was really angel faced

Our eyes met as lightly by me she paced
Despite the sad fact that I still felt so blue
A slight smile on mine tight lips I traced
So imagine my joy when she smiled too

She left me and this I could honestly say
That small smile really changed my day

Written in Edmund Spencer style.He used the
pattern :abab bc bc cd cd ee

[Amanush...]

Thought : Conversation with a Stranger (An Allien)

I had a conversation with a Stranger. He related me his history, made me confident of an obscure destiny of the world, Suns that rise, Moon that become red…the end of the universe. And though my mind vacillated to his revelations, I followed it well far from my understanding… these mysteries,that so-called the Stranger, his words and his dreams.

He told me of the stars, of the planets, and their names remained engraved forever in my mind. His hands gesticulated in the air describing some eclipses . In his eyes I read these strange visions, the reflection of other worlds, an undescrivable horizon.

When I listened to him, these pictures stayed like unreal ghosts. And I felt that the stranger was sad, his voice was without life. His eyes had died out, his body remained chilled. It is there that I understood that he spoke to me of himself, of his world and of those that he cherishes because their thoughts persist forever in his mind.

Then, as to apologize for having delivered himself from his burden ,he related me the end of this dark epic, he spoke to me and told me of his adventure. But, although familiar, history appeared obscure. When I asked him where he had learned all this, he merely said that he liked this narration...

[Amanush...]

Sonnet : An Arrogant Stranger...

A try to write a humourous Sonnet in
Shakespearan style

Once the most arrogant stranger I met
And he only kept annoying me such a lot
He said that on the whole globe, he bet
My little island is not less than a little dot
Everything to him appeared so very little
Even our sea for him was just only a lake
Let me now tell you of another example
One day an apple to observe he did take

“The fruits are so tiny here,” thus he said
“Where I live, they are bigger ten times ”
At night a crab I tossed in his bed well made
And finally waited to answer him in his rimes…

He screamed when got pinched on the knee
And I told him that this animal we call... a flea

[Amanush...]

English Poetry :A stranger in your land…!

I have left my country
by the emergency exit
as a burglar surprised by light
and compelled to flee for life.
A stranger in my land
I am cursed to be …

It was hardly yesterday
I had to go back up a stream
to the unknown sources.
without knowing that
I will die all my life of it.
I have broken all the borders
Now a stranger in your land
I am willing to be…

I have transplanted on my voice
your foreign language.
Every word emerging from there
tears my motherland’s breast
and now she has black scars
that will never fade away ...

In the memory of a political refugee
forced to leave his motherland in haste…

[ruhani]

lolzzzzzzzzzz. thts the spirit buddy. keep going amanush n pulkit. by god how much can u both write, infact wud add garima too in this. u three are masters in ur thoughts. gr8.just eagerly waiting to know who is the winner. but yes for me u three deserve a round of applause. ur flow of imaginations are working like magic. gr8. three cheers to amanush , pulkit n my sweetheart garima. all the best. dont lose hope is the moral of the story, lolzzz. wud love if u alll gv a tough fight to each other n must say u all are the abilty to write in different styles. neways keep going, my best of luck to three of u. meanwhile i enjoy eating brownie, lolz just made for vaivbhav n wud love to share this with three of u too as u three deserves some sweets. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

[Amanush...]

Thought :

This is a letter written by a girl who has fallen
in love with a Stranger...!

I like you because you don’t resemble me. And I don't know how the antipathy of the first meeting has changed its colour and its name. Undoubtedly contraries can have a dangerous charm. Then Love is born from a conflict and the passion that blazes among the adversary strengths that try to reject each other are irresistibly attracted. At times nothing gather more in the depth than it divides in the surface.

The great difference that separates us has pushed me to look at you, and the less I understood you ,the more I wanted to know you. and the more you escaped me, the more I pursued you. And exactly because I didn't find you, with greater anxiety I searched for you. This way I taste the joy of conquering the earth of a Stranger that from hostile, has become intimate, but I didn't realize that my victory had the name of sweet defeat.

Stranger…Now we are ready to unite virtue and defects ,enriching ourselves with these and with those our passionate life. And we look amazingly at the fear that we could have not been able to meet and for the joy to have found each other. And we don't know anymore if the joy or the fear is greater.

[Pulkit_gupta]

Sonnet : Shakespearan style..ab ab cd cd efe f gg

Saw a beautiful stranger on that rainy day
With a look of hers, she stole my heart
I was all lost, left with nothing to say
A wish i had made, she cud be my part

Looking at me, she had passed a smile
Diifcult it became to remain on my feet
regaining myself took me some while
A diifferent aroma i felt on that street

Dressed up she was in a yellow salwaar
a small rounded bindi adding to her grace
looks of hers cud have won her any war
Never would I forget this beautiful face

Voice of hers made my heart go rave
It had got stolen with a mystical wave

[Amanush...]

