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!!Jab ankh hi khanjar hai, Tab kya kijiye!! - 29th September 2006, 10:29 AM

Bada katilana manjar hai, ab kya kijiye,
jab ankh hi khanjar hai, tab kya kijiye!!

Palak utha lijiye, aur teer chala dijiye,
phir muskra k mere ghav bhi sahla dijiye!

Ek katra bhi na tapke, kuch ajeeb kijiye,
aur bejhaa bhi ho jaye,wo tarqeeb kijiye!

Meri bajhm hai, mujh hi ko tabaah kijiye,
aap hi pe likhi najm hai,wah wah! kijiye!

In bikhri hui najhmo ko, ek taar dijiye,
mein gazal ko gaunga, aap sitaar lijiye!!

Aaj na jayiye, ye pal yaad-gaar kijiye,
ye raat mere aagosh mein gujaar dijiye!!!
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29th September 2006, 10:33 AM
Bada katilana manjar hai, ab kya kijiye,
jab ankh hi khanjar hai, tab kya kijiye!!

Palak utha lijiye, aur teer chala dijiye,
phir muskra k mere ghav bhi sahla dijiye!

Ek katra bhi na tapke, kuch ajeeb kijiye,
aur bejhaa bhi ho jaye,wo tarqeeb kijiye!

Meri bajhm hai, mujh hi ko tabaah kijiye,
aap hi pe likhi najm hai,wah wah! kijiye!

In bikhri hui najhmo ko, ek taar dijiye,
mein gazal ko gaunga, aap sitaar lijiye!!

Aaj na jayiye, ye pal yaad-gaar kijiye,
ye raat mere aagosh mein gujaar dijiye!!!



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are wah dheer kya khub likhte ho yaar !!!!!!!!
subha subha aapki ye peshkas bhaot hi achhi lagi chalo dheer bhai ne bhaot din baaad kuch likha are yaar aise hi likhte raho huzur hum bhi hai aapke dost
yaad rakhiyega

bas aise hi likhte rahiyega agli peshkas ka intezara rahenga dheer

apna khayal rakhna

aapka dost
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Re: !!Jab ankh hi khanjar hai, Tab kya kijiye!! - 29th September 2006, 12:44 PM
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Bada katilana manjar hai, ab kya kijiye,
jab ankh hi khanjar hai, tab kya kijiye!!

Palak utha lijiye, aur teer chala dijiye,
phir muskra k mere ghav bhi sahla dijiye!

Ek katra bhi na tapke, kuch ajeeb kijiye,
aur bejhaa bhi ho jaye,wo tarqeeb kijiye!

Meri bajhm hai, mujh hi ko tabaah kijiye,
aap hi pe likhi najm hai,wah wah! kijiye!

In bikhri hui najhmo ko, ek taar dijiye,
mein gazal ko gaunga, aap sitaar lijiye!!

Aaj na jayiye, ye pal yaad-gaar kijiye,
ye raat mere aagosh mein gujaar dijiye!!!
SALAAM DHEER JI

humare dhaval ne aapki pahale hi tarif kar di hai ab hum kya kahe........aaj pahali martaba hum aapki post par aye hai.......yakeen maniye achha laga aapka kalaam.........unhi likhte rahiye ji..........ab ijaajat chahungi ji............ok ji

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hi - 29th September 2006, 08:19 PM
Bada katilana manjar hai, ab kya kijiye,
jab ankh hi khanjar hai, tab kya kijiye!!

mere pyare dheeraJ APPKO RAJ KA PARNAAM.....aagaaz bhut pyara hai yeh share to bass dil ko chhu gaya....magar aage ja kar app kafiya bhatak gaye....magar ehsaas bhut umda hai.....lafzon ka bhee bakhubi istemaal kiya hai......bhut achi koshish hai yu he likhtew raho......take care........raj......

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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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2nd October 2006, 10:57 AM
sabhi dosto ka tahe dl se shukriya...!!!! Dhaval n Raj to puarane dost hai .. Pooja n Moon... acha laga ki aap bhi bajm mein aaye....!! aate rahiye
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