Song :

Song : Chalo ek baar phir se Ajnabi ban jaaye…
Film : Gumrah (old)
Singer : Mahendra Kapoor Ji

Yahan dekho jaane jaana, tera ashik houn mein janmon ka
Yahan dekho jaane jaana, tera ashik houn mein janmon ka

Kabhi toumne hamein chaha tha ye yaad hai hum ko
Hum ne bhi teri pooja ki hai, ab pehchaan lo hum ko
Na toum bin jee sakeinge,aa bhi jaao hum tarapte hein
Mere ansoo teri yaadon main dekho keisse behate hein

Yahan dekho, jaane jaana…

[Amanush...]

English Poem : Lonely Stranger

Open your door
I am here knocking
I am a lonely stranger,
a tired traveller in an
unknown world’s wilderness…
.
I have on my head
suns of many summers.
Offer me your shade
and take some of my sun
Pour me some water that
I can refresh my feet…

let's mingle our treasures,
let's exchange our desires,
let's give ourselves pleasure,
let's remain together…

Tomorrow, I will take my path
to a door that I have left.
and without returning back,
where the wind pushes me,
There I will go …

[ruhani]

no interest in any other post now. cum on buck up both of u. . curiously waiting to read ahead. learning a lot from all of u here. just mind diverted now . just feel like reading wat all u are sharing with us. hmmmm whoes next. pulkit or amanush?

[Amanush...]

English Poem :

I wrote this poem inspirated
by an Immigrant

Not from here
and who knows from where…
He tries to exist
in a life to live and to love…

Transparent, silent and absent
he ignores who he is…
Over there, in his origin
he’s already been forgotten…

He doesn't belong to himself
Stranger to his own being…
He doesn't dare to think
that anyone else loves him…

He feels lost,
looking for his identity…
Words here are mirages to avoid,
only dreams are to be invented…

He has no keys
For he has no doors to open…
As roof he has only heaven
his only light is hope in strangers…

[Amanush...]

English Poem : A Rejected Stranger

This poem I have written
inspired by Razzism

The stranger said
but no one could take
his words that came…

The stranger smiled
but no one surpassed
the door of his heart….

The stranger begged
But no one cared to
fill his empty hands…

The stranger asked
But no one ever gave
Heed to his plea…

The stranger wept
But no one dried
His warm falling tears…

The stranger finished
By joining a land where
Colours exist not…

Our fears banished him
He made us live better…

[Amanush...]

English Poem : One in a Stranger...!

I have written this one inspired
by a girl who is married to a Stranger...!

I didn't have the eyes,
neither the voice,
nor the love of this stranger,
And as in a mirror,
we have met each other.

He gave me my whole,
my dreams, my joys,
And banished my fears,
My sorrows, my tears,.

My forbidden fruit,
You are this other myself…!
My friends, don't condemn me
if I have taken the step
that leads toward my light…

He has added colours
In all the parts of my life
where I was only a shade,
I write with the strength
of the tie that has bound
two souls in one…

[Amanush...]

Sonnet : A Stranger as Guest...!

The heart that beats inside my chest hurts me.
Each heartbeat sounds a friendly tune of yours.
In my silences, your thoughts always set me free
and they take me to imaginary white sand shores.
I lived in mere silence since I don’t know when;
A stranger existing only as an occasional guest
with fears that now I comprehend, but not then.

Every night I am dreaming to live in your nest!
Give me some hope, I just need your trust again.
hold me tightly replacing what this world stole.
Your love still grows and will until death I gain,
My loneliness needs a smile to fill my empty soul.

Without your pure love, is life worth to live for?
You only possess the key of my heaven’s door

[Pulkit_gupta]

Ghazal: A bit diiferent kind of expression. Rebellious

Us ajnabii ke kaayde me rafaaqat* bahut thhi
shayad isliye mujhe usse chaahat bahut thhi

Thha guroor use bahut apni khoobsurati pe magar
Humen bhi ziidd pe adh jaane ki aadat bahut thhi

Zarra Zarra wo utarta jaata dil me mere lahoo bankar
Chupaye laakh, ki usne bhi mujhse mohabbat bahut thhi

Laata thha woh roz mujhko satane ke aadaab naye
Kambakht, is dil ne bhii kii uskii ibaadat bahut thhi

Thha laakh badtameez, woh teraa qaatil 'Pulkit'
Aaj bhi maujood lehje me sharaafat bahut thhi

Rafaaqat : Companionship, Friendship


PS: Kaleem Ajiz ji ki ek bahut umda ghazal ki zameen par yeh ghazal likhi hai...

[Amanush...]

English Poem : The Plea of a Stranger...!

I have written this one imagining
the dream of an immigrant

I have cancelled the past,
at least I’ve tried,
I’ve outcast of my spirit
the odour of my land,
The face of my mother,
forgotten the sun, the dust, my youth…

Believing to find a free life,
I am someone from nowhere
Lost, hesitating,
I tread this so called friendly land
and nevertheless…
Only a stranger I am…

Lend me a piece of your sky,
lend me a sincere smile,
a murmur, a look,
lend me life, some hope,
the dignity to be a man,
to be a creature of this world…
from whose womb springs
the seed of life…yours and mine!

[Amanush...]

Sonnet : Stranger to Happiness...!

How sad the words you wrote me recently,
How your life has turned into that of sadness.
It looked as love has decided to come finally,
That after years the Almighty will fully bless.
But happiness is still a stranger like years ago,
It seems that from you only love has to depart.
Leaving you all alone to play with your sorrow
Wounds are being planted deep in your heart.

But look, this life here for you as a must to live.
From what I see there's much you have to give.
The love you bring inside you in this short life
Can help to bring the best of you in every strife.

And, as you go forth on life's curvy path to trod,
lean on my shoulders, but mostly do lean on God.

[Amanush...]

'Sonnet : Intimate Stranger...!'

This is my favourite...!

I adore her too, I can’t pronounce her name
So often on crossroads we have briefly met
Living a life to run after the shadow of fame
I thought that this stranger is easy to forget
But without any announcement she reappear
And I find her inside my memorie's screen
By her scent I know that she is always near
And fortunately she doesn’t like to be seen

As time passes by,she approaches me more
And I know time is come to pray not to play
One night she furtively knocked at my door
She sat near my bed and would not go away

And with so much love she caressed my body
Call her what you want, she is my Dark Lady

[Shimul]

Mushkil Danny, I Loved Reading Through & I Am So Very Happy **As Far As I Am Concerned~Your Writing~~~Pure & The Best~*~Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Sare Phoul~Daad~Shukriya Kuboul Karon... **And I Am Very Much Honoured To Be Here~*~Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

[garima]

Originally posted by ruhani
lolzzzzzzzzzz. thts the spirit buddy. keep going amanush n pulkit. by god how much can u both write, infact wud add garima too in this. u three are masters in ur thoughts. gr8.just eagerly waiting to know who is the winner. but yes for me u three deserve a round of applause. ur flow of imaginations are working like magic. gr8. three cheers to amanush , pulkit n my sweetheart garima. all the best. dont lose hope is the moral of the story, lolzzz. wud love if u alll gv a tough fight to each other n must say u all are the abilty to write in different styles. neways keep going, my best of luck to three of u. meanwhile i enjoy eating brownie, lolz just made for vaivbhav n wud love to share this with three of u too as u three deserves some sweets. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.

Di..

My bad luck ain waqt par fever chadh aaya.. maja kirkira ho gaya.. isliye nahi ki aage nahi likh paa rahi hoon.. balki isliye ki ab achhe se padh kar enjoy bhi nahi kaa rahi hoon.. Hope I will recover very soon to enjoy here..

all the best Pulkit Bhaiya and Amanush sir.. I will come back very soon in this enjoyment..

Garima

[Shimul]

Dear Pulkit, Waah~*~Very Good My Dear **Your Writing Is Great & I Am So Very Happy To Read All~*~You Are My "THE BEST FRIEND" & You Will Stay So ForEver~*~Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Sare Phoul~Daad~Shukriya Kuboul Karlon... **Well, Lets See What Rohin Says**I ment Rohin Have To Count The Point's Na...lol...**I Am Sure He Will Do A Great Job & Which He Done Earlier On As Well & For The First Time**Na Jaane Kyun Ek Gane Ki Bol Yaad Aa Rahi Hain...From Yesterday~I Will Write To You Later On**Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

[Shimul]

Dear Garima Jee, That's So Sad To Know You Can't Continue~Well Good Luck Next Time You May Surely Win~Hope You will get better soon **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat... **Take Care**...*God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

[Qasid]

Ufff...Pulkit ki gadi to khatam hi nahi ho rahi

Rohin yaar mein to thak gaya par pulkit bhaisahab ko kaho das 15 aur to baithe baithe hi likh daalega

Tum inhe winner ghosit kar do isse pehle shayri waalon ko database upgrade karni pade....

Ek aur ajnaabi se..

Ghazal

Yun to hote hai sab ajnaabe zamaane mein
Kisko aata hai mazaa khud ko bhul jaane mein

Woh bewaafa nahi woh to hai yaar mera
Yeh baat aur hai woh mera nahi zaamane mein

Khwaab taqdeer thi khwaabon pe jo aitebaar kiya
Khata bas itni thi ji bhar ke humne pyaaar kiya

ek umr guzri hai aab to roothne manaane mein
Yeh baat aur hai woh mera nahi zaamane mein

Kisko aata hai mazaa khud ko bhul jaane mein
Yun to hote hai sab ajnaabe zamaane mein

Kisko aata hai mazaa...

[Pulkit_gupta]

Anu bhaii.. aap bhi naa...

Naya naya shauk chadha hai naa mujhe likhne ka.. so doing it with full zeal

[Shimul]

Yun to hote hai sab ajnaabe zamaane mein
Kisko aata hai mazaa khud ko bhul jaane mein

Dear Anu Jee, Nice To See You **Hope You are doing well*I am fine*Bada Achchha Laga Parhkar~Khudko Bhulana? Kab Pata Chalta Hain Jab Insaan Khud Ko Bhul Jaata Hain...Are Dekhiye Na Phir Se Wohin Yaad Aa Hi Gaya...: Pyaar Hota Hain To Hota Hain Ya Hota Hi Nahin~Iss Ke Baadle To Kisi Shai Ka Asar Hota Nahin~Your Brother's Favourite, Right? Yaad Iss Liye Rahi Hogi Kyun Ki Ye Meri Bhi Favourites Mein Se Hain~*~Waise Kitna Maza Aata Gar Zamane Ko Koii Bhuladeta, Hain Na? I Know Jee...lol...**Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Daad_Shukriya~Phoul Kuboul Kijiyega **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

[Qasid]

Dear shimul shukriya Bahut arse baad baat ho paa rahi hai..aapne azeez gaane ko yaad rakha aur gungunaaya bahut aacha laga umeed karta hoon sab sahi hoga aur aab aapke mizaaz bhi aache honge likhte rahiYegaa aur ji aapka pyaar aur yeh phul sar aankhon par

[Shimul]

Dear Anu Jee, Ek Gane Ki Bol Yaad Aa Gayi Hain Aapka Reply Parhkar...Yaad Pe: Tadap Ye Ishq Ki Dil Se_Kabhi Nahin Jaati_Ke Jaan Deke Bhi Deewangi Nahin Jaati_Na Jaane Kaun Si Duniya Hain Wo Mere Rabba_Jaahan Se Laut Ke Koii Sada Nahin Aati_Ishq Mein To Harr Cheez Mit Jaati Hain~Beqarari Banke Hamein Tadpati Hain~Haaye~Yaad Yaad Yaad Baas Yaad Reh Jaati Hain~*~Ghalam Ali Jee Ki Aawaaz**Ab Main Yahan Se Jaati Houn Nahin To Sab Pagal Ho Jaayenge Shayaad...lol...**I am Fine Jee~Khushi Houi Jaan Kar~Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

[Amanush...]

Originally posted by Shimul
Mushkil Danny, I Loved Reading Through & I Am So Very Happy **As Far As I Am Concerned~Your Writing~~~Pure & The Best~*~Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Sare Phoul~Daad~Shukriya Kuboul Karon... **And I Am Very Much Honoured To Be Here~*~Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

We thank you...Shimul for having appreciated our writings...The
honour is ours to have you with us here ...Thanks for the flower!

Do keep encouraging...!

May God bless you

[Shimul]

Mushkil Danny, You made me smile **Hmm, Nice To Know**I Always Will~*~Khush Rahon Ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat... **Main shayri soun rahi houn~You do know that**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**

[Rohin]

Hello Everyone,

I am glad at the way in which each and everyone of you participated in this competition. Due to lack of time I have not been able to keep pace with the competition but will do so soon...

Hope to see more participation in future competitions...

Points

Pulkit 141
Mushkil 136
Ruhani 3
Priya 3
Garima 98
Talib 3
Mast 10
Lucky 1
Mishti 3


So finally the winner is Pulkit with 141 points

And According to me the best entry was by Mishti... I liked it so my vote for this week's competition for best entry goes to Mishti... Vote for your fav...

Take Care Everyone....

Enjoy...

Rohin

P.S. Sorry if I made any mistake in point calcualtion... you know why